Madara has the most tragic (and BS) death in the series

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Kishimoto is an awful author, and I wish I spoke Japanese to tell him that.

He wrote himself into a corner - Madara was too powerful to be stopped from any real fight, so he had him one-shotted by Black Zetsu and changed into a woman. It makes absolutely ZERO sense that Madara would not have been able to sense BZ or even stop BZ, especially when you consider he was reacting and beating a S/T when he only had one eye!

So then he gets spit out by a demon and dies laying on the ground with a grand total of two people even remebering he exists. (Oh, and remember now, a dozen or so chapters ago this guy had the world in the palm of his hand)

So why is his death the most tragic? Because nearly his ENTIRE life, he believed in a cause that would save the world, but only ended being a ploy to create a playdoh army. Think about that for a second. His ENTIRE life. Dedicated to something he thought was noble and would bring peace. Only to have FIVE panels ruin his entire's life work - And then we don't hear of him again until he's dying! Unbelieveable.

He doesn't even get the closure that he deserves. Obito, Jiraiya, Neji were all tragic deaths as well. But at least they has some MAJOR closure on what they've done with their lives. Jiraiya even died happily, knowing what he'd accomplished.

But nope, Madara gets none of that. He has two pages of a chat with Hashirama about how he never achieved his dream and much he would have done differently. That's not closure. That's the opposite of closure. He died in this weird limbo between feeling regret for himself and being happy for his friend.

Oh yeah, did I mention that only 2 people recognized he was there?

Kishimoto will never read this, but I have to point out how awful it is. He could have given him a conversation with Izuna. Had him transition to the afterlife like Kakashi did. He could have had more people around to recognize Madara's frustration with his life.

But most of all, he could have NOT killed him, his life dream, and his whole f*cking story in a grand total of 5 panels.
 

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Actually Kishi did have a way to beat Madara. The seals Naruto and Sasuke. *rollseyes*
 

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The editors have influence over the story too.

So who knows who's fault it is?
 

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Actually Kishi did have a way to beat Madara. The seals Naruto and Sasuke. *rollseyes*

*rolleyes*

RIGHT????

Even then he wrote himself into a corner. None of them were immune to Infinite Tsukuyomi and Madara was about to ROFLstomp them with Limbo and Chibaku Tensei when BZ stepped in.

It was BS.
 

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He killed so many people to achieve his plan.. his way was wromg and he was a villain.. he didnt deserve a noble death like jiraiya... when you fly high, you might fall deep.. and thats what he did..

Anyway, his death was great imo and he died with a smile.
 

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I feel your pain, Madara was done wrong. All the same I did get some feels for his death this chapter, so Kishi did something right.
 

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Your right, he did write himself into a corner. And that does make him a shitty writer. BUT he was man enough to admit it at least.
 

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Shouldve had Gai kill him.......what? It better than getting one shotted by black zetsu.
 
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i feel ya, kishi should have just let him stay FV status. kishi wrote so many cop out options into the previous chapters. like the sages tools,the jutsu that hashi gave to sauce,sages powerups,the eight gates....but what does he do?????? convert madara a villan we know and respect into a villan we know little of and are skeptical about. then have her be super op and still fail in a shorter time than it took madara to take a dump on the shinobi alliance
 

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I excpect nothing better than this from Naruto.
 

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It was inevitable that Madara would die. If he didn't, then what would he do? When you do something horribly wrong in this manga, you end up dying one way or another. Though, I wish that wouldn't happen.
 

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*rolleyes*

RIGHT????

Even then he wrote himself into a corner. None of them were immune to Infinite Tsukuyomi and Madara was about to ROFLstomp them with Limbo and Chibaku Tensei when BZ stepped in.

It was BS.

Naruto and Sasuke easily destroyed Chibaku Tensei. Sasuke was immune to Infinite Tsukuyomi and is implied to be able to cancel it out. They could also counter damage limbo clones.
 

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I guess everyone is an expert at writing these days. Life isn't fair, why should everyone die with closure? I think it was a fitting death for someone who only sees things in their own way. Of course he had his guard down with black zetsu, he thought it was his will. No story is perfect, I would like to see someone illustrate a story for over a decade and it be flawless. People need to get over themselves and enjoy the story for what it is and has done, or stop reading.
 

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Hitler thought his plan was noble and worked toward it most of his life. Did he deserve an honorable death?
No

Madara may have thought what he was doing was right doesn't make him a good man. A good man would have listened when literally everyone in the world told him what he was doing was wrong.

He doesn't get an honorable death after what he did, he doesn't deserve closure.

Obito at least turned on his old ways at the end. Madara was evil right up until black zetsu impaled him. Then he died.
 

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It was inevitable that Madara would die. If he didn't, then what would he do? When you do something horribly wrong in this manga, you end up dying one way or another. Though, I wish that wouldn't happen.

I'm fine with dying. I just wanted it done well.

Naruto and Sasuke easily destroyed Chibaku Tensei. Sasuke was immune to Infinite Tsukuyomi and is implied to be able to cancel it out.

They never in a million years would have been able to seal Madara when he had four or five Limbo clones running around. The only reason they survived Chibaku Tensei was because Madara was preoccupied with IT, if Madara had been in the fray while CT was happening he would have absolutely trounced each of them.
 

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I guess everyone is an expert at writing these days. Life isn't fair, why should everyone die with closure? I think it was a fitting death for someone who only sees things in their own way. Of course he had his guard down with black zetsu, he thought it was his will. No story is perfect, I would like to see someone illustrate a story for over a decade and it be flawless. People need to get over themselves and enjoy the story for what it is and has done, or stop reading.

Give me Kishimoto's drawing skills and I guarantee I can write a near-flawless story for a decade.
 

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I think it would be better if Sasuke and Naruto seal him for real :yay: Anyway, he's dead now. In the end, even him was Zetsu's puppet.
 
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