[CFS] Lazy Fist

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Well then, Lazy Fist is a custom fighting style created by our Lord and Savior Scorps U_U. Jokes aside, it’s a unique cfs that was created based on soft , dull and swift move strikes to the body, to which the on contact, the user flows his or her chakra into the enemy and disrupt their chakra flow. This causes the person to be placed into a genjutsu . This is a new art called Gentaijutsu .
 

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Exactly. Now, there are various types of movement in Taijutsu. You have slow heavy hits, fast jabs, body charged hits, circular movements, rotating hits, etc etc. There are many ways in which ninjas use physic laws and properties to deliver the most effective fighting styles. One can use the extension of an arm and move the body forwards, using the arm as a solid bar and the movement of the torso as the weight and force behind the hit, delivering a strong punch. This is the basis of the most simple or simple boxing punches. Or you can use wide circular movement to increase the momentum of your already long legs, empowering your kicks.

Lazy Fist however is different...its...well...Lazy. Your aim is, ofc, to do physical damage. But, thats not the main focus. Your focus is to trigger the illusion and for that you need precise and fast "touch moments". Because of this, Lazy Fist uses a more unorthodox Southern Praying Manthis style of fighting with 2 variants: either the strong core, lose torso variant or the lose foot variant. It combines movements of both. The idea is not to have immensely powerful hits but to hit. Because of this, instead of your fists, you'll usually hit the enemy with your fingers or palms. Your feet will rarely come in play and they'll be more of a support tool than a weapon. Evasion is a big focus, because the style requires high chakra control and precision. If you are being hit hard, the pain disrupts your focus and makes it harder to trigger the effects. In a way, it approaches fighting in a similar manner to Gentle Fist.

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Exactly. Now, there are various types of movement in Taijutsu. You have slow heavy hits, fast jabs, body charged hits, circular movements, rotating hits, etc etc. There are many ways in which ninjas use physic laws and properties to deliver the most effective fighting styles. One can use the extension of an arm and move the body forwards, using the arm as a solid bar and the movement of the torso as the weight and force behind the hit, delivering a strong punch. This is the basis of the most simple or simple boxing punches. Or you can use wide circular movement to increase the momentum of your already long legs, empowering your kicks.

Lazy Fist however is different...its...well...Lazy. Your aim is, ofc, to do physical damage. But, thats not the main focus. Your focus is to trigger the illusion and for that you need precise and fast "touch moments". Because of this, Lazy Fist uses a more unorthodox Southern Praying Manthis style of fighting with 2 variants: either the strong core, lose torso variant or the lose foot variant. It combines movements of both. The idea is not to have immensely powerful hits but to hit. Because of this, instead of your fists, you'll usually hit the enemy with your fingers or palms. Your feet will rarely come in play and they'll be more of a support tool than a weapon. Evasion is a big focus, because the style requires high chakra control and precision. If you are being hit hard, the pain disrupts your focus and makes it harder to trigger the effects. In a way, it approaches fighting in a similar manner to Gentle Fist.

With me so far?
Yes I understand ^.^
 
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Now, one of the core things to estabilish is that normal chakra cannot trigger genjutsu just like that. You need to embue into your chakra a given set of properties. Your chakra needs to be in a certain frequency. Now, you achieve this frequency with a help of precise chakra control. Your chakra must be sharp, but it can't manifest that sharpness physically; it needs to be able to penetrate the enemy body without damaging any tissue or otherwise being visible. Because of this, you need to embue the same characteristics that electricity (and thus lightning release) have; it needs to be more akin of energy than a tangible thing. Your chakra must then vibrate and be sharp, without ever becoming physical. By doing this, your chakra will be able to permeate flesh without your opponent knowing and interact with his own chakra inside his chakra system. And that is your goal. Once you gain access to his chakra system in this way, you can induce fluctuations on it using your own chakra. And these fluctuations will be the ones to create the illusions.

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Ok, now, lets go into the physical. Lazy Fist is routed into a Souther Praying Manthis style of Kung Fu with traits more inherent of Drunken Fist. Its more of a neutral/defensive fighting style that focuses heavily on counter attack and defense rather than offensive moves. As such, most fighting stances are routed and wide, with flexed limbs, although with a loose "weight", making it possible to easily and rapidly adjust your position to incoming attacks. Rigidity is counter intuitive to Lazy Fist. Relaxation is key. Because of this, above average agility is needed as well as above average awareness of the field. However, despite all this, you must be "absent" minded to a certain degree to make sure you accomplish the correct level of "loseness".

Understood? If so, try a stance and show me some movements based on the above. (basically, describe a set of stances and movements based on the information I gave you).
 

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Ok, now, lets go into the physical. Lazy Fist is routed into a Souther Praying Manthis style of Kung Fu with traits more inherent of Drunken Fist. Its more of a neutral/defensive fighting style that focuses heavily on counter attack and defense rather than offensive moves. As such, most fighting stances are routed and wide, with flexed limbs, although with a loose "weight", making it possible to easily and rapidly adjust your position to incoming attacks. Rigidity is counter intuitive to Lazy Fist. Relaxation is key. Because of this, above average agility is needed as well as above average awareness of the field. However, despite all this, you must be "absent" minded to a certain degree to make sure you accomplish the correct level of "loseness".

Understood? If so, try a stance and show me some movements based on the above. (basically, describe a set of stances and movements based on the information I gave you).
An impatient student Chess might be but she steadily listened to what her sensei had to say. She was an aggressive type of fighter that she was, but for now she must try and do what is to done. She took a deep solid breath and relaxed her mind. Her mind was always thinking and processing thoughts but she wasn’t a stranger to being relaxed. She slide her right foot forward and slowly leaning her back though it was stiff, she tried again. Moving her foot forward she slowly and surely more relaxed, she bent her back left leg placing her palms out in front of her moving them slowly.

She came around and move her hands like small jabs towards a person but softly and pure. She moved her right leg back to the starting stance and lifting her left leg after returning it to the original spot took a stance with her left arm above head , curved downs while her right arm is extended outwards but with her hand curved inwards. She slowly placed her foot down and leaned forward keeping the same composure.

She kept repeating the motions for several minutes until she turned to her sensei to get his opinion on her movements.
 

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More relaxed. Wider stance. Lower your core and center yourself. You don't need to flail your arms around. Think more "dance" and less "seizure induced by alchool".
 

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More relaxed. Wider stance. Lower your core and center yourself. You don't need to flail your arms around. Think more "dance" and less "seizure induced by alchool".
XD Chess was slightly amused by the remarks but also annoyed but she did as she was told. She loosened her muscles and started to lose her general thinking process and decided to go with the flow. She took a deep breath and slides her left foot back once more, leaving her right foot slightly ahead and extended. She took her left and brought it towards her chest, followed by her right. She turns them outwards placing her right hand in the air infront her while her left one to the back.

She stops the stance and then comes back to her starting stance and extending her left leg outwards with her right foot back but learning against it , she places her hands infront of her moving them up and down, sliding her right hand along the left arm and placing it to her side but extended and relaxed, while her left hand is extended outwards, and pointed as she waits for her sensei’ next remarks.
 

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Better. Much better. Now, think fast! *throws kunai*
Without thinking too much; Chess say the kunai coming and with a simple turn off her right foot she slanted towards her right ride and returned to her starting as the kunai wooshed passed her. She turned towards Scorps sensei with a narrow look at him for trying to attack his sempai.
 

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Good! Perfect!

Now, go to my cj thread, post here every Lazy Fist Technique with a small explanation of each. Additionally, ask any question you might have about how they work.
 

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Good! Perfect!

Now, go to my cj thread, post here every Lazy Fist Technique with a small explanation of each. Additionally, ask any question you might have about how they work.
Genkotsu Namakemono: Sono Odori no Namakemono Wan | Lazy Fist: The Dance of The Lazy One
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: C-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description:
The basic stance of Lazy Fist were the user takes a deep breathe and relaxes his muscles and articulations, acquiring a lose, light stance, concentrating his weight on his right leg (or left) and having his left leg (or right) slightly bent and retracted. His arms close to his torso, flexed and with his knuckles facing inwards (middle fingers slightly protruding). By assuming this stance the user immediately becomes slightly faster, more agile and flexible. This basic stance enables the user to throw up to 2 hits (fist jabs or kicks) in quick succession. Each hit gives the enemy the sensation of being hit with sharp, thin, deep needles in the place of impact as a result of the D-Rank genjutsu that each hit produces. This is, like any other Lazy Fist technique, caused by the disturbance produced in the chakra flow upon impact in that specific place.

Note: Requires Lazy Fist training
Note2: Can only be taught by Scorps
Note3: Requires Genjutsu mastery

Genkotsu Namakemono: Yakedo Bachi no Okashii Chilli | Lazy Fist: The Burning Punishment of The Trickster Chilli
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description:
The user will assume the initial Lazy Fist stance, then, upon charging chakra into his index fingers (while using the reverse fist form, with the fists turned inside and the index fingers slightly protruding from the fist) will jab the enemy with a quick impact (or up to 3) in the shifoid appendix (the end of the sternum), disturbing the enemy's chakra flow and making him feel as if he's being burnt from inside, falling into a C-Rank Genjutsu.

Note: Requires Lazy Fist training
Note2: Can only be taught by Scorps
Note3: Requires Genjutsu mastery

Genkotsu Namakemono: Souhou Hebereke no Panda | Lazy Fist: The Touch of The Drunken Panda
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
Assuming the initial Lazy Fist stance but with his palms open, the user uses his Left hand to grab the enemy's right arm and pull him. As he charges chakra into his right palm, he does an open palm hit on the enemy's upper left chest (near the heart), disturbing the chakra flow in that area and sending the enemy back. This makes the enemy fall into a B-Rank painful genjutsu were he feels his chest tightening with severe pain, making him feel as if he's under a heart attack.

Note: Requires Lazy Fist training
Note2: Can only be taught by Scorps
Note3: If it connects it can only be used 4 times
Note4: Requires Genjutsu mastery

Genkotsu Namakemono: Sono Odori No Hebereke Moya | Lazy Fist: The Dance of the Drunken Haze
Type: Defensive
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description:
The masters of Lazy Fist developed this technique as an ability to defend against stronger taijutsu enemies and long range weapons. This technique uses the basic Chu Gar (Southern Praying Manthis) open stance, with arms close to the torso but slightly extended forwarded and either their fists directed down or with their open hands (fingers upwards and palms directed to himself), while having the legs in a strong, wide and grounded stance, mimicking the Praying Mantis. By using this stance the user is able to use his hands in wide, fluid movements to deflect incoming projectiles or taijutsu attacks directed at him. He must keep his hands coated in a layer of chakra that protects them while he deflects the projectiles or attacks. When used to defend against taijutsu attacks, each time the user deflects a punch or kick, upon contact with the enemy, he induces a B-Rank Genjutsu that produces a drunken haze-like effect. This numbs the enemies' senses and slows his movements at each blow deflected. Because of Lazy Fists inherent speed, this defensive stance is slightly faster than regular Taijutsu, enabling the user to counter multiple projectiles thrown at him. However, this is a purely defensive stance as it doesn't do damage to the enemy, only deflects his attacks.

Note: Requires Lazy Fist training
Note2: Can only be taught by Scorps
Note3: Can deflect any same or lower ranked Taijutsu attack (except gates)
Note4: Can be used to deflect or block Kenjutsu moves of the same or lower rank
Note5: Can be used to defend against C-Rank or lower elemental projectiles
Note6: Can be used to defend against basic weapons even if infused with chakra or poisoned (chakra coated hands protect the user)
Note7: Requires Genjutsu Mastery

Genkotsu Namakemono: Sono Bukotsu Zou No Sochi | Lazy Fist: The Clumsy Stomp of The Elephant
Type: Attack
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:
One of the most dangerous moves in Lazy Fist but also one of the simplest. The user focus a big amount of chakra on his palms, fingers, fists, feet, elbows or knees and hits the opponent up to 6 times. This disturbs the enemy's chakra flow and produces a deep, strong S-Rank illusion. This painful illusion makes the enemy feel an intense pain, as if the hit area was completly crushed. The enemy may even faint from the agonizing pain if he doesn't release the genjutsu. If the enemy looks or tries to feel the affected area he'll see/feel as if it was indeed completely crushed, making it hard to decipher/see through the illusion.

Note: Requires Lazy Fist training
Note2: Can only be taught by Scorps
Note3: Impact stance can be used without limit but, if connected, illusion only works twice
Note4: Requires Genjutsu Mastery

Genkotsu Namakemono: Sono Tonsou No Ranningu Panda | Lazy Fist: The Escape of the Running Panda
Type: Defensive
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description:
Perhaps the strongest of all of the Lazy Fist stances, this technique is a more advanced form of The Dance of The Drunken Haze, using the same Chu Gar (Southern Praying Manthis) stance with the same basic abilities but used to a much higher caliber. By using this stance the user is able to use his hands in wide, fluid movements to deflect incoming projectiles or taijutsu attacks directed at him. He must keep his hands coated in a layer of chakra that protects them while he deflects the projectiles or attacks. Upon contact with the enemy, the user induces a powerful S-Rank Genjutsu. This Genjutsu affects all of the enemy's senses, making him see the user disappear into a burst of bamboo leafs and even hear him run away. The enemy will even see and hear small signs of movement in the ground around him, further fueling the illusion that the user has ran with a full burst of speed away from him. This technique serves as the ultimate defense/escape for Lazy Fist Masters.

Note: Requires Lazy Fist training
Note2: The illusion effect only connects twice but the stance can be used without limit
Note3: Can only be taught by Scorps
Note4: Requires Genjutsu Mastery
Note5: Can deflect any S-Rank or lower Taijutsu attack (except gates)
Note6: Can be used to deflect or block Kenjutsu moves of the A-Rank or lower.
Note7: Can be used to defend against C-Rank or lower elemental projectiles within reason
Note8: Can be used to defend against basic weapons even if infused with chakra or poisoned (chakra coated hands protect the user)
Note9: The illusion only works in the turn its used (meaning that it ends the moment the following turn of the user begins), until its released or until the user makes a direct attack on the enemy, at which time he'll become visible again.

Genkotsu Namakemono: Sono Odori no Suisei Niku | Lazy Fist: The Dance of Decaying Flesh
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:
A stance that can be used in both defensive/counter attack and in attack moves. Using either the basic stance of Lazy Fist: The Dance of the Lazy One or the defensive stance of Lazy Fist: The Dance of the Drunken Haze, the user will hit the opponent with a maximum of 10 quick punches, jabs or kicks (or block up to 10 Taijutsu hits from the opponent) with enormous speed. Each place the user hits will make the enemy feel as if its decaying and rotting away into a putrid liquid, giving off a horrible smell. Each affected area will begin to spread slowly and engulf the surrounding tissue, making the enemy suffer excruciating pain. Off course, as all Lazy Fist moves, these effects are nothing more than illusions produced by the S-Rank Genjutsu that results from the blows.

Note: Requires Lazy Fist Training
Note2: Can only be taught by Scorps
Note3: Illusions will only work twice
Note4: Requires Genjutsu Mastery

Lazy Fist: The Dance of The Lazy One – This is pretty much the basic technique of the entire style, the user will attain the basic stance of Lazy Fist while relaxing all that cool jazz. The user gains a small boost in speed and agility. They will then launch two quick hits onto the enemy which in turn will induce a D-rank illusion where it feels like sharp needles has pierced into the skin of the area of impact. My question for this one is how fast the user gains in terms of speed in a numerical number if you can provide any.

Lazy Fist: The Burning Punishment of The Trickster - A rather simple technique using the reverse fist form of the basic stance, it induces a weak C-ranked illusion making them feel as if they are burning on the inside after jabbing them. Nothing too special about this one as its pretty straight forward.

Lazy Fist: The Touch of The Drunken Panda – An interesting one, the user will jab at the enemy inducing a B-ranked Genjutsu after hitting them near the heart which in turn the illusion makes them feel like they are under a heart attack. When the illusion is activate I assume they feel all the effects of a heart attack like cardiac arrest etc?

Lazy Fist: The Dance of the Drunken Haze – One of my personal fave techniques, as it serves as a counteract and defensive technique all in one. Can be used to block Taijutsu, Kenjutsu and also elemental projectiles. A truly defensive technique, my question lays in the genjutsu where ass how dull would their senses become with each hit? Say for instance I hit them a few times, would there perception be slowed so bad? And also does the slow movement affect them in reality as well through the hindering nature of the technique or is it just plainly illusionary effect?

Lazy Fist: The Clumsy Stomp of The Elephant – Another simple and straight forward technique but also one of my other faves. The user will touch the enemy and induce an illusion where they feel the area of impact had been crushed by the user. This is actually a very tricky technique as well as dependent on you hit lets say the wind pipe, the target could actually “pass out” from the immense pain i assume because it renders that area of impact useless. A very nice one

Lazy Fist: The Escape of the Running Panda – The advanced version of Drunken Haze, which all of my earlier comments are the same except the “gap” of which the technique can block is risen. This and the actual illusion is different as it makes the enemy think that the person is running ran away in a veil bamboo leafs and also masking it further as they “hear” me running lol

Lazy Fist: The Dance of Decaying Flesh – Last technique but none least, the user deals a combo attack onto the enemy using one the various forms and induces a powerful S-ranked illusion where the enemy sees the areas of impact from the 10 strikes being to melt away slowly leaving a putrid smell to them.
 
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