Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 2. "Roots of something Dark"

[King Dante]

Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 2. "Roots of something D

Have your butt-hurt for not being included, little mike?​

Not really. You would probably me create me as Timmy from South Park anyway.

 

[John Constantine]

Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 2. "Roots of something D

Not really. You would probably me create me as Timmy from South Park anyway.

You just had a f*cking wonderful idea for yourself, considered done.​

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[Kuroi Honoo]

Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 2. "Roots of something D

Whoa!!! This Fanfic is perverted to the max lol Oh my Kenshin-dono you are crazy my friend. I have to say that Tommy?s character is a distressed character who is striving to get through everyday life who gets picked on which seems to be everyday by two polluted arseholes. Now, his mentality seems to be further deteriorating as he stalks a fellow female student. He has a sister rumored to be perverted herself along with a mother struggling to keep her family afloat financially as well as someone somewhat na?ve for continuing to be with a verbal maybe even psychical abusive man and a baby all in the mix to complicate things further.

I think that this family is contained by trouble people who are all in desperate need of psychological help. The references to Utopic Monkeys was out of this world lol I could definitely relate as I was picked on in school and not such a great life -_- Overall as I read through both chapters did it become clearer and clearer. I think Utopic Monkeys is your best work as I always prefer supernatural over slice of life genre any day however, this Fanfic was down to Earth, drama, and perverted related which was really great to read. I liked it and keep it up! ^.^​

 

[John Constantine]

Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 2. "Roots of something D

Whoa!!! This Fanfic is perverted to the max lol Oh my Kenshin-dono you are crazy my friend. I have to say that Tommy?s character is a distressed character who is striving to get through everyday life who gets picked on which seems to be everyday by two polluted arseholes. Now, his mentality seems to be further deteriorating as he stalks a fellow female student. He has a sister rumored to be perverted herself along with a mother struggling to keep her family afloat financially as well as someone somewhat na?ve for continuing to be with a verbal maybe even psychical abusive man and a baby all in the mix to complicate things further.

I think that this family is contained by trouble people who are all in desperate need of psychological help. The references to Utopic Monkeys was out of this world lol I could definitely relate as I was picked on in school and not such a great life -_- Overall as I read through both chapters did it become clearer and clearer. I think Utopic Monkeys is your best work as I always prefer supernatural over slice of life genre any day however, this Fanfic was down to Earth, drama, and perverted related which was really great to read. I liked it and keep it up! ^.^​

Everyone should read and refer to this post to understand better this work.
This man just told the truth and absorbed my work to the maximum.
Thanks Kuroi my friend and you will be included as well.​

 

[Sin]

Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 2. "Roots of something D

>.> Down to Earth and Awesome! I rock hard..

 

[Michael92]

Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 2. "Roots of something D

Seems like it was another war here:-/ Why do peoples always have to start flamming eachother every time another chapter of yours releasesxd

Anyway, I think this FF is very good, and I must say that I think it has better dialouges than UM. I wonder how this will evolve. Is tommy a bad and Psycotic person?

Looking forward to next time

 

[John Constantine]

Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 2. "Roots of something D

Is tommy a bad and Psycotic person?

Looking forward to next time

xd you know the expression Mind=F*ck?​

 

[Since yesterday]

Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 2. "Roots of something D

Whoa!!! This Fanfic is perverted to the max lol Oh my Kenshin-dono you are crazy my friend. I have to say that Tommy?s character is a distressed character who is striving to get through everyday life who gets picked on which seems to be everyday by two polluted arseholes. Now, his mentality seems to be further deteriorating as he stalks a fellow female student. He has a sister rumored to be perverted herself along with a mother struggling to keep her family afloat financially as well as someone somewhat na?ve for continuing to be with a verbal maybe even psychical abusive man and a baby all in the mix to complicate things further.

I think that this family is contained by trouble people who are all in desperate need of psychological help. The references to Utopic Monkeys was out of this world lol I could definitely relate as I was picked on in school and not such a great life -_- Overall as I read through both chapters did it become clearer and clearer. I think Utopic Monkeys is your best work as I always prefer supernatural over slice of life genre any day however, this Fanfic was down to Earth, drama, and perverted related which was really great to read. I liked it and keep it up! ^.^​

There's not many other ways to put it and yeah i agree with you, this is outstanding but i kinda prefer Utopic Monkeys as well. It's more loose and not so tense from the psycological standpoint.

 

[John Constantine]

Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 2. "Roots of something D

There's not many other ways to put it and yeah i agree with you, this is outstanding but i kinda prefer Utopic Monkeys as well. It's more loose and not so tense from the psycological standpoint.

Than you can only pray for Utopic Because i'm thinking seriously on taking a big break of UM.
This one is much better from an artistic standpoint and will also only have 7-8 chapters, so i'll probably gonna dedicate 100% effort to this one until it finishes.​

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 2. "Roots of something D

Everyone should read and refer to this post to understand better this work.
This man just told the truth and absorbed my work to the maximum.
Thanks Kuroi my friend and you will be included as well.​

Arigatou gozaimasu, I am truly honored ^.^ BOLD new avatar/signature! lol

There's not many other ways to put it and yeah i agree with you, this is outstanding but i kinda prefer Utopic Monkeys as well. It's more loose and not so tense from the psycological standpoint.

Thanks for sharing my standpoint ; )​

 

[John Constantine]

Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 2. "Roots of something D

Arigatou gozaimasu, I am truly honored ^.^ BOLD new avatar/signature! lol



Thanks for sharing my standpoint ; )​

I liked the name you picked in the private message you sended me.​

 

[King Dante]

Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 2. "Roots of something D

Than you can only pray for Utopic Because i'm thinking seriously on taking a big break of UM.
This one is much better from an artistic standpoint and will also only have 7-8 chapters, so i'll probably gonna dedicate 100% effort to this one until it finishes.​

Bahhh, you getting boring Jon with this Psyco drama crap.

 

[John Constantine]

Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 2. "Roots of something D

Bahhh, you getting boring Jon with this Psyco drama crap.

I do what i want and when i want and seems like it has positive feedback, so don't give me the crap you go around giving in the forum.
Yeah i'm talking about what you did in the contest and the argument with Caliburn.

 

[Zoro]

Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 2. "Roots of something D

Just awesome work. 100% great

 

[John Constantine]

Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 2. "Roots of something D

Just awesome work. 100% great

Thanks and for people to know.
3rd Chapter is writen and waiting approval.​

 

[King Dante]

Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 2. "Roots of something D

Thanks and for people to know.
3rd Chapter is writen and waiting approval.​

And surprisally was approved.

 

[John Constantine]

Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 2. "Roots of something D

And surprisally was approved.

surprisely.. And you can really say that.​

 

[Michael92]

Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 2. "Roots of something D

And surprisally was approved.

surprisely.. And you can really say that.​

And where is it?:no_ignore:

 

[King Dante]

Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 2. "Roots of something D

And where is it?:no_ignore:

He has been out celebrating that our local team won and it's now in first division of the soccer league of our country.
He's probably drunk somewhere.

 

[Since yesterday]

Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 2. "Roots of something D

Waiting for this one & Utopic Monkeys 10. C'mon!