[Fantasy] Kiryoku: [Chapter: 02] "Home."

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I was kind of busy and unmotivated these past few days, so I barely had time to write this chapter. :sweat:

Finally got some motivation, and now here it is. :)

Enjoy. :yay:
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Chapter 2: Home

Aiko looks at her notes again and flips through the pages and reads the next primary objective she needs to do.

Aiko: "Objective #2: Get Ren Kagome to join Kiryoku."

Aiko: ...

Aiko stares at her paper with a dumbfounded look, and wonders how she would be able to make Ren join Kiryoku, He still doesn't know anything about what Kiryoku is or what their objectives are. With this in mind, Aiko jumps from the rooftop and presents a yell to Ren.

Aiko: Hey you!

Ren: What now...

Ren: !?

Ren turns around to see her hair flowing with the wind in the dawn sky, his stern but surprised look was locked but not secure with her eyes. His thoughts of her the whole time has come to fruition with her in front of him, but with all of this in mind, Aiko still goes through with her objective.

Aiko: You felt it too, didn't you?

Ren: !?

Ren: You mean...

Ren took a deep breath and continued his speech, at this point he needed to confirm if what he felt that time is real or not, but what happens then isn't what he was expecting.

Ren: Did your relatives die in the war?

Aiko: It's not safe here for you anymore.

Ren: DON'T CHANGE THE SUBJECT!!!

Aiko: You have killed a high-ranking soldier of Libertatis Potentia, when that news reaches their headquarters, they will come find you.

Ren moves his body position to his location while walking very slowly almost as if he's enjoying the sunset.

Ren: Sorry, I have no intention of leaving this city, not until I become a soldier of Tenebris.

Aiko: ...

Aiko smiles and looks at her jot notes once more, her slight smile indicates that she has something up her sleeve.

Aiko: Just as planned...

3 hours later

Ren sits in his bedroom contemplating what happened 3 hours before. His sick green colored room is filled with different items such as ramen cups, banana peels, pillows and several other things on his carpet floor, The product of living alone.

Ren: ...

Aiko (In Ren's thoughts): You felt it too, didn't you?

Ren (In thoughts): I'm not going to get anywhere if I keep thinking about this.

Ren get's up from his bed and goes to a shelf revealing two familiar figures. He strokes the frame of the picture and smiles

Ren: Right, Mom and Dad?

Just then, a knock was made on Ren's door, much to his surprise. He didn't make any hesitation to open it, since this was the first knock he has ever gotten in the house since he moved in. Much to this concern, it might have been better if he was prepared. As he is about to reach his hand to the door, his freight suddenly stops when he reaches the gold handle. He twists it with some hesitation, it reveals 50 guard-looking people front and back on his door step all wearing a crest of the Libertatis Potentia on their chestplate, with middle-aged man in front of all of them, he clears his throat and speaks.

Captain of Grunt squad: Are you Ren Kagome?

Ren answers his question with some hesitation, he was never able to do anything with a bunch of people in front of his eyes, unless it had to do with fighting.

Ren: Y-yes...

Captain of Grunt squad: We have receive reports that you defeated one of ours, You have been trialed an immediate execution.

Ren: What!?

At this point, Ren's heart was thumping four thumps per second. The grunts tried to grab his hands but he resisted, One guard tried to surpress him, but Ren easily let's go of one of the grunts grasp and punched him. Ren tries to run into his house to get in his weapons but the leader simply strokes his hand firmly on Ren's shoulder to stop him immediately.

Captain of Grunt squad: You're not going anywhere.

Ren becomes afraid of the face the grunt is making, dawn has already fallen and now he may not have anyone to call for help, this might be the end for him.

Ren (In thoughts): This might be the end for me...

Ren looks up to the sky and contemplates.

Ren(In thoughts): Mom, Dad...I'm sorry I wasn't able to live up to your expectations, and your dreams...

Just then, the grunt leader picked up a spear from the soldier Ren easily beat and attempted to pierce him with it. Ren closed his eyes and smiled, but when the spear was about to reach him, the grunt had a bullet shot into him, The shot of a pistol.

Ren: !?

Through the bullet hole, a girl with the same appearance three hours before, stands holding a two guns in her hand, The third appearance of Aiko Yukimura.

Ren: !?

Ren: It's you again!

Aiko: Yuzuki! Riku! I leave the rest to you!

?: Got it, Aiko-chan!~~

?: Why do I have to be dragged into this...

Out of the bushes reveal two teenagers, a boy and a girl. A girl with pink medium-length hair with pink eyes and a boy with spiked gray hair and brown slanted eyes. Ren moves out of their way from shock and starts looking around in freight.

Ren: !?

Yuzuki throws 7 kunai knives at 7 Libertatis grunts that pierce them, she throws a paper bomb at the floor at the center of them, The paper bomb explodes, exploding them to pieces. Meanwhile, Riku grabs a scythe from his back and continuously slashes the Libertatis grunts with his scythe decapitating and stabbing them endlessly with the end of the weapon, this leaves ten of the grunts retreating to their base. But just as they tried to run, They are burned to death with 10 arrows shot simultaneously at them. A teen with medium-length-ed hair jumps down from a tree at the direction he shot the guards from and stands in front of Ren.

Kenzo: Sorry, but I can't let you pass.

Ren runs infront of Kenzo, and realizes it was his best friend who killed those grunts, at this point he had already reached his breaking point.

Ren: KENZO!?!?

Kenzo: Sorry, Ren. Everything that just happened will be explained soon.

?: You aren't safe here anymore.

Ren: ?...

Footsteps from the shadows start to reveal a women with a sniper on her back, she had long, violet hair and purple eyes. As she walked, the members of the group stare at her sternly.

Aiko: Captain Satsuki, It went exactly as you planned it out to be!

Satsuki: I knew it would Aiko, Thanks to you.

Aiko blushes at her captains praise as she walks by her giving her a pat on the head.

Ren: Can someone explain to me what's going on here!?

Satsuki: We will, soon.

Satsuki: For starters, you won't be able to live here anymore. The Libertatis Potentia have already recorded you in their books, you aren't safe to live as a fellow citizen.

Ren: !?

Satsuki extends her hand to Ren, implying he should grab it.

Satsuki: Come with us to our headquarters, you'll be safer there.

Riku walks out of Ren's house and grabs two red and blue hilted Katana's from it.

Riku: Hey! I found two Katana's in his house.

Ren: WHY ARE YOU IN MY HOUSE IN THE FIRST PLACE!?

Satsuki: I guess that settles it.

All the members gather in a line formation, Riku throws the two katana's into Ren's hand and joins the line.

All: Welcome to Kiryoku!

Ren: WHY IS THIS HAPPENING!?

To be continued...

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I am officially reeled in. The dialogue style is very amazing too. Interesting chapter and I'm glad to see there's a sniper :flowers! Awaiting the next chap bro. :win:
 

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I'm officially hooked on this story. :yayy: it was so funny at the end when Riku went into Ren's house and got his Katanas and Ren freaked out XD great story, great writing, and humor too! I can't wait for the next chapter! =D
 

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Should have named the main char Run rather than Ren. Also give him shoulder length blonde hair and white angel wings.
 

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A goddamn scythe?? Riku sounds like SUCH a badass. :win: And Ren seeing Kenzo again was pretty unexpected, so I'm excited to see where that goes! O_O Another great chapter!! I can't wait for the next one! :yay:
 

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Ehhhh... no fair RasenToad-chan :T_T:
;)

I'm officially hooked on this story. :yayy: it was so funny at the end when Riku went into Ren's house and got his Katanas and Ren freaked out XD great story, great writing, and humor too! I can't wait for the next chapter! =D
Everything you stated get's even better as the story progresses. :yay:

Thanks.

Should have named the main char Run rather than Ren. Also give him shoulder length blonde hair and white angel wings.
No. :|

A goddamn scythe?? Riku sounds like SUCH a badass. :win: And Ren seeing Kenzo again was pretty unexpected, so I'm excited to see where that goes! O_O Another great chapter!! I can't wait for the next one! :yay:
Trust me, he'll get even more badass as the story progresses. ;)

Thanks, Might write up chapter 3 soon during this week. :yay:
 
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