[Spoilers] lil bit early but if ur bored

Dean-Winchester · Mar 10, 2009

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Chapter opens up to God Realm

God Realm *Thinking ?This will finish him off.? Chibaku Tensei is both attract/repel

Nagato: Since the god realm is close it?s efficient enough to use more chakra against the Jinchuuriki.

Konan: Not that jutsu. You?ve gone mad Nagato.

Nagato: Peace is nearing!!!! *coughs up blood*

-Scene switch back to Pain-

He executes the Jutsu by throwing his arms forth towards Naruto. The rubble and trees surrounding them begins to enshroud Naruto instantly forming a huge orb of junk that takes off to the sky above.

Tears of blood pours from God Realm?s Rinnengan as the blood slids down his face.

Pain: Now to finish this!!

-Switch scene to Citizens of Konoha, Gai, Yamato and Sakura-

They all look up at the huge orb of junk that floats above the fire country

for that split second

-Scene switch to Naruto?s mind-

Naruto is inside the fox?s belly.

Naruto: I failed to protect everyone, including my friends and Hinata.
*A minor flashback occurs of him being complemented by people of the leaf.*

Naruto: This damn fox won?t lead my life anymore. *Naruto raises a palm and suddenly ends up infront of the gate.*

Kyuubi: You escaped from me, huh? *A red strand of chakra thrusts forth to devour Naruto*

Naruto grasps the strand of chakra.

Naruto: NO! Try escaping from me. Time to put an end to Akatsuki or the both of us are dead.

Kyuubi: !!!!! YOU!!

- Scene Switch -

Pain clasps his hand. *His jutsu is not working lol*

Pain: What the?

The orb is eroded and becomes one with the wind. Six tailed Naruto is shown wielding 4 Rasenshurikens.

Pain: What.. THE?!!

Naruto lets it rip causing 4 violent tornadoes to collide with the god Realm causing a storm of wind to dance upon God realm?s flesh. After the storm clears, God Realm?s corpse and robe is left.

Nagato: That damn Jinchuuriki. HE KILLED YAHIKO! *Suddenly Nagato is putting on more weight.*

Nagato: Konan prepare. I am about to use it. Uzumaki Naruto. You?ve gone too far.

? Chapter ends. ?

Next time: Migrate

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Kaze.. · Mar 10, 2009

DarkKABUto said:
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Chapter opens up to God Realm

God Realm *Thinking ?This will finish him off.? Chibaku Tensei is both attract/repel

Nagato: Since the god realm is close it?s efficient enough to use more chakra against the Jinchuuriki.

Konan: Not that jutsu. You?ve gone mad Nagato.

Nagato: Peace is nearing!!!! *coughs up blood*

-Scene switch back to Pain-

He executes the Jutsu by throwing his arms forth towards Naruto. The rubble and trees surrounding them begins to enshroud Naruto instantly forming a huge orb of junk that takes off to the sky above.

Tears of blood pours from God Realm?s Rinnengan as the blood slids down his face.

Pain: Now to finish this!!

-Switch scene to Citizens of Konoha, Gai, Yamato and Sakura-

They all look up at the huge orb of junk that floats above the fire country

for that split second

-Scene switch to Naruto?s mind-

Naruto is inside the fox?s belly.

Naruto: I failed to protect everyone, including my friends and Hinata.
*A minor flashback occurs of him being complemented by people of the leaf.*

Naruto: This damn fox won?t lead my life anymore. *Naruto raises a palm and suddenly ends up infront of the gate.*

Kyuubi: You escaped from me, huh? *A red strand of chakra thrusts forth to devour Naruto*

Naruto grasps the strand of chakra.

Naruto: NO! Try escaping from me. Time to put an end to Akatsuki or the both of us are dead.

Kyuubi: !!!!! YOU!!

- Scene Switch -

Pain clasps his hand. *His jutsu is not working lol*

Pain: What the?

The orb is eroded and becomes one with the wind. Six tailed Naruto is shown wielding 4 Rasenshurikens.

Pain: What.. THE?!!

Naruto lets it rip causing 4 violent tornadoes to collide with the god Realm causing a storm of wind to dance upon God realm?s flesh. After the storm clears, God Realm?s corpse and robe is left.

Nagato: That damn Jinchuuriki. HE KILLED YAHIKO! *Suddenly Nagato is putting on more weight.*

Nagato: Konan prepare. I am about to use it. Uzumaki Naruto. You?ve gone too far.

? Chapter ends. ?

Next time: Migrate

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that would be so dope but i dont think it will happen U_U

Dean-Winchester · Mar 10, 2009

i know buthey i am bored & its monday

smegg · Mar 10, 2009

that would certainly be an enjoyable issue. but i dont think the kyuubi will give up wat control he has on naruto that easily

ssanimo · Mar 10, 2009

i dont think i need to say it but.....this is def. fan made.......neways thanx for the read

Cash · Mar 10, 2009

DarkKABUto said:
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Chapter opens up to God Realm

God Realm *Thinking ?This will finish him off.? Chibaku Tensei is both attract/repel

Nagato: Since the god realm is close it?s efficient enough to use more chakra against the Jinchuuriki.

Konan: Not that jutsu. You?ve gone mad Nagato.

Nagato: Peace is nearing!!!! *coughs up blood*

-Scene switch back to Pain-

He executes the Jutsu by throwing his arms forth towards Naruto. The rubble and trees surrounding them begins to enshroud Naruto instantly forming a huge orb of junk that takes off to the sky above.

Tears of blood pours from God Realm?s Rinnengan as the blood slids down his face.

Pain: Now to finish this!!

-Switch scene to Citizens of Konoha, Gai, Yamato and Sakura-

They all look up at the huge orb of junk that floats above the fire country

for that split second

-Scene switch to Naruto?s mind-

Naruto is inside the fox?s belly.

Naruto: I failed to protect everyone, including my friends and Hinata.
*A minor flashback occurs of him being complemented by people of the leaf.*

Naruto: This damn fox won?t lead my life anymore. *Naruto raises a palm and suddenly ends up infront of the gate.*

Kyuubi: You escaped from me, huh? *A red strand of chakra thrusts forth to devour Naruto*

Naruto grasps the strand of chakra.

Naruto: NO! Try escaping from me. Time to put an end to Akatsuki or the both of us are dead.

Kyuubi: !!!!! YOU!!

- Scene Switch -

Pain clasps his hand. *His jutsu is not working lol*

Pain: What the?

The orb is eroded and becomes one with the wind. Six tailed Naruto is shown wielding 4 Rasenshurikens.

Pain: What.. THE?!!

Naruto lets it rip causing 4 violent tornadoes to collide with the god Realm causing a storm of wind to dance upon God realm?s flesh. After the storm clears, God Realm?s corpse and robe is left.

Nagato: That damn Jinchuuriki. HE KILLED YAHIKO! *Suddenly Nagato is putting on more weight.*

Nagato: Konan prepare. I am about to use it. Uzumaki Naruto. You?ve gone too far.

? Chapter ends. ?

Next time: Migrate

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Nice. Entertaining

We'll see.

Hellix · Mar 10, 2009

Definitely a good read. For a second there it got me excited and thinking if it was real (untilt he part where the 4 RasenShurikens). Very nice though

(I hope the REAL chapter would involve Hinata being alive

)

Dean-Winchester · Mar 10, 2009

here is another 1 more intense i guess
:

Link: Enter this Canal

Pain uses chibaku tensei on naruto fox form.

There will be a huge blast of the ground and air and it starts emptying the kyuubi's chakra.

The seventh tails appears and then pain gets blown away by the blow.

sakura saves hinata and anbu comes to town.

Kyuubi creates an energy ball that blows the landscape there completely and god realm is blown away

Anbu sakura and gamabunta arrive at the scene to seal the kyuubi chakra.Anbu uses new technique to seal it from a far distance but he fails and realises that the necklace is destroyed.

Finally Pain uses his last secret technique zendiku pain tensei destroying god realm and supresses all the seven tails of kyuubi.

nagato "I will capture him myself".

next chapter nagato vs naruto?

Tifa · Mar 10, 2009

that was really good ^.^

Xero · Mar 10, 2009

The 4 tornadoes thing is awesome

leafeater · Mar 10, 2009

They're both good reads, thanks.

Kazamori · Mar 10, 2009

Nice

I loved it . But I can see its fan-made, well we know its fan-made

JustMyself · Mar 10, 2009

it IS fan-made, no doubt, but fun to read anyway.

FlashKID124 · Mar 10, 2009

a bit too good to be true.. dont think we'll get that much out of one chapter..

BAN_KAI · Mar 10, 2009

That was realy good but the 1 one was the better

LordMarluxia · Mar 10, 2009

I liked it alot. Wish it was real.... but the 4 Rasenshurikens.... omg

phaco · Mar 10, 2009

if you mix the wind chakra and the red chakra...4 pink rasen shuriken?

Naruto1217 · Mar 10, 2009

phaco said:
if you mix the wind chakra and the red chakra...4 pink rasen shuriken?

0_0 lol where did that come from? :headband: lol

Minato the Sage · Mar 10, 2009

DarkKABUto said:
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Chapter opens up to God Realm

God Realm *Thinking ?This will finish him off.? Chibaku Tensei is both attract/repel

Nagato: Since the god realm is close it?s efficient enough to use more chakra against the Jinchuuriki.

Konan: Not that jutsu. You?ve gone mad Nagato.

Nagato: Peace is nearing!!!! *coughs up blood*

-Scene switch back to Pain-

He executes the Jutsu by throwing his arms forth towards Naruto. The rubble and trees surrounding them begins to enshroud Naruto instantly forming a huge orb of junk that takes off to the sky above.

Tears of blood pours from God Realm?s Rinnengan as the blood slids down his face.

Pain: Now to finish this!!

-Switch scene to Citizens of Konoha, Gai, Yamato and Sakura-

They all look up at the huge orb of junk that floats above the fire country

for that split second

-Scene switch to Naruto?s mind-

Naruto is inside the fox?s belly.

Naruto: I failed to protect everyone, including my friends and Hinata.
*A minor flashback occurs of him being complemented by people of the leaf.*

Naruto: This damn fox won?t lead my life anymore. *Naruto raises a palm and suddenly ends up infront of the gate.*

Kyuubi: You escaped from me, huh? *A red strand of chakra thrusts forth to devour Naruto*

Naruto grasps the strand of chakra.

Naruto: NO! Try escaping from me. Time to put an end to Akatsuki or the both of us are dead.

Kyuubi: !!!!! YOU!!

- Scene Switch -

Pain clasps his hand. *His jutsu is not working lol*

Pain: What the?

The orb is eroded and becomes one with the wind. Six tailed Naruto is shown wielding 4 Rasenshurikens.

Pain: What.. THE?!!

Naruto lets it rip causing 4 violent tornadoes to collide with the god Realm causing a storm of wind to dance upon God realm?s flesh. After the storm clears, God Realm?s corpse and robe is left.

Nagato: That damn Jinchuuriki. HE KILLED YAHIKO! *Suddenly Nagato is putting on more weight.*

Nagato: Konan prepare. I am about to use it. Uzumaki Naruto. You?ve gone too far.

? Chapter ends. ?

Next time: Migrate

Source: Naruto Central

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I AM EXCITED....can't wait for new chapter!

sandshark · Mar 10, 2009

Lol how do you attract and repel? It's like trying to breath and drink at the same time.

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