Alright, I been working on a manga that I will present to all of you as a fanfic. Like any other fanfic (the ones like bsama's and roku's) I will be using names and trying to get the personalities of people from NB. But as I make the manga your names won't be there unless it seems right to put it there. I planned on getting the drawings done once school starts. (I draw during the school year and write during the breaks) I will also treat this fanfic as a regular manga and release it every week; unless there is a reason why i didn't feel like typing. But i will only continue depending on the views,post count, and you all's opinion of the first 3 chapters. So please try to comment when you read it.
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Story Line
The world was mourn due to the great lost of their best. A Master of Chi ~life force~ suddenly disappear. Fortunately there was four pupils trained in the four principles of life. They than banned together and gave the world their secrets with the result of their deaths. Years has passed since than with wars breaking out and actually being notice though out the world from Civil war, all the way to WW2; even WW3 happen leaving the world in complete destruction. It is now once a peaceful period where the continents have settle down and began training the next generation. Until one faithful day....
Chapter 1: A New Beginning
It was nightfall with the moon and stars lighting the sky as if it were the heavens. It appears everyone was sleeping Paris. Columns of homes,stores, restaurants, buildings with the lights off lined up in as the sculpture resembling the Master of Chi if looked at from the sky or the top of the Eiffel Tower. Which was to the right of the sculpture newly built, also lighting the sky and city below. The scene than turns to two figures rapidly jumping to the top. One figure being medium height with short,jet black hair that laid down from the left side and on the right was the same way but with hair hiding that feature with a split in between both. The same
figure was wearing a long black over coat that was tied at the waist. The other figure had the same type of hair style but all of it was laid down with a pony tail colored blue. That figure was dressed as a high school teacher such as a dress shirt with a black tie with white strips going down in an vertical design,black dress pants, and with dress shoes. Both of them standing at the very top level with a group of disguise figures jumping around around them.
??: It seems we been caught -says it sarcastically-
???: Pfft. I can take care of them if you want
??: No no, last time i let you fight. It's my turn
~sticks his hands in his pants pocket and sticks his right leg out a bit with his feet on the ground barely by an inch and began to smirk~
??: How about we both take them on huh falling moon
FM: what i told you about calling me by that name
-soon people began crowding around and getting closer, so FM and the other figure went back to back and waited for their assault-
FM: You just had to steal the tie!!
??: This isn't a regular tie. It is so timeless and precious
The group of people began leaping forward. The first strike was deliver by FM, landing a palm strike sending one of them into the air. As for the one with the tie, he simply lift his leg and stopped a punch with his foot. He than move his foot under the fist kicking it up leaving an opening than rapidly launch a series of kick in a certain path revealing the word Owned in red bruising that was releasing steam. They both than jump away from each other and handled their section. FM landing strong palm strikes to shoulders,chests, and faces of many of them. He moved fast enough for only them to hear the wind blown from the movement of his trench coat. FM than turn his attentions to the dude in a tie as he watch him dodge,block, and attack all with his legs and knees as his hands stayed in his pockets. He than back up and crouch over, shooting himself at a target, kneeing them in the jaw creating a echo sound though out the Eiffel Tower. As the jaw-less person flew, the man suddenly disappear in the air reappearing behind his flying victim landing a double flip kick to the face causing them to re-direct their path towards the floor making a dent in the metal during the process. Suddenly the FM was ambushed but flip his attacker over him, slamming them on the floor and than quickly turns around to knee someone in the rib cage causing them to lift off from the ground. Just as the body was an inch away from his knee and elbowed them forcing them back into another knee shot. The fight continue on for at least another 20 minutes. At the end they both stood looking at the beaten they just gave.
FM: boring -kicks one of the lifeless bodies- I am surprise you didn't kill anyone
??: Actually I did or you can say I will
FM: What you talking about??
~the moment he finish that sentence his eyes widen and he felt like the last grain in an hour glass had dropped.
He looked down to see what was causing such of an affect to realize it was his partner~
FM: -stumbling over his words- Why would you do such a thing -fell to his knees- I thought you, you would
??: Yea yea, shut it kid. I realize in my quest of power I will need every sign of life in my possession, if that means killing you than I wouldn't mine
-puts his hands back in his pocket and his forehead begins to glow-
??: Sorry Akira -looks down at him merciless- Your the rightful inhered of something important and I will take it. It kills me that I will have to kill you
-smirks- Bye
Akira than reach his hand out but it was took late. The glowing figure already kneed him, hard enough to show an after shock a pond contact. The attack sent Akira into the way into the air. His body fell hitting flags and poles on the way down until he entered the top, just bouncing off the roofs landing in a lake of water. It than carry him until it empty into a stream that than empty him into a family's backyard. His body drifted for weeks when it was to supposedly sunken by now. Two new figures had came across the body. One being Average height of an adult with messy brown hand wearing an the same teacher look as before but instead of a tie it was a vest that was brown in the front and black in the back. The other figure had female features and was wearing standard clothes except from all the ripping.
????: Wtf! why is than a kid in my pool >.<
?: Please teacher, just focus on the quest before we fail
????: We can fail another 100 if I feel like it. Why is their a nasty infested sexually abused kid in my pool >.< Rin get that boy here
Rin: -stumbles over her words- yes sir, but how you know he was sexually abused??
????: Must I tell you everything, what kinda of spy are you >.> don't you see those bandages warp around his arms and the print left on his belly O_O it is obvious. He was tied up and pounded until his body parts gave in.
Rin -shakes her head in ashamed- He probably lost a fight, and i wonder why his right arm has black bandages and the other has white.
????: omg >.< not only was he rape and dirty in my pool... they cant even take care of their rape victims.
Rin: I will begin healing him -puts him on a flower bed and she begins to glow-
????: I hate your ability, to heal others with flowers, what happen when we stuck a needle in our veins just to suck the poison out -signs- good hard labor days O-o
Rin: Sadly that isn't healing -looks at him with the intent to kill- what you been doing lately Bishamon-sama
Bishamon: I told you to never say my name -looks around- it could start troubles -the moment he said that a figure shown up dressed like bsama but with a black tie with white strips going down vertically- damn you rin!!
Rin: Who is he, he looks like a regular teacher to me
??: It seems you found my little bro -grins- give him up
Bishamon: Now Now -smirks- if I give him up it could result in his death, if he isnt already dead -looks at him as if he was trying to figure out who he was- huh Time Keeper?
TK: it seems i been discover -removes his hands from his pocket-
Bishamon: Rin take the rape victim and go, you don't want to get caught up in this -he spreads his feet and bends his knees a bit while lifting his arms up but let his hand lay there lifelessly-
Rin: but that's his...
Bishamon: No it isn't just get
TK: -interrupts bishamon- killing the Energy Measure er will only make me stronger, but -appears in front of rin while she tried to pick up the body- I must kill you -licks his lips as he move in to pierce her chest with just his bare hand-
Bishamon had appear just in time to intercept his left arm by jamming two of his fingers into his forearm. There was suddenly a muffle explosion and TK back up quickly holding his arm. Than stare at each other and than pounced at each other moving fast to the point you send after images of where they were and what they were doing . It all suddenly stopped in the air, and than they fell back down and moving in once more to fight with Bishamon blocking instead of dodging. Soon Tk got tired and back up. Both his arms seem to dangle as if they we broken. As for Bishamon his arms seem to wrinkle by the second
Bishamon: It seems you have learned what I been doing the whole fight
TK: -began speaking as if it was in unbelievable pain- Yea, you aren't the Guru of Energy for nothing. You purposely blocked my attacks so you can turn yours or mine potential against me destroying my bones. You completely took out my left arm. For someone as strong as you, you are pretty dumb; taking those hits just to cause little damage
Bishamon: Don't think I haven't realize what you been doing. Each hit aging me -smirks- it was worth it now you lost half your power. I realize you fight with your hands and feet. With your hands useless it should be a piece of
cake
TK: how you know i fight with my hands and feet?
Bishamon: easy someone that moves as swiftly and fast as you must fight with their feet
TK: Wait -laughs- you move at the same level of speed as i do
Rin: such an idiot
Bishamon: alright I guess
and i was right wasn't I
TK begins to glow as the area seems to change to a tinted green.
Bishamon: shit! Rin get out of..
Blood is than spew into the air as everything went white. Bishamon laid there on the floor bleeding severely as he watch with one eye ope, TK walking away with his hands in his pockets. He than saw Rin's body dumped in the lake of to the side. He was able to see her face which shown a shock expression but she never blink. Bishamon shook his head and than struggled to get up and seen the boy. He looked down at his chest which was pierce and than back at the boy. He than walk over to the body and touch his forehead to realize he was dead as well. He kneed to the ground and began to glow a crimson color. They both suddenly disappear as it rain to mourn the deaths of two people and the rebirth of one.
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Alright so what do ya think O-o and to mention TK is just Time Keeper. I used that to stop using the question marks. It is just a nick name
But yea I will send links with the new chapters to people if you post in the threads. It is the only way i can know who i need to send it to
and the name is just a rough draft for now but i have a reason why i naming it and you will find out next chapter
criticize and comment please O-o
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Story Line
The world was mourn due to the great lost of their best. A Master of Chi ~life force~ suddenly disappear. Fortunately there was four pupils trained in the four principles of life. They than banned together and gave the world their secrets with the result of their deaths. Years has passed since than with wars breaking out and actually being notice though out the world from Civil war, all the way to WW2; even WW3 happen leaving the world in complete destruction. It is now once a peaceful period where the continents have settle down and began training the next generation. Until one faithful day....
Chapter 1: A New Beginning
It was nightfall with the moon and stars lighting the sky as if it were the heavens. It appears everyone was sleeping Paris. Columns of homes,stores, restaurants, buildings with the lights off lined up in as the sculpture resembling the Master of Chi if looked at from the sky or the top of the Eiffel Tower. Which was to the right of the sculpture newly built, also lighting the sky and city below. The scene than turns to two figures rapidly jumping to the top. One figure being medium height with short,jet black hair that laid down from the left side and on the right was the same way but with hair hiding that feature with a split in between both. The same
figure was wearing a long black over coat that was tied at the waist. The other figure had the same type of hair style but all of it was laid down with a pony tail colored blue. That figure was dressed as a high school teacher such as a dress shirt with a black tie with white strips going down in an vertical design,black dress pants, and with dress shoes. Both of them standing at the very top level with a group of disguise figures jumping around around them.
??: It seems we been caught -says it sarcastically-
???: Pfft. I can take care of them if you want
??: No no, last time i let you fight. It's my turn
~sticks his hands in his pants pocket and sticks his right leg out a bit with his feet on the ground barely by an inch and began to smirk~
??: How about we both take them on huh falling moon
FM: what i told you about calling me by that name
-soon people began crowding around and getting closer, so FM and the other figure went back to back and waited for their assault-
FM: You just had to steal the tie!!
??: This isn't a regular tie. It is so timeless and precious
The group of people began leaping forward. The first strike was deliver by FM, landing a palm strike sending one of them into the air. As for the one with the tie, he simply lift his leg and stopped a punch with his foot. He than move his foot under the fist kicking it up leaving an opening than rapidly launch a series of kick in a certain path revealing the word Owned in red bruising that was releasing steam. They both than jump away from each other and handled their section. FM landing strong palm strikes to shoulders,chests, and faces of many of them. He moved fast enough for only them to hear the wind blown from the movement of his trench coat. FM than turn his attentions to the dude in a tie as he watch him dodge,block, and attack all with his legs and knees as his hands stayed in his pockets. He than back up and crouch over, shooting himself at a target, kneeing them in the jaw creating a echo sound though out the Eiffel Tower. As the jaw-less person flew, the man suddenly disappear in the air reappearing behind his flying victim landing a double flip kick to the face causing them to re-direct their path towards the floor making a dent in the metal during the process. Suddenly the FM was ambushed but flip his attacker over him, slamming them on the floor and than quickly turns around to knee someone in the rib cage causing them to lift off from the ground. Just as the body was an inch away from his knee and elbowed them forcing them back into another knee shot. The fight continue on for at least another 20 minutes. At the end they both stood looking at the beaten they just gave.
FM: boring -kicks one of the lifeless bodies- I am surprise you didn't kill anyone
??: Actually I did or you can say I will
FM: What you talking about??
~the moment he finish that sentence his eyes widen and he felt like the last grain in an hour glass had dropped.
He looked down to see what was causing such of an affect to realize it was his partner~
FM: -stumbling over his words- Why would you do such a thing -fell to his knees- I thought you, you would
??: Yea yea, shut it kid. I realize in my quest of power I will need every sign of life in my possession, if that means killing you than I wouldn't mine
-puts his hands back in his pocket and his forehead begins to glow-
??: Sorry Akira -looks down at him merciless- Your the rightful inhered of something important and I will take it. It kills me that I will have to kill you
-smirks- Bye
Akira than reach his hand out but it was took late. The glowing figure already kneed him, hard enough to show an after shock a pond contact. The attack sent Akira into the way into the air. His body fell hitting flags and poles on the way down until he entered the top, just bouncing off the roofs landing in a lake of water. It than carry him until it empty into a stream that than empty him into a family's backyard. His body drifted for weeks when it was to supposedly sunken by now. Two new figures had came across the body. One being Average height of an adult with messy brown hand wearing an the same teacher look as before but instead of a tie it was a vest that was brown in the front and black in the back. The other figure had female features and was wearing standard clothes except from all the ripping.
????: Wtf! why is than a kid in my pool >.<
?: Please teacher, just focus on the quest before we fail
????: We can fail another 100 if I feel like it. Why is their a nasty infested sexually abused kid in my pool >.< Rin get that boy here
Rin: -stumbles over her words- yes sir, but how you know he was sexually abused??
????: Must I tell you everything, what kinda of spy are you >.> don't you see those bandages warp around his arms and the print left on his belly O_O it is obvious. He was tied up and pounded until his body parts gave in.
Rin -shakes her head in ashamed- He probably lost a fight, and i wonder why his right arm has black bandages and the other has white.
????: omg >.< not only was he rape and dirty in my pool... they cant even take care of their rape victims.
Rin: I will begin healing him -puts him on a flower bed and she begins to glow-
????: I hate your ability, to heal others with flowers, what happen when we stuck a needle in our veins just to suck the poison out -signs- good hard labor days O-o
Rin: Sadly that isn't healing -looks at him with the intent to kill- what you been doing lately Bishamon-sama
Bishamon: I told you to never say my name -looks around- it could start troubles -the moment he said that a figure shown up dressed like bsama but with a black tie with white strips going down vertically- damn you rin!!
Rin: Who is he, he looks like a regular teacher to me
??: It seems you found my little bro -grins- give him up
Bishamon: Now Now -smirks- if I give him up it could result in his death, if he isnt already dead -looks at him as if he was trying to figure out who he was- huh Time Keeper?
TK: it seems i been discover -removes his hands from his pocket-
Bishamon: Rin take the rape victim and go, you don't want to get caught up in this -he spreads his feet and bends his knees a bit while lifting his arms up but let his hand lay there lifelessly-
Rin: but that's his...
Bishamon: No it isn't just get
TK: -interrupts bishamon- killing the Energy Measure er will only make me stronger, but -appears in front of rin while she tried to pick up the body- I must kill you -licks his lips as he move in to pierce her chest with just his bare hand-
Bishamon had appear just in time to intercept his left arm by jamming two of his fingers into his forearm. There was suddenly a muffle explosion and TK back up quickly holding his arm. Than stare at each other and than pounced at each other moving fast to the point you send after images of where they were and what they were doing . It all suddenly stopped in the air, and than they fell back down and moving in once more to fight with Bishamon blocking instead of dodging. Soon Tk got tired and back up. Both his arms seem to dangle as if they we broken. As for Bishamon his arms seem to wrinkle by the second
Bishamon: It seems you have learned what I been doing the whole fight
TK: -began speaking as if it was in unbelievable pain- Yea, you aren't the Guru of Energy for nothing. You purposely blocked my attacks so you can turn yours or mine potential against me destroying my bones. You completely took out my left arm. For someone as strong as you, you are pretty dumb; taking those hits just to cause little damage
Bishamon: Don't think I haven't realize what you been doing. Each hit aging me -smirks- it was worth it now you lost half your power. I realize you fight with your hands and feet. With your hands useless it should be a piece of
cake
TK: how you know i fight with my hands and feet?
Bishamon: easy someone that moves as swiftly and fast as you must fight with their feet
TK: Wait -laughs- you move at the same level of speed as i do
Rin: such an idiot
Bishamon: alright I guess
and i was right wasn't I TK begins to glow as the area seems to change to a tinted green.
Bishamon: shit! Rin get out of..
Blood is than spew into the air as everything went white. Bishamon laid there on the floor bleeding severely as he watch with one eye ope, TK walking away with his hands in his pockets. He than saw Rin's body dumped in the lake of to the side. He was able to see her face which shown a shock expression but she never blink. Bishamon shook his head and than struggled to get up and seen the boy. He looked down at his chest which was pierce and than back at the boy. He than walk over to the body and touch his forehead to realize he was dead as well. He kneed to the ground and began to glow a crimson color. They both suddenly disappear as it rain to mourn the deaths of two people and the rebirth of one.
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Alright so what do ya think O-o and to mention TK is just Time Keeper. I used that to stop using the question marks. It is just a nick name
But yea I will send links with the new chapters to people if you post in the threads. It is the only way i can know who i need to send it to
and the name is just a rough draft for now but i have a reason why i naming it and you will find out next chapter
criticize and comment please O-o
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