Kishimoto's one major flaw.

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Personally i believe this is kishimoto's one major flaw, unlike Bleach and One piece. He chose to focus too much on the things that solely included the main antagonist and the protagonist. I am aware he focused on the shinobi alliance and etc. However i am referring to the start of the manga.

For example, when Tsunade said she couldn't afford to send jounins with NAruto and etc to go get sasuke.. he should have shown where those jounins were and the scale/scope of that situation and the effect by it..

Now you may say why is it a flaw? Because you see people tend to simply think the main things in that manga are simply happening around Naruto.. while that is not true. It wasn't until the Save Gaara arc, that "main" things started happening around Naruto. By the main things i'm referring to the MAJOR , IMPACTFUL things of the shinobi world, like the deals of the Kages and so on.


If Kishimoto had given time for that it would've been a grander manga than it is right now. Sure it would have had chapters of flashback like one piece, about characters that ain't the main protagonist or antagonist.. However, that is needed if you wish to put depth into the manga.


What do you think of this? Do you think his manga would have changed for the good or the worst?
 

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In the end nothing matters if it's not related to Naruto himself
 

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Kishi already said he didn't think ahead and wings it as he writes
 

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I think his biggest flaws are failing at making Sakura a good MC and failing at focusing on side characters more
 

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i agree however Naruto>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>light years One piece and bleach.

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So what can we do about it !!! There is nothing we can do. its better to acept the way it is or stop reading
 

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1- Naruto is still a better overall manga than OP...
2- Definitely Naruto lacks some aspects in which other mangas are better...

I agree with you somehow...
 

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Kishimoto's flaw is drinkin' too much sake while making chapters
 

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This is one of the great things about Oda he concentrates on the manga as a whole developing a lot of characters.. kishi concentrates of a few and the story around only a few characters.. naruto pales in comparison to Onepiece
 

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Bleach > Naruto = Yes
One Piece > Naruto = Arguable
 

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Varitey and depth in side characters developments.
 

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Even tho I've stopped watching OP for a few years now, I still say the story is much better fome than Naruto's is
 

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- Yo for the one comparing the mangas.. they are all equal.... Bleach sh*ts on both in fighting.. Naruto has better character.. One piece has a grander story.. Why the hell are you trying to compare which one is better?

- My point of comparison was to say what Naruto could've done better.

- For the kishimoto lovers who are gettin hurt, i can't discuss what could have made it a better manga? am i saying it sucks? no. Its something i would have liked to see in Kishimoto's manga.. that is all.

Why don't you guys focus on simply discussing the topic, instead of going offtopic? Thank you very much sistas and brothas.
 

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Indeed manga needed to be broader and it would have been good if it had more randomness.Not only in the past even now it is werid that just to some kids are in frontline of all of the shinobis in the battlefield.
 

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- Yo for the one comparing the mangas.. they are all equal.... Bleach sh*ts on both in fighting.. Naruto has better character.. One piece has a grander story.. Why the hell are you trying to compare which one is better?

- My point of comparison was to say what Naruto could've done better.

- For the kishimoto lovers who are gettin hurt, i can't discuss what could have made it a better manga? am i saying it sucks? no. Its something i would have liked to see in Kishimoto's manga.. that is all.

Why don't you guys focus on simply discussing the topic, instead of going offtopic? Thank you very much sistas and brothas.

That's what happens if you mention all three in the same thread fella
 

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What the show misses is the feeling of Naruto being a underdog, now he's so strong it's not as cool as before
 

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I honestly have to say kishi isn't the best of story writers. Seriously, probably half of his concepts are stolen/used from either DBZ, HxH, or East Asian religions and myths.
 

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Somewhat..

The main story should have been missions they were sent on, with the Akatsuki somehow mixing into the story itself. Then Kishi could focusing on other characters while keeping Naruto apart of the story.
 

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His flaw was making Hashirama exist.
Come at me, bro!
 
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