Konnichi wa! xlilyx here, back with Chapter Three of Fanfiction, Konoha’s Angel And Flower.
There were so many possible ways I thought up of how to do this chapter. It did take me a while to think which way was the best and the most entertaining at the same time. So here is the final result, I do hope it’s funny moments make a smile creep up on your face, the battles are engaging and the dialogue is clear and detailed. I apologize if it isn’t very good but I had some difficulty with this one and I also am sorry if the battle isn’t very impressive, it’s my first time writing up a battle. So I hope you enjoy it and please remember to comment at the end with any advice or message!
And finally, I'd like to thank EL MAGNIFICO, Hinata020 and uzumaki antonia for their contant support and help. And of course, a huge arigatou to everyone else who has viewed my Fanfiction and commented before, I wouldn't have had confidence in my work without all of you! :hug: <3
Summary:
15 years ago Tenshi, Konoha’s Angel, fell in battle, defeated by Kurama, the Nine Tailed Fox. Hana was a young, quiet and sweet Kunoichi close to this praised and adored Ninja. After the loss of Tenshi, Hana is now, 15 years later, a member of the organisation Akatsuki. Hana is now a soulless, silent and emotionless person. After causing a fight between the Akatsuki members, Pain informs Hana about her next mission, to bring the Jinchuriki of the Nine Tailed Fox, Naruto Uzumaki back to the hideout.
Hana is acquainted with Itachi Uchiha into Konoha to find and retrieve the Jinchuriki, Naruto Uzumaki. Tsunade is informed of the sudden entrance of the two Akatsuki members. Itachi and Hana bump into Team 7 consisting of Kakashi, Yamato, Sakura and Sai. A battle now commences…
Chapter Links:
Chapter One (Part One):
Chapter One (Part Two):
Chapter Two:
Thank you and I hope you enjoy chapter three! ^^ I apologize for any grammar mistakes and I think I'm finally getting the hang of this layout and less text. Have fun and thanks once more! ^_^
~Chapter Three: A Crushing Abyss~
Kakashi: Sakura! Sai! Get yourselves over to Lady Tsunade and inform her on the situation.
Sakura: But, Kakashi Sensei! You might-
Kakashi: Sakura, that’s an order from your Sensei.
(Sakura turns to Yamato, hoping for support)
Yamato: I’m not Captain Yamato anymore Sakura, listen to your Sensei now.
(Sakura begins to shake in fear as she peers over to the forming darkness beside the Uchiha)
Sai: Sakura, let’s go.
(Sakura nods unsteadily as the two teammates rush to the Hokage’s Residence)
Kakashi: Now that those two are out of the way, I can fight seriously, no holding back now.
Yamato: Didn’t want to worry the young adults did you, Kakashi?
(Kakashi smiles as he reveals his Sharingan, failing to gain any emotion from the two phantoms that stand before them)
Hana: Kakashi, I’ve never seen you look so serious. It’s a shame you and your dear village have nothing personal about me isn’t it? I bet you regret that now… don’t you?
Kakashi: It’s true. I had never witnessed Hana fight or ask anything personal. We have no information on what her attacks and powers would be like… but… I guess it has something to do with those black arms of hers…
(Hana waves her right hand around in the air, stopping to spread out her long, skeleton like fingers then pointing towards the two Jounin’s, saying in haunting whisper)
Hana: Hell’s Gate, open.
(Kakashi and Yamato look down as the ground beneath their feet rumble and shake violently to find a black abyss forming under them as giant, black hands drag them in slowly)
Yamato: Damn it, caught so soon! Well then I guess there’s no helping it.
(Yamato creates a long piece of wood from his palm which heads quickly towards Hana who jumps using two of her black hands into the air, elegantly landing beside Itachi’s right, dodging the attack)
(Kakashi grunts as he attempts to pull himself out as Hana only watches in entertainment, Itachi stares emotionlessly at the forming smile on Hana’s horrific clown like face)
Kakashi: If we don’t do something quickly, we’ll-
??????: Hey, Kakashi Sensei, Captain Yamato, what… are you guys doing!?
(An orange suited young man with bright yellow hair happily skips along the Konoha street carrying a freshly made ramen pot in his hands, heading towards the two Jounin. His delighted voice turns to shock as he shrieks at the view of his two teachers stuck into the black hole in the ground)
Kakashi: Oh no…!
Yamato: Damn it all, now of all times, you decide to show up now!?
(The young boy now looks confusedly and suspiciously at the two grown men, laying his newly made ramen pot down next to him, oblivious to the two Akatsuki members watching his every stupid move as both Sensei’s yell at him to run away)
(As Hana slowly walks towards the orange and yellow burst of colours, she stumbles back, gasping at the sudden impact of a certain beings Chakra)
Itachi: Can you sense it Hana? That boy’s chakra… The Chakra of Naruto Uzumaki’s is...
(Hana’s head quickly turns back to the young man attempting to pull Yamato and Kakashi out of Hell’s Gate, ignoring his teachers begging and angry shrieks of disapproval)
(Hana’s shocked and displeased expression turns to an incredibly large grin, overtaking her senses and feelings as two big, black hands appear on the right and left side of Naruto, about to crash together)
???????: Oh no you don’t!
(Hana’s focus is turned towards the sky as a massive kick shakes the ground she lightly stands under)
(In a fog of crashed earth and rumble, Itachi appears holding a blank faced Hana, quietly angered with the intrusion and Itachi’s response. Hana’s black hands retreat to her body as Kakashi and Yamato regain their positions in relief.)
Hana: Itachi, you didn’t have to move me. I could have blocked that attack, I sensed her Chakra from a mile away. You know that already, don’t you?
Itachi: Blocked that woman’s strength? Even though you knew she was attacking, there’s no way you could have blocked that.
(As the two Akatsuki members quietly, calmly and like a pair of manikins, argue with one another, Naruto finally notices the enemy)
Naruto: Akatsuki!? How long have you been here!?
(Kakashi lets out a heavy and loud sigh as Yamato face palms in embarrassment)
(Naruto now also notices his spilt ramen all over the rocky, cold floor thanks to the explosion to the ground and begins sobbing at the sight of his lost lunch meal)
(Hana growls at the Jinchuriki's poor actions and turns to the angered blonde standing before her like a fierce lion ready to maul it's prey)
Hana: Anyway, who is that woman?
Itachi: …
Tsunade: Fifth Hokage, Lady Tsunade! I will protect my village no matter what the dangers and you will never get your hands on Konoha’s Naruto Uzumaki when I’m in the way!
(Naruto begins frantically hugging his spilt ramen, crying dramatically at his ‘loss’. Kakashi and Yamato move to stand besides Tsunade)
Tsunade: Get ready Akatsuki, here we come!
Chapter Three: A Crushing Abyss ~END~
Thank you so much for reading and please feel free to comment with ideas, opinions and advice. I’m very grateful and I hope you all look forward to Chapter Four. I apologize again if this isn't as impressive as my past chapters.
Take care and have an awesome day!
There were so many possible ways I thought up of how to do this chapter. It did take me a while to think which way was the best and the most entertaining at the same time. So here is the final result, I do hope it’s funny moments make a smile creep up on your face, the battles are engaging and the dialogue is clear and detailed. I apologize if it isn’t very good but I had some difficulty with this one and I also am sorry if the battle isn’t very impressive, it’s my first time writing up a battle. So I hope you enjoy it and please remember to comment at the end with any advice or message!
And finally, I'd like to thank EL MAGNIFICO, Hinata020 and uzumaki antonia for their contant support and help. And of course, a huge arigatou to everyone else who has viewed my Fanfiction and commented before, I wouldn't have had confidence in my work without all of you! :hug: <3
Summary:
15 years ago Tenshi, Konoha’s Angel, fell in battle, defeated by Kurama, the Nine Tailed Fox. Hana was a young, quiet and sweet Kunoichi close to this praised and adored Ninja. After the loss of Tenshi, Hana is now, 15 years later, a member of the organisation Akatsuki. Hana is now a soulless, silent and emotionless person. After causing a fight between the Akatsuki members, Pain informs Hana about her next mission, to bring the Jinchuriki of the Nine Tailed Fox, Naruto Uzumaki back to the hideout.
Hana is acquainted with Itachi Uchiha into Konoha to find and retrieve the Jinchuriki, Naruto Uzumaki. Tsunade is informed of the sudden entrance of the two Akatsuki members. Itachi and Hana bump into Team 7 consisting of Kakashi, Yamato, Sakura and Sai. A battle now commences…
Chapter Links:
Chapter One (Part One):
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Chapter One (Part Two):
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Chapter Two:
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Thank you and I hope you enjoy chapter three! ^^ I apologize for any grammar mistakes and I think I'm finally getting the hang of this layout and less text.
Have fun and thanks once more! ^_^~Chapter Three: A Crushing Abyss~
Kakashi: Sakura! Sai! Get yourselves over to Lady Tsunade and inform her on the situation.
Sakura: But, Kakashi Sensei! You might-
Kakashi: Sakura, that’s an order from your Sensei.
(Sakura turns to Yamato, hoping for support)
Yamato: I’m not Captain Yamato anymore Sakura, listen to your Sensei now.
(Sakura begins to shake in fear as she peers over to the forming darkness beside the Uchiha)
Sai: Sakura, let’s go.
(Sakura nods unsteadily as the two teammates rush to the Hokage’s Residence)
Kakashi: Now that those two are out of the way, I can fight seriously, no holding back now.
Yamato: Didn’t want to worry the young adults did you, Kakashi?
(Kakashi smiles as he reveals his Sharingan, failing to gain any emotion from the two phantoms that stand before them)
Hana: Kakashi, I’ve never seen you look so serious. It’s a shame you and your dear village have nothing personal about me isn’t it? I bet you regret that now… don’t you?
Kakashi: It’s true. I had never witnessed Hana fight or ask anything personal. We have no information on what her attacks and powers would be like… but… I guess it has something to do with those black arms of hers…
(Hana waves her right hand around in the air, stopping to spread out her long, skeleton like fingers then pointing towards the two Jounin’s, saying in haunting whisper)
Hana: Hell’s Gate, open.
(Kakashi and Yamato look down as the ground beneath their feet rumble and shake violently to find a black abyss forming under them as giant, black hands drag them in slowly)
Yamato: Damn it, caught so soon! Well then I guess there’s no helping it.
(Yamato creates a long piece of wood from his palm which heads quickly towards Hana who jumps using two of her black hands into the air, elegantly landing beside Itachi’s right, dodging the attack)
(Kakashi grunts as he attempts to pull himself out as Hana only watches in entertainment, Itachi stares emotionlessly at the forming smile on Hana’s horrific clown like face)
Kakashi: If we don’t do something quickly, we’ll-
??????: Hey, Kakashi Sensei, Captain Yamato, what… are you guys doing!?
(An orange suited young man with bright yellow hair happily skips along the Konoha street carrying a freshly made ramen pot in his hands, heading towards the two Jounin. His delighted voice turns to shock as he shrieks at the view of his two teachers stuck into the black hole in the ground)
Kakashi: Oh no…!
Yamato: Damn it all, now of all times, you decide to show up now!?
(The young boy now looks confusedly and suspiciously at the two grown men, laying his newly made ramen pot down next to him, oblivious to the two Akatsuki members watching his every stupid move as both Sensei’s yell at him to run away)
(As Hana slowly walks towards the orange and yellow burst of colours, she stumbles back, gasping at the sudden impact of a certain beings Chakra)
Itachi: Can you sense it Hana? That boy’s chakra… The Chakra of Naruto Uzumaki’s is...
(Hana’s head quickly turns back to the young man attempting to pull Yamato and Kakashi out of Hell’s Gate, ignoring his teachers begging and angry shrieks of disapproval)
(Hana’s shocked and displeased expression turns to an incredibly large grin, overtaking her senses and feelings as two big, black hands appear on the right and left side of Naruto, about to crash together)
???????: Oh no you don’t!
(Hana’s focus is turned towards the sky as a massive kick shakes the ground she lightly stands under)
(In a fog of crashed earth and rumble, Itachi appears holding a blank faced Hana, quietly angered with the intrusion and Itachi’s response. Hana’s black hands retreat to her body as Kakashi and Yamato regain their positions in relief.)
Hana: Itachi, you didn’t have to move me. I could have blocked that attack, I sensed her Chakra from a mile away. You know that already, don’t you?
Itachi: Blocked that woman’s strength? Even though you knew she was attacking, there’s no way you could have blocked that.
(As the two Akatsuki members quietly, calmly and like a pair of manikins, argue with one another, Naruto finally notices the enemy)
Naruto: Akatsuki!? How long have you been here!?
(Kakashi lets out a heavy and loud sigh as Yamato face palms in embarrassment)
(Naruto now also notices his spilt ramen all over the rocky, cold floor thanks to the explosion to the ground and begins sobbing at the sight of his lost lunch meal)
(Hana growls at the Jinchuriki's poor actions and turns to the angered blonde standing before her like a fierce lion ready to maul it's prey)
Hana: Anyway, who is that woman?
Itachi: …
Tsunade: Fifth Hokage, Lady Tsunade! I will protect my village no matter what the dangers and you will never get your hands on Konoha’s Naruto Uzumaki when I’m in the way!
(Naruto begins frantically hugging his spilt ramen, crying dramatically at his ‘loss’. Kakashi and Yamato move to stand besides Tsunade)
Tsunade: Get ready Akatsuki, here we come!
Chapter Three: A Crushing Abyss ~END~
Thank you so much for reading and please feel free to comment with ideas, opinions and advice. I’m very grateful and I hope you all look forward to Chapter Four.
I apologize again if this isn't as impressive as my past chapters.Take care and have an awesome day!
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