Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 2. "Roots of something Dark"

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Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 2. "Roots of something Dark"

"The Past creates the Future"

Chapter 1​



Rated-R - Not recommended to readers who are under the age of 17.
Contains explicit descriptions and offensive language.
You are at your own risk by entering and reading my FanFiction.
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Chapter 2 " Roots of Something Dark "

Nero-sama RUSHES over to break up the commotion.. He struggles to pull a screaming and flailing Tommy off of
Kenshin. In the commotion Tommy's Scrapbook falls out of his book bag.


Int. Elementary School - Cafeteria - Day ( Cont'd )​

We move to the Ext. Rabbit in Red Lounge - Day

Neon Sign - Rabbit in Red Lounge

An articulated NEON SIGN featuring a RABBIT IN A TUXEDO drinking a cocktail while ogling a BUSTY DANCER wigglingher ass.
Pulling back from the sign we see: a small CINDER BLOCK BUILDING set back at the end of gravel parking lot.

Crude hand-painted artwork covers the building proclaiming "HOT BABES AND COLD BEER".

INT. RABBIT IN RED LOUNGE - DAY - CONTINUOUS

A small, dark low class strip joint. Hundreds of stands of small twinkling CHRISTMAS LIGHTS are strung from the ceiling along with several small MIRROR BALLS.. sending fractured light dancing off the walls.

A SMALL GROUP of LOCAL SH*T-KICKERS gather for the lunchtime show.. hot wings buffet and strippers.

On stage we find LAWLIET, dressed in trashy lingerie, as she unenthusiastically BUMPS and GRINDS to AC/DC's
"Highway to Hell".
Behind the bar is MUGIWARA (51), a large sloth of a man in a straw cowboy hat watching wrestling on a small portable TV.
The phone rings.

MUGIWARA answers.

MUGIWARA - RABBIT IN RED

INT. ELEMENTARY SCHOOL - PRINCIPLE'S OFFICE - DAY - CONTINUOUS

PRINCIPLE VERSUVIO (47), a thin, NERVOUS MAN in a stiff WHITE SHIRT and SKINNY BLACK TIE sits behind his state issued gray metal desk.
Tommy's scrapbook of PERVERSION sits on his desk.

VERSUVIO - Could i please speak to Lawliet Kuchi?

MUGIWARA - Who? Speak up, buddy.

Versuvio - Lawliet Kuchi. This is Principle Versuvio of Babilon Elementary.

INT. RABBIT IN RED LOUNGE - DAY - CONTINUOUS​

MUGIWARA blocks his free ear straining to hear.

Mugiwara - Who? Lawliet? Oh Lawly... Yeah hold on she's just coming off stage.

Lawliet has finished her routine and is now in the degrading process of picking up crumbled DOLLAR BILLS thrown by her ADORING FANS off the stage.

As she steps down from the stage Mugiwara motions to her that she has a call.

Mugiwara (CONT'D) - I think it's your kid's school or something.

Lawliet grabs the phone.

Lawliet - Yeah... Hello.

INT. ELEMENTARY SCHOOL - PRINCIPLE'S OFFICE - DAY - CONTINUOUS

Principle Versuvio flips through Tommy's Scrapbook.

Versuvio - Mrs.Lawliet we've had an incident with your son Tommy today and... I-I-I think you better come down.

Lawliet (Interrupting) - Look, I'm at work. I can't come down there right now. Jesus what is it with you people?
Can't you keep control down there?


Versuvio - I wouldn't call if i didn't believe it was very important.

Lawliet - Alright alright, hold on.

Lawliet (To Mugiwara) - I got go over to my kids school.

Mugiwara - So?

Lawliet - What do you mean so?

Mugiwara
- What? You know the drill. Hustle your ass on my time, deal with your shit on your time.

Lawliet (Sarcastic) - Thanks for nothing.

Lawliet (Into the phone) - I get a lunch break in about twenty minutes.

ext. elementary school - day - later

Lawliet pulls up in Nexus's yellow hot rod.. Radio Blasting.

INT. ELEMENTARY SCHOOL - OUTER PRINCIPLE'S OFFICE - DAY
-Anna- (61), a stern old woman with a tightly wound bun is banging away at her type writer. Lawliet enters, Miss -Anna- looks up.. a look of mild disgust comes over her face at the sight of Lawliet's appearence.

-Anna- - Can i help you?

Lawliet (Joking) - I'm here to see the principle. Don't worry granny, i ain't a student.

-Anna- - Name.

Lawliet - Lawliet Kuchi.

-Anna- buzzes the principle.

-Anna- (Into Intercom)- A Miss Kuchi is here.

Versuvio - Send her in.

-Anna- - Go right in he's expecting you.

Lawliet - I hope so he's expecting me. He's the one who f*cking called me down here.

INT. ELEMENTARY SCHOOL - PRINCIPLE'S OFFICE - DAY

Lawliet enters the office.. Principle Versuvio is sitting behind his desk.. Next to him is a bearded man with long-haired and glasses wearing a tweed jacket. This is Dr.Shunsui (40).

Both men stands to greet her.
Versuvio - Please come in... (Motions to a chair)
... Have a seat. (More)


Versuvio (CONT'D) (Motions to Shunsui) - This is Dr.Shunsui. I asked him to join us.

Lawliet takes a seat opposite the desk.

Lawliet (Checks her watch) - Look, i only got a half hour. So let's cut to it.
What's the big hub-hub?


Versuvio (Nervous) - I'm not sure how to put this...um...let me just as you said..cut to it.

Shunsui (interrupting in a grin tone) - Has Tommy ever had any kind of serious psychiatric evaluation?

Lawliet (offended) - Excuse me? Wait a minute...What? Who the f*ck is this guy?

Versuvio - This is Dr. Shunsui. He's a child psychologist.

Shunsui - Allow me to phrase it another way. Your son Tommy is a very disturbed young man and...

Lawliet stands up ready to leave.

Lawliet - Oh, this is a beautiful little ambush. Look i don't have time for your hippy intellectual bullshit.

Versuvio - Please, please don't take offense. It's just that we found something...

Lawliet - You-you got a lot of f*cking nerve dragging my ass all the way down here to hit me with this doctor shit.

Shunsui (Shunsui slides the scrapbook across the desk towards Lawliet) - We found this in your son's book bag and...
We felt very concerned.


Lawliet opens the book and begins flipping through. She is horrified by what she sees.

We see a page of a woman having *** doggy style. Scratched across the photo is the word "DIE MOTHER".
The woman's eyes are crossed out with black X's.

Lawliet - Oh my god. This is really sick. (Flips the page)

Lawliet - F*ck. (Sits back down)

Lawliet - These are Tommy's missing pets... Rudy... Humpy... What-What did he... he killed them?
(Looks to Shunsui)
Why-why would he do this?


Shunsui - Mrs.Lawliet, typically the thrill of hurting and causing pain to smaller creatures is a early sign of much deeper and bigger problems.

Lawliet drops her head into her hands.

Lawliet (looks up) - Bigger problems than these?

INT. ELEMENTARY SCHOOL - CLASSROOM - DAY
Kenshin and Caliburn sit next to each other in the classroom. They seem fascinated checking the hottest and most
popular babe in School, Rei.

Rei (17) pretty, smart, confident. Long blond hairs, nice little tight booty and decent sized chest.

Kenshin (To Caliburn) - You f*cking P*ssy!

Kenshin - Hey! F*ck-Face

Caliburn - C'mon dude!

Kenshin - It's showtime!

Kenshin - Hey Cali Before you go out to pick your fatty girlfriend. I'm gonna show you what you are missing.

Kenshin - See like they are today! See like they are today! (Kenshin is checking Rei's sexy red panties under her
mini skirt)


Both boys are passing by a sit-out Rei after standing up and walking towards the other end of the classroom.

Kenshin - Hey! Here we go, moment of truth!

Kenshin releases a smirk of joy

Kenshin - Huhhh!!

Kenshin - Woah!! Those are some tiny sexy wet panties.

Caliburn - Super! (Sarcastically and uninsterested)

Kenshin - Those are some tiny sexy wet panties. (Kenshin repeats in joy)

Kenshin - C'mon, look you p*ussy! Look!

Kenshin - What the f*ck, man? C'mon!

Caliburn does not seem very interested​

Kenshin - I'm disappointed at you. Here we are in our best years and you only screwed your fatty girlfriend.

Kenshin - One girl! One!

Kenshin - You are a disgrace to man everywhere.

Kenshin - Look at me. I got laid 18 times this year and i'm not counting the bl*wjob i got in the librabry as ***, baby!

Caliburn - You such an Ape! An animal, really! With no feelings, you are.

Kenshin - I have feelings.

Caliburn - No and you know..

Caliburn - Here's a new idea for you, kenshin. You don't bother to count how many time you have ***, you just laugh at the people who do count.

Kenshin - I Have a new idea for you. I get you a spoon so you could eat my d*ck!

Kenshin stands up to the ClassRoom and announces.

Kenshin - HEY EVERYONE!! lISTEN UP.. CALIBURN IS BACK,BABY!! AND HE'S TAKING THE LOCK OF HIS C*CK!!

HE'S DROPPING THE FATTY!!!


INT. ELEMENTARY SCHOOL - ASSISTANT PRINCIPAL'S OFFICE - DAY

ASSISTANT PRINCIPAL ~ coco ~ (45), AN ATTRACTIVE OLDER WOMAN is sitting at her desk going through some paper work.

Tommy is sitting quietly on a couch staring at the floor.​

Tommy - Can i go to the bathroom?

~COCO~ (Doesn't look up) - Can't it wait. They might need you.

Tommy (Holding his crotch) - I don't think so.

~COCO- Alright, but make it quick. I think they might want to speak with you in a minute.

Tommy - I will.

INT. ELEMENTARY SCHOOL - ASSISTANT PRINCIPAL'S OFFICE - DAY - MOMENTS LATER

Tommy RUNS through the halls of the school.. SLIDES to a stop at his locker.. QUICKLY opens the locker..
GRABS his backpack and takes off RUNNING down the hall.​

INT. ELEMENTARY SCHOOL - ASSISTANT PRINCIPAL'S OFFICE - DAY - MOMENTS LATER

Principal Versuvio, Dr.Shunsui and Lawliet enter the office.

Shunsui - I really think daily sessions are the only way to go at this point.

Versuvio (To ~COCO~) - Where's Tommy?

~COCO~ I let him go to the toilet... (Looks at her watch)
...He should be back any second... He's been gone quite awhile.


Lawliet - He split.

Versuvio - I'm sure he just...

Lawliet - No,Trust me he's gone.

EXT. ELEMENTARY SCHOOL - HOLLOW'S WOODS - DAY - LATER

Tommy hides himself from view in a wooded area across from the school known as HOLLOW'S WOODS. The school bell
rings signaling the end of another day.

Tommy secretly watches as the TEENS exit the school and begin loading onto their busses. He scans the crowd..
Then focuses his attention on two of his female classmates.. -Missy- (16) and Rei (17).

From Tommy's Point of view. He begins TRACKING the girls as walk along the edge of Hollow's woods.

The girls reach an intersection.. say their good byes and go their separate ways. -Missy- continues on down
the street..Rei crosses the street towards Hollow's Woods with the help of THE CROSSING GUARD.

Tommy concentrates his total attention on Rei..Tracking along side her for a few paces then.. He steps out from his hiding place.

Why is Tommy stalking the Popular Rei?
What path will Tommy follow from now on?
Stay tuned for the next Chapter of "The Past creates the Future"



Enjoy!!!​
 
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Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 2. "Roots of something D

Cool Story :)
i am impressed how you did this~
hope you can keep it coming ~
good luck ~
 

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Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 2. "Roots of something D

lol awesome, im a pimp xd
Cool Story :)
i am impressed how you did this~
hope you can keep it coming ~
good luck ~

Every real man wanna be pimpin in some moment in their lifes xd
Thank god, till now no one said it's too twisted and screwed up in the head xd
Unfortunely most of you didn't get the psychology behind it in the first chapter and won't get in this one again,though. :(
but thank you very much so far for the comments.
 

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Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 2. "Roots of something D

very nice, soon the whole forum will get involved? dont forget about Utopic Monkeys



thats probably mugiwara xd
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Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 2. "Roots of something D

very nice, soon the whole forum will get involved? dont forget about Utopic Monkeys



thats probably mugiwara xd
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Wow.. Tony is a badass ya know. More like a slob version of Tony.
 
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Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 2. "Roots of something D

You should do your homework before you involve members in your shit fanfic, faggot.
I don't know how Lawliet will appreciate being a hooker.
It's called sense of humor.
Jealous haters will never understand.
 

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Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 2. "Roots of something D

lol nice, this made me laugh.
Geez Cali, my red-hot-wet panties don't interest you? :(

keep them coming Kenshin lol
and i hope Tommy is hot btw
 

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No me factor?

Ah.. Good story I guess, although I try to ignore the parts (like evil/bad/sweary/well you get it..)

It's good
 

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Awesome chapter Ken, I don't know which is better, Utopic monkies or this!
 

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Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 2. "Roots of something D

No me factor?

Ah.. Good story I guess, although I try to ignore the parts (like evil/bad/sweary/well you get it..)

It's good
I for once think this chapter is too freaking twisted. I honestly think you are not going to be able to keep with this fanfiction much longer than 4 or 5 chapters, brother. Giving the route you are proceeding with your main character.
I mean let's face it Tommy is a disturbed Psyco-rapist in the making, i do not think mods will let you describe rape scenes.
 

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I for once think this chapter is too freaking twisted. I honestly think you are not going to be able to keep with this fanfiction much longer than 4 or 5 chapters, brother. Giving the route you are proceeding with your main character.
I mean let's face it Tommy is a disturbed Psyco-rapist in the making, i do not think mods will let you describe rape scenes.
And you know what genius? The third chapter will be far worst than this.
I know i can't go as far as rape scenes, unfortunely but they would add to the geniality and psychology of what i'm writing here.
 

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Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 2. "Roots of something D

★ Rei ★;1923172 said:
lol nice, this made me laugh.
Geez Cali, my red-hot-wet panties don't interest you? :(

keep them coming Kenshin lol
and i hope Tommy is hot btw
That's why it's called fiction :rolleyes:

And even Kenshin's mind isn't twisted enought to create that situation into words if it would appear in RL :zonder:
 

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Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 2. "Roots of something D

That's why it's called fiction :rolleyes:

And even Kenshin's mind isn't twisted enought to create that situation into words if it would appear in RL :zonder:
That moment seemed more of a moment of "relief" on how tense the chapter was.
Believe me when i say he does acts that way in "real" life, he is that much of a jerk and lol at him describing himself a bit Stiflish (Steve Stifler)
 

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Re: Kenshin Himura's "The Past creates the Future"- Chapter* 2. "Roots of something D

That moment seemed more of a moment of "relief" on how tense the chapter was.
Believe me when i say he does acts that way in "real" life, he is that much of a jerk and lol at him describing himself a bit Stiflish (Steve Stifler)
Have your butt-hurt for not being included, little mike?
 
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