Kyuuketsuki: Fall of the original Sannin chapter 2

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Chapter 2: Hokage showdown. Legendary 8 triagrams
I was running to the Chunnin exam arena. As always I was late. I ran into the arena and of course my team and Ryuu sensei stood there waiting.

"You are as worthless as always," Saimen called out to me.

"Well sorry, not everybody has a short walk to town. Not to mention that I'm still numb from your genjutsu," I shot back.

"Well I'm sorry that you are so pathetic. Just get over it. It was a joke after all. Save your energy. You are going to need it today," she jeered back as Lord Second appeared behind us.

"I hope you all are ready. Who wants to go first?" Lord second asked.

"Shouldn't Saiman go first since he is the weakest? I dont want to weaken you so much that he can actually almost succeed," Saimen said with a giggle.

"That isn't very fair Saimen. I will go first Lord Hokage," Koden declared as he took a step forward. Saimen rolled her eyes and we all jumped up into the bleachers. Lord Hokage and Koden each a side. "Byakugan!" Koden screamed as the veins around his eyes enlarged. Lord Hokage took a slight stance.

Koden rushed forward with incredible speed. Lord Hokage was surprised by the speed. He took a more defensive stance. Saimen and I were not surprised and we could easily follow his movements as we all moved and faught at a similar speed. Sensei lagged a little behind us.

Koden rushed Lord Second with incredible speed. Lord Second barely dodged the impressive attack. Koden spun around with an impressive kick. Lord Second held out his arms to block and was kicked back about 10 feet.

"I will not limit myself to Taijutsu. Water style: Hardened Water drill!" Lord Second said as he made several handsigns and water formed around his hand forming a massive drill that was throne at Koden.

"Legendary 8 Triagrams palm Rotation," Koden screamed as he spun around. A massive sphere of chakra formed around him and colided with the drill. The water drill shattered and the resulting shockwave knocked back the Hokage.

Koden's techniques were named by his clan as the legendary gentle fist. Though many of them are the same as normal Hyuga jutsu, his are on a much greater scale. A normal palm rotation only is around the user. Koden's barely fit in the massive Stadium. Koden also has a massive reserve of chakra so he could use several massive techniques with little fatigue.

Koden took a gentle fist stance.

"Legendary 8 Triagrams: 1024 palms! If you arn't going to hold back Lord Hokage. Then neither will I" Koden declared as he rushed the Hokage. The 1024 palms technique is an enhanced version of the 64 palms techniques. The best Hyuga can take 64 palms and double it to make 128 palms. Koden can take it all the way up to 1024 attacks in just a few minutes. Constantly opening and closing chakra pores and doing incredible damage. On one of our past missions Koden took down an entire fortress and destroyed the surrounding area just by using this technique. And now he is moving to use it on the Hokage.

Koden moved in to strike. He started with two palms and doubled the number of hits with every set of strikes. Hitting the Hokage with his hands, fingers and even with kicks.

"Two palms. Four palms. 8 palms. 16 palms. 32 palms. 64 palms. 128 palms. 256 palms. 512 palms..." He said as he struck the helpless Hokage. He drew closer to his final strike. "Legendary 8 triagrams....ONE THOUSAND AND TWENTY FOUR PALMS!!!!" He screamed as his palm struck the Hokage's Heart. Lord Second flew back chakra began to leak out of his chakra pours. Though only Saimen and Koden could see it. I could feel the chakra leaking out of his body. Finally chakra exploded out of his body in a massive preasure wave. His body ripped apart!

Koden suddenly was knocked to the ground. He looked up to see Lord Second standing above him.

"How?" Koden said in amayzement.

"It was a water clone. You are fast, but not as fast as a space time ninjutsu. I warped above your blind spot so I could strike you before you could react. It was a good effort though," Hokage replied. He looked up to me and Saimen. "Your turn Saimen."

"I've been waiting to show off my skill," Saimen said as she jumped down and faced the Hokage.

(to be continued)
 
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