Legend of the Lightning Sage Chapter 4-The Target

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Chouji: Well Kiba?

Kiba: He isn’t anywhere close; his scent is many kilometers from Konoha.

Ino: Really?

Shikamaru: To get that far so fast, is it really possible? Maybe its space time ninjutsu?

Kiba: Could be, since I completely lost his trail and had to pick it up again.

Sasuke: He was no pushover either, to think that I would have had to resort to that doujutsu.

Kiba: He mentioned a target, who do you think it is?

Shikamaru: For a ninja of that level, it has to be someone important, a jinchuuriki or Kage or some famous ninja with powerful kekkei genkai.

Sakura: Jinchuuriki…Naruto?!

Shikamaru: Calm down Sakura.That guy’s far away from Konoha now.

Kiba: And Naruto’s still in Konoha, he's walking with Hinata and my nose’s not picking up any danger near them.

Scene cuts a dark alley somewhere still in Konoha

The Sage is standing with a number of ninja whose flak jackets show that they are from the various ninja villages. They all surround him and he is holding a crystal ball. The Sage and his company of ninja are surrounded by a spherical blue aura. Projected on the ball is Sasuke, Shikamaru, Sakura, Ino, Chouji, Kiba as they talk. The Sage is watching them closely.

Shikamaru: In any case we will have to report this to the ANBU so that they can investigate.

Sasuke: It’s also relevant to mention that he had Naruto’s Sage Mode.

Sakura: What?

Shikamaru:*sigh* It just keeps getting better and better. Sakura, Ino, Chouji take these injured ninja to Konoha hospital. When they wake up they can give us more information on him. Sasuke and I will make a full report to the ANBU. Then I can finally go to bed.

Kiba: Goodnight.

The images on crystal ball fade.

Sage: Seems they took the bait. By leaving a Shadow clone in the outskirts of the Fire country and cloaking myself in Konoha with a barrier, I’ve managed to make them all think the danger has passed. Now I can pursue him without interruptions. Let’s go.

Scene cuts to Naruto and Hinata walking

Naruto: I’m not really worried about the whole Hokage thing, I’ve been…

At that moment a Fuma shuriken launches towards Naruto from behind.

Voice: Hakke: Kushou

[Jutsu Insight]
Classification Kekkei Genkai, Taijutsu
Class Offensive
Range Short to Mid range

This technique is similar in practice to Eight Trigrams Palms Revolving Heaven, but has a specific target rather than a general area. To perform it, the user precisely pinpoints the enemy's vital points with the Byakugan and releases a high-speed palm thrust. A "vacuum shell" compressed using the Gentle Fist is formed to attack the opponent's vitals from a distance, blowing them off their feet with tremendous force before they even notice they were hit.

The shuriken is immediately deflected and falls on the ground away from both Naruto and Hinata. Naruto turns around to see who deflected the attack.

Naruto: Neji?

Hinata: Neji-niisan.

Neji: There’s a lot of them, and they’re preparing another attack.

Voice: Suiton: Kirigakure no Jutsu.

[Jutsu Insight]
Name Water Release: Hiding in Mist Technique
Classification Ninjutsu
Type Water Release
Rank D-rank
Class Supplementary

This displacement technique is a speciality of the ninja from Kirigakure, where one causes a mist to spring forth by lifting up some water from either a pre-existing source or expelled from their mouth, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm

A mist forms and reduces the visibility of the battlefield. Naruto immediately enters Kyuubi Chakra Mode.

Neji: So that’s their tactic, eh? From the flow of their chakra I can tell that they’re under genjutsu.

Hinata: Who’s ‘they’?

Neji: The enemy, about 10 of them and by their level of chakra I can tell that they’re nothing short of Jounin. Naruto, Hinata we need to…

In that instant Naruto moves with blinding speed and takes out all the ninja present one by one by knocking them out.

Neji: Seems my help’s not needed here.

The Sage rushes toward Hinata and Neji to attack them and closes the distance fast, they get into a fighting stance. Naruto rushes to their aid in the blink of an eye and moves to take out the ninja with a devastating punch. His strike stops in mid air and cannot move any closer to him. Naruto then looks down and notices that the Sage has dropped a small black ball on the ground, the ninja dispels into smoke the moment the small sphere lands.

Naruto: Shadow clone? Wait, What’s going on?

Naruto is shocked to find that he is no longer in Kyuubi chakra mode, he tries to re-enter the mode but finds that he cannot, Neji and Hinata also find that they cannot activate their Byakugan. Suddenly black vines launch from the top of a nearby roof and move to capture the trio, they try to evade but only Neji was fast enough to get away in time but he is attacked from behind by the Sage. He evades and moves to counter attack with a gentle fist attack but it has no effect on his assailant. The distraction allows the black vines to capture him as well. The assailant dispels, revealing it was also a clone.

Neji: What the hell is going on?

Neji looks to the ground and sees that the black ball that was dropped by the clone earlier has spread out to form a large circle on the ground with markings inside the circle space. Naruto, Hinata and himself are caught in the circle space.
Neji: *thinking* Is this some sort of seal?

A man jumps down from the rooftop where the vines originated from, it is the Sage and the black vines are thick, lengthened strands of his hair. He is in Sage Mode.

Sage: Don’t even bother trying to move. No amount of physical strength can break my Senpo: Fukahi Kamishibari. It’s truly an honour to meet you Uzumaki Naruto, hero of the ninja world.

[Insight]
Senpo: Fukahi Kamishibari means Sage Art: Inescapable Hair Bind

The Sage forms a few hand seals

Sage: Kakure Kekkai no Jutsu.

[Insight]
This means Cloaking Barrier Technique

A spherical blue aura envelops the area.

The Sage walks closer to the sealing circle space but doesn’t step in.

Sage: You’re probably wondering why none of your ninjutsu are working. Well, this is simply a sealing technique I made from studying a certain technique; Chikamatsu Monzaemon’s Fuinjutsu: Shishin Heiko.

[Insight]
Chikamatsu Monzaemon is the inventor of puppetry ninjutsu. His Ten puppets were passed down to Chiyo and those were the puppets she used to fight Sasori's 100 puppets. The sealing technique the Sage is referring to is used by the those Ten puppets and it is explained below

Name Sealing Technique: Lion Closing Roar
Classification Fūinjutsu, Ninjutsu
Rank A-rank
Class Supplementary
Range Short-range
Users Chiyo(using the White Secret Technique: The Chikamatsu Collection of Ten Puppets)

This sealing technique completely blocks the target's chakra with a sealing formula (封印式, fūin-shiki) drawn on the ground or a wall. This is done by closing all the tenketsu of the person caught in the middle. When the target is sealed, a stylised kanji for "close" or "shut" (閉, hei) appears in the middle of the sealing formula.
To successfully seal the target, one has to get them exactly inside the sealing formula. This requires great accuracy and is very difficult. Various methods can be used to make this easier. For instance, one can prepare a puppet or a ninja tool like the Lion-Headed Kannon with this sealing formula.

Sage: Monzaemon and I were very good friends. Anyways, like Monazaemon's technique, it’s a seal that closes off the tenketsu of whoever is caught inside though mine is designed for capturing multiple targets.



Neji: Monzaemon…the inventor of puppetry ninjutsu?

Sage: Yeah, I guess that gives you an idea of how old I am.

The Naruto in the sealing circle dispels into smoke. The real Naruto steps out but doesn't attack.

Sage: Guess I shouldn't have expected you to fall into such a trap. But in any case, I have hostages now so i would ask you to willingly step into the circle or things could get ugly.

Naruto takes a deep breath and walks into the circle. His Kyuubi Chakra Mode disperses. The Sage creates more hair to wrap him up as well.

Naruto: Who are you?

Sage: Fear not, I simply want to talk. Its really important.

Naruto: I asked who the hell are you?!

Sage: Well in my day I was called Raiko Sennin.

[Insight]
Raiko Sennin means Lightning Sage

Naruto: Huh?





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Another good chapter

Are their other elemental sages ?

Just a suggestion kiba should get a warewolf mode & shikumaru have a shadow clone that is his actual shadow (like noob from mortal kombat)
 

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I have to say that I was very impressed with this chapter! ^.^ You not only did your homework but it all developed into a pretty fantastic plot. I again liked everyone’s involvement although I would’ve loved a little more interaction from Konoha 11 but you pulled it off splendidly. I liked the way you handled Neji’ character and the Sage with a Sage Art hair technique is just epic! You even gave a brief insight into the Sage's character which was nice and it is interesting. I am very much looking forward to the next chapter ;)
 

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I have to say that I was very impressed with this chapter! ^.^ You not only did your homework but it all developed into a pretty fantastic plot. I again liked everyone’s involvement although I would’ve loved a little more interaction from Konoha 11 but you pulled it off splendidly. I liked the way you handled Neji’ character and the Sage with a Sage Art hair technique is just epic! You even gave a brief insight into the Sage's character which was nice and it is interesting. I am very much looking forward to the next chapter ;)
Yay for me being impressive. There's going to be more conversation from the Konoha 11 in the next chapters(you'd probably even get tired of it but its all important) and there'll be a 1 or 2 segues into the Sage's history.
Has a little to do with Suigetsu's clan
 
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