Maru: The Orange Hokage Vol.2

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The Test​
Danzo: Let me take you there
Maru: OK, but first way don't we just do this Yumashi no Jutsu!
Danzo: We are here.
Admin: Come in! Come in!
Danzo: Surely.
Admin: So what brings you here Danzo?
Danzo: Well you see........
Admin: You don't have to say it.
Danzo: ......
Admin: Tea and Cookies!
(Danzo put his hand on his forehead.)
Maru: No thanks just got Miso Ramen, sorry!
Danzo: Look this kid did something fantastic he did a A rank mission that was suppose to be an S rank mission.
Admin: What type of mission was it?
Danzo: A mission even Kage level couldn't beat.
Admin: Well I see come on in the Test Room.
Admin: Now Let me test you on Jutsu watch me.
Admin: Utsuyatsu no Jutsu (Ninja Art: Shuriken Hoster)
Maru: Utsuyatsuno Jutsu!
Admin: Charkra Strength: A
Attack Speed: 90 MPH!
Danzo: I knew this kid would do it!
Admin: OK, Taijutsu now!
( Maru and the Admin fight with Taijutsu Maru throws a few Punches and Kicks while the Admin dodges)
Admin: Nice! 100%
Admin: Now we fight with all you got.
Maru: Kage no Bushin no Jutsu!
Maru: Utsuyatsuno no Jutsu!
Maru Clones: Ha Ho!
Admin: Incredible! No one thought Shadow Clone would work!
Admin: Now for the written part. This test in front of you is a test that all Kage have to know. 10 minutes later
Maru: Done!


To Be Continued
Will Maru pass or Fail on Vol.3?
Next time
 

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I liked the tea and cookies joke, but why would we want to know whether or not they passed their exam, the ending needs to be more captivating but overall it has potential, I recommend that you expand on the amount of jokes and think about my criticisms, just keep at it and you will get there in the end.
 
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