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I'll go first!

(Meiton: Gōsuto Hanabi) Dark Release: Ghastly Fireworks
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short to Mid range
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
After the absorbing the enemy's energy based technique using Dark Release: Inhaling Maw the user will mold the chakra from Inhaling Maw into their left arm, then user extends their arm forward and releases ghosts from a sphere in his/her left wrist. They seem to follow a set and guided path and they differentiate from it but they can cause enough damage to an opponent by slamming and leaving deep burning marks onto there stomach. The ghosts the user fires are only small (about two feet wide and five feet long) and shoots what seems to be an endless wave of Dark Fireworks.
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Interesting choice.

Okay with this, you'll need to use the canon jutsu Dark Release: Inhaling Maw, then with the absorbed chakra you will extend you left arm forward, make a small orb in your hand that will release a heap of dark ghosts that are on a guided path once they reach there target, the target will get servery burned by the ghosts.

Also, with this jutsu it will have to be used as your last move out of the 3 moves you can perform per-turn since it's a endless stream.
 

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i start by conviently having alreayd absorbed an attack on my way here ^^

I gather my meiton chakra into the bottom square on my right hand and raise it up, i then begin to allow it to seep out but as i do this i form it into a condensed ball, as i am doing this i begin forming even smaller balls within the larger ball as my chakra is seeping outwards, i then lock onto my target and begin allowing the smaller balls to fly from the smaller ball and smash into the opponent leavin severe burns

A few questions:
How fast can i perform this entire action?
Do they home in, meaning can i allow some to go past turn them around and get them to smash into the back of the opponent
how spread out can i make them?can i send say half directly at the opponent and then send half far left and right to circle around?

thats all ^^
 

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i start by conviently having alreayd absorbed an attack on my way here ^^

I gather my meiton chakra into the bottom square on my right hand and raise it up, i then begin to allow it to seep out but as i do this i form it into a condensed ball, as i am doing this i begin forming even smaller balls within the larger ball as my chakra is seeping outwards, i then lock onto my target and begin allowing the smaller balls to fly from the smaller ball and smash into the opponent leavin severe burns

A few questions:
How fast can i perform this entire action?
Do they home in, meaning can i allow some to go past turn them around and get them to smash into the back of the opponent
how spread out can i make them?can i send say half directly at the opponent and then send half far left and right to circle around?

thats all ^^
1. Doesn't take more then five seconds.
2. They follow a set and guided path and they differentiate from it. They can turn and go behind the enemy.
3. No you cannot do that.
 

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ok my turn

(Meiton: Heru Supea) Dark release: Hell Spear
(Meiton: Heru Supea) Dark release: Hell Spear
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:The user will first have to absorb a technique using Dark release:Inhaling Maw. After the technique has been absorb the user will cover their left arm in a layer of Meiton chakra. Once fully formed the shape gives off the appearance of a jaggered shield that is attached to the users arm.Being made of pure Meiton chakra this shield can withstand S rank fire wind and lightning attacks. If the user see's fit this can also be used as a weapon with the shields jaggered appearance being quite sharp. The user can use this weapon as a form of offensive close ranged combat or as a shield to deflect different techniques.
Restrictions
Can only be used twice per battle
Lasts 3 turns when used as a close combat weapon
While in use no other dark release techniques can be used
Can only be taught by Delta
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ok you need to use inhaling maw before this attack can be executed, i then want to you expell your meiton chakra and cover your forearm with chakra, then maniuplate is into the form of a shield. any questions?
 

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ok my turn

(Meiton: Heru Supea) Dark release: Hell Spear
(Meiton: Heru Supea) Dark release: Hell Spear
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:The user will first have to absorb a technique using Dark release:Inhaling Maw. After the technique has been absorb the user will cover their left arm in a layer of Meiton chakra. Once fully formed the shape gives off the appearance of a jaggered shield that is attached to the users arm.Being made of pure Meiton chakra this shield can withstand S rank fire wind and lightning attacks. If the user see's fit this can also be used as a weapon with the shields jaggered appearance being quite sharp. The user can use this weapon as a form of offensive close ranged combat or as a shield to deflect different techniques.
Restrictions
Can only be used twice per battle
Lasts 3 turns when used as a close combat weapon
While in use no other dark release techniques can be used
Can only be taught by Delta
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ok you need to use inhaling maw before this attack can be executed, i then want to you expell your meiton chakra and cover your forearm with chakra, then maniuplate is into the form of a shield. any questions?
By previously absorbing a fire technique before hand, now I begin to release my meiton chakra from my bottom square on my left hand, thus covering my forearm in meiton chakra once that is done I use shape manipulation to change the shape of the chakra into a shield like thing.

No, I don't have any questions, pretty straight forward.
 

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(Meiton: Kyūketsukō usabarashi) Dark Release: Inhaling Diversion
Type: Offensive
Rank: A rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: (Technique dependant)
Description: This is an advanced method of using the technique Inhaling maw. Instead of storing the foreign chakra the user instead redirects it back at the opponent. The way this technique works is by increasing the flow of chakra to Inhaling maw causing it to absorb chakra twice as fast as the regular inhaling maw. While this happens the user links his top and bottom square chakra network creating an arc between the two from which chakra can travel. As the user absorbs chakra it is sent into this new link and has Dark chakra added to it, once the chakra is added the technique is fired back at the opponent. From using this method the original attack is strengthen and more potent. This method is fairly fast, as it release chakra at the same time it absorbs leaving little window for opponents to react.
*Note* Any technique redirected gains plus 1 rank to its original power(I.e A rank becomes S rank)
Restrictions:
Can only be used 3 times per battle
Can only Absorb and redirect A rank and below techniques
Can only be Taught by Delta

^ That.
 

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All right well as you already know its an Inhaling Maw Varient. As you are absorbing the technique from the opponent you are connecting the chakra networks of both squares creating an arc for the chakra to travel through. Now as you are absorbing the technique it will travel along the chakra network as you add dark chakra to the original chakra you absorbed. once that is done you fire the attakc bakc at the opponent, but remeber this all happens very quickly, fast enough for it to appear as though the technique was used by you and not absorbed and redirected.

Also the original chakra absorbed will have dark chakra added to it, so as we can absorb 3 different chakra natures they will all be embedded with dark chakra, meaning we strengthen the attack by adding more chakra. Each elemental property will change as well, for exmaple

If we absorb A ranked wind, we will be firing back S rank Wind lightning and fire chakra at the opponent
If we absorb A rank Fire or Lightning we will be firing back S rank Fire/Lighting with added Fire or lightning chakra.

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All right well as you already know its an Inhaling Maw Varient. As you are absorbing the technique from the opponent you are connecting the chakra networks of both squares creating an arc for the chakra to travel through. Now as you are absorbing the technique it will travel along the chakra network as you add dark chakra to the original chakra you absorbed. once that is done you fire the attakc bakc at the opponent, but remeber this all happens very quickly, fast enough for it to appear as though the technique was used by you and not absorbed and redirected.

Also the original chakra absorbed will have dark chakra added to it, so as we can absorb 3 different chakra natures they will all be embedded with dark chakra, meaning we strengthen the attack by adding more chakra. Each elemental property will change as well, for exmaple

If we absorb A ranked wind, we will be firing back S rank Wind lightning and fire chakra at the opponent
If we absorb A rank Fire or Lightning we will be firing back S rank Fire/Lighting with added Fire or lightning chakra.

Any questions?
No I understand completely.

Did you want one of my custom techniques?
 

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of coarse XD

id like this

(Meiton Kemuri) Dark Release: Dark Smoke
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: -
Description: The user preforms three hand seals, and then gathers up dark chakra into there mouth. Then they blow out a thick purple smoke like fog that has such force that it can down medium to large trees within it's path. This technique also drains the chakra of whoever is caught into it. The smoke like fog is so dense that only very high ranked wind techniques are able to blow it away. The fog drains enough chakra that the victim is only able to use A-rank and below techniques.
Note: Takes the fog one turn to form.
Note: The fog lasts for 3 turns once formed.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per match.
Note: S-rank wind techniques are the only techniques able to blow away the smoke like fog.
Note: Person trapped in the fog can only use A-rank and below techniques for two turns.
Note: Can only be taught by Nathan.
 

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Alright.

Pretty much, gather your dark chakra into your mouth, then release it as a fog like smoke, that has enough power to blow down medium sized trees down, the only down side it takes one turn to form, but once it's formed and if your target is stuck within the fog, there chakra will be drained plus they can only use A-rank justus and below while in it, also only an S-rank wind tech is the only thing capable to blow it away.
 

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OK i get that the 1 turn to form thing, does that mean in my previous turn i need to state im building it up and then the next turn i need to re post this technique essentially make it so it takes up 2 of my 6 jutsu in 2 turns?
 

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OK i get that the 1 turn to form thing, does that mean in my previous turn i need to state im building it up and then the next turn i need to re post this technique essentially make it so it takes up 2 of my 6 jutsu in 2 turns?
No. You'll just have to state that it's been activated.
 

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Lets start with this one.

(Meiton: Sekai Wa Bunkatsu) Dark Release: Worlds Split
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-rank
Range: Mid-range
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
After the use of Dark Release: Inhaling Maw the user concentrates a large amount of their dark chakra into the palm of their hand, the user can generate a dark force that will darkened their hand, after doing the hand seals Goat → Dog the user will simply wave his arm; and the dark release chakra is release from the users upper square on their hand and released in straight line to create large-scale explosions (the scale of said explosion has the power to send two full grown people flying) in a linear pattern.
Notes:
- Can only be use twice per-match.
- Must have used Dark Release: Inhaling Maw before use.
- The explosions only go up to a mid-range radius.
- Can only be taught by Nathan.

So with this one, all you need to do is absorb a technique with either inhaling maw or great inhaling maw, then preform the required two seals, and wave your hand across you, releasing dark chakra from your squares. Doing this should create a straight line of large-scale explosions, the explosion line only goes up to mid range.
 

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Simple enough, dont make me perform it.

Couple questions, first one is how wide is the line, like is it 1m 2m ect ect
Also does the technique speed alter depending on how fast i wave ym hand?
Can i cause the technique to move forwards by moving my hand up and down instead of side to side?
 

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(Meiton: Kuro Renda) Dark Release: Dark Barrage.
Type: Defensive
Rank: B rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20(+10 for every extra shot fire)
Damage: 40
Description: The user will begin by holding both his hands up with the palms facing towards the sky. The he will condence dark chakra inside his body and cause it to seep out of his palms and form small balls of dark chakra around the size of a cannonball. Then by using brute strength the user will throw the balls at the opponent. Upon impact the balls will explode into a maelstorm of dark chakra severely burning the opponent. This jutsu isn't limit to just two shots as the user can continually form and throw these balls. The balls form rather swiftly about the same speed as a chidori. Each 2 balls are equivalent to a B ranked Dark release technique.

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Simple enough, form the balls and throw them with as much power as you can, they dont have to be thrown you can slam them into people, each set of balls(eww) so 2 is equal to a B rank, you can continue to use this technique for as long as you have chakra and continue to throw them. If you throw ten balls its essentially 5 B ranks
 
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