[Doton] Little Training

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It's no problem at all. But the training style you went through is very gross in my opinion. There is no need for all of that template stuff. I prefer to either talk out the jutsu as we are now, or an RP approach. Which would you prefer?
 

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It's no problem at all. But the training style you went through is very gross in my opinion. There is no need for all of that template stuff. I prefer to either talk out the jutsu as we are now, or an RP approach. Which would you prefer?
I prefer to talk out the Justus in a RP style
 

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Sounds good xD




Sasuke approaches the figure that he believes is the one that he was to meet. He was going to teach them earth style jutsu, or finish his training in it anyway. Pulling out the file that he was given before leaving the office, Sasuke reads through to see where he needed to begin. It appears that you are on the Earth Corridor technique, is that correct?
 

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Laxus: Yes I am, that's where I left Sasuke
Sasuke walks over to a nearby table and removes a handful of scrolls from his ninja bag. Alright, so we are going to go through these a couple at a time. I want you to analyze them for me, mentioning anything you see as important. After youre done, I will add in my thoughts, if you haven't covered them, or correct you if need be. But we won't have to worry about that latter part too much, as most of these are pretty straight forward. Let's go ahead and start with these two. Sasuke says unraveling two scrolls and flattening them across the table.

(Doton: Tsuchi Kairō) - Earth Release: Earth Corridor
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will first perform the snake hand seal and then cause the earth in the surrounding area to rise up and over a target and create a cavern, imprisoning the target. The user can leave an opening to allow attacks to go in to strike down the trapped adversaries, or close it up completely to prevent escape.

(Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Antlion Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user performs the Ram hand seal and causes causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the centre, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated. The range of the pit is determined by how much chakra is put into the technique.

Read through them and then break them down for me, as if you were trying to teach me. Be sure to add in your own thoughts as well
 

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Makes 2 clones *


Laxus begins building his earth chakra and molding it. Laxus then exerts the chakra from his body inbedding it into the ground around him. He proceeds to use his chakra and make the snake handseal to manipulate the earth making it rise and cover the clone making a cavern and imprisoning it. He then proceeds to fully cover the clone without any way in or out.



The user will gather an enormous amount of Chakra and focus it. Upon doing so, they will then proceed to exert that chakra and release it into the ground and spread it over a whole area also around gthe opponent. Using the chakra that's spreaded out into the earth, the user will then make the ram Handseal and manipulate the ground beneath the opponent pulling them and objects arounf them to the center where he uses shape manipulation to make a hole in the ground proceeding to pull his opponent in and all the way underground, trapping and suffocating them.
 

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Good, just remember that the antlion technique will pull in whatever is around, so thats a good one to use the terrain with. (Like on the floor of a pond your opponent is standing on to create a whirlpool that has the elemental strength of earth, or pulling in mud from the swamp technique, etc) Moving on

(Doton: Doryū Jōheki) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Rampart
Rank: B
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: By performing the Tiger hand seal the user then makes a gigantic rampart rise up beneath the user's feet, by shaping the ground and increasing the amount of earth with chakra. Depending on what the user imagines, the shape of the rampart can be anything from level ground to a steep, needle-like mountain. If the user increases the volume of earth too much, he can be forced to keep his chakra consumption down. The user can combine this jutsu with Water Style: Waterfall Basin Technique to create a waterfall

This one is cool because you can shape the rampart to suit your needs. One point, many points, no points, jagged edges, or just completely flat, it's up to what you want it to be

(Doton: Doryuheki) - Earth Release: Earth Style Wall Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will first perform the Tiger → Hare → Boar → Dog and then creates a solid wall of earth as a form of defense. Chakra is either converted to earth within the body and then spat out to form the wall or the user can manipulate pre-existing earth to form the wall. The earth then instantly rises up and takes form. The barrier itself is also coated with chakra, making its strength incomparable to that of a normal mud wall. Because of the earth's special characteristics, the wall is highly resistant against, for instance, fire and water. Hizuren Sarutobi spits mud from his mouth to perform the jutsu whilst Kakashi creates a wall composed of bulldog sculptures to box-in Pain

Basically a very versatile B-Rank earth wall. What I like about it is that it can be used with or without an earth source, so you aren't limited to only those terrains.
 

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Good, just remember that the antlion technique will pull in whatever is around, so thats a good one to use the terrain with. (Like on the floor of a pond your opponent is standing on to create a whirlpool that has the elemental strength of earth, or pulling in mud from the swamp technique, etc) Moving on

(Doton: Doryū Jōheki) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Rampart
Rank: B
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: By performing the Tiger hand seal the user then makes a gigantic rampart rise up beneath the user's feet, by shaping the ground and increasing the amount of earth with chakra. Depending on what the user imagines, the shape of the rampart can be anything from level ground to a steep, needle-like mountain. If the user increases the volume of earth too much, he can be forced to keep his chakra consumption down. The user can combine this jutsu with Water Style: Waterfall Basin Technique to create a waterfall

This one is cool because you can shape the rampart to suit your needs. One point, many points, no points, jagged edges, or just completely flat, it's up to what you want it to be

(Doton: Doryuheki) - Earth Release: Earth Style Wall Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will first perform the Tiger → Hare → Boar → Dog and then creates a solid wall of earth as a form of defense. Chakra is either converted to earth within the body and then spat out to form the wall or the user can manipulate pre-existing earth to form the wall. The earth then instantly rises up and takes form. The barrier itself is also coated with chakra, making its strength incomparable to that of a normal mud wall. Because of the earth's special characteristics, the wall is highly resistant against, for instance, fire and water. Hizuren Sarutobi spits mud from his mouth to perform the jutsu whilst Kakashi creates a wall composed of bulldog sculptures to box-in Pain

Basically a very versatile B-Rank earth wall. What I like about it is that it can be used with or without an earth source, so you aren't limited to only those terrains.
The user gathers an enormous amount of chakra and focus it, following that they release the focused chakra from their body and infuse it into the ground. The user then makes the Tiger hand seal and using the chakra that's infused in the ground and shape manipulation, the user manipulates the ground beneath them. The user then pours more earth chakra into the ground and focus it having better control of the earth beneath them making making it rise up and make a mountain like shape.

The user gathers up a good amount of his earth chakra and focus it. They then exert the chakra from their body and infuse it into the ground on front of them and spread it out to where they want the wall to rise. After performing the Tiger → Hare → Boar → Dog hand seals, they use the chakra in the ground to manipulate the earth and control its structure and shaping making a wall covered in earth chakra to rise from the ground.
 

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The user gathers an enormous amount of chakra and focus it, following that they release the focused chakra from their body and infuse it into the ground. The user then makes the Tiger hand seal and using the chakra that's infused in the ground and shape manipulation, the user manipulates the ground beneath them. The user then pours more earth chakra into the ground and focus it having better control of the earth beneath them making making it rise up and make a mountain like shape.

The user gathers up a good amount of his earth chakra and focus it. They then exert the chakra from their body and infuse it into the ground on front of them and spread it out to where they want the wall to rise. After performing the Tiger → Hare → Boar → Dog hand seals, they use the chakra in the ground to manipulate the earth and control its structure and shaping making a wall covered in earth chakra to rise from the ground.
Good job, moving on.
(Doton: Iwagakure no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Hiding in Rock Technique
Rank: B
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This is a technique that allows its user to blend into rocks, move inside them and then move in and out of other rocks undetected. Despite this, Doujutsu and Sensors can still detect the opponent. The limitation of the technique is that it cannot be used to meld into other types of earth than rock or solid earth and its not a very fast technique, despite being faster than Underground Projection Fish technique.
Note: Can only blend through on C rank and below Earth Techniques

There are a lot of jutsu like this, first of all, and to be honest, the ninjutsu version is probably the best, so of you need to use this, I would look at that one first. Basically, you form your body so that it is able to slip in and out of earth techniques and structures. You cannot be seen or heard while hidden, but your chakra can be sensed by various means. Also, it isn't very fast, so don't try to use it for a fast escape.

(Doton: Doryūsō) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Spears
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user first performs the Bird hand seal and the user condense mud or stone, from the ground, and shape them into spikes that will protrude from the ground in order to skewer the target. The spikes cannot penetrate targets of greater density.

B-Rank earth spikes, essentially. They can be made from mud or stone, so be weary of which is available to you in your terrain. If you choose mud, just remember that it is soft, so it's piercing abilities may be compromised.
 

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Good job, moving on.
(Doton: Iwagakure no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Hiding in Rock Technique
Rank: B
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This is a technique that allows its user to blend into rocks, move inside them and then move in and out of other rocks undetected. Despite this, Doujutsu and Sensors can still detect the opponent. The limitation of the technique is that it cannot be used to meld into other types of earth than rock or solid earth and its not a very fast technique, despite being faster than Underground Projection Fish technique.
Note: Can only blend through on C rank and below Earth Techniques

There are a lot of jutsu like this, first of all, and to be honest, the ninjutsu version is probably the best, so of you need to use this, I would look at that one first. Basically, you form your body so that it is able to slip in and out of earth techniques and structures. You cannot be seen or heard while hidden, but your chakra can be sensed by various means. Also, it isn't very fast, so don't try to use it for a fast escape.

(Doton: Doryūsō) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Spears
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user first performs the Bird hand seal and the user condense mud or stone, from the ground, and shape them into spikes that will protrude from the ground in order to skewer the target. The spikes cannot penetrate targets of greater density.

B-Rank earth spikes, essentially. They can be made from mud or stone, so be weary of which is available to you in your terrain. If you choose mud, just remember that it is soft, so it's piercing abilities may be compromised.
The user gathers a sufficient amount of doton chakra. After doing so, they then proceed to channel that chakra throughout their body to every point. They then focus the chakra that spread throughout their body and then exerts some of that chakra from their body also covering the surface of their body. The user then moves to the rock and using the doton chakra that is covering their body, they slowly enter the rock and move through it, in and out.


The user gathers a good amount of doton chakra and molds it. They then they exert it from their body into the ground. Doing so, the user use their chakra to control the earth and using shape manipulation, they make very sharp spikes out of the ground making them rise up ground very quickly .
 

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Good, moving on

(Doton: Iwayado Kuzushi) - Earth Style: Rock Lodging Destruction
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user performs the required hand seals Tiger → Rat → Snake and they then causes a cave-in by destroying the equilibrium that holds the cave together. Just removing a single vital stone throws off the balance of the cave, making it unexpectedly fragile and causing a domino effect that destroys the entire cave. The shinobi from Iwagakure use this technique in their pride tactic, luring several enemies into a cave to kill them all at once.

This is a highly situational jutsu, because your opponent must be in a cave, cavern, underground tunnel, or something of the sort. The technique works by moving around core stones in the system to throw off its balance, causing a cave in.

(Doton/Katon: Yōdo Ranfunka no Jutsu) - Earth/Fire Release: Molten Earth Wild Eruption Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will stomp the ground to lift of chunks of rock which he will then send at the opponent. Then, by using a fire style technique, he will cause them to ignite into burning rock chunks which explode on contact with the enemy

Stomp the ground to make earth chunks, followed by a generic fire technique to ignite them. These have both explosive and concussive qualities as well. Be weary of the dual type here, as it causes you to lose your advantage to water.
 
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