[Mystery] Little boy in the mirror

[Byron123]

Inspired by Edgar Allan Poe's poem, "The Raven".



Little boy in the mirror
always looks at me and laughs
for he knows my perverseness and how I hide my lusts.

Little boy in the mirror
who are you to judge
a man’s life without a meaning
a man’s life without a task?

But the boy never answers,
he just looks me in the eyes
with an insight so haunted,
makes me want to crush my lies .


His name unrevealed,
I won’t ask, for I know
all my masks before him shatter -with a mere glance!-
All before my innermost horror.

Little boy in the mirror
Are you from the neighborhood, someone lost and found?
Were you hidden from all, from all but not from me
cause you knew that in the end… only I can see?


Meaningless questions to fill a restless silence
meaningless blabbering to keep myself sane.
But alas! When air runs out
and my eyes shut,
I finally conceive the inconceivable.

Your eyes full of joy turn into a disapproving look,
your laughter into a sad requiem
and you… you escape in your own crystal world,
while I awake from a vivid nightmare


that I dreamed?

 

[Jinrou]

It's awesome bro..It had that little creepy feel I was expecting to come across ^^

 

[Byron123]

It's awesome bro..It had that little creepy feel I was expecting to come across ^^

Haha thank you man but out of curiosity, based on what were you expecting the creepy feeling? Because I write it or because of the title?

 

[Jinrou]

Haha thank you man but out of curiosity, based on what were you expecting the creepy feeling? Because I write it or because of the title?

The title ^^

 

[Kuroba Kurohime]

It's awesome!!!
You phrased it well and it made you want to know more.
Great work!!!

 

[Byron123]

It's awesome!!!
You phrased it well and it made you want to know more.
Great work!!!

Thank you very much =D

 

[Mis]

It's awesome bro..It had that little creepy feel I was expecting to come across ^^

Same here~
It gave me the shivers, but it's so good.

 

[Byron123]

Same here~
It gave me the shivers, but it's so good.

Thank you very much!

 

[minamoto 🥈]

very bad poem.....i can creat a 1 better then this

 

[Byron123]

very bad poem.....i can creat a 1 better then this

Fictional stories are not poems minamoto.

 

[minamoto 🥈]

Fictional stories are not poems minamoto.

i have a kestion : where are you from?

 

[Byron123]

i have a kestion : where are you from?

From Greece, and this is relevant how? XD Btw, when I stop coming to your threads because I annoy you, you come to mine, did you miss me? XD

 

[Byron123]

i have a kestion : where are you from?

Wow you even went as far to dislike my comment? I must have really pissed you off hahahah I don't blame you though.

 

[minamoto 🥈]

From Greece, and this is relevant how? XD Btw, when I stop coming to your threads because I annoy you, you come to mine, did you miss me? XD

you should have inherited the wisdom of your grandfathers platon and aristo....facepalm ...you dispoint me in the end

 

[Byron123]

you should have inherited the wisdom of your grandfathers platon and aristo....facepalm ...you dispoint me in the end

At least you know them, that's something, turns out that you're not idiot but a professional troll.

 

[minamoto 🥈]

At least you know them, that's something, turns out that you're not idiot but a professional troll.

let honesty speaks within you...never let jalousy!!

 

[minamoto 🥈]

you are just mad becuz i gave you a dislike....don't worry i still got good trumpcards ...i can still thank the post ya know?

 

[Byron123]

you are just mad becuz i gave you a dislike....don't worry i still got good trumpcards ...i can still thank the post ya know?

Lol it's not like that, I just know that you don't care for the likes, thanks and all these things and for you using a dislike, especially at my thread, is just funny.

 

[Waindo]

Marvelous job man!

 

[Byron123]

Marvelous job man!

Thanks man I really appreciated hearing that from a fellow poet