I prefer to talk out the Justus in a RP styleIt's no problem at all. But the training style you went through is very gross in my opinion. There is no need for all of that template stuff. I prefer to either talk out the jutsu as we are now, or an RP approach. Which would you prefer?
Sasuke walks over to a nearby table and removes a handful of scrolls from his ninja bag. Alright, so we are going to go through these a couple at a time. I want you to analyze them for me, mentioning anything you see as important. After youre done, I will add in my thoughts, if you haven't covered them, or correct you if need be. But we won't have to worry about that latter part too much, as most of these are pretty straight forward. Let's go ahead and start with these two. Sasuke says unraveling two scrolls and flattening them across the table.Laxus: Yes I am, that's where I left Sasuke
The user gathers an enormous amount of chakra and focus it, following that they release the focused chakra from their body and infuse it into the ground. The user then makes the Tiger hand seal and using the chakra that's infused in the ground and shape manipulation, the user manipulates the ground beneath them. The user then pours more earth chakra into the ground and focus it having better control of the earth beneath them making making it rise up and make a mountain like shape.Good, just remember that the antlion technique will pull in whatever is around, so thats a good one to use the terrain with. (Like on the floor of a pond your opponent is standing on to create a whirlpool that has the elemental strength of earth, or pulling in mud from the swamp technique, etc) Moving on
(Doton: Doryū Jōheki) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Rampart
Rank: B
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: By performing the Tiger hand seal the user then makes a gigantic rampart rise up beneath the user's feet, by shaping the ground and increasing the amount of earth with chakra. Depending on what the user imagines, the shape of the rampart can be anything from level ground to a steep, needle-like mountain. If the user increases the volume of earth too much, he can be forced to keep his chakra consumption down. The user can combine this jutsu with Water Style: Waterfall Basin Technique to create a waterfall
This one is cool because you can shape the rampart to suit your needs. One point, many points, no points, jagged edges, or just completely flat, it's up to what you want it to be
(Doton: Doryuheki) - Earth Release: Earth Style Wall Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will first perform the Tiger → Hare → Boar → Dog and then creates a solid wall of earth as a form of defense. Chakra is either converted to earth within the body and then spat out to form the wall or the user can manipulate pre-existing earth to form the wall. The earth then instantly rises up and takes form. The barrier itself is also coated with chakra, making its strength incomparable to that of a normal mud wall. Because of the earth's special characteristics, the wall is highly resistant against, for instance, fire and water. Hizuren Sarutobi spits mud from his mouth to perform the jutsu whilst Kakashi creates a wall composed of bulldog sculptures to box-in Pain
Basically a very versatile B-Rank earth wall. What I like about it is that it can be used with or without an earth source, so you aren't limited to only those terrains.
Good job, moving on.The user gathers an enormous amount of chakra and focus it, following that they release the focused chakra from their body and infuse it into the ground. The user then makes the Tiger hand seal and using the chakra that's infused in the ground and shape manipulation, the user manipulates the ground beneath them. The user then pours more earth chakra into the ground and focus it having better control of the earth beneath them making making it rise up and make a mountain like shape.
The user gathers up a good amount of his earth chakra and focus it. They then exert the chakra from their body and infuse it into the ground on front of them and spread it out to where they want the wall to rise. After performing the Tiger → Hare → Boar → Dog hand seals, they use the chakra in the ground to manipulate the earth and control its structure and shaping making a wall covered in earth chakra to rise from the ground.
The user gathers a sufficient amount of doton chakra. After doing so, they then proceed to channel that chakra throughout their body to every point. They then focus the chakra that spread throughout their body and then exerts some of that chakra from their body also covering the surface of their body. The user then moves to the rock and using the doton chakra that is covering their body, they slowly enter the rock and move through it, in and out.Good job, moving on.
(Doton: Iwagakure no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Hiding in Rock Technique
Rank: B
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This is a technique that allows its user to blend into rocks, move inside them and then move in and out of other rocks undetected. Despite this, Doujutsu and Sensors can still detect the opponent. The limitation of the technique is that it cannot be used to meld into other types of earth than rock or solid earth and its not a very fast technique, despite being faster than Underground Projection Fish technique.
Note: Can only blend through on C rank and below Earth Techniques
There are a lot of jutsu like this, first of all, and to be honest, the ninjutsu version is probably the best, so of you need to use this, I would look at that one first. Basically, you form your body so that it is able to slip in and out of earth techniques and structures. You cannot be seen or heard while hidden, but your chakra can be sensed by various means. Also, it isn't very fast, so don't try to use it for a fast escape.
(Doton: Doryūsō) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Spears
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user first performs the Bird hand seal and the user condense mud or stone, from the ground, and shape them into spikes that will protrude from the ground in order to skewer the target. The spikes cannot penetrate targets of greater density.
B-Rank earth spikes, essentially. They can be made from mud or stone, so be weary of which is available to you in your terrain. If you choose mud, just remember that it is soft, so it's piercing abilities may be compromised.