[CJ] Learnin with Lok

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I told you to link me o.-

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Katon: Moui Kagutsuchi|Fire Style: Fury of the Fire God
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damge Points: 60
Description: The user makes a few handseals, gathering large amounts of chakra in his arms, and slams his hands down onto the earth, releasing all the fire chakra within his arms. Upon the point of contact of his hands and the earth, a small wave of fire spreads out from around the location of the user. The wave of fire starts to spread quickly and becomes stronger as it spreads from the user. Within a matter of seconds, the entire distance of short- mid is filled with fire. Once complete, the only place that becomes clear of fire is the small area where the user is standing.
*Can only use twice*
*After using, the user cannot use any wind jutsus otherwise he will basically be committing suicide by powering the flames*
*If the user stays in the middle of the fire for more than a turn, he becomes several burned*

It's not really good, pretty bad imo, but you likely can get more out of it than I can.

Evaluate it and post any questions you have
 

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I told you to link me o.-

Anyway.......

Katon: Moui Kagutsuchi|Fire Style: Fury of the Fire God
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damge Points: 60
Description: The user makes a few handseals, gathering large amounts of chakra in his arms, and slams his hands down onto the earth, releasing all the fire chakra within his arms. Upon the point of contact of his hands and the earth, a small wave of fire spreads out from around the location of the user. The wave of fire starts to spread quickly and becomes stronger as it spreads from the user. Within a matter of seconds, the entire distance of short- mid is filled with fire. Once complete, the only place that becomes clear of fire is the small area where the user is standing.
*Can only use twice*
*After using, the user cannot use any wind jutsus otherwise he will basically be committing suicide by powering the flames*
*If the user stays in the middle of the fire for more than a turn, he becomes several burned*

It's not really good, pretty bad imo, but you likely can get more out of it than I can.

Evaluate it and post any questions you have
Catchy name, and having a bio with a primary fire specialty definitely helps add to this ones usability. I see it says spreads out around the user, so I'm assuming it's omni-directional which is pretty cool to me, also like the fact it's gets more powerful as it spreads further for the little chicken weasel's that try to run, and how fast it covers a decent sized area in wonderful flames of doom...I think it's kinda cool actually, but you know I'm weird like that xD
 

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Re-appears like a person who had vanished then re-appeared

(Doton Taijutsu - Supēdo no 3) - Earth Style Body Arts - 3 of Spades
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30(-10 per turn used)
Damage Points: 60
Description: By molding doton chakra to their feet, the user releases it below each foot manipulating the ground just below each one, about 4 inches deep in the exact shape of their shoes/boots/whatever they are wearing or their bare feet. As they do so, they use the chakra to stick each foot to this section of ground while also dislodging the piece of earth, manipulating it hardening it's consistency to stone like. When the user lifts their feet, they will have the earth stuck to the bottom and can strike with kicks or walk/run/stand with the earth remaining connected to their feet.

~Notes~
- Can be used 3x per battle
- No A rank or above Taijutsu the same turn
- Must be taught by -Vegeta

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