I have seen your work before but this is crap compared to them. Plain & simple! There is no composition at all, the render is completely unblended. And that two liquified yellow strips look too random. Background with a raw fractal, seriously? And yeah text sucks too. It looks like is your first try or you were trying to experiment smth.
I'm aware of all the mistakes I've made with this. It was moreso an experimental style and more of a learning experience rather than trying to make something which looks good.Yeah, that really isn't good - Stick to your usual way :}