That means Kishi drew the point well- for it was a power struggle too- both trying to make their point about whose vision was more valid. They friendship was not even fracture in the same way. It was right there already. Sasuke had equally compelling reasons to not give up on his goal despite acknowledging Naruto as his friend. In fact he implied that his bonds weaken his resolve so he wanted to neutralize that feeling foremost.
The fight was where Sasuke tried to enforce that brute force and firm decisions to get things done correctly is more viable and lasting option. He even declared he would embrace immortality and stay on ruling like a dictator even if means killing of the people closest to him to avoid their interference. Naruto did two things in that fight- Sasuke noticed that he was withholding when his attacks could be sharper. He could do more damage in such a way that Sasuke could not escalate it but he didn't. Every attack was countered with just enough force. If Naruto tried to use superior force to make Sasuke toe the line then it would have negated the point he was trying to drive at. At least lessened the effect. And that would be Sasuke's win. The result of the fight itself wouldn't matter even he lost in that fight. That's why Sasuke openly admitted his defeat in fight too and Naruto pointed that the fight itself didn't matter.
Secondly he knew Sasuke still had deep anger inside and wanted to lash out at someone, anyone. He agreed to fight alone one on one with him ( he never tries to trick him in joining hands and release the genjutsu.) and bare the anger he had till the fight was taken out of him. It took Naruto a while to understand what Sasuke wanted or needed to do deal with his anger and grief and what he could do for him. And Sasuke realized that too and that's why he compared his gesture with Itachi's. He didn't even take his welcome in the village for granted and realized he need some time away to let everything sink in as well as really see the world and how things were working out. His monologue was really touching unless you just passed by it instead of letting it sink in.
I was actually referring to the first fight. The second fight was pointless. Both were wrong, but Sasuke was far more wrong. Sasuke's "plan" made absolutely no sense. Naruto was overly idealistc to a fault, but Sasuke was just plain out of his mind. The friendship wasn't fractured because there was no friendship to begin with, which is my entire point. Kishi tried to pull this friendship out of his ass when there was none. They were purely rivals with very little interaction that could be described as a friendly sort of bond. And what Kishi ended up doing to further this idea that they were friend was pull the Asura/Indra stuff out of his rear to cement that point even further. Kishi's biggest issue was that he was trying to create something that wasn't there, trying to make something that didn't need to be made. And it goes much further than this, as I will mention in response to another part of your reply.
It was also a totally different fight, Usopp and Luffy's fight was a minor scuffle that had very little impact on the world, where Naruto and Sasuke's fights were world changing and significantly impacted the plot. Yet despite all that, I was more emotional over Usopp and Luffy's fight. Obviously the Naruto/Sasuke fight, the initial one, was obviously way larger and more epic and all that, but it really didn't bring the emotion. But, again, they're two totally different fights under two totally different circumstances that had very different overall impact on the story.
Ussop's reasons were completely different and much of it was just personal disappointment over a loss of a valued and cherished possession. It was moving but nothing complicated there.
And despite not being complicated, it brought more feels than nearly every event in Naruto, sans a few. Oda just does a better job at tugging at your heartstrings than Kishi does. Oda also just makes things feel authentic. If you've read One Piece 774, you can see how amazing of a writer Oda is, how in just a 4 page flashback how he can make you feel emotional abut someone you might not have cared all that much about.
Well he is a teen after all. And of course Ussop was not being just 17 for wanting to keep Sunny despite it's condition.
I'm referring to the series as a whole. I mean both main protagonists are teenagers. Oda even stated in one of his interviews that One Piece targets 15 year old males. Yet One Piece doesn't feel angsty and emo the way Naruto does. Part of why Naruto is such a hit in the US is because it really hits the angsty teenager demographic. That's why the NaruxHina/NaruxSaku stuff was such a craze with the tumblrinas and stuff. One Piece just feels more mature and geared towards adults, and the emotions feel real and substantial. You just don't get the emotions from Robin's flashback or the Luffy/Usopp fight or the annihalation at Sabaody in Naruto. Kishimoto has tried in numerous situations, like Obito's flashback and Naruto's numerous failures at saving Sasuke, but they just don't work particularly well at all.
Many would disagree seeing Itachi.
Thank you for bringing him up, beacuse Itachi is another example of Kishimoto's pulling stuff out of his butthole. How does Itachi go from killing everyone but Sasuke and being the evil brother to being the good, loyal, and caring brother? It just doesn't make sense. It's like halfway Kishimoto decided that he wanted to make Itachi good. It's because of that ridiculous 180 that the emotions surrounding his character just don't work well. They feel cheap and forced. I like Itachi as a character, but the way Kishi went about it just doesn't make sense to me, and it ruins the whole experience to me.
lol Doflo is the first complicate villain. And like Madara he justifies his personal ambitions and actions partly on what he had to suffer.
Except, again, Doflamingo doesn't seem angsty and emo. Instead of being all "why does everyone hate me? Why is the world so messed up? Why does my life have to be like this? Woe is me", Doflamingo is just like "I was put in a crap situation ,and you want me dead, but you aren't going to kill me, I will hunt down each and every one of you, and i will burn you and the entire world around you". Doflamingo is a great villain because he feels like a villain, Oda humanizes him and makes you feel sympathetic towards him without making him seem like a good guy who went the wrong way. That's the biggest issue with Kishi's villains is he somehow wants to make them all good, but have them go down the wrong path, and they end up losing their evilness in the end, mainly because Kishi has most villains be "saved" in the end, perfect example being Kabuto. Oda's villains are great because they stay villains, there isn't any TnJ BS, there isn't any "saving" of the villains, except of course with Bellamy which is pissing everyone off, but he isn't really a villain. Everything about Naruto is "saving" people and all that shonen garbage, and One Piece is beyond that.
One Piece does a good job at expressing that there are good people and bad people, and you just have to accept it, rather than trying to talk down villains, you beat them up. Could you imagine if Naruto went up against Lucci? We'd have 3 chapters of Naruto trying to explain what Lucci is doing is wrong and how the WG is wrong and how just because he had a rough childhood, that doesn't mean he has to be evil, and then all of a sudden Lucci would do a 180 and totally change his ways. It would be atrocious. Could you imagine Luffy doing something like that? Naruto has a 12 year old's totally naive mindset of dealing with villains, where One Piece has a more realistic handling of villains, that some villains are just bad and you have to treat them like rabid dogs and shoot them down.
How many times you re going to repeat this- can you keep it about the story instead of trying to attack the readership? Is using tumbler as a valid argument really an adult and mature approach you are boasting about?
Yes it is. It's like comparing a children's detective series to Sherlock Holmes. Because Naruto seems to have a child's overly idealistic, naive mindset about the world, you're getting cheesy childish emotions to certain events. I'm using tumblr because it's an angsty teenager's haven. I'm just trying to express that Naruto caters to angsty teenagers with regards to the villains, making them all sad and miserable and seem betrayed about everything Sasuke being the poster child for that, and because of that you get inferior villains because they just don't feel like true villains. I'm just trying to make a point.
Gee, can you vague that up for me? Although I am yet to read a long weekly serialized perfect on all counts manga.
I gave a few examples already. How Kishi handled Itachi. How Kishi tried to pull a non-existent friendship between Naruto and Sasuke. How Sakura pretty much became useless. The entire Obito stuff. Naruto not giving up on Sasuke. There are a number of decisions with regards to the writing that many people have issues with, these examples aren't just my personal feelings, many agree with me.
Oh my! The lead realized that the route to Hokageship is more ridden with more complications and varied tasks than his simple childish dream! That what he would have to keep working on once he becomes a Hokage!!! What will we do like ever!!
As Naruto said "How can I become hokage if I can't even save a friend?" As I was trying to say, Naruto totally deviated from the desire to become hokage and became all about saving Sasuke and creating world peace. That I think is when Naruto started going downhill, which was in the later stages of the first part throughout the second part.
It was always emotional. And nope the theme of friendship and then coming through for other despite difference in all the shonnens out there is not cheezy at all.
It's cheesy when the friendship doesn't exist. The best friendship in the entire Naruto series imo is Lee and Guy's friendship. To me, that is a true emotional and beautiful friendship between the two. The whole Naruto/Sasuke/Sakura "friendship" is like a high school drama. pre-TS wtih the Chunin exams was great. It was dark, it was intense, and really had you at the edge of your seat. It was emotional in a fiery intensity combined with being scared/concerned sense, with bits of sadness like when Lee's leg got totally messed up. Early Part 1 Naruto had a very different feel to it. You might like both parts equally, but you can't tell me early part 1 Naruto had the same tone and feel to it that Shippuden did. The way you looked at Naruto as a character was different. The way you looked at Sasuke as a character was different. Initially, Naruto was this loser kid who had no parents and whom everybody hated. Then you find out Naruto was actually the son of the 4th hokage with insane genes who's destined to be the savior (or destroyer) of the world, and it basically takes a giant dump on the speech Naruto had to Neji about destiny. Initially Sasuke was an angry, bitter kid who wanted to serve justice towards his evil brother who killed the entire Uchiha clan outside of him, but then turns into an emo sob story. It was just very different in teh begining.
But it was also very different in the beginning of One Piece. Early One Piece was much more carefree and happy go lucky. People comment all the time about how Zoro practically never laughs anymore, where early on he was far more cheery. The difference is the change isn't nearly as drastic as it was with Naruto, and it still has the One Piece feel, where Naruto almost entirely lost the early part 1 Naruto feel. But many people are concerned about the OP TS, including me. I hope OP doesn't fall apart post-TS the way Naruto did, but we'll have to wait and see.
Of course because that's what going OP for at least 10 years before the plot start to get a distinct structure. ^^
One Piece has always had decent structure. Its issue imo is that there's too much worldbulding, too many characters, and Oda's starting to have trouble putting it all together. The great thing about OP is it's still all about finding the One Piece treasure. You don't see Luffy trying to create world peace the way Naruto did, and i think that's the big difference between the two.