Light show in the clouds with Hazama

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A Turtle? Who does he think I am Maito Gai? lol.
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The Dragon head moves to attack, coming from the lightning tornado that surrounds you. You pretty much just direct it to your opponent.

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Raiton: Raikō Shishi Rendan) - Lightning Release: Lightning Flash Lion Combo
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user knocks the enemy into the air with thier Sword and jumps at them quickly after. They then proceeds to punch and kick the opponent while still in mid-air. After their combo, the user ducks to the floor, just underneath the opponent. As the opponent reaches him, the user strikes the falling opponent in the back with his Chidori, and then lets the helpless victim falls off.

I skipped this Chidori rip off by accident. You dont have to do this one either.

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(Raiton: Raiun) - Lightning Release: Thundercloud
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user generates a cloud above the battlefield kneaded with their chakra and then cause a series of lightning bolts to rain down upon the battlefield causing severe damage.

Channel your lightning chakra into the sky to create a cloud above the battlefield. From that cloud, use shape manipulation to form multiple lightning bolts that will rain down on your opponent.

(Raiton: Denko Sekka) – Lightning Release: Lightning Mineralization
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user creates several large electrical balls of energy spread out around them and then causes electrical currents of lightning that spreads out on a vast area shocking any enemy target in the vicinity by connecting with the orbs.

Channel your lightning chakra around your body and create multiple large balls of lightning spread out around you.
 

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Channeling my lightning chakra throughout my body I jolt and release it into the sky, as I look up dark clouds begin to form in the sky. I then pick a spot on the ground and using shape manipulation I cause multiple lightning bolts to rain down on that spot.

I then channel lightning chakra throughout my body again, this time releasing out in every direction I shape the chakra onto several large balls which spread out around me and cause a current to fly through the air that surrounds me.
 

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Well thats it for A Ranked lightning. Some techs I can't teach you until you learn some S Ranked Techs....I know..Weird.

Applied Science Time. ^_^
 

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Been thinking about this one whilst in uni today, hopefully you like what I've come up with.

I begin by performing a combination of 5 hand seals before exerting a large amount of water from my mouth, the water then open out on itself and forms a solid ball/orb of water around me, blocking oncoming attacks and cutting off my targets view of me although still allowing me to see out. Then inside the ball I raise my hand to the skies generating thunderclouds in the air, Once the clouds are formed however I cancel my jutsu leaving the clouds overhead. With my target distracted by the clouds I quickly perform nine hand seals inside my orb and create a chidori in my hand. I then hold it in the direction of my opponent and it shoots out in a long stream which pierces through their heart. As the opponent is distracted by the formation of the clouds, and has his vision of me obscured by the water he would not see the chidori spear coming until very late. The spear would also electrify and power up my defence as it passed through the water.
(Hopefully that's all in the rules!!!)
(Suiton: Suijinheki) - Water Style: Water Encampment Wall
Rank: A
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This defensive jutsu creates a wall of water around the user. The user will use the following hand seals to activate the technique Tiger β†’ Snake β†’ Rat β†’ Snake β†’ Tiger. Enemy attacks are completely intercepted by a fence of water blown out from the mouth, and is raised from below with tremendous might. The water is blown out in the form of a circle around the user, and it makes for a defence without openings. It is also possible for the user to control the amount of water and duration at will. Furthermore, because the field of vision is maintained even while defending one can easily go on to the next move, which is a great advantage. The wall can also be formed from a pre-existing water source.

(Raiton: Raiun) - Lightning Release: Thundercloud
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user generates a cloud above the battlefield kneaded with their chakra and then cause a series of lightning bolts to rain down upon the battlefield causing severe damage.

(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact.
 

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Not bad. Well it would be better If you still used the technique. Now defend against it. As if you had used ur second jutsu
 

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(But it would mean having a longer gap between jutsu once they dodged the first bolt there attention would turn back to me and give them more chance of dodging the chidori spear, that was my reasoning for cancelling it.)
As soon as I see my opponent begin to release the water from there mouth I infuse a giant shuriken with lightning chakra and throw it at the point in the orb where the water inverts on itself, The water would then electrify before it had been released from my opponent mouth, paralysing them and damaging them internally. With the jutsu stopped and my opponent unable to move I perform a four hand seal sequence and make 16 pillars rise from the ground around him. I then channel lightning chakra into the pillars and make lightning shoot in from each pillar shocking my opponent. Whilst my opponent is being shocked I form a large amount of water above them (about 15 meters) which drops into the middle of the pillars and intensifies the electrocution of my opponent as the water covers him.

(Raiton: Fusei Shuriken Chidori Jutsu ) - Lightning Release: Rigged Shuriken One Thousand Birds Style
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will utilize a large shuriken and channel a chidori into it. The user will then throw the shuriken charged with chidori towards the opponent resulting in paralysing them on impact. (paralysis lasts for 1 turn)
Note: Must Know Chidori

(Raiton: JΕ«rokuchΕ« Shibari) – Lightning Release: Sixteen-Pillar Bind
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the needed hand seals Rat β†’ Monkey β†’ Horse β†’ Tiger the user will create a even more powerful version of lightning release: four pillar bind, the user creates sixteen giant pillars, which then form a giant oven to trap the enemy. It is often used after Earth Release: Mud Fall to cover the enemy target in mud and then follow up with using Fire release: Firing Biscuit, creating flames in the oven to roast and harden the mud, immobilizing the enemy.

(Suiton: Haran Banshō) - Water Release: Storm Upheaval
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to summon a massive amount of water from the sky, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in an instant.
Note: The water needs to be summoned at least 10 meters above the opponent to have any real effect.
 

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Aye you are correct...however that all depends on your wording when you post. I will be teaching you that soon as well. But if you were to word your post in such a way that as soon as the cloud forms and the lightning begins to fall from the clouds. The Chidori Spear forms in your hands and heads towards your opponent, forcing them to deal with two techniques at the same time. Also, something you would want to do, is create the cloud behind your opponent but still within their range. This way they cant see it to defend against it. It will still be above them, just not within their immediate eyesight. So unless they are sensors (either in the form of a KG ability or a Weaponry ability like my Intel Hat CW) capable of sensing chakra, or members of the hyuga or Uchiha clan (or an SNK Soma no Ko member with their partner keeping an eye out for attacks from behind) then they are pretty much screwed.
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Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user after performing the hand seal snake emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands whilst kakuzu lightning mask emits it from its mouth, which then pierces the enemy. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.

One of the most used lightning techniques on NB. You are going to channel lightning chakra into your hands and expel a lightning bolt from your hands and send it towards your opponent. The technique is extremely fast, making it hard for your opponent to dodge.

(Raiton: Raikiri) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blade
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This jutsu is an advanced form of Chidori.

This is simply a stronger Chidori. No need to perform it.

(Raiton: Raikiri Nibai Raikou Jishin) – Lightning Release: Lightning Blade Double Lightning Quake
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user performs Lightning blade and splits it in two, then zigzags at the opponent and finishes by slamming them with lightning Cutter.

You are simply going to split chidori up...what it means by this is instead of it simply being used in your dominate hand, it will be in both of your hands. When this happens, each hands chidori is approximately A Ranked since you are splitting the original technique into two. Essentially both of them combined have a total of S ranked damage. No need to perform this either.
 

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Ahh okay cool, I see a lot of arguments on here about misworded posts so that would be nice to learn better, was my counter okay?
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I start by concentrating my lightning chakra into my hand, once the chakra is stored I release it in a powerful burst which shoots from my hand in the form of a lightning bolt, the lightning bolt flies forward extending from my hand a crashes into a nearby rock easily destroying it and breaking it down into tiny pieces.
 

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It was ok minus you attacking you opponent before they could successfully complete their move. You are throwing the shuriken before they could spit out the water. If the water defense is within their first move...which it is, you wont be able to interrupt them doing it. The act of doing such is called a timeframe break. Timeframe breaks are the main cause of losses in our RP. Some people let it go, but if you are trying to win a tournament or are in an official battle, wording can make the difference between a loss and a win.

But dont worry, I will help you with it all. You are quite understanding of majority of the basics. It wont be hard at all.
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Skips Kirin. We will do that after I teach you fire. Otherwise there is no real need to go over it.
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(Raiton: Chidori Jinrai) – Lightning Release: 1000 birds ThunderClap.
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: After Performing chidori in mid air the user releases all of the lightning chakra within the chidori to create a Giant Thunder bolt that can be shot at the opponent.

Perform chidori while you are in the air, the use shape manipulation to form it into a large thunderbolt and then send it at your opponent
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(Raiton: Chidori Raimei) - Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm
Rank: S
Type:Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a circular area destroying all thats in its way.

Another Chidori generated technique, however it is different from the rest. This technique, Raimei, forms a chidori in the users hand, and then causes all the different individual lightning bolts to channel outwards in a 360 degree pattern around the user. This is not a good technique to use against attacks that come from below you, as it leaves your feet exposed to spikes and doesnt really protect it well, so you want to use it against techniques that are used in every area except for below you.

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(Raigen Raikochu) – Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing the following handseals Ram β†’ Horse β†’ Snake β†’ Tiger the user will then create a blinding light that appears to emanate from the users body and blind the target/s.

Perform the 4 required handseals while charging lightning chakra throughout your body. Much like Chidori Nagashi, the lightning spreads all throughtout your body. The difference however, is that this technique is simply pure light, and doesnt really harm the opponent in any way except as a means of blinding them.
 

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I start by jumping in the air, I perform the nine hand seal sequence needed to form chidori and then once formed I manipulate the chidori into a thunderbolt which strikes my opponent from above.

Again I begin by performing the chidori seal sequence, however once it is formed this time I release it out as multiple lightning bolts which spread out across a circular area around me.

I perform the handseal sequence Ram β†’ Horse β†’ Snake β†’ Tiger, then a bright glow eminates from my body which can easily blind targets that look into the light.
 

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I have to skip another tech because you dont know Shadow Clone.

(Raiton: Raikiri Nirentotsu) - Lightning Cutter Two Sequential Crashes
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user first creates a slightly larger Lightning Cutter than usual with both hands, but then quickly grasps the lighning and pulls it apart into two hands. They then charge at the enemy with one Lightning Cutter, uppercutting the enemy into the air. Then the user appears above the enemy and releases all the lighting into the enemy, charging down with them in a giant cyclone of lightning.

This is just another variation of Raikiri and no need for you to do it.

This is it for your lightning training. All the techniques that I skipped you either will not be able to perform until you learn the other techniques that accompany them, or until you obtain the bio required to actually use it. But for now you can consider yourself Lightning + AACT Mastered.
 

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Wooooooooooooo! Thanks Hazama you babe! also may I ask what AACT is?
 

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Additionally Approved Cannon Techniques or AACT's is simply a group of techniques added to the jutsulist that hasnt been integrated with the mainstream ones as of yet. They can all be located here.



Oh and make the threads for your fire and wind threads and link me to it on my profile please.
 

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Hey Hazama, any chance you could further explain (Raiton: Denko Sekka) – Lightning Release: Lightning Mineralization please... I don't really understand it. The way I understand it is that the lightning just covers everything, therefore isn't it crazy OP? I don't understand what it actually does to shock things.
 

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No problem.

(Raiton: Denko Sekka) – Lightning Release: Lightning Mineralization
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user creates several large electrical balls of energy spread out around them and then causes electrical currents of lightning that spreads out on a vast area shocking any enemy target in the vicinity by connecting with the orbs.

Ok so you are pretty much channeling your chakra throughout your entire range around you and forming multiple orbs of lightning that spread outwards to attack your opponent.
 
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