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Yuka

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"Love is nothing but a mere emotion" and Holding onto love and the feelings i bare is a menace to very my soul and don't you know that the pain i feel deep inside reflects with in my eyes and the outer part of me the person i use to be is nothing more than a hallow shell of my former self so don't try to cheer me up because nothing you say will ever mend the broken pieces of my heart




hope you liked it :(
 

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"Love is nothing but a mere emotion" and Holding onto love and the feelings i bare is a menace to very my soul and don't you know that the pain i feel deep inside reflects with in my eyes and the outer part of me the person i use to be is nothing more than a hallow shell of my former self so don't try to cheer me up because nothing you say will ever mend the broken pieces of my heart




hope you liked it :(
I liked it. Very soulful. Dark, but real...

You have a poetic spirit!
 
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The poem is more like a song than anything else, but it came from my mind and also i merely expressed how i felt through my lyrics in a poetic sort of way


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Im not an expert on poems but your words send the message. Although if you feel like that now, you should try to cheer up =(
 
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