Kirikoe Vs Souji - Closed

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Kirikoe Katsuryoku - in need of update
Rei's R&R
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Grassy terrain with random ruins poking out here and there covered in vines and plants


Feel free to take the first move =]
 

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Onoki bio ("The Hierophant" in my sig)

I'm a little rusty too, since I haven't had a full battle in a while. Let's make this fun for both of us ^_^




Onoki made his way to a grassy oasis in the Land of Wind. He was invited here by a fellow Suna shinobi, Kirikoe Katsuryoku.

Upon arriving, he noted the greenery; a rare sight. There were vines and plants among the ruins. What was the story behind this, he wondered?

Mid-range of him, Kirikoe stood, looking as youthful and charismatic as ever. However, his true intention was seen through his body language; it was unmistakable. Onoki grumbled a little as he rubbed his back. He chuckled sardonically.

"Kid, you brought me all the way out here to spar? Hmph. I suppose I could use a little exercise. Don't hold back, because I won't!"

Without hesitation, the old man weaved a handseal and formed two gigantic rock sections that emerged from Kirikoe's left and right, intending to sandwich him with crushing force. However, right before the Katsuryoku would be completely crushed, stone spikes would erupt from each rock section, which would not only make the bedrock coffin tight, but spiky as well.

Pulling out a kunai, Onoki then breathed wind chakra into it, surrounding it with a greenish-white aura. This increased its cutting power and range. He would then throw it, aimed directly at Kirikoe's chest. This would happen as the kid was already likely crushed by the spiky coffin, with Onoki exploiting the gap in between the two rock sections to precisely aim his weapon.


(Doton: Ganban Kyu) - Earth Release: Bedrock Coffin
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the Rat hand seal, the user to control multiple sections of rock and move them around their opponent. The user then forms two gigantic sections that crush the opponent.

(Doton: Ganchūsō) - Earth Release: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique lets the user create a few rock pillars that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The rock pillars will even pass through obstacles to reach their target if these are less dense. The pillars/spikes can be done in any earthen surface, including other earth techniques of the user.

(Fūton: Shinkūjin) - Wind Release: Vacuum Blade
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user exhales wind-infused chakra onto a weapon in order to increase its sharpness, range and lethality. For example, the user can infuse a kunai to resemble a makeshift scimitar or infuse shuriken to increase their range and cutting power.
 

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He lead Onoki to an unusual place within Suna, ruins surrounded by luscious greenery, it was rare for such a thing to occur in a desert, one of lifes natural wonders he guessed, Onoki also seemed to ponder about the ruins as they reached there destination, moving onwards a bit more as Onoki stopped he turned and faced him, it was clear what Kirikoe was here for and no words need be said for Onoki to understand.

"Would you expect anything less from me Onoki ojii-san" Kirikoe's face revealed a small smirk as he spoke, he seemed excited, it wasn't often that you would get to spar with a kage, "Heh hold back? I Don't think I have that luxury" He whispered to himself as he prepared himself for combat, taking his usual combat stance, feet shoulder width apart, left leg back both knees slightly bent, his right hand guarding his upper section with an open hand, knife edge side of the palm facing the opponent and placed just below his eyes, his left hand would mimic the right however be placed lower down guarding his mid section, placed in front of the solar plexus.

He watched his opponent carefully and without a moments hesitation from Onoki Ojii-San he weaved his first hand-seal causing the ground around Kirikoe to rise and pincer him as if this was not all the old man had formed spikes on both of these giant rocks intending to crush him in between them both. This did not seem pleasant and he did not wish to stick around to find out how it would feel either.

As the two rocks were raised Kirikoe focuses fuuton chakra into his left foot and took a step forwards with it letting loose a pulse of wind as he stepped down projecting himself forwards swiftly and quickly avoiding the two large rocks and had begun charging towards his opponent with haste.



Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Rank: D-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 10
Damage: 20
Description: The user will release basic simple blasts or streams of wind from his limbs or mouth to defend or attack an enemy.


Onoki however had already thrown a kunai in his direction and it was swiftly coming towards Kirikoe, He however paid it no mind and as he approached the Kunai he entered a drunken state and weaved his body around it, not a single bit of momentum was lost in this action and Kirikoe merely continued towards his opponent, soon entering short range Kirikoe charged wind chakra into his right fist and aimed a punch straight for Onoki Oji-San's gut, this would send him flying back with a strong force sending his body smashing into one of the nearby ruins.


Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 30
Description: This unusual taijutsu style is a unique style of combat Drunken Fist Fighters become human powerhouses who'll strike unpredictability, with no inhibitions, an explosive fury and without any second thoughts about their actions. The user can either make themselves drunk or imitate the method by use of swaying and uneven balance on their feet to attack their opponents a total of 12 variant attacks.



Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user charges up wind energy on his hands and attacks eventually slamming a fist into the foe's gut and then unleashing a blast of wind energy that sends the foe into the air.

 
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(I liked that move. Great use of Drunken Fist ;-; )

Kirikoe gracefully dodged the rocks and the wind-infused kunai. He was very alert and aware, to say the least. After dodging the kunai, it was clear the Katsuryoku's intention was to close the distance between them.

(Heh. I shall meet you head-on then, boy!) he thought, excitement rising. He took his own stance, feet equally apart, right hand forward and left arm pulled close towards his midsection.

When Kirikoe transitioned seamlessly into his right-hand wind punch in short range, Onoki lashed out with his left arm which was open-palmed. Aimed just ever so slightly below Kirikoe's wrist, Onoki pushed Kirikoe's arm to his left (Kirkoe's right). The wind blast discharged away from both combatants.

While his slap pushed away Kirikoe's right arm, the point of contact between both shinobi was a critical moment wherein Onoki channeled Doton chakra throughout his entire body and into Kirikoe's. The kid would feel his body feel sluggish, almost impossible to move, as his own weight was increased tenfold! This happened seamlessly and with little time to react.

Relinquishing contact with his left, Onoki opened his right palm and slammed it into Kirikoe's stomach section, thrusting him backward a short distance.

The old man then moved backward to the edge of short-range, 5 meters.

"Again! Stronger this time!" he declared, as if challenging Kirikoe. However, the induced weight would put Kirikoe at a disadvantage for a while.


(Hirateuchi) Slap
Type: Offensive
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: 20
Description: One of the simplest moves in Taijutsu, the user will simply hit the opponent with an open hand, slapping him. It can also be used for defensive purposes to slap incoming limbs or weapons.

(Doton: Kajūgan no Jutsu): Earth Style: Added Weight Rock Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A (up to +20 if used to add damage)
Description: The user will perform the Snake handseal and touch a given target (he needs to use his hands in most cases but can release the technique through his whole body if needed)for a small time frame. Upon doing so, he'll use the earth chakra to increase the weight of the target drastically. The technique can increase the targets weight up to 10 times. One interesting side effect of the technique is that when its used on wood based techniques (such as Zetsu's spore clones or normal wood), the infusion of large amounts of earth chakra into it will actually petrify the target in addition to increasing its weight. A similar effect can be achieved in other earthen materials such as mud. The user can also add weight to a given attack (if feasible) to increase both momentum and impact force, effectively adding damage to it.
Note: The weight change lasts 2 turns or until countered.

(Hōshō) - Crumbling Palm
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: The user strikes the opponent with a forwarding palm thrust.
 
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(Thank you =] But that weight increase tho ;-; nice move)


As Kirikoe approached his Onoki, Onoki himself entered his own stance, seemingly preparing to meet Kirikoe head on, was this an act of bravery of stupidity only time would tell, in terms of close combat abilities he was confident he would lose to few, but who knows, this was after all the former Tsuchikage and his power was well known he could be one of those few.

His punch flew towards the former kage however only to be intercepted by a slapping movement, moving his own punch to the outside of his body to his right, allowing it to discharge off course, however the moment his strike was moved off course he had already begun to follow up with another technique, the moment the contact of the slapping movement was made he knew his original technique would miss its mark and so acting on instinct he begun his next move.

Moving his left shoulder round facing the opponent simultaneously as his right hand was moving to the right, using the momentum of the movement Kirikoe transitioned his body shoulder first into a shoulder barge type movement ramming Onoki Oji-San with a shoulder thrust.

During this transition Kirikoe's body became incredibly heavy and sluggish however at this moment in time this only aided his force, speed and momentum, the sheer weight of the shoulder thrust would increase and so would its power, if meeting the opponents palm strike it would no doubt over power it due to the mass amount of weight Kirikoe's body currently held.

The shoulder thrust movement would cause the opponent to get rammed heavily taking a bludgeoning force that would no doubt hurt, it would also send Onoki's small body flying backwards only just exiting short range.



Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will jump into the opponent thrusting their shoulder to strike them.


Once Kirikoe had completed the shoulder thrust his body would droop, the weight forcing him down, Kirikoe would do all he could to keep himself up right, this weight that had encompassed his body would it prove to hinder Kirikoe or aid him, only time would tell as this spar would continue, either way as it was right now the weight was by no means a good thing, Kirikoe's body fell to the floor slightly as he used his hands to keep himself up.

"Heh, nice move old man, trying to hinder my greatest weapon, my own body"​

At this moment in time as much as Kirikoe wished to engage in close combat, his body would not allow him to perform the techniques at the swiftness and speed needed, whiles power may be greater his speed was too limited, plus not being great at lightning release techniques didn't exactly help Kirikoe would think to himself, he should have listened to his Sensei more about lightning release he thought.

Well no matter now being on all fours, mere seconds after the shoulder thrust, Kirikoe focused lightning chakra into his mouth and hastily spewed out lightning, using shape manipulation to shape it into the form of a spear as it shot out of his mouth aimed for Onoki with incredible force and speed.

Onoki at this time should still be moving back from the shoulder thrust showing how closely together these two techniques were used.



Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.

 

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(soz for late reply, I have no excuse and have dishonored the family ;-;

also your move had me like :sweat: )

With the redirection and his weight increase move successful, Onoki was prepared to transition to his Crumbling Palm, but was instead greeted by a shoulder thrust.

(This kid... he can move even with that burden? How strong is he?)

Instead of using his intended move, Onoki switched gears quickly. He was old, but this also gave him plenty of experience as a fighter. He had seen peace, war, and everything in between.

Releasing his point of connection (the two hands touching) as Kirikoe thrust forward with an heavier but stronger attack, Onoki burst diagonally upward away from Kirikoe, flying backward a short distance.

The shoulder would miss its intended target by just by a hair.

Kirikoe, on all fours, would then fire lightning from his mouth, aimed directly toward him!

Molding wind chakra in his fingertips, Onoki then fired a wind blade from his hand, which overpowered the lightning and continued onward towards Kirikoe, intent on cutting him up and injuring him greatly. It would be hard to dodge and insanely fast.

"Hm, you're not as bad as I thought you were!" he said jokingly after releasing the wind, hovering a meter off the ground. Ah, the zeal of youth!


(Doton: Furaito no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Flight Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20 (-5 per turn to maintain)
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique grants the user the ability to fly by lightening his weight severely through the use of Earth Release and using his chakra to move around in the air at high speeds with ease. Onoki showed that its also possible to transfer this technique to others through physical contact with them for an unspecified amount of time.
Note: Can only be used by the first Tsuchikage, Onoki and Mu bios

(Fūton: Kaze No Yaiba) - Wind Style: Wind Blade
Rank: A-Rank
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This technique is a pinpoint slashing strike, where the user emits chakra from their fingertips and materialises it into an near invisible weapon that assaults the enemy in a gust of wind. If the Sickle Weasel Technique can be regarded as a swarm of small wind kunai, then this technique is akin to a virtually unavoidable longsword which can leave the target's body mutilated. Just being in close proximity to the technique can cause minor cuts. The wind blades can be created and thrown, like projectiles, in rapid succession, although in this case, each one weaker than the single use application. The technique cannot be blocked by physical weapons and is insanely fast by not relying on the use of Hand seals but, because it still requires the user to perform hand gestures to use and is somewhat visible in the effect it produces, it can still be defended against by using appropriate evasion techniques or fast elemental ninjutsu.
 

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(Nice dodge.)

Having missed his shoulder thrust and now on all fours on the ground Kirikoe's spear of lightning flew strong towards Onoki however only to be countered by a stronger and faster technique of his own, still on the floor there wasn't much he could do, Kirikoe's face would show a state of anguish as his technique was easily countered, he could not yet fully move his limbs properly and especially not at the speed he wanted to, this was like a prison for Kirikoe, trapped in his own body.. It was not a feeling he liked.

Not being able to move Kirikoe would mould his earth chakra deep within his lungs and as the wind blade approached Kirikoe would quickly expel earthen material from his mouth which took the shape of a solid earth golem, the golem would meet with the wind blade getting in the way of Kirikoe acting as a shield, allowing him to escape from harm. This Weight was now proving to be a nuisance to him, quickly swapping nature he proceeded to channel lightning chakra throughout his system, he let forth a surge of lightning around him which cleansed his body, discharging lightning around his body at the same time, this negated the earth chakra in his own body that was taking affect returning his body to its original weight.



Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user expels a large creature composed of stone from his mouth. The rock golem has a fair amount of stamina and brute strength, being able to bite and tear off flesh with its mouth and hands respectively. If used from above the target then the user can use the earth golem to drop down onto the opponent like a bomb and crush them. The golem can also devour earth structures and other enemy attacks, biting and chewing on it.



Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short (Mid if channeled through a medium)
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A (+10 if used to boost weapon damage)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electricity from their body. It can be used as an omnidirectional attack or be channeled through weapons, the ground or other conductive mediums. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it has great numbing and paralyzing effects. To channel Nagashi through a medium, the user needs to focus the technique into one of his hands which will then be put in contact with the medium and can only choose to either do a widespread attack throughout his whole body or to channel it into something; he cannot achieve both usages at the same time. Despite not having much destructive or damaging properties, Nagashi can be used to destroy low rank earthen and wooden structures and even negate chakra on the ground to stop high ranked earth and wood techniques. It has also been noted that Lightning Specialists that have mastered Lightning to the highest degree can resist total paralyzation, although they still feel the pain and numbing effects.
Note: Paralyzation lasts 1 turn if sucessful but is ineffective against bios who have a primary Lightning Specialty


"Heh, Finally" Kirikoe would stand up to his feet once again and stretch himself out, "Not a bad move Onoki Oji-san, You almost had me there." he would shout, all the while distracting Onoki with his words, Kirikoe would be sending his wind chakra into the sky and without letting on a single emotion or intention he would conjure strong tornadoes which would come down from above the old man tearing his body apart, the tornadoes would come down at a diagonal angle from a point above and slightly behind Onoki avoiding his vision.


Rank: A
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user sends wind into the sky to darken the clouds and make the environment stormy. These clouds will create a cutting tornado that comes down as a F-5 tornado with slicing wind.

 

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(Sorry for the late reply :sweat: )

With Kirikoe's countering of the Wind Blade with the Golem, Onoki landed back on the ground, mid-range from his target. He needed to step things up! He pulled a scroll out from his ninja utility belt, unraveling it on the ground. The clash of the wind and the golem would make it hard to see this action.

When the kid fired off a lightning jutsu, Onoki wondered what its purpose was... did he intend to nullify the technique earlier with its natural nemesis? This was a good move, something which the old man acknowledged with a smirk.

"I have you now!"

Forming a handseal and slamming his hand onto the scroll (this action happens after the Nagashi, so tf-wise, it's after your Raiton. I just prepped it earlier), Onoki channeled his Earth chakra to form a large canyon below Kirikoe's feet, going off to the both shinobi's left and right. Kirikoe would fall into this canyon after releasing control of the Nagashi, plummeting him into its depths and stopping him from continuing with his wind technique.

Onoki wasn't done yet; after forming the canyon, he formed a single handseal once more and slammed the ground again, closing the canyon up, as if the very Earth itself was a predator's jaws, consuming its prey: in this case, the Katsuryoku kid.


(Doton: Uitenpen) - Earth Style: Wheel Of Fortune
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Descripton: The user will bite his thumb and perform the Boar → Monkey → Bird → Monkey → Ram hand seals, slamming their hand into a scroll on the ground. This technique is a combination of the Summoning Technique and an Earth Release technique. The user summons a large amount of rock from a giant canyon which, during the process of being summoned through this technique, he shapes into a design he outlined previously in a scroll. This allows the user to change the topography of the map and create any earthen feature he needs from pillars to gorges, canyons, mountains or simply plains. If the user wants to or is defeated, the alteration ends as any summon eventually does. Additionally he can use (Doton: Dimenshon Fuudo Shihai) - Earth Release: Dimension Topography Control at any point to change the design and alter the summoned terrain.
Note: can only be used once per battle

(Doton: Dimenshon Fuudo Shihai) - Earth Release: Dimension Topography Control
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description:This jutsu is used after Earth Style: Wheel of Fortune. The user will do the Boar → Monkey hand seals, slamming his hand on the ground and focusing his earth chakra. As he does this, he can change the design of the original technique. He can do this 3 times per battle.
 

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(Nice Reply =P Never seen that technique used very often to be honest.. just a question so I know for future reference, Does this technique charge the entire terrain with your chakra.. thus preventing leach all creation?)

Kirikoes nagashi went off as planned, his body felt much lighter than it did before and it gave him a sense of relief, however as he began to channel his wind chakra for an intended technique the terrain around him suddenly changed, Kirikoe had begun to plummet into a canyon, quickly using the wind chakra he had already moulded, instead of using it for attacking purposes he would aim at a slight angle at a canyon wall, he would release a stream of wind at the wall at an angle which would in turn propel him out of the canyon before its jaws were to shut.


Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Rank: D-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 10
Damage: 20
Description: The user will release basic simple blasts or streams of wind from his limbs or mouth to defend or attack an enemy.


"Phew, that was closer than I expected"

Kirikoe flew through the air approaching towards Onoki due to the angle that he released his stream at, as he flew out of the canyon Kirikoe would perform a single hand-seal showcasing his mastery in the wind element, upon which he would cause a net of wind to project straight towards him, this net took up a fairly wide range and would travel towards his opponent at great speeds.


Rank: A
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user using a giant folding fan or giant fan will swing it towards the enemy summoning a gust of wind that then takes the form of a net and slices through the opponent. A standard user can perform this technique by using a sequence of 5 hand seals.


As Kirikoe released his wind technique towards his opponent, within a few seconds as he fell he would quickly bite his thumb drawing blood, after biting his thumb he would land outside of the canyons range and as his feet touched the floor he would place his hand on the floor for support as if to break his fall, as soon as he did this he would focus chakra into his hand causing it to form a summoning circle on the floor, this was quickly followed by a large poof of smoke, during the moment of the smokes emergence, Kirikoe would have dashed off towards his opponent and Enma like a rocket would follow suit as he would emerge out of the smoke in a dash following behind Kirikoe.

"Hmmph, Lets show this old man what we can do Kirikoe-kun!"



Type: Supplementary
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description:
The personal summon of the Third Hokage, Hiruzen Sarutobi, Enma is the king of Monkeys. Like Hiruzen himself, Enma is very old and has a very keen mind. As a companion for Hiruzen, Enma acts as a both a battle partner but also an adviser, taking complete advantage of his experience and skills in battle. His main fighting abilities are his hand to hand fighting skills and his ability to transform into the nearly indestructible Adamantine Staff. His hand to hand fighting skills are such that he was able to fight on par with both Tobirama and Hashirama, keeping them at bay. His speed is comparable to a Sage Ranked Taijutsu master but his strength is easily comparable to that of Hashirama with chakra enhanced strength, being capable of using Taijutsu techniques, mostly those from Strong Fist and not taking damage from Ninjutsu and Taijutsu attacks C-Rank and below.
Note: requires monkey contract.
Note: can only be summoned once


"Right!" Kirikoe would respond with a mighty yell as they both approached with great speed.

Meanwhile the net of wind would hurdle towards Onoki and if left unblocked would cut him into ribbons.
 
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