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Anywayyyy..... the fuuinjutsu.

Sealing Technique: Hermes' Reply| Fuuinjutsu: Hermes' Touben
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short (When seal is applied on the object)
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user applies a sealing formula to a case of sorts (the 'case' doesn't necessarily have to be a case. It can be a letter, door, scroll, jar, box, suitcase, etc. Anything that can be opened can have the seal applied to it. After applying the seal, it seems to disappear on the object but is still there, just no longer visible. Seemingly doing nothing, the seal allows the user to know if the object has been opened. Once the object is opened, the seal is broken and the user is mentally alerted.
*Can only be used 3 times a battle*

Now, when I originally made it, traveling in the NW was less defined and I had wanted to find a way to travel near instantly in case I needed to do a quick assassination mission. I planned it to be used alongside a Keigoku jutsu that allows me to turn into Keigoku and teleport. The concept behind this jutsu was simple: I channel chakra to a seal that I apply to a "case" or vessel that can be opened in a way, which can vary as far as doors, jars, scrolls, letters, even mouths in theory. Once the seal is placed, the seal seemingly goes away but is still there, just now dormant. Once that vessel is opened, however the seal becomes active and a mental note is given to the user, allowing him to know the seal has been opened, which in turn could be used to confirm a letter has been sent or received or if a mission is given to a member where they are not permitted to speak at all, you will know that they have not followed rules. Should you have a telportation ability, this will work great with it. I originally was going to teach Xylon it to use with his Minato bio so he could place a FTG with the seal as he used it to make it more effective. Questions?
 

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Anywayyyy..... the fuuinjutsu.

Sealing Technique: Hermes' Reply| Fuuinjutsu: Hermes' Touben
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short (When seal is applied on the object)
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user applies a sealing formula to a case of sorts (the 'case' doesn't necessarily have to be a case. It can be a letter, door, scroll, jar, box, suitcase, etc. Anything that can be opened can have the seal applied to it. After applying the seal, it seems to disappear on the object but is still there, just no longer visible. Seemingly doing nothing, the seal allows the user to know if the object has been opened. Once the object is opened, the seal is broken and the user is mentally alerted.
*Can only be used 3 times a battle*

Now, when I originally made it, traveling in the NW was less defined and I had wanted to find a way to travel near instantly in case I needed to do a quick assassination mission. I planned it to be used alongside a Keigoku jutsu that allows me to turn into Keigoku and teleport. The concept behind this jutsu was simple: I channel chakra to a seal that I apply to a "case" or vessel that can be opened in a way, which can vary as far as doors, jars, scrolls, letters, even mouths in theory. Once the seal is placed, the seal seemingly goes away but is still there, just now dormant. Once that vessel is opened, however the seal becomes active and a mental note is given to the user, allowing him to know the seal has been opened, which in turn could be used to confirm a letter has been sent or received or if a mission is given to a member where they are not permitted to speak at all, you will know that they have not followed rules. Should you have a telportation ability, this will work great with it. I originally was going to teach Xylon it to use with his Minato bio so he could place a FTG with the seal as he used it to make it more effective. Questions?
I didn't even think about the mouth as a technical "case". I love it, opens a lot more opportunities for things like torture and manipulation. Imagine putting the seal on someone's mouth, or eyes, for example, and telling them they're forbidden to open them. Once they do, you detonate an hidden paper bomb at the base of their neck.

I was wondering if this mental awareness could be instead linked to a release of chakra, so it can automatically detonate something attached to it
 

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Yes, it has a wide range of uses, showing that even the simpler jutsus have a purpose. As for your question, you can apply it alongside a second seal to create this effect, but through the usage of just this jutsu, no.
 

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( Kusaru Genjutsu: Shinigami no Yousei) Carrion Illusion Arts: The Necrotic Touch of the Black Larvae

>.> If that one isnt too much to ask for lol. If so, (Fuuton: Rashinban Taka no Me) Wind Release: Compass Hawkeye is nice. o.o
 

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Awesome. ^^

( Kusaru Genjutsu: Shinigami no Yousei) Carrion Illusion Arts: The Necrotic Touch of the Black Larvae

Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Contact
Chakra Cost: 40 (+5 per turn)
Damage Points: 80 (+20 per turn)
Description: The user charges an elemental chakra through a part of the body, generally the fingers or the mouth, and then proceeds to touch the head of the opponent (Or through a kiss). This will infuse the opponent with a globule of the element, which will appear as a larvae running bellow the surface of the skin, heading towards the brain. Once there, they begin "eating" the brain, producing illusions as they go along. Their trail is characteristic of the element used (Ex: Sticky Resin, Ashen Burn, Petrified Residue, for basic element's Water, Fire, Earth, or even Rotting, Freezing Trail or Small Intricate Wooden Net (for advanced element's Mushroom, Wood, Ice) and so is the illusions they produce (Fire burning the terrain (Fire), Numbness of the touch (Lightning), alcoholic taste on the mouth (Perfume), etc). The larvae will eat across the brain, starting on one Sense, and progressively adding the others, a new Sense every turn. Once all 5 senses have been targeted, death follows in the next turn, thus raging 6 turns between the beginning of the technique and the end. After one Sense as been targeted, it is numbed in reality, making it so it is unusable by anyone with a rank lower than the user, or severely cut down by anyone of the same or higher rank, this stands mainly for the aftereffects of this genjutsu after it has been released, since while its in effect, the illusionary pain, numbness, etc is what the enemy feels. It can be released as normal by any means of releasing an elemental genjutsu, except through Pain, as it needs an actual chakra purge to obliterate the larvae. Pain only temporarily slows the illusionary effect but doesn't get rid of its source. The larvae does physical damage to the brain besides the illusionary damage. This damage is produced by the larvae's movement inside the brain. However, its residual and not significant during the first 3 turns. After that, even if the illusion is dispelled, the damages produce a sluggish mind, hindered reactions, etc. with its effects worsen by each turn accumulated. Medical ninjas can use healing techniques or other techniques that can target and destroy harmful pathogens to counter and disable the larvae but these need to be same rank or above.
*If the user touches a limb or the torso (Through pieces of clothing top, not armour or hardened leather), the larvae will travel to the brain, but will instead require 1 addition turn before the illusions are felt*
*An advanced element requires an extra +5 chakra upon activation, but experiences no bonus in strength, just a different array of trails and illusions*
*After charging the genjutsu, it can be infected to up to 5 people, during the turn it's used as long as the user manages to achieve the 5 successful physical contacts.*
*Can only be used with one element per usage*
*Follows the Elemental weakness and strength*
*Can only be used twice per battle*
*Counts as a jutsu for every turn active*
*Can be released at will by the user*

Okay, so I create a larvae from an element, be it one of the base 5 or advanced natures such as KG based elements or CEs, on contact with the enemy's head. This larvae carries traits of the element aforementioned and allows an illusion to take place as the larvae "eats" through the brain, affecting multiple senses as it goes on with death being the last outcome and effect. As it also does actual damage to a foe as well as mental damage, it makes it hard to detect as a genjutsu and likewise can also affect a Nekura as the larvae could in theory burn through the brain as it "eats" through it as well. This is a good jutsu to tie into taijutsu as well, weaving tai blows and genjutsu casting at the same time.

First question is that it says advanced elements and lists Wood, which is a KG. By that logic, would it be incorrect if I utilized Keigoku with this, as opening a portal does not constitute as a move and releasing the Keigoku through this move would count as releasing it? If so, that would make ffor an interesting combo....I have other questions, but its easier to ask them one by one xD
 

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Awesome. ^^

( Kusaru Genjutsu: Shinigami no Yousei) Carrion Illusion Arts: The Necrotic Touch of the Black Larvae

Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Contact
Chakra Cost: 40 (+5 per turn)
Damage Points: 80 (+20 per turn)
Description: The user charges an elemental chakra through a part of the body, generally the fingers or the mouth, and then proceeds to touch the head of the opponent (Or through a kiss). This will infuse the opponent with a globule of the element, which will appear as a larvae running bellow the surface of the skin, heading towards the brain. Once there, they begin "eating" the brain, producing illusions as they go along. Their trail is characteristic of the element used (Ex: Sticky Resin, Ashen Burn, Petrified Residue, for basic element's Water, Fire, Earth, or even Rotting, Freezing Trail or Small Intricate Wooden Net (for advanced element's Mushroom, Wood, Ice) and so is the illusions they produce (Fire burning the terrain (Fire), Numbness of the touch (Lightning), alcoholic taste on the mouth (Perfume), etc). The larvae will eat across the brain, starting on one Sense, and progressively adding the others, a new Sense every turn. Once all 5 senses have been targeted, death follows in the next turn, thus raging 6 turns between the beginning of the technique and the end. After one Sense as been targeted, it is numbed in reality, making it so it is unusable by anyone with a rank lower than the user, or severely cut down by anyone of the same or higher rank, this stands mainly for the aftereffects of this genjutsu after it has been released, since while its in effect, the illusionary pain, numbness, etc is what the enemy feels. It can be released as normal by any means of releasing an elemental genjutsu, except through Pain, as it needs an actual chakra purge to obliterate the larvae. Pain only temporarily slows the illusionary effect but doesn't get rid of its source. The larvae does physical damage to the brain besides the illusionary damage. This damage is produced by the larvae's movement inside the brain. However, its residual and not significant during the first 3 turns. After that, even if the illusion is dispelled, the damages produce a sluggish mind, hindered reactions, etc. with its effects worsen by each turn accumulated. Medical ninjas can use healing techniques or other techniques that can target and destroy harmful pathogens to counter and disable the larvae but these need to be same rank or above.
*If the user touches a limb or the torso (Through pieces of clothing top, not armour or hardened leather), the larvae will travel to the brain, but will instead require 1 addition turn before the illusions are felt*
*An advanced element requires an extra +5 chakra upon activation, but experiences no bonus in strength, just a different array of trails and illusions*
*After charging the genjutsu, it can be infected to up to 5 people, during the turn it's used as long as the user manages to achieve the 5 successful physical contacts.*
*Can only be used with one element per usage*
*Follows the Elemental weakness and strength*
*Can only be used twice per battle*
*Counts as a jutsu for every turn active*
*Can be released at will by the user*

Okay, so I create a larvae from an element, be it one of the base 5 or advanced natures such as KG based elements or CEs, on contact with the enemy's head. This larvae carries traits of the element aforementioned and allows an illusion to take place as the larvae "eats" through the brain, affecting multiple senses as it goes on with death being the last outcome and effect. As it also does actual damage to a foe as well as mental damage, it makes it hard to detect as a genjutsu and likewise can also affect a Nekura as the larvae could in theory burn through the brain as it "eats" through it as well. This is a good jutsu to tie into taijutsu as well, weaving tai blows and genjutsu casting at the same time.

First question is that it says advanced elements and lists Wood, which is a KG. By that logic, would it be incorrect if I utilized Keigoku with this, as opening a portal does not constitute as a move and releasing the Keigoku through this move would count as releasing it? If so, that would make ffor an interesting combo....I have other questions, but its easier to ask them one by one xD
An Advanced Element is any element that requires a combination of 2 or more of the Basic Elements in order to create something different. Cannon-wise, Advanced elements are also KG, but only the Elemental KG count towards this jutsu. So, Wood, Scorch, Lava, Steel, etc. Nekura is a type of chakra, not an Elemental chakra, so it cannot be used with it. Btw, special Elements like Sound, Smoke, Ink, etc, are also unable to produce Larvae. I count them more like other categories of Ninjutsu than actual Elemental Ninjutsu.

You have more questions, ask them away! Also, while the Basic 5 are pretty obvious to create illusions, I'd like to ask you to give me some examples of how your illusions would feel like with your other elements. If you'd like to start with the basic 5, though, be my guest
 

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I guess so, xD. Its not that hard, what I asked. Just describe the genjutsu if it was used with all of your custom elements and other advanced elements if you have them. But sure, let's skip for now
 

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I know but I have this small mental problem. I don't like typing lol

Anywaaaaaayyyyy....on to the next jutsu.

The updated version of the one above is this:

Sealing Technique: Hermes' Reply| Fuuinjutsu: Hermes' Touben
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D
Range: Short (When seal is applied on the object)
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user applies a sealing formula to a case of sorts (the 'case' doesn't necessarily have to be a case. It can be a letter, door, scroll, jar, box, suitcase, etc. Anything that can be opened can have the seal applied to it. After applying the seal, it seems to disappear on the object but is still there, just no longer visible. Seemingly doing nothing, the seal allows the user to know if the object has been opened. Once the object is opened, the seal is broken and the user is mentally alerted. Using the principles of chakra taught by the second Hokage, when the seal is broken, the tiny fraction that dissipates and alerts the user, also creates a fleeing chakra signal. This can be used to attach a paper bomb to the "case" which is automatically detonated once the seal is broken ( Quantifiable as 10 damage from the explosion of a paper bomb ). This usage is supplementary, and works with 1 paper bomb placed at the same time as the seal, it serves no purpose deactivating genjutsu or enemy seals.
And now the new jutsu:

Wind/Sealing Technique: Ouranos' Gift| Fuuton/Fuuinjutsu: Ouranos' Houtei
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user applies a sealing formula onto a paperbomb, infusing a small amount of wind chakra in it. While harmless on it's own, once the tag detonates, the burst of wind will feed the explosion, making a single tag as destructive as three, the norm being 10 damage. The seal is applied in short range, and seems to disappear afterwards. The secondary use of this seal is that, while activated, the user can, with a single handseal, release the seal, which will detonate the wind-powered tag, just like a normal tag, but, with the presence of the seal, the user is able to access it at any range, making it a perfect remote controlled bomb.

Analyze and tell me how you would use it pl0x.
 
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