Maru: The Orange Hokage Vol.3

[Kage no Bushin]

Pass or Fail​

Admin: Question Number One.
Danzo: ?????
Admin: Correct!
Danzo:
Admin: Question Number Two.
Admin: Correct
Admin: The last Question... Correct!
Maru: Yes!
Maru: So am I Hokage?
Admin: Close!
Admin: You must kill me!
Maru: ?
Danzo: Yes a new Admin comes when every Hokage comes in.
Maru: Hm? Kage no Bushin no Jutsu!
Admin: That again?
Maru:Kuyimoise no Jutsu!
Admin: Wow! All ten Shadow Clones summoned Frogs big Frogs!
Maru: Toimoigaku no Jutsu (Flared Rampage Jutsu)
Admin: Kumo Jutsu (Transport Jutsu)
Maru: (Huff puff) I used alot of Chakra.
Admin: Hm
Danzo: Ha Ha Ha
Admin: What Danzo?
Danzo: Nothing?
Admin: Kashimru no Jutsu
Maru: Ha! (Puff
Admin: It was a Shadow Clone?!
Maru: Behind you! (Maru punches with full strength)
Admin: (Ah!)
Maru: Shadow Clone Jutsu!
Danzo: He does not know that they are two Shadow Clones!
Maru: Kage-no-Bushin-Rendan
Admin: Ah!
Maru: Kage no Bushin no Jutsu!
Admin: Hm?
Maru: Kage-no-Bushin-Rendan!
Danzo: O.O Two Rendans are his limit!
Maru: Shadow Clone Jutsu!
Danzo: The Rasengan (Jiriaya you over did it.)
Maru: Rasengan!
Admin: Ah!
Danzo: He looks dead.
Maru: He is.

Find out if this was it our another test is coming next time on Vol.4

 

[Uchiha Riyo]

crap,a complete waste of time,this is so childish,are you like 8 or something

 

[Mugiwara]

Pass or Fail​

Maru:Kuyimoise no Jutsu!
Admin: Wow! All ten Shadow Clones summoned Frogs big Frogs!
Maru: Toimoigaku no Jutsu (Flared Rampage Jutsu)
Admin: Kumo Jutsu (Transport Jutsu)
Admin: Kashimru no Jutsu
Maru: Kage-no-Bushin-Rendan
Maru: Kage-no-Bushin-Rendan!
Danzo: O.O Two Rendans are his limit!

Kuyimoise no jutsu? I think you mean Kuchiyose no jutsu...
Frogs big Frogs?
Toimoigaku no jutsu? It doesn't mean Flared Rampage jutsu....
Flared rampage technique = katto abaremawaru no jutsu
Toimoigaku doesn't mean anything... gaku means a sum of money or a framed picture... "Toi" means water pipe, or questions... "moi" doesn't mean anything.

Kumo jutsu means cloud technique, not transport.
Also, the english word for jutsu is technique... not jutsu..
If you want transport jutsu, use one of these words:
"yusou, hansou, yusouki, toransupo-to, unpan, isou"
Kashimru isn't a word either....
Kage no bunshin rendan? Shadow of clone combo?


The story sucked, wait... what? What story?
I didn't the the fanfic at all, I mean wtf was going on?
"Question one"
"Correct!"

 

[Emperor]

Is the storyline encoded in a devilishly complex way into the apparently unrelated flow of the fanfic, or has reading the Da Vinci Code rubbed off on me ?

 

[God of lightning]

I really did not like this one, I think that you should either shift the tone of the story or start a new fan fiction, it is really not working so far.