[LoT] Yang Xiao Long - Approved

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Name: Yang Xiao Long
Alignment: Good
Alias(es): Yang, Firecracker
Secret Identity: N/A

Looks:

Yang is a teenaged girl who wears a tan vest with gold piping over a yellow low-cut crop top with a black crest that resembles a burning heart. The vest has puffy cap sleeves with black cuffs. On the sides of the cuffs, there are two small golden buttons.

She wears a brown belt with a buckle, a pouch, and a small banner-like object. The same burning heart crest appears on this banner, except golden in color. She wears black shorts under her belt, which resembles a pleated skirt in the back. Over the short shorts but under the belt is a white asymmetrical back skirt.

Aside from an orange infinity scarf around her neck, she has no discernible jewelry. She wears brown knee-high platform boots that appear to be made of leather, with orange socks of different lengths. Her left leg also has a gray bandanna-like object wrapped around the top of her boot. She wears fingerless black gloves underneath her weapons, which resemble two yellow mechanized gauntlets with a black design.

Her long blonde hair becomes lighter in color at the tips and flows in a loose and messy manner, with a few locks sticking out and a small cowlick on top of her head. She has a pale complexion and lilac eyes. Her hair seems to burst into flames the longer she fights. Her eyes turn red and her hair produces more fire when she becomes angry.


Personality:

Yang was described as "the kind of person who would teach someone how to swim by pushing them in the water". This speaks volumes about how Yang approaches most things in life. She is very straightforward and confident.

She is also described as being a cheerful, energetic and bright young lady. Additionally, she is arguably the most flippant and carefree member of her team, frequently making sarcastic comments and jokes even in the heat of battle and often taking combat and hostile situations extremely lightly, particularly when faced with foes she knows she can beat easily and who don't pose a threat to her.

However, she does take combat very seriously when she deems her opponent a threat or if she is sufficiently angered, such as when she is hit and her semblance activates or when her hair is damaged.

Rank // History

Rank: 4
Origin Type: Mutant
Origin Story: Yang discovered her powers during a training session with her uncle, Qrow. After taking several hits from him, her semblance activated, allowing her to deliver a strong blow to her uncle.
History: Yang was raised alongside Ruby on the island of Patch, off the west coast of Vale. Their father was a Huntsman who taught at Signal Academy and a former member of a team consisting of Summer Rose, Qrow Branwen and Raven Branwen- the last of whom disappeared shortly after her birth. Following this, Yang's father became romantically involved with Summer, who took the role of Yang's surrogate mother and gave her a sister two years later in Ruby.

However, Summer would frequently embark on Huntress missions all over the kingdoms, and early in Yang's childhood she was killed during one. Yang's father, distraught at losing yet another love, "shut down"; it was then that Yang found out Summer Rose wasn't her biological mother, and that the woman (Raven) who gave birth to her had also abandoned her shortly thereafter. Motivated to find out why her mother left her, Yang attempted to follow up on what she thought was a clue to her whereabouts, and one day, she waited until her father left the house and traveled to that location herself, wheeling Ruby in a wagon and walking until she was bruised and tired.

Upon arriving at the building, Yang and Ruby were attacked and almost killed by three*Beowolves; their uncle, Qrow, thankfully appeared just in time to save them. Yang was ashamed of her stubborn, brash actions, aware that she had almost gotten her younger sister killed, and resolved to continue searching for her mother while helping raise Ruby, but also to not allow that search to consume her.

Abilities // Equipment

  • Strength: 40
  • Intelligence: 30
  • Speed: 29
  • Durability: 30 + 10 (Semblance)
  • Energy:
  • Technology: 20
Power/Ability:

Semblance: Semblance is the manifestation of one's innate and personal power as an ability unique to each individual, with the effects varying greatly from user to user. The nature of one's Semblance is noted as representing an aspect of their character. However, a person's Semblance can be similar to the Semblances of their parents or other family members.

Yang's Semblance is the ability to absorb energy from the damage she's taken, and redirect it at her opponent, effectively making her stronger with each hit. It becomes active the moment she takes any form of damage. Semblance also reduces damage she takes by a certain percentage, depending on semblance rank. The damage stacks until she connects with an attack in which case it will reset. Yang will still take damage, she can only reduce the damage taken. Her ability also causes her eyes to change color from lilac to red, which is a "side-effect" of her Semblance, though it does occasionally happen outside of combat.

Description of Powers:
Equipment: N/A


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Allies:N/A
Enemies:N/A
Other:N/A


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Re: Yang Xiao Long

First starters, remove the entire portion about D to S rank from the Ability section; it doesn't have to be listed as you will need a custom to achieve these effects. Same goes for the part about drawing abilities from her hair. That would need to be submitted as a custom so any specifics about it can be removed.

Your Origin Story is missing, which is where you tell how you got your abilities. History is what your bio has done outside of gaining abilities and can include your RP experience as well.

The gauntlets of course will need to be submitted as their own weapon.
 

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Re: Yang Xiao Long

First starters, remove the entire portion about D to S rank from the Ability section; it doesn't have to be listed as you will need a custom to achieve these effects. Same goes for the part about drawing abilities from her hair. That would need to be submitted as a custom so any specifics about it can be removed.

Your Origin Story is missing, which is where you tell how you got your abilities. History is what your bio has done outside of gaining abilities and can include your RP experience as well.

The gauntlets of course will need to be submitted as their own weapon.
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