Well, the lightning damages the mineral content of the perfume, so, if you use it like that, it wouldn't matter which special effect the perfume has, as it will be blocked. Then again, running a current through a perfume will not only shock the opponent, but could also ignite it, so your opponent would be paralyzed AND burnt (and alcohol burns are quite damaging).
Other than that, you pretty much got the perfume down perfectly. Now, let me move one to what makes up a Perfume, or rather, a Perfume technique.
(BTW, I was just reading the wiki page for Perfume, and I must say, there's so much I could have used... Oh well)
Back to topic:
So, we have the Body, the Scent and the Illusion.
The Body of the perfume consists on the liquid/vaporized based of the technique. It holds everything pertaining to the perfume and is responsible for the Scent and, consequently, the Illusion. It is usually made of Alcohol, but it can have different properties. When making a technique, we have to describe the body, just as well as we have to describe the rest.
The Scent of the perfume is the gaseous state of the perfume, which emanates from the Body. It is linked a different set of characteristics, which generally stem from the Body's characteristics. It brings a fragrance which you can choose when creating or, in case of general techniques, you can choose in the time of usage. In case of the element, it is the scent that carries the genjutsu, as chakra is dispersed in the air just the same as the gaseous molecules of the Perfume. Being a Perfume user, your chakra will carry a smell (which can be null), so the chakra itself is a Perfume, in essence. The genjutsu is cast by the form of scent, and, as your opponent breathes it in, it takes hold of his brain and latches on to it, producing the Illusion. Not all perfume techniques require/cast an illusion and not all illusions are genjutsu based.
When describing the scent, you must describe it's effects as well, be it Toxic, Pheromon-based, Genjutsu, etc
The Illusion is the non-physical effect of the perfume, and only applies when the technique carries a genjutsu. It is a different category because it separates itself from the physical aspects of the perfume. A technique could be killing your opponent through toxins, but still have an illusion of butterflies and flowers. Just like describing a genjutsu normally, you need to describe what happens in reality and in the illusion, and that is essentially what you do in this category, after writing the other two.
More for aesthetics than anything else, all techniques were made theatrical and feminine. I do like something efficient and deadly, and simple to use. But with perfume it's like playing with dolls, it's just this one time when I get to just do what I want and enjoy being a woman. So, instead of creating a stream of perfume, it creates an aggregation of petals that acts as a stream. Instead of creating puddles, I create a patch of liquid flowers, etc etc. Likewise, when I name a specific technique, I make it beautiful or based on a goddess, or when I make a more general technique, I make it French, because it's the language of love xD