[Raiton] Lighting with Mr.Riker

[Shroud]

Zero arrives at the field where Mr.Riker told him to wait and begins reading a book while waiting For Him to show up.

 

[Punk Hazard]

*Mr. Riker appears in a puff of smoke, in front of his student."

Alright, so we'll start off with you telling me everything you know about Raiton. It's strengths, weaknesses, properties, and usages. You can use the wiki for reference, but try not to copy and paste.

 

[Shroud]

Zero sets down his book and says raiton is one of five basic elemental chakra natures used by shinobi its made by increasing the high frequency vibrations in ones chakra. [usages] a book that i read about Raiton says lighting can be infused into the blade of a weapon like my sword I also know that lighting can be used for paralyses to immobilize a opponent.[strengths] lighting is strong against earth as earth is easy to travel through and contains conductive metal. lighting is also strong with water and a water release technique that creates water can be used to increase the the range and strength of a lighting release technique. [weaknesses] lighting is weak against wind release because wind is a insulator although lighting with increased vibrations can pontentially pass through wind techniques .[

 

[Punk Hazard]

Yeah, that's the gist of it. Water and lightning can be combined to increase the lethality of both. As such, it can either be a great asset, or a deadly offense to look out for you. You gotta be super careful when dealing with lightning and water, cuz it can easily backfire.

(Raiton no Jutsu) - Lightning Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create small bolts of lightning to attack their target.

(Raiton: Raikou Oonami) - Lightning Release: Lightning Surge
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra and slam their hand on the ground to release a surge of lightning across the ground to the opponents feet to shock them.


(Ration: Ikazuchi Kashou) - Lightning Release: Thunder Burn
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user moves his palm unleashing a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent.

Analyze these for me. Tell me their pros, cons, and explain the jutsu.

 

[Shroud]

(Raiton: Raikou Oonami) - Lightning Release: Lightning Surge
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra and slam their hand on the ground to release a surge of lightning across the ground to the opponents feet to shock them.

the lighting moves around underground making it harder to dodge. it has a short range so you have to get really close to use it and dosent do to much damage making it predictable and risky. the user sends lighting underground to pop up next to the enemy and attack.

(Raiton no Jutsu) - Lightning Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create small bolts of lightning to attack their target

It has a low chakra cost and decent range. it has low damage but the low chakra cost makes it easily repeatable allows for double or even tripe the damage,its easily countered with a well timed futon technique. the user releases ration from their hands launching several small bolts of lighting traveling through the air to attack the opponent.

(Ration: Ikazuchi Kashou) - Lightning Release: Thunder Burn
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user moves his palm unleashing a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent.

low chakra cost low damage hard to counter if you jump at your opponent at high speeds.
the user concentrates ration chakra into their hands and launches a barrage of lighting bolts at the target.
Hows that Mr.Riker

 

[Punk Hazard]

Good enough. Since these techniques aren't very complex and are the basic jutsu of the element, they won't need very much explaining, nor would they be very beneficial. At best, these would be used for RPing, like setting paper or scrolls on fire with some dramatic flair, or distracting your opponent. Aside from that, these won't do any major or useful damage in battle.

( Raiton: Raigeki) - Lightning Release: Electric Attack
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After performing the required hand seals Tiger → Snake → Dog the user creates an electric current from their hand that can hit multiple individuals at the same time. Furthermore, it extends into incredible distances and can avoid obstacles.

(Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short (Short-Long depending on the water technique)
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 (+10 to a water technique when used in conjunction)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.

(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
Rank: C
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user surrounds themselves with electricity. The intense electric field protects them by electrocuting anyone who comes into contact with it, but only works for one attack.

 

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(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
Rank: C
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user surrounds themselves with electricity. The intense electric field protects them by electrocuting anyone who comes into contact with it, but only works for one attack.


Protects you while preparing for a attack, low chakra cos,t decent damage, only lasts for one attack
the user covers himself in lighting damaging anything that gets near him

(Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short (Short-Long depending on the water technique)
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 (+10 to a water technique when used in conjunction)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.

can have a high damage and range if used with a good water technique
the user builds up a large amount of raiton chakra in their hands and releases it in a giant wave of electricity

( Raiton: Raigeki) - Lightning Release: Electric Attack
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After performing the required hand seals Tiger → Snake → Dog the user creates an electric current from their hand that can hit multiple individuals at the same time. Furthermore, it extends into incredible distances and can avoid obstacles.

has a high range, decent damage, decent chakra cost, can hit multiable targets, and can avoid obstacles like trees and rocks

the user build up a large amount of raiton chakra in their hand and releases a current of electricity that can travel long distances and hit several people

 

[Punk Hazard]

Bear in mind with the first one that water techniques are a perfect counter, so be on the look-out.

With the second, remember that something that can tear into stone can probably do some gnarly tears into skin.

(Raiton: Iwa Nadare) - Lightning Style: Stone Avalanche
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: By forming hand seals Snake → Upside down Tiger → Hands clapped together when near a cliff , the user causes stone and rock to become dislodged and rain down on anyone below it by releasing a wave of electrical energy which weakens the rock and makes it fall as it crumbles. However, this is extremely location-based and needs to be done uphill of a mountain for it to work.

(Raiton: Shuurai Rappa no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Horn Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will raise their hand infront of them like a sword. It will begin glowing in a pale yellow before releasing bolts of lightning in the shape of a horn that spread outwards, allowing it to attack multiple targets.

( Raiton: Inazuma ken Fudou ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blades Levitation
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 15 (-5 per turn)
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will channel their lightning chakra into their sword to increase its cutting capabilities, and then levitate it in front of them. They will then multiply the sword creating two extra physical copies which are then all manipulated to spin rapidly and are controlled to fly towards and cut through the opponent/s through hand gestures. While controlling the weapons, the user cannot mold chakra for other techniques and needs to keep focus.

 

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(Raiton: Iwa Nadare) - Lightning Style: Stone Avalanche
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: By forming hand seals Snake → Upside down Tiger → Hands clapped together when near a cliff , the user causes stone and rock to become dislodged and rain down on anyone below it by releasing a wave of electrical energy which weakens the rock and makes it fall as it crumbles. However, this is extremely location-based and needs to be done uphill of a mountain for it to work.
[only work when your ontop a mountain and your opponent is below it,good damage , and depending on the size of the mountain it can have a wide spread making it harder or easier to dodge]
(Raiton: Shuurai Rappa no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Horn Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will raise their hand infront of them like a sword. It will begin glowing in a pale yellow before releasing bolts of lightning in the shape of a horn that spread outwards, allowing it to attack multiple targets.
[you have to be close, it can hit several targets, and easy to perform]( Raiton: Inazuma ken Fudou ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blades Levitation
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 15 (-5 per turn)
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will channel their lightning chakra into their sword to increase its cutting capabilities, and then levitate it in front of them. They will then multiply the sword creating two extra physical copies which are then all manipulated to spin rapidly and are controlled to fly towards and cut through the opponent/s through hand gestures. While controlling the weapons, the user cannot mold chakra for other techniques and needs to keep focus.
[you need a sword, it gives your sword increased range and cutting power, and you cant mold chakra while doing this]

 

[Punk Hazard]

Please try to describe the jutsu themselves and how they work, rather than just pros and cons

 

[Shroud]

ok
#1 the user uses ration chakra to create lighting and weaken earth ontop a mountain cuases rockes to fall and hit the opponent
pros many large rocks fall making it hard to dodge cons can only be used atop a mountain and has bad range.

#2 the user charges up ration chakra and releases it by slashing the air like you would a sword and then creates a horn shaped bolt of lighting that can hit more than one enemy pros good range and can hit multiable people cons could be dodged easily as it moves forward

#3 the user molds ration into their sword and levitates it probably able to do that from the constant vibrations of ration and then creates clones of it doing this increases the blades cutting power and having more allows you to have a better range as you can flank the opponent then cut them down to size pros increases cutting power theres more than one, they fly and they are controllable cons you cant mold chakra while doing this as it requires you to focus on them at all times

 

[Punk Hazard]

I'm afraid you'll ave to try and be a bit more descriptive than that. You're repeating the description of the technique. Try again, and I'll add anything that needs to be added once you have.

 

[Cyber]

Oh Lordt. Zero just paraphrase the description and add how you'd use it in battle. That reply will just make your training a living hell

 

[Shroud]

fine youd use #1 to crush your opponent with rock froma mountain my weaking theearth with lighting to make it fall on them

youd use #2 to hit several opponent with a lighting slash to either kill or paralyse them

youd use #3 to flank your opponent with flying swords and stab them to oblivion

 

[Punk Hazard]

Alright, I'll explain these three to you to show you how you should do it.

1. For the Stone Avalanche technique, the user will take advantage of the relationship between Earth and Lightning, putting Lightning's superiority to the element to good use. By flowing Lightning into a cliff or mountain or other large structure made of Earth, the Earth will be torn apart, causing the dislodged pieces of Earth to fall towards an opponent standing at the base of the Earthen structure.

Pros: The technique can function as a good distraction, as ignoring the rapidly falling rocks would result in being crushed to death and buried. Depending on the range and size of the structure, the falling rocks can be widespread, making dodging or avoiding the rocks a risky option with larger structures. During the opponent blocking the rocks, the user can capitalize and attack them again with an attack. The range of the technique going up to Mid-ranged indicates the user can affect Earthen structures mid-ranged from them, allowing them to avoid being caught in the technique themselves.

Cons: Because the technique requires a structure, the lack of one would require the user to create one themselves with an Earth-style ninjutsu, leaving a window for the opponent to interrupt the combo before this technique can be used. Being within range or under the structure would also leave the opponent vulnerable to being caught in the jutsu themselves.

2. This is a rather simple technique. Much like Chidori and Raikiri, the Lighting Strike Horn jutsu works by flowing chakra into one's hand and vibrating it until it transforms into Lightning-natured chakra. The user will use shape manipulation to cover their hand in this lightning, causing it to glow yellow, while extending their fingers straight forward. The user can then use shape manipulation further to launch the lightning from their hand in the shape of a horn, creating a projectile that can harm the opponent.

Pros: The technique doesn't handseals and can be used very rapidly. The user can fire multiple projectiles from the mass of lightning as well, and by moving their hand, can create a hard-to-avoid barrage.

Cons: Firing multiple projectiles means each projectile will be weaker than than firing one or fewer projectiles. For example, firing four projectiles divides the C-ranked power of the technique evenly between all four projectiles. Firing three, while each would be stronger than each in four, still follows this logic. The user also has to maintain the lightning as he fires, meaning he can't use other jutsu while using this technique.

3. The user will imbue lightning into their blade via shape manipulation, as one would when imbuing raw chakra into normal projectiles, such as in the manner as Asuma's jutsu. By remotely controlling the lightning to float in front of them, the swords will also float as a result. The user can then divide the lightning to multiple the blades and, through handgestures, allow the user to launch the blades towards the opponent for an attack.

Pros: By creating multiple blades, the user can launch the swords from different angles to make avoiding or dodging the technique extremely difficult.

Cons: Much like the Lightning Horn, the user must sustain the technique and focus through hand gestures. Trying to use other jutsu will disable the jutsu.

Any questions?

 

[Shroud]

one on three does it make clones of the sword or just ration in the shape of the sword

also can I do the learn method for the last technique as you have seen I am bad with descriptions

 

[Punk Hazard]

Raiton into the shape of a sword.

Sure, but what's the learning method?

 

[Shroud]

nevermind ill just do the desc
Lightning Release: Electric Discharge Palm
Pros: Dosent require handseals and the bolts are underground making it hard to dodge.
Cons: The bolts are underground to to some extent they have to be on the ground and within reasonable distance of the caster.
desc:The user molds chakra into their hands vibrating it until it becomes ration he then slams his hand to the ground with their dominant hand releasing bolts of ration to attack the target and shock them.

 

[Punk Hazard]

Remember that this jutsu is in short range of you as well, so you'll have to be careful how you use it, taking note of how far away the opponent is. It's a good use against opponents coming in close, like for Taijutsu.

 

[Shroud]

Remember that this jutsu is in short range of you as well, so you'll have to be careful how you use it, taking note of how far away the opponent is. It's a good use against opponents coming in close, like for Taijutsu.

yes that is true and it will be very useful jutsu for those cases exspecialy a certain taijutsu loving giant i know