Lightning with Ciberr

[Abon]

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I focus my raiton chakra into my hands, until they are prime and ready with lightning. I then exstend both my right and left hand outward towards my opponet. I then let loose a purple colored lightning towards my enem after closing in on him (range wise) to knock him away.

( Raiton: Rakurai Senkou ) - Lightning Release: Thunderbolt Flash
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user releases a current of purplish lightning from their hands forward, damaging and knocking away enemies. The range of this technique is, however, limited.

 

[Ciberr]

Alright. Short but acceptable. As we progress give me a little more detail. For the next justu I want you to emit your raiton chakra to form a small barrier of lightning. Which is capable of blocking other lightning attacks and can serve as a defense to physical attacks. Tell me two advantages of the justu. Should be easy.

( Raiton: Purazuma Bōru ) - Lightning Release: Plasma Ball

Spoiler

Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 (+5 per turn active)
Damage points: 40 (-15 if target comes into contact with the barrier)
Description: The user manipulating their chakra generates a plasma barrier around them to serve as a defence which protects them from incoming attacks, even from something as wide-ranged as the Quicksand Waterfall Flow however the user cannot use other techniques besides lightning release or physical based techniques. The user can rush at their opponents even if the barrier is active. The shield can be used offensively, by discharging the electricity in the direction of their choice in a wave resulting in using the energy of the barrier and ending its effects.
Note: Technique remains active for 3 turns.

 

[Abon]

Alright. Short but acceptable. As we progress give me a little more detail. For the next justu I want you to emit your raiton chakra to form a small barrier of lightning. Which is capable of blocking other lightning attacks and can serve as a defense to physical attacks. Tell me two advantages of the justu. Should be easy.

( Raiton: Purazuma Bōru ) - Lightning Release: Plasma Ball

Spoiler

Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 (+5 per turn active)
Damage points: 40 (-15 if target comes into contact with the barrier)
Description: The user manipulating their chakra generates a plasma barrier around them to serve as a defence which protects them from incoming attacks, even from something as wide-ranged as the Quicksand Waterfall Flow however the user cannot use other techniques besides lightning release or physical based techniques. The user can rush at their opponents even if the barrier is active. The shield can be used offensively, by discharging the electricity in the direction of their choice in a wave resulting in using the energy of the barrier and ending its effects.
Note: Technique remains active for 3 turns.

I focus my raiton chakra into all points of my body, i then focus it event the more concentrating into to great quantities in my body. Them focusing on shape manipulation, i think on the shape the jutsu is suppsoed to be shaped. A round and powerful dome of eletricity. I then emit all the chakra at once from my body forming a sphre strong enogh to defend from a decent amount of attacks.

Advantages: Can be used offensively although its a defense dome, and also can be used without the use of handseals.

 

[Ciberr]

Good. Last B rank. For this justu I want you to condense your lightning chakra and create an orb of lightning. Deploy it into the air and cause it to implode into a shower like lightning rain. They'll shock anybody in range. Give me one disadvantage of this justu.

( Raiton: Kaminari no Shōgeki Ame ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shock Rain

Spoiler

Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulates their lightning chakra condensing into a orb of chakra and then releasing it into mid air. The lightning orb will then remain in the air for several seconds releasing a continous rain of lightning bolts shocking any enemy within the radius of the attack.

 

[Abon]

Good. Last B rank. For this justu I want you to condense your lightning chakra and create an orb of lightning. Deploy it into the air and cause it to implode into a shower like lightning rain. They'll shock anybody in range. Give me one disadvantage of this justu.

( Raiton: Kaminari no Shōgeki Ame ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shock Rain

Spoiler

Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulates their lightning chakra condensing into a orb of chakra and then releasing it into mid air. The lightning orb will then remain in the air for several seconds releasing a continous rain of lightning bolts shocking any enemy within the radius of the attack.

I focus my chakra into my dominant right hand, and begin to focus on shape manipulation making a round ball in the middle of my palm. I then focus even the more of the quantities and the intensites o chakra of the ball making it more potent and powerful and it for the pre determined range (short). I then throw the ball into the air and signal it to release its chakra. Making it rain a significant amount of lightning bolts to rain all around short range.

Disadvantage: This technique is severly range oreinted and restricted. Not reaching ranged opponet.x

 

[Ciberr]

Good job. Keep it up. We're moving onto A ranks now. I want a little bit more detail as we're moving into the stronger justus. But before we do that I want you to give me a 3 justu combo using at least 2 of the justu you've learned so far in the lightning element. Make it an actually good combo you could see yourself using in an actual battle. I'll point out the weak spots of the combo or lack there of.

 

[Abon]

I first focus my raiton chakra next to me making an exact copy of me in all likeness from lightning chakra. Formming a lightning clone, i then signal the clone to focus his raiton chakra into his hands and shape it into a pre shaped spear. I then hit the ground and signal my clone to jump into the air, i then with my hands start focusing my doton chakra and then making a quake in the ground, throwing my opponet off balance. My clone yet in the fires a piercing lightning bolt from the sky, through the chest of my opponet. Him being able to aim effectivly because he is not on the ground.

(Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone

Spoiler

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself infused with his lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.
Note: Can only use lightning based techniques up to B rank.

(Raiton: Gian Yari) - Lightning Style: False Darkness Spear

Spoiler

Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.

(Doton: Yochi no Douyou) - Earth Release: World Shaking

Spoiler

Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in harming the enemy target.

 

[Ciberr]

Now counter that move with only 2 justu.

 

[Lord of Kaos]

Be sure to remind him how many handseals each jutsu requires. You don't want to give someone inadequate infromation on something lol

 

[Ciberr]

None of the justu so far has required a handseal lol. I'll be sure to remember that.

 

[Abon]

I first focus my raiton chakra next to me making an exact copy of me in all likeness from lightning chakra. Formming a lightning clone, i then signal the clone to focus his raiton chakra into his hands and shape it into a pre shaped spear. I then hit the ground and signal my clone to jump into the air, i then with my hands start focusing my doton chakra and then making a quake in the ground, throwing my opponet off balance. My clone yet in the fires a piercing lightning bolt from the sky, through the chest of my opponet. Him being able to aim effectivly because he is not on the ground.

(Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone

Spoiler

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself infused with his lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.
Note: Can only use lightning based techniques up to B rank.

(Raiton: Gian Yari) - Lightning Style: False Darkness Spear

Spoiler

Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.

(Doton: Yochi no Douyou) - Earth Release: World Shaking

Spoiler

Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in harming the enemy target.

As i observe the my opponet making a clone i would assume he would be attacking from two sides at once, i then focus my raiton chakra around me and then focus my chakra into a solid form of lightning and creating a lightning field. Therefore as i am thrown off balace, the clone would shoot the lightning at me and cancel out my dome but still causeing me no harm as they cancel each other out being both the same rank. I then focus my chakra into my hands, and then concentrate into a a pre spear going forth and shooting it at my opponet the moment the clone hits the ground and splitting it in two. Piercing both the clone and my opponet.

( Raiton: Purazuma Bōru ) - Lightning Release: Plasma Ball

Spoiler

Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 (+5 per turn active)
Damage points: 40 (-15 if target comes into contact with the barrier)
Description: The user manipulating their chakra generates a plasma barrier around them to serve as a defence which protects them from incoming attacks, even from something as wide-ranged as the Quicksand Waterfall Flow however the user cannot use other techniques besides lightning release or physical based techniques. The user can rush at their opponents even if the barrier is active. The shield can be used offensively, by discharging the electricity in the direction of their choice in a wave resulting in using the energy of the barrier and ending its effects.
Note: Technique remains active for 3 turns

(Raiton: Gian Yari) - Lightning Style: False Darkness Spear

Spoiler

Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies

 

[Ciberr]

Good enough I suppose. Now, we're going to A ranks. Lightning is my favorite element. And the A ranks hold my favorite justu. Tell me, what do you know about chidori ?

 

[Abon]

Good enough I suppose. Now, we're going to A ranks. Lightning is my favorite element. And the A ranks hold my favorite justu. Tell me, what do you know about chidori ?

Lightning is also my favorite along with Wind :3

Chidori is a jutsu used by my first favorite character Sasukue. First utiltilizing a long string of seals, then concentrating one raiton chakra into one hand, the damage can be an instant kill if hit in the right place (Heart or even the Stomach, if you reach). Obviously doing piercing damage and has many uses also like Needles and different combos.

 

[Ciberr]

Well no need to continue to ask questions. I want you to build up lightning chakra into your hand then preform the following handseals "Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey", condensing the chakra into the form of a sharp bolt/ball of lightning which you manifest in your hand. I want you to then attack these giant boulders behind me. Thrusting your hand into the rock destroying them. Warning, if you don't give me a good amount of detail I'll chidori your leg :|

(Raiton: Chidori) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds

Spoiler

Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user must first perform the following sequence of hand seals Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey and they create a lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name.
Note: Someone who mastered lightning release can perform chidori with just the Ox hand seal.

 

[Abon]

I first preform the Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey handseals and begin to focus my raiton chakra into my right dominant hand. Concentrating great amounts of chakra into my hands until it starts to spark. I then pour even more of my chakra into it making it spark heavily, and begin to focus my aim upon the boulders behind you. I start off my right foot and take off at amazing speeds and jumping into the air and pushshing my hand into the rocks. Making an explosion and denting the boulder leaving an imprint of where i have struck.

 

[Ciberr]

Do it again. Make sure you add what actually happens when your done forming the justu. All you said was that it sparked. Though it was good to describe your footing, you failed to actually describe the justu itself. In a battle you should always include how, where(Should it matter), and in what response you preformed the justu for(Should you be countering or something of the sort). That being said redo chidori with the same instructions as before.

 

[Abon]

Do it again. Make sure you add what actually happens when your done forming the justu. All you said was that it sparked. Though it was good to describe your footing, you failed to actually describe the justu itself. In a battle you should always include how, where(Should it matter), and in what response you preformed the justu for(Should you be countering or something of the sort). That being said redo chidori with the same instructions as before.

Okay,

I once again preform the Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey handseals and focus my raiton chakra into my right dominant hand. I then quickly concetrate a great amount of raiiton chakra all at once, i channel it so much that it becomes visable and sparks wildly in my hand and makes wild chirping sounds. I then focus upon my the next boulder and then step forward with my right foot again. I then run at blinding speeds towards the boulder, then jabbing my right hand foreard the moement i am in close vicinity of the rock. Making another "crater" in it. Doing signifciant damage

 

[Ciberr]

Good enough. Make sure you describe how the justu looks better in the future. Its vital in RP. For the next justu create a full body surge of non-focused electrically charged chakra. If anybody was to get hit by this their muscles would tighten up and cause them to be stunned for 5 seconds. This justu also has 2 other advantages. List them.

(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current

Spoiler

Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.

 

[Abon]

Good enough. Make sure you describe how the justu looks better in the future. Its vital in RP. For the next justu create a full body surge of non-focused electrically charged chakra. If anybody was to get hit by this their muscles would tighten up and cause them to be stunned for 5 seconds. This justu also has 2 other advantages. List them.

(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current

Spoiler

Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.

Concentrating on the same chidori technique. I then concentrate my raiton chakra in my body, and my general vicinity. Making my raiton chakra spark and jolt in random patterns around my body slowly at first but then by focusing even the more causing a constant and more intense sparking of eletricty, and being unfocused making the technique jolt around my body also.

Advantages: One of the most efficient defense for Doton techniques, and also an adequate defense for taijutsu.

 

[Ciberr]

Its a cheap way to counter tai lol. What does nagashi actually do to the earth justu ?