[Romance] Lighthouse

[Waindo]

*mkay?*:dunno:

Tides of time keep on tirelessly flowing,
Stealing it from the man whom floats on, unknowing.
Guided by the lighthouse which is constantly glowing,
That unreachable love that's silently moaning.

But everything is vast, no land is still showing;
While the winds are increasing, uncomfortably blowing.
Trough the man's soul, but he keeps on going,
In all of that pain, his soul is just growing.

The sails have teared up, and the winds are now slowing,
Dazed by that soulful light upon the high seas,
He grabs the oars, he keeps on rowing..​

 

[AnimusOra]

Odly this reminds me of an old cartoon i use to watch as a kid called Pirates of Dark Water. I like this poem its bringing back some good memories

 

[Power Bottom]

nice poem

 

[Waindo]

Odly this reminds me of an old cartoon i use to watch as a kid called Pirates of Dark Water. I like this poem its bringing back some good memories

No pirates involved though, the lighthouse represents an unreachable love/soul mate, etc, etc. But you probably got that

nice poem

Thank you!

 

[AnimusOra]

No pirates involved though, the lighthouse represents an unreachable love/soul mate, etc, etc. But you probably got that

Yup sometimes it is cruel to have such feelings. Sometimes not feeling anything at all is the only comfort you need

 

[Horus]

Nice work Waindo!

 

[Waindo]

Yup sometimes it is cruel to have such feelings. Sometimes not feeling anything at all is the only comfort you need

I would give my freaking hand just to feel blank at least for 10 mins...

Nice work Waindo!

Thank you man!

 

[The Dreamer]

I like the atmosphere in this one, atleast when I look at it literally as a poem of a man trying to reach something in a vast cold ocean during a dark night. I got it wrong I know...

 

[Waindo]

I like the atmosphere in this one, atleast when I look at it literally as a poem of a man trying to reach something in a vast cold ocean during a dark night. I got it wrong I know...

You didn't actually. it's a nice depiction, though try to get the metaphor. Read it few more times xd

 

[Ryóma]

Pretty good. I like how it's about a person who moves on despite the difficulties. It's quite nice.

 

[Waindo]

Thank you.

 

[Ryu Kishi]

i found it really great good job waindoXD

 

[Waindo]

Glad you liked it bro.