[Raiton] Lightning strikes Nathan and I.

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One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
  • 1. A dragons head from the vortex is awesome.
  • 2. The vortex surrounds myself.
  • 3. Lightning can jump from the vortex and strike my enemy.
One/three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
  • 1. The vortex can be blocked with a wind style tornado.
How you would use it in battle: When in close range of my enemy.
How you would counter it: I would shoot a slashing stream of futon style wind jutsu at the vortex neutralizing it.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):
I begin focusing chakra in my core, mixing it and molding it to Raiton nature. While I create a vortex of wind around myself, I channel my raiton chakra out of my tenketsu and into the vortex manipulating it into a spinning vortex of lightning that I then shape manipulate into a dragons head and lightning jumps out of the vortex and strikes the clone
 

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Okay good.

(Chidori Kireme) - One thousand Birds Breaker
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will deliver several punches and kicks to the opponent sending them into the air where the user will then strike a Chidori into their back.

Go over to my clone, deliver many punches and kicks to the clone, then send him into the air, then make another chidori and use it to strike him in the back with it.
 

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One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
  • 1. Combines a few taijutsu attacks into it for more damage.
One/three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
  • 1. Requires close range before you can utilize this jutsu.
  • 2. The chidori hits the opponent in the back, out of their line of site.
How you would use it in battle: During a taijutsu type battle.
How you would counter it: You can successfully dodge this attack by just keeping distance from your opponent.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):

I begin charging and mold chakra in my core charging it into raiton nature as I charge at your clone, delivering several punches and kicks sending it flying up into the air as I create a chidori in my hand with the raiton chakra, jumping upwards and stabbing your clone in the back with the chidori.
 

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Great.

(Chidori Tokkan) - One Thousand Birds Rush
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will first strike the target with a slash from their sword hitting them into the air and then as they begin to land the user will drive them into the ground with a Chidori.

Grab out your sword, then go over to my clone and slash him with your sword, hitting him up into the air, then as they begin to land, you'll dive my clone into the ground, by making another chidori.
 

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One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
  • 1. Sword strike first and then chidori to the ground is a potentially lethal technique.
One/three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
  • 1. If I don't carry a sword I can't use this.
  • 2. Can only be used at short range.
How you would use it in battle: I would use it during a kenjutsu/close range battle.
How you would counter it: a kenjutsu counter on the sword strike prevents me from being tossed in the air.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):. I begin charging chakra in my core before and molding it to raiton chakra, as I do so I pull out my sword and rush your clone striking him up into the air. As your clone goes airborn I release the chakra into my palm creating a chidori that I then slam into the clone seconds before it hits the ground.
 

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Good,

(Raiton: Raikล Shishi Rendan) - Lightning Release: Lightning Flash Lion Combo
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user knocks the enemy into the air with thier Sword and jumps at them quickly after. They then proceeds to punch and kick the opponent while still in mid-air. After their combo, the user ducks to the floor, just underneath the opponent. As the opponent reaches him, the user strikes the falling opponent in the back with his Chidori, and then lets the helpless victim falls off.

Knock my clone into the air using your sword, then jump at them quickly after, then kick and punch my clone, while still in mid-air. From there duck to floor just underneath my clone, make a chidori and strike in the back with it.

-Creates clone.-
 

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Sorry, for the late replies, I've been rather busy.

One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
  • 1. This combo uses taijutsu, kenjutsu, and ninjutsu.
  • 2. A stab to the back with chidori is rather faithful.
One/three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
  • 1. If I don't use a sword in my arsenal I won't be able to use this jutsu.
How you would use it in battle: At close range, and to finish the match.
How you would counter it: I'd have to use some form of substitution or counter after the first slash of the sword.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):

I pull out my sword and dash over to your clone before slashing him up into the air, where I then jump and punch and kick him multiple times before dropping below charging a chidori and unleashing it straight into his back.
 

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Awesome, and good. No worries, mate.

( Raiton: Raiun ) - Lightning Release: Thundercloud
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user generates a cloud above the battlefield kneaded with their chakra and then cause a series of lightning bolts to rain down upon the battlefield causing severe damage.

Okay, send your raiton chakra up into the clouds doing this you'll create above the area, then release from the cloud a series of lighting bolts and aim them for my clone.

-Creates clone.-
 

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One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
  • 1. Lightning comes from the clouds and not myself.
One/three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
  • 1. I have to first generate a cloud and then rain down the lightning which all takes some time. Also onky reaches upto mid range.
How you would use it in battle: would be good to rain down around me if I can't see my opponent or if there are multiple opponents.
How you would counter it: can generate a futon blast to disperse the cloud.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):
I begin building chakra in my core an converting it to raiton before sending it upwards into a cloud where I manipulate it further causing electricity to build up and turn into lightning bolts that rain down on your clone.
 

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Okay.

( Raiton: Denko Sekka ) โ€“ Lightning Release: Lightning Mineralization
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user creates several large electrical balls of energy spread out around them and then causes electrical currents of lightning that spreads out on a vast area shocking any enemy target in the vicinity by connecting with the orbs.

Gather your ration chakra then release it as several large electrical balls, and spread them out around you, then cause electrical currents that spread out over a vast area, shocking my clone.

-Creates clone.-
 

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One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
  • 1. Sends the attack out an doesnt have to come in direct contact.
  • 2. Electrical currents come out of the balls..
  • 3. Everyone loves balls...
One/three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
  • 1. The balls can be easily seen and avoided.
How you would use it in battle: When dealing with multiple enemies or clones.
How you would counter it: wind shields to insulate the electrical current.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):
I begin channeling my chakra to my palm while converting it to raiton nature. As it leaves my palm I use shape manip yo turn it into large balls I send flying around me. Once spread out I trigger them to discharge an eletrical current at your clones.



(Btw nice name change an sorry for the delayed training. Work and babies...ugh.)
 

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Good.

( Raiton Chidori: Raijin no sakebi ) - Lightning Release One Thousand Chirping Birds: Cry of the Thundergod
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points; 60
Description: The user will attack the opponent with a series of slashes with their sword hitting the opponent into the air where they then finish them off by drilling them back into the ground with a Chidori.

Hit my clone with a series of slashes with your sword, hitting him up into the air, then when the clone is coming back down, make a chidori and use that to drill them back into the ground.
 

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Strong points
  • extra damage from kenjutsu sword slashes.
  • drills opponent through the back an into the ground.
Weak points
  • only works at short range.
  • has to have a sword to use.
Combinations-strategies: great for use during a kenjutsu battle.
Ways to counter: staying away from short range, or stopping them from pulling out their sword.
Any question: nope.

I charge your clone an pull out my sword an once in close range I begin slashing him, propelling him up into the air. Once air born I use my free hand to charge lightning chakra into my hand an slam him into the back drilling him into the ground.
 

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That's a bit....petty mate...I was on my phone an can't copy and paste so well...

One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
  • 1. Drills opponent through the back and into the ground.
One/three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
  • 1. Requires a sword in arsenal to use.
  • 2. Can only use at short range.
How you would use it in battle: at short range or during a kenjutsu battle.
How you would counter it: by staying away from short range, or stopping them from pulling out their sword.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):I charge your clone an pull out my sword an once in close range I begin slashing him, propelling him up into the air. Once air born I use my free hand to charge lightning chakra into my hand an slam him into the back drilling him into the ground.
 

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Think what you want.

Moving on.

(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user after performing the hand seal snake emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands whilst kakuzu lightning mask emits it from its mouth, which then pierces the enemy. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.

Perform the snake seal, send a lot of raiton chakra towards your hand, then from there emit a spear of lighting from your hands, the power of this spear is so great it can tear though rock. Aim the spear at my clone.

-Create clone-

There is an A-rank jutsu we will be coming back too.
 

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Whoa no hostility, we are both mates here.

One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
  • 1. The spear is strong enough to demolish rock, so it has a high killing potential.
  • 2. Can emit multiple spears for multiple enemies.
One/three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
  • 1. Can be deflected with another raiton technique or equal strength.
How you would use it in battle: To finish off my opponent or to attack multiple enemies.
How you would counter it: with another lightning jutsu of S rank.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):

I first weave the snake handseal and then begin channeling chakra from my core through my coils and to the tenketsu in my right palm. Along the way I convert the large amount of chakra to lightning nature. As I blast it out of my palm I shape it into a large spear that fires at a fast speed and destroys your clone.
 

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Was in a very shitty mood when I wrote that, sorry!

(Raiton: Kirin) - Lightning Release: Kirin
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After using a fire jutsu to heat the atmosphere and create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will use Chidori to take control of the lightning above. They can then make the lightning strike an opponent in the blink of an eye.
Note: Can only be avoided with time/space techniques or otherwise absolute defenses.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: In the turn before the use of Kirin, the user must have used at least a B-Rank, Long Range Fire (Katon) technique directed at the sky.
Note: User needs to post Chidori, meaning that in the turn Kirin is used, the user spends 2 moves.

Okay, send a B-rank long ranged fire tech into the sky to make thunder clouds, then make a chidori and then use it to control the lighting from the sky then make the lighting strike my clone, the strike will be in a blink of an eye.
 

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About a year late on the reply, sorry Nathan-kun.

One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
  • 1. Due to the attack speed it is virtually unblockable.
  • 2. Who doesn't love a S ranked Lightning jutsu that reaches long range?
One/three disadvantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
  • 1. Requires fire jutsus of atleast B Rank and Long range to setup
  • 2.Can only be used at Long Range.
  • 3. Must use Chidori in the same move, spending 2 moves that turn.
How you would use it in battle: To strike from Long Range and must likely only as a attempted finisher.
How you would counter it: By staying within short-mid range.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):
I begin by molding fire chakra in my lungs and exhaling 3 large dragon shaped fireballs into the sky, after a few moments the sky darkens with thick black clouds. Afterwards, I perform the Ox โ†’ Rabbit โ†’ Monkey โ†’ Dragon โ†’ Rat โ†’ Bird โ†’ Ox โ†’ Snake โ†’ Dog โ†’ Tiger โ†’ Monkey hand seals and create a ball of lightning in my hand. I use the lightning im holding to manipulate natural lighting in the sky causing a bolt of lightning to strike your clone.


( Katon: Gลryลซka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user fires several large dragon-shaped fireballs at their opponent after performing one handseal. It is able to alter localized weather conditions to the point of making thunder clouds when shot into the air, enabling the user to perform Kirin.
(Raiton: Chidori) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user must first perform the following sequence of hand seals Ox โ†’ Rabbit โ†’ Monkey โ†’ Dragon โ†’ Rat โ†’ Bird โ†’ Ox โ†’ Snake โ†’ Dog โ†’ Tiger โ†’ Monkey and they will then focus lightning chakra into their hand to create a lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name, and allows the user to perform high grade cutting damage or high penetration piercing thrusts.
Note: Someone who mastered lightning release can perform chidori with just the Ox hand seal.
Note: Uchiha Sasuke and Kakashi Hatake bios can use the technique without handseals
 

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No worries man. xD

(Raiton: Chidori Jinrai) โ€“ Lightning Release: 1000 birds ThunderClap.
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user will cover his hands in with lightning, essentially performing a (Raiton: Chidori) Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds in each hand. Clapping his hands together, the user can unleash that massive amount of lightning chakra into the form of a powerful Thunderbolt directed at the target. The technique is best used if the user has a height advantage in relation to the target. The thunderbolt is strong enough to leave a giant crater and cannot be used while being in Short-range of the target, at the risk of being hit also.

Pretty much create two chidoris in each one of your hands, from that you will clap your hands together and release a huge wave of lighting towards your intended target, this technique can be deadly if the target it hit directly. Can also leave massive craters or two around the battlefield if you miss.
 
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