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is the last technique I performed (it was never confirmed by my sensei if my performance was adequate, or if I was missing concepts):
( Rakkasui ) - Falling Water
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 25
Description: The user will drop down upon the opponent from mid air pointing their sword downwards and drilling it down into the opponent.

*Channeling my chakra into the ground beneath me, I create an earthen pillar in front of myself, followed quickly by a single clone, who stands near the base of the pillar. I then walk towards the pillar, looking up to the very top of it. Grinning slightly, I place the handle of my sword in my mouth and bite down hard on it, grabbing onto the surface edge of the pillar with my bare hands. Then, pulling my body up off the ground, I begin an excersize just for myself; scaling the pillar with only my arms. Reaching up above my head, I begin to climb my way up the pillar, my legs hanging helplessly, as dead weight as I climb closer and closer to the top. After a short while of climbing, I pull my body fully on to the flat top of the pillar, where I pull the sword out of my mouth and pant slightly. Then I position myself, get my target in my sight, and leap off of the pillar. With my arms extended to the sides, I continue to freefall until I come closer to my clone, where I then do a front flip and place both of my hands on the hilt of my sword, positioning it above my head so that the tip of the blade looms over my clone. Then, as I fall even closer towards my target, I bring my sword down upon him, the blade sliding straight through his skull and body parallel to his spine and suddenly stopping my decent. Then, I stand up from my dispersed clone, looking over at you with an exhausted look on my face.*
"How was that, sensei?"
 

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Extraordinary. I love your style.

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(Bakuchi Tori Kuzu Oujou) – Gambling Bird Arrowroot Death
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user bolts in front of the enemy who they then strike with their sword handle before delivering several kicks that sends the enemy into the air. The user then bolts across to the far off location of the enemy who they then punch violently into an obstacle.

Charge at your enemy while holding your sword in a reverse grip and by sending your sword arm upwards and sending the handle into their chin to break their focus. Then continue with a short session of kicks which end in you sending the opponent upwards where after you bolt behind your enemy which you can then punch into a location of your choice.
 

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Taijutsu techniques which use swords, and kenjutsu techniques which use punches and kicks... *sigh*

*Cracking my knuckles quickly, I sprint forwards towards my target. As I near him, my right hand reaches down and grips the hilt of my sword. Planting my left foot on the ground before me, I pivot on my foot and draw my blade, the handle flying through the air and into my opponent's chin. Catching him from underneath, the hilt of my sword caused my opponent's head to move upwards towards the sky quickly, causing a cracking noise to resound from his neck. While my body continues to pivot on my left foot, while my body perpendicular to my opponent I extend my right foot outwards, kicking him in the gut. After the kick, I quickly finish spinning so that I'm facing my opponent, my sword re-sheathed, and I take a step forwards, planting my right foot as I kick forwards with my left, getting an upwards "swoop" with my leg for this kick. I then plant my left foot, taking another step forwards in this fashion, and I lower my body to the ground before I extend my right foot straight up into the air, catching my opponent under the chin and sending him into the air with the sudden burst of force. Then, using the basic principles of Shadow of the Dancing Leaf, I plant my right foot next to my left with my body still low to the ground, and I push myself up into the air, seeming to appear behind my opponent in mid-air. As my opponent reaches the height of his ascent, I place my left hand on his shoulder to push myself up slightly higher, giving myself a height advantage, before I twist my body, extending my right fist into the back of his head to send him quickly into the ground.*
 

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Kenjutsu and Taijutsu can't be seperated, they go together. And good job.


(Rensei Shinkuken) – Drilling Crimson Blade
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user takes out their blade and channels chakra into it. They then run towards the opponent, slashing them upwards into the air and then appear above him/her, and deliver a sharp, drilling slash down upon them, impelling them into the ground.

Take your blade and channel chakra into it, where after you run at the opponent, slashing them vertically upwards into the air, where you then jump above them and drill your sword into the opponent sending them into the ground.
 

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I assumed as much, but there are some taijutsu which fit better as kenjutsu, and vise-versa. :/

*Channeling my chakra flow through the blade, I take a stance where my right foot is in front of my left foot in a long stance. Holding my sword with both of my hands, I take off running towards my opponent, my hands bringing the blade down by my right side as I run. As I near my opponent, I release the blade with my left hand and plant my left foot, lifting my right foot so as to spin counter-clockwise as I sweep my right arm with the sword upwards, slashing the man and sending him upwards with the force of my impact. Then I use the basics of Shadow of the Dancing Leaf once again to spring off of the ground and fly through the air, right behind my opponent. While above him, with his face towards the ground and his back towards me, I plant my feet on his back, using the Tree Climbing exercise to keep his body relatively still compared to me, and I hold my blade over my head with both my hands. Then I bring the sword down in one mighty strike, releasing the chakra from my feet as my sword drills into his back, impaling him and sending him into the ground.*

So... Why do I have to send chakra into my sword?
 

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To enhance the power of your sword with chakra and give it more damage.



(Suraisu Shinku no Nami) - Slicing Crimson Wave
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user does a simple cresent-shaped slash at the opponent, expelling a red chakra wave.


This is a mid ranged kenjutsu technique where you channel chakra into your sword and do a crescent shaped slash expelling a red chakra wave. This technique follows the Elemental Strength and Weakness table between Elemental techniques and Raw chakra.
 

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*Grabbing the hilt of my sheathed sword, I begin to flow my chakra into the sword. Then I unsheath my sword and hold it with both of my hands as I flow more of my chakra into it. Releasing the hilt with my left hand, I spin in a counter-clockwise direction as I slash the blade from near my right ear, diagonally so that the tip ended by my left hip. As I spun and swung the blade, my chakra was released from the sword's tip as a wave of chakra in the form of the path the tip of my swung blade took (a diagonal crescent). I spin an extra rotation after releasing my chakra, planting my right foot as I come complete circle once again, re-sheathing my sword only after I had finished spinning.*

So... Is it a "must" that this wave must be red? Or may it be a different color to reflect my own personal chakra "color", as a sensor or, more specifically, a dojutsu user may say?
 

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It doesn't have to be red. The color of the chakra has no real effect so you can personalize that detail.


(Kusanagi no Tsurugi: Chidorigatana) - Grass Cutter Sword: One Thousand Birds Katana
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user flows Chidori current through a katana in manner similar to flying swallow technique. The Radiating and chirping blade can easily cut through steel. Furthermore, the body of the person cut by the sword goes numb, taking away their freedom of movement.


(Chakura Bōsekiken) - Chakra Spinning Blade
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will channel chakra into their sword making it glow blue and then jumping into the air they spin at a rapid rate creating a spinning circle and cutting through the enemy target.

Last two techniques. Make a combo.
 

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Taking a firm stance, left foot ahead of the right, both knees bent with my left foot planted flat on the ground, my right foot bent so that I'm on the ball of my foot, I look down towards the ground, my hair casting an ominous shadow over my eyes. With my left hand on the sheath of the sword on my right hip, I lift my right foot from the ground, my left knee giving slightly as it prepares to propel me forwards, my hand unsheathing the sword no more than an inch. In a second,I was gone.
Into the air I leapt, chakra flowing into my fully-drawn blade. As the sword began to glow a bright blue, I performed a mid-air somersault, my blade extended forwards as I flipped. Spinning, my chakra flowed from the tip of the blade to create a large ring of blue chakra around myself, connected to the tip of my sword. As my body came full-circle and I reached the peak of my jump, the ring still vertically around my body, I shift the sword into my right hand, moving it so that the ring follows the blade and leaves the surrounding area of my body, before holding the sword straight into the air. Spinning the blade itself, with the ring attached, one full time around my head, as I began to descend towards the ground I swung the blade vertically downwards, sending the spinning ring of chakra down towards my target.


Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will channel chakra into their sword making it glow blue and then jumping into the air they spin at a rapid rate creating a spinning circle and cutting through the enemy target.


After sending the chakra ring towards my opponent, I send chakra into my feet as I begin to move. Manipulating my position in the air, I force my body to move to match my opponent's, my body surging through the air with such speeds that I'm no more than a blur, before appearing behind my opponent. As I appear, it's quite obvious where I am; the lightning crackling around the steel of my sword, in my right hand, came in a frequency which resembled a bird's chirping. With my opponent glancing behind themselves to look at me, I have already moved to strike. From a position similar to my starting one, (and at the same time similar to Sasuke holding his Chidori during the Chuunin Exams), I extend both of my knees, lunging my right hand, supported with my left, forwards in order to stab my opponent as my ring of spinning chakra came ever closer, trapping him within a pincer-attack such that my lightning-imbued blade would pierce his body, numbing it so he can't move as my chakra ring would cut him open.
It's over.

Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 5
Description: A technique where one follows the opponent, closely matching his or her body's movement, just like a leaf that dances in the air is followed by its shadow. The technique is usually preceded by a swift upper kick that will launch the target into the air. It is mainly used to position an opponent into a vulnerable aerial position. This move by itself is harmless, but it is usable as a stepping stone for a great many powerful techniques like Front Lotus and the Lion Combo. That said, it also has a rather high degree of difficulty.



Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user flows Chidori current through a katana in manner similar to flying swallow technique. The Radiating and chirping blade can easily cut through steel. Furthermore, the body of the person cut by the sword goes numb, taking away their freedom of movement.



Question: There are three scenarios in which I can see the Chakra Spinning Blade realistically being mid-range; could you please tell me which is correct? The first is as I performed it, where I form a ring and then "throw" it towards my opponent. The second is that I form the ring, and then the ring spreads outwards in a ripple-like formation, growing bigger and bigger, cutting all in it's path. The third is that as I spin, I create a long, spiraling, continuous blade that expands outwards, like the ripple, only it's not a single ring, but multiple rings in the form of a spiral.
 

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Humm, I see all three scenarios as plausible with the first one seeming most logical to me. I can't find it on the wiki or Youtube. I suggest you ask in the HQ. Anyways, if you don't have any questions we are done here ^^
 
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