Kishimoto has proven that he's a horrible amateur writer!

[Kages]

He's actually a great writer

 

[KakuzuHatesMoney]

You smell OP. You smell of damp socks filled with pond water.

 

[rollin]

You don't know what you're even talking about
The uchihas are distantly related to the older son who inherited eyes,powerful chakra,and yin chakra
When sasuke first awakened his ms Karin kept noticing his chakra getting colder,darker,and eviler
Yin symbolizes cold darkness and evil so the special chakra that gets released in their brain is yin chakra which makes them like that

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Notice how Atsui said his chakra resembles genjutsu
The rest what you said is your opinion so don't think your opinion is fact
The only reason you think Kishi is a bad writer is when you put him on the same level of thinking as yours

 

[cptenn94]

1) the more love an uchia has the stronger he gets???? Are you fking serious kishimoto? is this how you explain "troll" the source of strength of the uchia?? Retarded!

2) the deeper their love and despair the stronger they get??? shouldn't that be the case with any shinobi? ha (uchia booty lover).

3) their brains release hormones to their optic nerves and unlock their sharingans blah blah blah??? Just stop please? stop pulling crap out ya @ss!!! Just plainly say that, the uchia are all you care about and they are your favorite creation, and that you're going to give em even more hax powers, even though they are already at god level compared to other hopeless and helpless clans.

4) portraying the First as a joker! really? you can't even hide your negative feelings towards the non-uchias especially the Senjus!!!

5) Minato speaking with most respect to that trash oroshimaru, but turns into a cocky @ss when speaking to Hashirama? really?!, the level of disrespect towards the Senju is just retarded!!!

I seriously don't understand, how could anyone that is not an uchia fan read this crap of a manga?? The writer himself is an uchia booty licker, who's been making them uchias godlier chapter after chapter with all the crappy retarded explanations and hax powers; his tiny brain could come up with "optic nerves" hahahaha lol.

My verdict on Kishimoto as a writer: AWFUL!!!!

Okay if kishi is so bad, why are you a member of one of his FAN BASES, and why do you read naruto period? WHy dont you just go make your own manga, and prove kishi is wrong(if you can get more that 100 people to follow your manga i would be amazed.

NO kishi isnt perfect, but he keeps us entertained. You shouldve been haveing this wtf moment when you first saw orochimaru. A random snake guy, who steals bodies? In a ninja world? Grow a pair, and just chill.

Now i will rebuke your statements.

1 Its not to more love an uchiha has the stronger he gets. Not every uchiha was able to get a ms, or even a sharingan. The uchiha only get sharingan, through the anger and pain they feel(from haveing such strong feelings in the begining). Quit talking like ms is a common thing. Of a clan of at least 50 members, only like 6 have gotten ms. The uchiha are not that incredibly op.

2 Uchiha cherish their bonds more than others, also they inherited the sages eyes. The special chakra that triggers the sharingan, is only possible for an uchiha to use, because it is part of his bloodline. Therofore, that is why a non uchiha cant use sharingan.

3 Only 6 uchiha have hax powers. Out of a clan of at least 50. At least kishi made a explanation for how the sharingan is formed, rather than a "if a uchiha gets mad, he gets a special eye" no the explantion isnt perfect, but be grateful kishi explained it at all.

4 The first as a "joker" no....he is simply aloof, and goofy. Why should he be all emo and dull like the other kages and like madara. Also he provides a bit of comic relief. He is only that way when he relaxes, and isnt serious. When in battle he goes boss mode.
(like naruto , is goofy, but when he fought pain he was dead serious, and vs obito dead serious)

5 Orochimaru was still in the village when minato was alive. Minato is unaware of the crimes that oro has done.(as far as we know) Even if he did know, minato still respects oros power. he wasnt being cocky at all to the senju...



In summary, if you hate kishi so much leave this base and never come back, until you accept that kishi may not be perfect but he does a good job. If kishi is such an ameratuer how come he makes at least 10 times what you make, and his "writing" has been going on for more than 10 years. Kishis job is not to find a way to make every single reader happy, and tell his story the way they want, his job is to tell the story the way he wants to and has planned to.

 

[cptenn94]

btw , im sure if you wrote naruto, it wouldnt have gotten past 2 chapters before people got bored.

 

[L Lawliet]

You call Kishimoto an awful writer, but yet your sorry ass can't write one single page....come back when your Manga is at 619 chapters and comes in #4 place as one of the best selling Manga.

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one of the longest running most popular anime/manga of all time...........ya hes an amateur haha

i never got why ppl watch and read anime they dont like just os they can cry about it

Neither did I. It's quite contradictory.

Oh the feels.

If you don't like it, don't read it, quit complaining on a FORUM, and do something productive with your life. Geez

Ikr? Everybody is entitled to an opinion, but some opinions we can do very well without.

How about you stop reading it since you don't like it,gtfo and stop bitching around to people who actually like it??
How does this sound??

It sounds like perfection. I wish he and people like him listened to that advice.

He's actually a great writer

I think so too. Despite me wishing he had done some things differently.

 

[7th Biggest OP Fan]

He stopped caring about the story imo and is just trying to fit all the pieces together and end it. I heard he wants to hurry and finish up with Naruto so he can write a sports manga. He isn't an amateur. He has the experiences to not be called that. He's a good writer, just not great. Naruto is in almost everyone's top 10 list for a reason. If he was so bad, no one would be reading it.

 

[yellowxflash]

I think its very ****

 

[L Lawliet]

Okay if kishi is so bad, why are you a member of one of his FAN BASES, and why do you read naruto period? WHy dont you just go make your own manga, and prove kishi is wrong(if you can get more that 100 people to follow your manga i would be amazed.

NO kishi isnt perfect, but he keeps us entertained. You shouldve been haveing this wtf moment when you first saw orochimaru. A random snake guy, who steals bodies? In a ninja world? Grow a pair, and just chill.

Now i will rebuke your statements.

1 Its not to more love an uchiha has the stronger he gets. Not every uchiha was able to get a ms, or even a sharingan. The uchiha only get sharingan, through the anger and pain they feel(from haveing such strong feelings in the begining). Quit talking like ms is a common thing. Of a clan of at least 50 members, only like 6 have gotten ms. The uchiha are not that incredibly op.

2 Uchiha cherish their bonds more than others, also they inherited the sages eyes. The special chakra that triggers the sharingan, is only possible for an uchiha to use, because it is part of his bloodline. Therofore, that is why a non uchiha cant use sharingan.

3 Only 6 uchiha have hax powers. Out of a clan of at least 50. At least kishi made a explanation for how the sharingan is formed, rather than a "if a uchiha gets mad, he gets a special eye" no the explantion isnt perfect, but be grateful kishi explained it at all.

4 The first as a "joker" no....he is simply aloof, and goofy. Why should he be all emo and dull like the other kages and like madara. Also he provides a bit of comic relief. He is only that way when he relaxes, and isnt serious. When in battle he goes boss mode.
(like naruto , is goofy, but when he fought pain he was dead serious, and vs obito dead serious)

5 Orochimaru was still in the village when minato was alive. Minato is unaware of the crimes that oro has done.(as far as we know) Even if he did know, minato still respects oros power. he wasnt being cocky at all to the senju...



In summary, if you hate kishi so much leave this base and never come back, until you accept that kishi may not be perfect but he does a good job. If kishi is such an ameratuer how come he makes at least 10 times what you make, and his "writing" has been going on for more than 10 years. Kishis job is not to find a way to make every single reader happy, and tell his story the way they want, his job is to tell the story the way he wants to and has planned to.

And so this thread is officially trash.

 

[Imperius]

ok, so i know (in my opinion) kishi might make bad moves, but he's not that bad, naruto is a good anime, but it's overrated

 

[avenged sevenfold]

1st learn to spell
2nd if kishi is a terrible writer why read the manga
3rd kishi is the writer he is allowed to have favourite characters/clans
4th kishi is the writer he is allowed to portray the characters the way he wants

 

[Omnipotent]

Bashing...

 

[CrimsonFire]

Big mistake saying that on NarutoBase, I'm just saying.

 

[~MC117~]

I disagree about him being an amateur writer and hashirama's personality because I actually like hashirama the way he is now but I agree about the uchihas, kishi made them the most retarded characters in Naruto even the way they get their powerups is retarded and the sad thing is that it seems that he actually likes them over almost every other characters in the series.

 

[supino]

This is very rude! Probably most fans who have followed the story for more than a couple of years, let alone longer, have some complains but Kishimoto has never really done anything to let down his audience to such an extent. It's one thing expressing a view or even criticism and another calling a quite decent mangaka an amateur...

 

[itachi1000]

All your doing is just hating on Kishi and that's it.

 

[Currahee]

If you don't like it stop reading simple as that don't make a thread bashing the author for writing his story the way he wants to not the way some unimportant nobody like you wants it.

 

[webhero]

1) the more love an uchia has the stronger he gets???? Are you fking serious kishimoto? is this how you explain "troll" the source of strength of the uchia?? Retarded!

2) the deeper their love and despair the stronger they get??? shouldn't that be the case with any shinobi? ha (uchia booty lover).

3) their brains release hormones to their optic nerves and unlock their sharingans blah blah blah??? Just stop please? stop pulling crap out ya @ss!!! Just plainly say that, the uchia are all you care about and they are your favorite creation, and that you're going to give em even more hax powers, even though they are already at god level compared to other hopeless and helpless clans.

4) portraying the First as a joker! really? you can't even hide your negative feelings towards the non-uchias especially the Senjus!!!

5) Minato speaking with most respect to that trash oroshimaru, but turns into a cocky @ss when speaking to Hashirama? really?!, the level of disrespect towards the Senju is just retarded!!!

I seriously don't understand, how could anyone who is not an uchia fan read this crap of a manga?? The writer himself is an uchia booty licker, who's been making them uchias godlier chapter after chapter with all the crappy retarded explanations and hax powers; his tiny brain could come up with "optic nerves" hahahaha lol.

My verdict on Kishimoto as a writer: AWFUL!!!!

You made some good points. The power of love **** is kishi's worst plot device yet. Uchiha's are the main characters and naruto and co are just supporting.

 

[EliteRamenNinja]

Kishimoto: makes one of the most popular manga's ever, has millions of fans, became incredibly rich thanks to Naruto, ...

-> OP says he can't write.

Le me:

 

[SIR HERDERP PRESIDERP SDO]

Kishimoto has proven that he's a horrible amateur writer!

Then you have not read Stephanie Meyer

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