extremely long and awesome
written by
Izinagi54 and ikikouchiha9668
How to read: the first one is Chris's view the second Lili's
like the 1st one you read right below here is mine, the next was written in Ikikouchiha9668 character point of view
I stand and fight, my light is dying in the night.
My soul is in flight and i see moon, My My she is so bright.
Luna and her beauty makes me want to be with who created her.
To see the solar winds, is the way to go.
I follow its flow to see the glowing center of the universe.
God greets me i am with thee.
I wake up from this dream, but a warm feeling over me in the snow.
was it all a dream or was this congnitive thought. i sought the answers ever since.
The moon's light lurking through the trees
She keeps running
Deepening the search for her soul
The light is the way
But it gets father away each day
As if it didn't want her alive
She's lost and hurt
But still she runs
Runs like nothing has ran before
As the picture zooms in
I notice the face, the hair, and the features
Thats me
I jolt awake in a flash
Was I caught?
Or was I always consumed?
She ponders the question of friendship, i lend her my hand.
I walk her back into the light, to were she will wake up full joy and might.
As the night must always give away to the light
His hand warm in my mine
I don't dare look back
As the light glistens my path
Nothing to fear, but everything to hold
I will remember
Just how it felt to walk away from darkness
her breath feels cold, her make mine melt like ice.
be prideful for you, hold your chin up for us both.
i lead her out, there i wake up.
was this really a dream, or somthin else i ponder with wonder
It felt so real and right.
My figners stretched out
Making sure he wasn't there
The ceiling never looked so much like stars
The dim lighting of my lamp never looked like the moon
My satin sheets never felt like the grass
His scent still filled my nose
The words that sent wonderful shivers down my spine
Still lurked in my ears
Everytime I close my eyes
He's there
Smiling perfectly
the day of the summer solstice i walk along the streets so tired and weak.
I feel like i could keel over, i take one more step and i do.
I just wished i saw her face one last time, to see her beautiful eyes
As I walk along the boulevards
Reminds me of him.
Everything I do makes me want ot throw up my gut.
Passing buildings like a blur
I want to go home and just die
Die and shed away from all this longing pain
i feel somthin whisper into my ear, She cries again it sneers.
I remember her face and her eyes, the metling of ice on my skin brings me upon my feet.
Slowly i walk the boulvard.
Shards of snow fall upon a house, i feel her heart beat with mine.
I don't know who i am, but maybe the women in night knows.
I walk upon the door and knock
Nothing seems right anymore
As the knock reaches my ears
I glance at myself in the mirror and only see a monster
I'm the monster that let us fall apart
My mind races back up again
I feel so destroyed as I open the door.
our faces are inches apart, i see the tears fly out her eyes.
It makes me feel cold inside, i move my hand to her cheek to whipe a tear away.
I ask myself that if is the girl i saw in my dream.
Light gleems of her face, she is mre beautiful then a rose.
i close my eyes and blush, my eyes and face fluster.
her sight brings me to light. that i have saw her before
It's him just as before
Only like a tomato.
His hand motioned at my face, sweeping away a tear
No words were spoken
But what was needed to be said?
My knuckles grew white as my fist clenched
i ask her if she knew my name, my shame grows bigger.
i can't look her in the eye, my jackets feels cramped inside.
i see image flash in my eyes, she was there the last time i dreamed.
i ask if i could come in, i see her fist ball up.
my eyes become more and more yellow, im so hollow inside.
did i hurt her eyes
I say I don't know him
But my eyes say another
My mind knows him like the back of my hand
He looks so nervous
Does he understand the dream?
I whisper in a low voice you saved me from darkness
I sound like a freak
A mentally deranged freak that has no life
He probably thinks I'm crazy
My body tightens when his yellow eyes widen
So frozen in shock that I'm scared
I step back and let him in the house
My heart pounds and my back hits the door
He can't...know my name?
Chris escapes my lips
And my knees give out, throwing me against the floor.
I felt my entire body shake
My lack of sleep caused things to appear
I saw my hair that slinked away from my head, morphing into snakes
I felt sick to my stomach that jolted forward
I remember the last dream I had of him
And that's the only thing that kepy me awake
i see somthin inside her somthing dark and insidious. I rush over to her.
I see its eyes stare at me, it looks at me and smile.
she is mine now it says.
I look back at it and say, like hell she will ever be.
she is stuck in a trance, i help her up and she begins to shake.
i hold her tightly, i whisper Diem ex dei no taterus deus ex promissa.
Blessin of go no hell, god is promiss.
The evil figure comes out of her body, it stabs me with one of its looks and retreats back into the ground.
i collaspe onto the ground, i look in her eyes.
A coughing fit retricted me from screaming his name.
I fall next to his, helping him up
I get him on my couch
My breath reglates but my pulse is pumping
He just saved my life
Again
i close my eyes, i hear her coughing.
her tears crash upon my face, did i hurt again?
i wish not to die just yet again, i want to stay with her till then.
i bring my eyes open, i hold her cheek lightly in my hands using my thumb to whipe away tears.
His name escapes my lips once again
He can't leave
Not after everything
Everything feels like it's pulsing
Or is it just me?
I hold his hand to my face smiling at him
Stay with me forever.
Until the night passes
Please stay
i get up slowly, her face just a few inches from mine again.
her fears are gone, i now made my choice.
but will she rejoyice or make me a peche (sin)
i utter her name one last time, my face moving closer and yet timidatley towards hers
My face is flushed as I prepair.
His lips sweep across mine
In a movement of long compassion
written by
Izinagi54 and ikikouchiha9668
How to read: the first one is Chris's view the second Lili's
like the 1st one you read right below here is mine, the next was written in Ikikouchiha9668 character point of view
I stand and fight, my light is dying in the night.
My soul is in flight and i see moon, My My she is so bright.
Luna and her beauty makes me want to be with who created her.
To see the solar winds, is the way to go.
I follow its flow to see the glowing center of the universe.
God greets me i am with thee.
I wake up from this dream, but a warm feeling over me in the snow.
was it all a dream or was this congnitive thought. i sought the answers ever since.
The moon's light lurking through the trees
She keeps running
Deepening the search for her soul
The light is the way
But it gets father away each day
As if it didn't want her alive
She's lost and hurt
But still she runs
Runs like nothing has ran before
As the picture zooms in
I notice the face, the hair, and the features
Thats me
I jolt awake in a flash
Was I caught?
Or was I always consumed?
She ponders the question of friendship, i lend her my hand.
I walk her back into the light, to were she will wake up full joy and might.
As the night must always give away to the light
His hand warm in my mine
I don't dare look back
As the light glistens my path
Nothing to fear, but everything to hold
I will remember
Just how it felt to walk away from darkness
her breath feels cold, her make mine melt like ice.
be prideful for you, hold your chin up for us both.
i lead her out, there i wake up.
was this really a dream, or somthin else i ponder with wonder
It felt so real and right.
My figners stretched out
Making sure he wasn't there
The ceiling never looked so much like stars
The dim lighting of my lamp never looked like the moon
My satin sheets never felt like the grass
His scent still filled my nose
The words that sent wonderful shivers down my spine
Still lurked in my ears
Everytime I close my eyes
He's there
Smiling perfectly
the day of the summer solstice i walk along the streets so tired and weak.
I feel like i could keel over, i take one more step and i do.
I just wished i saw her face one last time, to see her beautiful eyes
As I walk along the boulevards
Reminds me of him.
Everything I do makes me want ot throw up my gut.
Passing buildings like a blur
I want to go home and just die
Die and shed away from all this longing pain
i feel somthin whisper into my ear, She cries again it sneers.
I remember her face and her eyes, the metling of ice on my skin brings me upon my feet.
Slowly i walk the boulvard.
Shards of snow fall upon a house, i feel her heart beat with mine.
I don't know who i am, but maybe the women in night knows.
I walk upon the door and knock
Nothing seems right anymore
As the knock reaches my ears
I glance at myself in the mirror and only see a monster
I'm the monster that let us fall apart
My mind races back up again
I feel so destroyed as I open the door.
our faces are inches apart, i see the tears fly out her eyes.
It makes me feel cold inside, i move my hand to her cheek to whipe a tear away.
I ask myself that if is the girl i saw in my dream.
Light gleems of her face, she is mre beautiful then a rose.
i close my eyes and blush, my eyes and face fluster.
her sight brings me to light. that i have saw her before
It's him just as before
Only like a tomato.
His hand motioned at my face, sweeping away a tear
No words were spoken
But what was needed to be said?
My knuckles grew white as my fist clenched
i ask her if she knew my name, my shame grows bigger.
i can't look her in the eye, my jackets feels cramped inside.
i see image flash in my eyes, she was there the last time i dreamed.
i ask if i could come in, i see her fist ball up.
my eyes become more and more yellow, im so hollow inside.
did i hurt her eyes
I say I don't know him
But my eyes say another
My mind knows him like the back of my hand
He looks so nervous
Does he understand the dream?
I whisper in a low voice you saved me from darkness
I sound like a freak
A mentally deranged freak that has no life
He probably thinks I'm crazy
My body tightens when his yellow eyes widen
So frozen in shock that I'm scared
I step back and let him in the house
My heart pounds and my back hits the door
He can't...know my name?
Chris escapes my lips
And my knees give out, throwing me against the floor.
I felt my entire body shake
My lack of sleep caused things to appear
I saw my hair that slinked away from my head, morphing into snakes
I felt sick to my stomach that jolted forward
I remember the last dream I had of him
And that's the only thing that kepy me awake
i see somthin inside her somthing dark and insidious. I rush over to her.
I see its eyes stare at me, it looks at me and smile.
she is mine now it says.
I look back at it and say, like hell she will ever be.
she is stuck in a trance, i help her up and she begins to shake.
i hold her tightly, i whisper Diem ex dei no taterus deus ex promissa.
Blessin of go no hell, god is promiss.
The evil figure comes out of her body, it stabs me with one of its looks and retreats back into the ground.
i collaspe onto the ground, i look in her eyes.
A coughing fit retricted me from screaming his name.
I fall next to his, helping him up
I get him on my couch
My breath reglates but my pulse is pumping
He just saved my life
Again
i close my eyes, i hear her coughing.
her tears crash upon my face, did i hurt again?
i wish not to die just yet again, i want to stay with her till then.
i bring my eyes open, i hold her cheek lightly in my hands using my thumb to whipe away tears.
His name escapes my lips once again
He can't leave
Not after everything
Everything feels like it's pulsing
Or is it just me?
I hold his hand to my face smiling at him
Stay with me forever.
Until the night passes
Please stay
i get up slowly, her face just a few inches from mine again.
her fears are gone, i now made my choice.
but will she rejoyice or make me a peche (sin)
i utter her name one last time, my face moving closer and yet timidatley towards hers
My face is flushed as I prepair.
His lips sweep across mine
In a movement of long compassion
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