L.E.D

[Omega]

LED
I'm a menace, I'm a monster
you the savior, you're the author
of history so I listen to what you say
Isolated, Cast Away
apologies to my Wilsons.
apologies for my lifestyle
You know we love feelin imprisoned
and I love getting hostile
you know i'll die for a dollar
but it won't die for me
green collars choke my mind
thank god for Abraham I'm free.
You see,
ethics don't matter when your eyes are green
that's what he thought before his blood was found in Toyota, under LED

I'd probably live forever
and Lord knows I'm beautiful
and who needs a powerful mind, a body is more useful
temple never desecrated as long as I get the usual
diamonds, rings, roses, appearance indisputable
integrity lacking, and my heart is slacking
but if I had a corvette on the beach i'll be soon relaxing
because to them I'm Aphrodite
and that's enough for me
but to him she was just another victim when he turned off the LED

Can't let it go
out of my life she is
I gave her the world but my world became his
Karama and Cupid waltzing on my brain
a cycle of violence, I'm aware of, but addictive is this game
burning down this road
no U turns anymore
The only six witnesses about to reload
I know its wrong but as I write
for one second imagine how we feel
Murder suicide Bermuda triangle for all to see
when the cops laughed at 3 bodies painting the streets under LED
~Fin~

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[Ryóma]

The writer in Omega is too good. U_U

 

[fiend]

I loved dude how you wrote 3 beautiful stories, in this absolutely brilliant poem of yours and connected them with deaths <3, the reference of Wilson from cast away, the mad who is drawn in the cycle of greed, the women who is vain because of her beauty and the hired gun and then the brilliant end which ties them =D.

Solid poem dude, Very good.

 

[Omega]

The writer in Omega is too good. U_U

LMAO, I appreciate the compliment man. xD, its a lot of experiences and situations that help me throw stuff together like this.

I loved dude how you wrote 3 beautiful stories, in this absolutely brilliant poem of yours and connected them with deaths, the reference of Wilson from cast away, the mad who is drawn in the cycle of greed, the women who is vain because of her beauty and the hired gun and then the brilliant end which ties them =D.

Solid poem dude, Very good.

Thanks man. (Wilson reference came out of nowhere. I just go with the flow of what pops into my head. Something kept telling me to drop that reference in so I did. xD) P.S I'll have to hire you as my poem decipherer. You understand everything Im trying to say in all of my poems. LOL
I was a little antsy for someone to read this because I was really really proud of this one due to the stories and their connection at the end. My style can be a bit different from traditional poetry at times but thanks for the feedback guys. Helps my creative writing moving forward; I wont change a thing. ^^