[CJ] Lucifer and Zaphkiel

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Similar to sasuke's sharp spear at short range, while it's also capable of transforming into a localized tornado .

easy enough, I like it .

(Fuuton: Hai ni uchi)- Wind Release: Between Two Lungs
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid (Suction is short-ranged)
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will channel his Futon chakra throughout his blade and then release a thin, spiraling cocoon of actual wind over his blade, spanning from the hilt to the tip in a full undulating coat. This will give the blade added cutting power naturally but the true purpose is to thrust the blade forward while twisting the arm and wrist counter-clockwise, this will form a drilling motion of wind like a sharp thin spear that extends up to short ranged of the user (5m). However, after the thrust- or mid way of the user so chooses, he'll quickly flick his wrist clockwise which spins the sword in the same motion and cause the spear of wind to quickly expand width wise, like an opening umbrella while extending another 5m to reach mid-range from the user (10m).The spinning motion will quickly take shape of a localized tornado with the tail being the user's sword and the broad head being the technique's area of influence, its powerful clockwise motion sucks anything in its aim into its eye and by extension the user's outstretched sword while slicing and dealing cuts to the victim through its viciously rotating wind walls.
Note(s):
- Can only be done 3x
- Requires a turn cool down
Analyze it if you want

(Katon: Hotarubi) - Fire Release: Firefly Light
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user creates many small, glowing redish crimson fireballs that is shot torwards the enemies by pointing both hands at the target, releasing a large amount of fire chakra into the air and compressing it into tiny balls, firing it out of the fingers-tips which apparently look like fireflies releasing exactly 10 fireflies, the size of gaara's eyebal, flying above the targets head (about 3 meters). Hence the name, the user then forms the 'serpent' handseal and sends them all flying into the target all at once detonating them, each emitting blinding light after making impact, creating massive explosions. These explosions will stay within short range of the target(s), and the size of the explosions are roughly the same as the fireball jutsu, each of them but the explosions are more intense thus more powerful, the user can detonate them each one of these fireflies at will. [ ]

♦ Note: This jutsu can only be taught by Lucifer.
♦ Note: This jutsu can only be used trice per battle.
♦ Note: The user cannot use any fire techniques the following turn.
♦ Note: The user cannot perform any other jutsu while controlling the fireflies.
 

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(Doton: Akuma no Hana) - Earth Style: Demonic Flower
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will focus his doton chakra through the ground and form a range of three hand seals causing a flower of earth to rise up under the opponents, with the target in the middle of it, wrapping itself around the whole body of the opponent, with many thorns inside it, with the size of an kunai and as they are thorns they will tear the flesh open of the enemy hence the name "Demonic Flower". And the moment it closes it releases all the oxygen inside of it as it doesn't take unnecessary space it directly climbs up, thus pushing the oxygen out, and goes back undeground suffocating the targets. This jutsu represents the carnivorous plants, the user can make it rise up anywhere on the battlefield. [ ]


♦ Note: Can only be taught by Lucifer.
♦ Note: This jutsu can only be used trice per battle.
♦ Note: The user cannot use any earth techniques the following turn.

Pretty neat, its like a cocoon of torture and the fact that it not only traps but drags them underground is quite the advantage. Lack of oxygen will lead to suffocation which makes me think this would be the the perfect technique for an immobilized or helpless opponents.

double post z.z

(Fuuton: Zettai Pērudopperugengā)- Wind Release: Absolute Pale Doppelganger
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: After forming the Snake -> Ram hand seals the user will cause an A ranked replica of himself made of wind to dart from his body in a linear fashion in a direction, once released he cannot change course of this jutsu. This replica reaches up to short ranged moving 25% faster than the user's base speed and delivering sheer blunt force trauma to the opponent by mowing them down as a very strong gust of wind that can result in broken bones, abrasions, and even concussions, similar to its parent jutsu (Fuuton: Aojiroi Dopperugengā)- Wind Release: Pale Doppelganger. However, this replica is connected to the user via a nearly invisible tether of Fuuton chakra which the user will send a portion of his Fuuton chakra through. This pulse of chakra is A ranked and can either cause the replica to explode prematurely with an S ranked omnidirectional explosion (A+A) reaching up to mid ranged of its origin or it can cause another A ranked replica to sprout from the initial replica which will simply fade away and attack a dodging opponent or sudden obstacle with a now S ranked blunt force effect, once the second replica sprouts from the first however the previous replica can no longer explode as it will cease to exist and neither can the second. This means, the user has the option to explode his replica or produce another he does not have access to both sides of this jutsu at once. This second replica still moves in a linear fashion which cannot be redirected and can extend the jutsu another 5 meters at base speed +25% also, making it mid ranged.


Note:
- Can only be taught by Elyon
- Cannot mold any other element than Wind while Doppelganger(s) are connected via Fuuton tether
- Can only be done 2x
- No Fuuton techniques higher than A ranked next turn
 
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Yes, as the flower will rise from below it'll tear the flesh off from the target while with that same momentum it'll sink back into the ground releasing all the remaining oxygen inside. If this were to be successful, your opponent would be bleeding out from everywhere lol while he would be also helpess due to the lack of oxygen

very nice jutsu you got.. I like how you've branched the technique , no questions .

thanks for the trade ^^
 
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