[Other] Leaps

[Waindo]

Jumpin, breathing deep,
taking the ride.
Rollercoaster of life

Arms spread wide,
rejecting to sleep.

My heart keeps warming
up to the beat of life,
all enjoyable when you
place the things right.

Eyes shut wide,
rejecting to keep.

The broken memories,
Soul parts I've lost.
Taking huge leaps,
with my fingers crossed

 

[Urda]

Its kind of meh- OK. I think you could do more. Its a great piece.

 

[Zanithe]

Nice poem!

 

[Waindo]

I appreciate the positive feedbacks. Keep em comin'