Madara's pawn

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Byron123

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Hello this is my sequel of my fan fic "The cruelty of a forgotten hero"
For those who hadn't read it, here is the link:

Madara stands on the verge of death and coughs blood.
Madara: So it did come to this after all.
Obito: I was waiting for this moment for a long time Madara.
Madara: Why do you do it?
Obito angry: WHY?! You dare to ask me why?! Because you destroyed my life!
Madara: I destroyed you?! I saved you! Without me, you would have died as a pitiful little kid!
Obito: Shut up! You're the reason for the death of my beloving one! You think that I didn't know that you were the one that ordered the death of Rin Nohara?
Madara slighty shocked regains his calm attitude fast and with a little smile: So you knew it all along?
Obito: Of course I did!
Madara: And why you didn't do anything back then?
Obito: There was nothing I could do. My life was on your hands. If I was trying to kill you, I wouldn't succeed anything. I would ended up weak and I wouldn't be able to accomplish the plan of Infinitive Tsukuyomi.
Madara: And for that exact plan sacrifices had to be made!
Obito: So then this time , let yourself be the sacrifice. (He rapidly takes out his huge shurikens from Madara's body) DIE! (He goes straight for his head).
Madara seconds before you die: You're stup- (As his about to die he becomes wood)
Obito: What?! (He turns his head back the moment the real Madara appears behind him as he resurfaces from Juubi's head) You're not going to leave alive! (He attacks again with his shurikens straight for his throat
Madara: Obey!
Obito shocked as he as he stopped his attack seconds before it landed a blow: What did you do to me!
Madara: You should have known till now Obito, I'm a man who takes precautions. I knew that I couldn't trust you. Now! (Black rods appear on the left arm of Obito and quickly start to take over his left side of the body)
Obito screams in pain: AAA!
Madara: I was planning to have you used rinnei tensei on me but now I'm alive again, I have no such need.
Obito trying to resist against Madara's will: Bast..
Madara: Becoming the 10 tails jinchuuriki requires time and at that time I will be vulnerable. (Pointing his finger towards fallen Naruto and Hashirama fighting the clones). You are going to protect me from those 2.
Obito: I rather die.
Madara: You will, but only when I decide to. Now go Obito and show me your true strength!
Obito: AAA!!! (His body moves without his will)
Madara pointing at Naruto: Kill him!

Obito disappears and appears on the sky above Naruto: Fire Ball Jutsu!
Hashirama: (This is bad, he can't move at his current condition) Wood style guard protection! ( A huge wood guard appears above naruto and takes the hit in his place).
Obito stands in front of Naruto while trying to keep control over his body.
Naruto: (This is no good I have to move now!)
Hashirama creates wood clones which come to his aid before Obito tries to attack again.
Hashirama's clones protect Naruto while the real one prepares some seals while tapping at naruto's belly.
Hashirama: Wood style! Clarity of mind!
Juubi's eye inside of Naruto stops shinning.
Naruto while he stands up: I can move again!
Hashirama: Yes, I was able to keep your beast at bay but if you continue to use the rinnegan I might not have the chance again.

Naruto: Deal! (he prepares a Rasenshuriken!). Take this!
The rasenshuriken goes straight for Obito:
Obito with his right eye: Kamui! (The rasenshuriken is wiped into the other dimension). (from his left eye the rasenshuriken appears again and goes straight for Naruto).
Naruto: What the hell? (He avoids the hit just in time).

Madara as he starts the sealing ritual: Enough with all these games! (He strengthens his control over Obito).
Obito screams in pain as a huge almost black warrior appears around his body.
Naruto: That's!
Obito: Susanoo! (His black susanoo throws a huge spear at naruto.
Hashirama: I'm on it! Sage Art: Wood Release: True Several Thousand Hands (An enormous statue appears in front of them many times larger than Obito's Susanoo and blocks his attack)
Naruto: Not good enough.
Madara smirks
The spear that made impact with the staue starts to wipe it out.
Hashirama: Impossible....! Just like that!
Naruto: Doesn't matter, instead of being in the defense let's go an all out attack. Sage art: Wind Style: Thousands of swords! (Thousands of invincible swords hit Obito's Susanoo without doing much damage)
Hashirama: I'll help you too. Wood dragon! (A huge wood dragon is being wrapped around Susanoo completely incapacitating it)
Naruto: We can do it... WHAT!
The wood dragon which was around Susanoo was wiped out exactly like the statue.
Hashirama: It can use its ability even by just touching it?!
Madara: (Soon, very soon)

Obito inside his mind sees many flashbacks of his youth and stops to his photo with Team Minato.
Obito: So at the end, was eveything that I did futile? (Darkness starts to cover the photo).
Obito: After al these years, was I wasting my time for stupid dreams? (Darkness continues to cover the photo).
Obito: Will I just die... in vain? (Darkness continues and it's about to cover the whole photo)
Obito just before he closes his eyes he sees Rin's face in the picture.
Obito: No!(The darkness starts decreasing) I refused to die like this! (The whole darkness dissapears from the photo)

Obito opens his eyes and he's at the real world: MADARA!!!!!
Madara in complete shock: What?!

Obito fights back!

Hope you liked it=D

Leave a thanks if you liked it, I really appreciate it=D
 
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Henrik

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You need to learn how Obito is... He's not like ''BECAUSE YOU DESTROYED MY LIFE!'' no... it's more this shit.

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Lol was trying to figure out where everyone was....remembered they were told to peace out.

Like Madara having back up plans....unfortunate that will power puts it at risk :'(!

Good chapter FF!
 

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This one was awesome, especially the part where Obito dodged Rasenshuriken using Kamui and then attacked Naruto with his own jutsu. I didn't expect that! Great job! :win:
 
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