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Madara's Shattered
*Note: This is a one-shot I randomly felt like doing. Also, please listen to this song while reading this. Adds more emphasis.
*Note-These pictures inspired this one and the Kakuzu one I'm writing.
Bearing his regular Orage & Black mask, Madara Uchiha sets alone on his massive statue marking The Valley Of The End as rain befalls around him. Slowly looking up into the sky with his blazing red three tomoe Sharingan, Madara begins to recall events of his past.
Madara: "This world is so misguided. When it comes down to it...you're all alone. Not even your own clan will stand by you. Some say I am a disgrace to the Uchiha clan, but I.....I think the opposite. They are a disgrace to me! I warned them about the Senju, but they didn't listen. I received my revenge that night with Itachi, but I will never be happy. I am truly the last Uchiha....Uchiha Sasuke is no more than a damaged boy who is disgracing his name even further. I don't blame him for wanting revenge on Konoha, but he's disgracing his brother's name. *Laughs* I never was harsh to my brother."
*Madara stares at the statue of co-founded of Konoha and 1st Hokage, Hashirama Senju and stand up from his sitting position*
Madara: "Hashirama....perhaps you have won after all....I'm nothing more than a shell of my former self. You always were so happy and peaceful, but I was damned with a clan full of hatred! You Senju's took my family away from me! My brother! Everyone! Your clan is just as pathetic as mine! The Uchiha clan is a disgrace!!!!"
*Lightening strikes behind Madara, and then all around him. More rain befalls the area as Madara falls down, exhausted*
Madara: "Heh......But I guess....It wasn't always that way. I too had a loved one Hashirama.....The Uchiha clan wasn't always a disgrace.....Before my suspicions arose about the Senju trying to discriminate the Uchiha, life....wasn't so terrible.
*FlashBack*
*FlashBack End*
A beautiful and bright sun awakens a young Madara Uchiha, while it rises across Konoha. Rubbing his eyes, he looks up his bed, sighs, and lays back down, however....not too long. A woman wearing a black dress featuring a resident Uchiha apron, starts to shake Madara. Not phasing at all, Madara just yawns and turns to the opposite direction. The beautiful black haired woman then gets in Madara's face and kisses him. Opening his eyes, while smiling, Madara finally awakens.
Madara: "Morning."
???: "Your tactics never get old, Madara. I knew what you were doing, but I played along this time."
Madara: "Heh....Azumi, you always know how to make me smile, even if it's this early."
Azumi: "It's time for breakfast. Izuna came by and he brought someone with him I think you might want to see."
While making his way to the kitchen, Madara is suddenly attacked by a small figure. Laughing, Madara opens his eyes, surprised to see his son, Koichi.
Koichi: "Daddy!"
Madara: "Koichi? What are you doing here?"
Koichi: "Kicking your butt!"
Madara: "*Laughs* Well, I'm so happy to see you again!"
Koichi: "Uncle Izuna brought me!"
Azumi: "They've finished their training early."
Madara: "Really? I expected you to be done in atleast two months. To be finished in one month is remarkable...."
Koichi: "Well, you always told me to do my best!"
Izuna, who walks in: "And that he did. Hello brother."
Madara: "Izuna. I'm glad to see you again."
*Madara gets up as Koichi gets off of him, and hugs his brother*
Madara: "I'll take it by your presence that Koichi here didn't kill you."
Izuna: "No, but he sure tried."
*Madara, Azumi, and Koichi laugh*
Azumi: "I'll put up breakfast, as I think you two have some catching up to do. Koichi, please come and help Mom."
Koichi: "But I have to show Dad my knew move!"
Azumi: "Okay, but I'll expect you inside in five minutes."
Koichi: "Thanks mom!"
Azumi: "It was nice seeing you again, Izuna."
Izuna: "The pleasure was all mine. It's nice to know my brother is still caught in the knot of love. Poor guy."
Azumi: "Excuse me?"
Madara: "He's right."
*Madara laughs, but slowly stops as he stares into Azuma's eyes*
Madara: "But what does he know? He isn't married to someone as beautiful as you."
Azumi: "You may be skilled as a Shinobi, but you're a fool in love."
*Azumi kisses Madara*
Azumi: "But aren't we all?"
Outside of their house, in Madara's personal training yard, Koichi's shows Madara what he's learned.
Madara: "I'll take it he's learned how to use his powers?"
Izuna: "Of course brother. In fact, I think he's mastered Fire Style as well."
Madara: "That's quite impressive."
Izuna: "Not really. He is related to me afterall. Plus, he has the Uchiha blood in him."
Madara: "I agree with the Uchiha part. This clan truly is something, something amazing, but I disagree about your blood. He's his own man. One's relations and past does not affect one's abilities."
Koichi: "Okay Dad! Watch this! Uncle Izuna, attack me!"
Izuna: "Don't worry. I'll go easy on him, like I do on you."
*Izuna and Koichi walk to the middle of the field and bow to each other, as Madara watches on.*
Koichi: "Come on! Attack me!"
Izuna: "Okay, but if I kill you it's not my fault. *Laughs*
Koichi: "Stop laughing and be a man and attack me!"
Izuna: "Here it comes!"
*Izuna throws three Kunai at Koichi and then uses Fire Release: Fire Spears to aid in the attack. Koichi stares at the incoming attacks, closes his eyes, only to awaken them a second later, but with the Sharingan active. Koichi then grabs a Kunai in his back bag and blocks the first three Kunai by throwing his own, while also making quick handsigns to perform a jutsu*
Koichi: "Fire Style: Cloud Blaze!"
*The fire, coming out form his mouth, purges everything in it's path, stopping the attack by Izuna*
Koichi: "How was that?!"
Izuna: "Good work."
Madara: "Activating the Sharingan at such a young age.....Good work Koichi. I'll be happy when I die knowing great Shinobi like you will be leading the future."
Koichi: "Maybe I'll become Hokage one day!"
Izuna: "You certainly are more deserving than our current one."
Madara: "Izuna. Like you, I hate the Senju but our Hokage is a good one. Well deserving. He's beaten us in combat. He hasn't done anything to me to make me hate him or disrespect him."
Azumi, who's screaming from the door: "Your five minutes is up!"
Madara: "Let's go."
Koichi: "Breakfast!"
After breakfast, Madara walks towards his living room, but Izuna gets in his way.
Izuna: "Brother, we need to talk."
Madara: "Is this about..."
Izuna: "Yes."
They head into a dark-lit room and shut the door, making sure no one can hear them.
Madara: "How long have you've felt the side-affects?"
Izuna: "Not long, but I am loosing my sight fairly quickly."
Madara: "Don't overuse your Magnekkyou Sharingan. I told you what it's done to me."
Izuna: "I didn't think I'd feel the same affects. How do I slow it down?"
Madara: "Simply. Just use your regular Sharingan."
Izuna: "But you-"
Madara: "I know...It's easier said than done. We have such a great power, and we can't use it."
Izuna: "There must be some way to stop the effects."
Madara: "I doubt it."
Izuna: "Well, if we ever find an answer, I'll help you restore your vision. I hate having brother who can barely see ten feet in front of him."
Madara: "Thank you, Izuna."
Later on that day, Izuna brings Azumi and Madara to his house while Koichi goes to the ninja academy.
Azumi: "What is that?"
(Azumi points to a plant like creature, who is at Izuna's door.)
Izuna: "This is Zetsu. I found him all alone while on a mission. He seems nice....sometimes. Other times, he can be arrogant. I guess it depends on what side you're talking to."
Azumi: "Side?"
Izuna: "There's two sides. Two personas. The white side is calm, and quite easy going. The black side is more harsh, and strict. Both are arrogant sometimes though. He's very smart for a child. Kind of like your son."
Azumi: "The thing is kind of cute when you look at it."
(Madara walks up to Zetsu, and gets down on one leg.)
Madara: "Hello, my name is Uchiha Madara."
Zetsu: (Black Half): U-chi...ha...Mad...ar...a?"
Zetsu: (White Half): "He has a hard time pronouncing names. I think we'll just call you...."
Madara: "Call me Tobi."
Azumi: "Why Tobi?"
Izuna: "After our father, I imagine."
Zetsu: (Black Half): "Nice to meet you...Tobi."
After visiting with Izuna, Madara and Azumi go to look at thesunset.
Azumi: "It was nice seeing your brother again."
Madara: "Yeah. Although he's quite the reckless one. I think he'd die fighting while deaf or blind, than accept defeat. Makes him strong..."
Azumi: "I think Koichi is ecstatic about awakening his Sharingan. I know I was when I awoke mine. Hopefully, he'll know win to stop using it, unlike you. Your Mangekkyou is hurting you....I know."
Madara: "How long have you known?"
Azumi: "For awhile. Will you do me a favor?"
Madara: "Yes."
Azumi: "Please never use that again. Always use your three tomoe Sharingan. It's powerful too. Plus, you look very handsome with it."
Madara: "I will keep that promise. Azuma, I love you."
Azumi: "Always and forever?"
Madara: "Always and forever."
Madara: "Morning."
???: "Your tactics never get old, Madara. I knew what you were doing, but I played along this time."
Madara: "Heh....Azumi, you always know how to make me smile, even if it's this early."
Azumi: "It's time for breakfast. Izuna came by and he brought someone with him I think you might want to see."
While making his way to the kitchen, Madara is suddenly attacked by a small figure. Laughing, Madara opens his eyes, surprised to see his son, Koichi.
Koichi: "Daddy!"
Madara: "Koichi? What are you doing here?"
Koichi: "Kicking your butt!"
Madara: "*Laughs* Well, I'm so happy to see you again!"
Koichi: "Uncle Izuna brought me!"
Azumi: "They've finished their training early."
Madara: "Really? I expected you to be done in atleast two months. To be finished in one month is remarkable...."
Koichi: "Well, you always told me to do my best!"
Izuna, who walks in: "And that he did. Hello brother."
Madara: "Izuna. I'm glad to see you again."
*Madara gets up as Koichi gets off of him, and hugs his brother*
Madara: "I'll take it by your presence that Koichi here didn't kill you."
Izuna: "No, but he sure tried."
*Madara, Azumi, and Koichi laugh*
Azumi: "I'll put up breakfast, as I think you two have some catching up to do. Koichi, please come and help Mom."
Koichi: "But I have to show Dad my knew move!"
Azumi: "Okay, but I'll expect you inside in five minutes."
Koichi: "Thanks mom!"
Azumi: "It was nice seeing you again, Izuna."
Izuna: "The pleasure was all mine. It's nice to know my brother is still caught in the knot of love. Poor guy."
Azumi: "Excuse me?"
Madara: "He's right."
*Madara laughs, but slowly stops as he stares into Azuma's eyes*
Madara: "But what does he know? He isn't married to someone as beautiful as you."
Azumi: "You may be skilled as a Shinobi, but you're a fool in love."
*Azumi kisses Madara*
Azumi: "But aren't we all?"
Outside of their house, in Madara's personal training yard, Koichi's shows Madara what he's learned.
Madara: "I'll take it he's learned how to use his powers?"
Izuna: "Of course brother. In fact, I think he's mastered Fire Style as well."
Madara: "That's quite impressive."
Izuna: "Not really. He is related to me afterall. Plus, he has the Uchiha blood in him."
Madara: "I agree with the Uchiha part. This clan truly is something, something amazing, but I disagree about your blood. He's his own man. One's relations and past does not affect one's abilities."
Koichi: "Okay Dad! Watch this! Uncle Izuna, attack me!"
Izuna: "Don't worry. I'll go easy on him, like I do on you."
*Izuna and Koichi walk to the middle of the field and bow to each other, as Madara watches on.*
Koichi: "Come on! Attack me!"
Izuna: "Okay, but if I kill you it's not my fault. *Laughs*
Koichi: "Stop laughing and be a man and attack me!"
Izuna: "Here it comes!"
*Izuna throws three Kunai at Koichi and then uses Fire Release: Fire Spears to aid in the attack. Koichi stares at the incoming attacks, closes his eyes, only to awaken them a second later, but with the Sharingan active. Koichi then grabs a Kunai in his back bag and blocks the first three Kunai by throwing his own, while also making quick handsigns to perform a jutsu*
Koichi: "Fire Style: Cloud Blaze!"
*The fire, coming out form his mouth, purges everything in it's path, stopping the attack by Izuna*
Koichi: "How was that?!"
Izuna: "Good work."
Madara: "Activating the Sharingan at such a young age.....Good work Koichi. I'll be happy when I die knowing great Shinobi like you will be leading the future."
Koichi: "Maybe I'll become Hokage one day!"
Izuna: "You certainly are more deserving than our current one."
Madara: "Izuna. Like you, I hate the Senju but our Hokage is a good one. Well deserving. He's beaten us in combat. He hasn't done anything to me to make me hate him or disrespect him."
Azumi, who's screaming from the door: "Your five minutes is up!"
Madara: "Let's go."
Koichi: "Breakfast!"
After breakfast, Madara walks towards his living room, but Izuna gets in his way.
Izuna: "Brother, we need to talk."
Madara: "Is this about..."
Izuna: "Yes."
They head into a dark-lit room and shut the door, making sure no one can hear them.
Madara: "How long have you've felt the side-affects?"
Izuna: "Not long, but I am loosing my sight fairly quickly."
Madara: "Don't overuse your Magnekkyou Sharingan. I told you what it's done to me."
Izuna: "I didn't think I'd feel the same affects. How do I slow it down?"
Madara: "Simply. Just use your regular Sharingan."
Izuna: "But you-"
Madara: "I know...It's easier said than done. We have such a great power, and we can't use it."
Izuna: "There must be some way to stop the effects."
Madara: "I doubt it."
Izuna: "Well, if we ever find an answer, I'll help you restore your vision. I hate having brother who can barely see ten feet in front of him."
Madara: "Thank you, Izuna."
Later on that day, Izuna brings Azumi and Madara to his house while Koichi goes to the ninja academy.
Azumi: "What is that?"
(Azumi points to a plant like creature, who is at Izuna's door.)
Izuna: "This is Zetsu. I found him all alone while on a mission. He seems nice....sometimes. Other times, he can be arrogant. I guess it depends on what side you're talking to."
Azumi: "Side?"
Izuna: "There's two sides. Two personas. The white side is calm, and quite easy going. The black side is more harsh, and strict. Both are arrogant sometimes though. He's very smart for a child. Kind of like your son."
Azumi: "The thing is kind of cute when you look at it."
(Madara walks up to Zetsu, and gets down on one leg.)
Madara: "Hello, my name is Uchiha Madara."
Zetsu: (Black Half): U-chi...ha...Mad...ar...a?"
Zetsu: (White Half): "He has a hard time pronouncing names. I think we'll just call you...."
Madara: "Call me Tobi."
Azumi: "Why Tobi?"
Izuna: "After our father, I imagine."
Zetsu: (Black Half): "Nice to meet you...Tobi."
After visiting with Izuna, Madara and Azumi go to look at thesunset.
Azumi: "It was nice seeing your brother again."
Madara: "Yeah. Although he's quite the reckless one. I think he'd die fighting while deaf or blind, than accept defeat. Makes him strong..."
Azumi: "I think Koichi is ecstatic about awakening his Sharingan. I know I was when I awoke mine. Hopefully, he'll know win to stop using it, unlike you. Your Mangekkyou is hurting you....I know."
Madara: "How long have you known?"
Azumi: "For awhile. Will you do me a favor?"
Madara: "Yes."
Azumi: "Please never use that again. Always use your three tomoe Sharingan. It's powerful too. Plus, you look very handsome with it."
Madara: "I will keep that promise. Azuma, I love you."
Azumi: "Always and forever?"
Madara: "Always and forever."
*FlashBack End*
Madara: "It has been forever.....Koichi...Izuna...Azumi....I miss you all so much. All I have left of you is Zetsu. One day...I'll see you guys again In the afterlife....I wouldn't dare to use that wretched resurrection jutsu...I won't disgrace you....Like our clan has now done to us....I love all of you....."
(Madara stands back up, as a tear begins to flow past his Sharingan eye.)
Madara: "Peace is an allusion, but pain isn't..."
End
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