[Other] Living, but not existing.

[Mangekyō1]

Silence, despair, and a little guilt,
That's all these eyes can see.
Take a look at this life I've built,
And how it crumbles around me.

I once was good, honest, and clean.
But look how I've changed, all for the worse.
These words that I write, what do they mean?
God, if you're there, negate this curse.

This curse of torment, pain, and even more misery,
Will it ever end? Too much hate, too much sorrow.
In the end, to you all I am is ancient history.
But who cares? For me, there is no tomorrow.

 

[Dreckerplayer]

This was way too deep.

I can tell this came from the soul. keep it up bro!

 

[Darth Vader]

I like it man. And your last one... Very dark. You're getting good! ^_^
Or should I say bad...? Anyways keep up the good work! =D

 

[Mangekyō1]

This was way too deep.

I can tell this came from the soul. keep it up bro!

Ha my writing always seem deep, maybe too much emotion? Ha idk, I'm not suicidal or anything, writing like this just makes things kind of better, I don't really talk to anyone about what happens in my life.

 

[Dreckerplayer]

Ha my writing always seem deep, maybe too much emotion? Ha idk, I'm not suicidal or anything, writing like this just makes things kind of better, I don't really talk to anyone about what happens in my life.

Poems are suppose to evoke as much emotion as possible. I can relate to your poem, somewhat.

 

[Mangekyō1]

Poems are suppose to evoke as much emotion as possible. I can relate to your poem, somewhat.

I feel for you man. Try writing it out! It really helps! I almost have a notebook filled with words and songs now but I don't share a lot of it.

 

[Darth Vader]

Bro, text me back!