[LoT] Kenpachi, Zaraki - Approved

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Name: Zaraki Kenpachi
Alignment: Neutral
Alias(es): God Of Bloodlust
Secret Identity: Zaraki Kenpachi

Looks: Kenpachi is a tall, muscular Asgardian with a wild and aggressive appearance, which fits his personality. He has a long face with pronounced cheekbones, and pronounced, hairless brow ridges. He has green eyes and long, stringy black hair. A noticeable trait in his appearance is a long, thin scar running down the left side of his face and across his left eye, inflicted on him by Retsu Unohana while he was still a child.

He wears white bandages across his midsection and a sleeveless haori, which has a ragged look to it. He styles his hair into stiff strands during his baths, attaching small bells at its tips, and wears a special black eyepatch over his right eye. In the past the eyepatch was more elegant, having a gold-like lining and a chain as one of the straps. He also wore a black choker necklace. Later, he removed the choker and gave his eyepatch normal straps. Kenpachi's hair has grown out past his shoulders. He no longer has the bells in his hair. His eyepatch's design has changed again, as it is now a single piece covering his right eye. The eyepatch is black with a grey outline.

Personality: Although he is known to be a violent fighter, Kenpachi's actions tend to be for the best. He has a very poor sense of direction. Kenpachi lives for battle, and enjoys a good fight more than anything. He even holds back in an effort to make any fight last longer. He claims injury and death are nothing but the price one pays for a good fight. Despite his tendency to be brutal, Kenpachi usually stops a fight if his opponent is too injured to fight back, claiming he is not interested in fighting "weaklings who can't fight anymore", and he does not feel obligated to deal a death blow to anyone who cannot fight any longer. However, he will unhesitatingly kill his opponent if they refuse to end their fight.

On multiple occasions, Kenpachi has shown great respect to those who can defeat him in a fight and those who can push him to his limit. Kenpachi sometimes contradicts his own logic in fighting. On the one hand, Kenpachi wishes to increase his own personal power. On the other hand, he conceals his strength to enjoy a fight for as long as possible. Although he thrives for battle, Kenpachi does have emotions. Kenpachi deeply gives meaning to his name. Kenpachi talks about the pain of not having a name, as he lived his early years without one. This causes him to feel guilty his sword is not acknowledged by its own name.

Rank // History

Rank: 4
Origin Type: Mutant
Origin Story: Kenpachi is the 3rd generation "Zaraki". Every generation one person is born with the genes of that of a zaraki, being classified as a mutant. Each zaraki are known to be master swordsman, while at the same time having incredible energy that is used to augment their powers overall. This fuels the fact that each zaraki normally look for fights, just for the sake of fighting. Itching that lust for blood. Zarakis arent classified as villian or heros. They simply do things on a whim simply to enjoy the moment. Most zarakis have incredible amount of power to the point where their powers have to be suppressed in a way. Kenpachi wears an eye patch that suppresses energy that would normally be too much to handle, and even then the power is still great. All zarakis have major healing, and a mutated immune system.

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History:

Kenpachi life hasnt been much of a thrill. At a very young age, he loved to fight. It was the only thing that made him happy. One day he found an opponent who was just as strong as himself, and everytime he saw that person he got more then happy till one day he got the upperhand on the person. For the first time he got sad and walked away. if that person was to die, he wouldnt have nobody to play with. ever since then he learned how to mask his energy and strength in a way. As he grew up he made a pretty big name for himself, allowing himself to be a free agent if he felt like he needed the extra cash. He never went around killing or harming civilians. But he always loved the thrill of ruining heros and villians plan. Loving to fight. Kenpachi is known to be a mercenary. He doesnt care about money but simply decides to take the job if the opponent will pose an exciting fight

Abilities // Equipment

  • Strength: 50
  • Intelligence: 30
  • Speed: 19
  • Durability: 10
  • Energy: 50 [+10 due to Riatsu]
  • Technology: 0
Power/Ability: Riatsu/Swordsman

Description of Powers: The riatsu Zaraki superhuman strength, Invulnerability (virtual invulnerability and immunity to such human ailments as diseases, toxins, and poisons. While having Superhuman strength , energy , senses and a healing factor. Due to Zaraki unique physiology he is able to heal from most injuries much faster than a human being could. He has displayed the ability to regenerate his liver when it was vitrified, and was able to heal his two broken wrists when he was injured.

Even by an mutant standards, his Energy is absolutely monstrous. Kenpachi has fought on par with two high Magic-level opponents while still wearing his energy-sealing eye patch and his opponents releasing their max energy amounts. When unleashing a strong enough surge of energy, it becomes visible and yellow in color, sometimes with the appearance of a skull. Due to the lawlessness of the Zaraki district, Kenpachi's skill with his sword has been honed to essentially a masterful level, letting him strike multiple times with changes of attack type (from slash to pierce) without any difficulty. While still a child, his prowess was great enough to single-handedly kill hundreds of adult fighters and wound Retsu Unohana, the 1st Kenpachi, in battle. His unpolished skills, but immense might with his sword allow him to always fight with one hand free, only using both hands when facing opponents he feels will beat him otherwise. Using his swordsmanship, he can make use of his Energy abilities, unleashing shockwaves and energy waves from the swing of his sword, he can also manipulate and use energy techniques without his sword, but common does so through it. Using Energy, Zaraki can transforms his sword into a stronger weapon, a 2nd and a 3rd level in total.

Equipment: Energy-Sealing Eye Patch (to be submitted)

Other Information

Allies: None yet
Enemies: N/A
Other: N/A

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Re: Kenpachi, Zaraki

Your stats and abilities don't match; You write that you have invunerability and massive energy, but both are only under 20. You cant have invunerability and regenerative abilities while having low durability;it doesn't make sense. You can't talk about your Bankai and Shikai while having low energy. The specifics about your regeneration also needs to be removed; time based restraints are never good in a RP because we are turn based generally, not time based. Everything else about it will be determined when the technique for it is submitted and checked. You won't have an immunity to heat, cold, electrocution, suffocation, etc as well as radiation poisoning either, pick one. Having all of those immunities would mean you need a large drawback to your powers or a large weakness to compensate for this.
 

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You're okay with only 10 Durability? That means you have only 50 health in all (Health = Durability x5) , 2-3 B ranks will end you. I ask because you left in the part about being virtually invincible and as you list your ability as "Life Force", it should be directly related to your Durability. My suggestion is to simply edit this into Riatsu manipulation, which relates to your Energy rating, because the first paragraph under Description of abilities relates to your Durability but it's so low, it doesnt make sense....
 
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