[Approved] Kenichi hyuga

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Name:Kenichi Hyuga
Nickname:Historys Strongest Disciple,Trash.
Gender:Male
Age:16
Clan:Hyuga​


Looks:
Kenichi is a teenager who is around 5.8" and fairly muscular.He has got brown hair,brown eyes and a normal white face.His hands are covered in white bandage to hide his wounds due to rigorous training in taijutsu.He wears casual clothes and while battle and training he wears a white karate outfit which has the yin/yang simbol behind it. Kenichi wears his Kumogakure head band on his left wrist and the metallic part of the head band can be used to defend against kunais etc.


Personality:Kenichi at first was timid and cowardly and regarded as useless by the other members of the hyuga clan.However after beginning to train and being taught by the strongest martial artists in history he slowly began to change.Although at first he ran at the very sign of danger and didnt want to be trained unless forced by his senseis though he never gave up and kept on training so that he could protect the ones he loved.



Village Information
Village of birth:Konohagakure
Village of alliance:Kumogakure.

Rank//Chakra Info
Ninja rank:Kage
Speciality:

Byakugan:It is a kg which is found in the members of the hyuga clan.When activated the users veins are visible in the area around their temples due to the high concentration of chakra in that point.
The first ability of the Byakugan gives the user a near 360º field of vision, except for one blind spot at the back of the neck above the third thoracic vertebra.
The second ability is being able to see through solid objects, and can use a degree of telescopic sight. The distance and the degree of telescopic sight varies from person to person, and can be improved.Kenichi became skilled while using the byakugan and could see clearly upto distances of 8kms.

The third and one of the greatest uses of the Byakugan is the ability to see chakra, chakra flow as well as the chakra circulation system inside the body with great detail. It is from this particular ability that they are able to employ their ultimate attack style: Gentle Fist. Unlike the Strong Fist, which is focused on external injuries, the Gentle Fist style focuses on internal injuries. Each strike, when placed correctly, strikes along the chakra pathway system, which is the network of vessels that carry chakra. This network is closely intertwined with the functioning of the body's organs, and so, when the keirakukei take damage, the organs suffer as well. There is no defense against the Gentle Fist, since one cannot train one's internal organs to become stronger. The only possible defense is to stop the Gentle Fist's hits from connecting.
The Byakugan's ability to see chakra and its flow allows the user to detect chakra sealed barriers.

Particularly skilled users of the Byakugan can take the Gentle Fist style one step further. Along the keirakurei are 361 pinprick-sized nodes called tenketsu, or chakra points. When struck, the Byakugan user can choose to either seal, or forcibly open these tenketsu, thus giving the user complete control over their opponent's chakra system. So, with precision, all those points along the victim's body can be sealed, stopping the chakra flow to those areas. Able to strike without force, and yet do more damage to a ninja than some of the most powerful ninjutsu, the Gentle Fist has been labeled as the greatest taijutsu style known in all of Konohagakure.

Enhanced Speed:Due to being a kage Kenichi posseses amazing speed.

Enhanced Endurance:Kenichi posseses amazing endurance since childhood.When he was around 10 years old had no training in ninjutsu the older boys in Kumo tried to bully him but due to his amazing endurance he could face them.When starting the basic shinobi training his senseis realised the fact that he had more endurance than other ninjas his level.

Genius:His senseis mentioned that Kenichi has no talent in ninjutsu but he is a genius at hardwork and getting beat up so this also allows him to improve at an amazing rate.

Chakra Control:Since kenichi is a hyuga he has got amazing chakra control which cannot be possesed by normal shinobi.When mastering the hyuga clan techniques his chakra control increased to even higher levels allowing him to actually make his own gentle fist jutsu.


Elements:
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c ranks.
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starting of c ranks.
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none.
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c ranks.
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none.

Ninjutsu:
Ninjutsu:e ranks.
Genjutsu:c ranks.
Taijutsu:none.
Gentle Fist:Mastered

Summoning:Secretary Birds(Sanji Tori)

Backgorund Information

History:

Basic history:
Kenichi was born in the sub-branch of the hyuga family and was not at all talented in anything and achieved everything through hardwork.He barely made it into the ninja academy at the age of 6 and was at the bottom of the class.He learnt the basic E-rank ninjutsu with great difficulty and his teacher Iruka had to struggle for 2 months two teach him something as basic as clone jutsu.He passed out from the academy at the age of 8 somehow due to his hardwork and the efforts of his teachers.When he passed he was again at the bottom of the class and he envied Neji Hyuga who was at the top and always wanted to defeat neji in a spar but all his tries were futile due to the fact as Neji already knew a certain degree of gentle and had activated his byakugan at an early age.He was chosen to be in team 16 but the other two who were in the team with him treated him as trash and didnt want to be in a team which had a usesless shinobi such as himself.Since nobody wanted to be in a team with him and no sensei wanted to teach him he was demoted back to the academy and due to this he was treated as trash by the other hyugas and hyuga elders.Due to the bad way others treated him and as even his own family and other hyuga treated him as trash he left konoha and became a missing nin.During his journey to find a place for himself he met liliana who was another hyuga who left konohagakure and asked her to train him in the hyuga arts.Liliana agreed and it took her two whole months to even teach him half of the techniques.After some training Liliana got fed up of kenichi due to him being slow and left him without completing his training but later she saw kenichi practicing the jutsus on his own and improvising and becoming better at those jutsu so she decided to teach him the jutsu anyway and then completed the other half of his hyuga training in a matter of 5 months.Now he thanked liliana and continued his journey and after some time he met Mugiwara who was a mysterious ninja.Mugi told kenichi that he was the raikage and looking at Kenichi's poor state Mugi decided to accept kenichi into kumo.After becoming a shinobi of Kumo and getting the rank of chunin Kenichi was given training in earth by Aizen which kenichi then mastered till C rank in 2 months then he met Sonic- who started training Kenichi in wind but he was so bad at it that she decided to change the training into Genjutsu which then he mastered till C-rank in 4 months.Now kenichi was sent on a mission in which he had to go to different villages and during this journey he trained in elements like fire(under Kaos),Wind(under crutch) both till C rank.On coming back to Kumo he was given the rank of Jounin and his speed,strength etc had become that of an s-class ninja.After a few days kenichi met Kirabi who is considered to be the most proficient Raiton user alive under whom he started his lightning training in which he then learnt one jutsu untill Kirabi disappeared.Now he is 13 and not so much of an idiot and is very proficient in everything he has learnt.

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Backgorund music:Nothin

Battles:
Won:N/A
lost:N/A​

My last hyuga bio just died in the hands of gats.

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dude what the HELL is this:p i thought hyuga is the clan in naruto but i don't regonize him is he new:p or something or your imagination XD
 

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Oh boy

1) It seems you alread edited it partially, but originally you said you were from Kiri. As Hyuuga you'r always from Konoha, when you state another village you need to explain how that's possible in your history. Then it's very weird to place Kiri when you'e from Kumo. You changed a part, but you still say you're wearing a Kiri headband in your looks description.

2) Remove that you have endurance above sensei lvl

3) Remove the wind affinity, you learned up to C-rank wind. I don't allow anyone to say that he needs no handseals at all, however to make it so that you need less handseals in the least you need to have mastered the element to get something like that.

4) The chakra control is natural for a Hyuuga, I don't mind the genius part and the speed is also normal. However you apparantly didn't learn any taijutsu and still you are pressing at so much "enhanced" physical abilities without knowing any taijutsu ~_~
 

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Have anybody notice on his last bio he has nothin under specialty and now he has a load of stuff. I understand the Hyuuga and chakra control thing but the rest is just random stuff he thought would get approve because he is Kage.
 

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Oh boy

1) It seems you alread edited it partially, but originally you said you were from Kiri. As Hyuuga you'r always from Konoha, when you state another village you need to explain how that's possible in your history. Then it's very weird to place Kiri when you'e from Kumo. You changed a part, but you still say you're wearing a Kiri headband in your looks description.

2) Remove that you have endurance above sensei lvl

3) Remove the wind affinity, you learned up to C-rank wind. I don't allow anyone to say that he needs no handseals at all, however to make it so that you need less handseals in the least you need to have mastered the element to get something like that.

4) The chakra control is natural for a Hyuuga, I don't mind the genius part and the speed is also normal. However you apparantly didn't learn any taijutsu and still you are pressing at so much "enhanced" physical abilities without knowing any taijutsu ~_~
done.
 

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Have anybody notice on his last bio he has nothin under specialty and now he has a load of stuff. I understand the Hyuuga and chakra control thing but the rest is just random stuff he thought would get approve because he is Kage.
Umm no.
I actually put those because they were under his specialities in kenichi wiki.
 

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But have you actually been trained in them, or are you so devoted to the bio that you're mixing up Kenichi's skills and yours ? O_O
i never stated anything about training.
I have gentle fist,+ all the elements i stated.
And for the strength i removed it.
 
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