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I channeled my raw chakra to stomach. Then by moulding, compressing it, and churning it; I had it converted into Katon chakra which now started to heat up throughout my body. I had the chakra channeled to my right arm at which point I applied shape transformation to it and shaped them into spherical figures. I had the heat gathered into the core of the sphere and then released a barrage of fire shots that did not burn but rather exploded
 

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Okay good, for now on your using this template. I expect effort and detail. I'm very strict on those things, if I see lack of effort expect a punishment U_U


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1. The opponent cannot use any Suiton technique to stop it
2. Can be used in combo with explosive tags
3. Can be used to temporarily obscure the opponents view

Weak points
1. They don't burn, rather they explode thus they cannot be used to burn anything
2. They can be easily stopped using a Doton technique
3. N/A

Combinations-strategies
1. Bringer of Darkness or Hiding in the Mist
2. The usage of kunai with explosive tags attached to them whilst using this

Ways to counter this technique
1. Doton: Multiple Mudshot
2. Suiton: 5 Shark Frenzy

Questions
Nawh
 

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XD o no I just wanted to make sure you understood. But now that you mentioned it, you filled out the template very badly and expect better in the future.

( Katon: Hiendan ) – Fire Release: Soaring Flame Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Offense, Deffence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user exhales a stronger yet shorter version of the Fire Release: Great Fireball technique.

This jutsu is must like the C-Rank jutsu you most likely learn, just a very large version with more fire, and attack potential. The description does not mention you do any hand seals like the previous one so you can say its quicker to perform. Also its a projectile based technique.
 

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1. Can be used to ambush the opponent
2. The heat due to this technique can lead to perspiration and dehydration for the opponent
3. Can be used against Tai, Ken and Kaguya users
4. The user can quickly prepare for another attack once they use this

Weak points
1. Is short range only
2. The technique although strong, moves relatively slowly allowing the oponent to counter it
3. N/A

Combinations-strategies
1. The usage of a flammable gas or a Futon technique can give a boost to the fireball

Ways to counter this technique
COUNTERS:
Water Prison Technique and Gushing Water Imprisonment can both be used to make water surround the fire projectile and extinguish it
Earth Shore Return can be used to make a square structure of earth rise up and defend against the technique
DODGING
Earth Release Technique can be used to make a pillar erupt out of the ground and push the user away
Hiding like a mole can be used to quickly hide underground
Hurricane Fist? can be used to blow out a strong wind pushing the user away

Questions
Is it big enough to burn the opponents entire body and will it kill or seriously injure the opponent if they fail to defend against it? Also if the oponent uses Earth Release Armor (Hope the name is correct) to defend against it, will they successfully avoid getting harmed or will the armor heat up and harm the opponent?
 

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Is it big enough to burn the opponents entire body and will it kill or seriously injure the opponent if they fail to defend against it? Also if the oponent uses Earth Release Armor (Hope the name is correct) to defend against it, will they successfully avoid getting harmed or will the armor heat up and harm the opponent?
- It can burn the whole area depending on where it hit, so if you attacked the chest his whole upper-body will be burned. Yes they will. I would say they would be unharmed if they used the armor.

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( Katon: Goenkyu ) - Fire Release: Great Blaze Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user after performing two hand seals Horse ? Tiger exhales a big-sized sphere of fire that carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion on impact. The fire ball has a given solidity property to it, being able to punch through solid obstacles without exploding.

Okay now this jutsu is similar like the ones previous you learned. With two hand seals the user will send a large fire ball, roughly the same size as the fireball the Uchia's are most famous for. The ball is dense and when on contact will act to carry the opponent almost attaching itself to them, which will then continue to move some distance before it explodes. It moves in all ranges.
 

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A bit later but anyway

ADVANTAGES
Is able to push back objects thus allowing the user to defend against projectiles
Requires only two hand seals
The fireball can be used as a way to ambush the enemy or obscure the opponents view of the user

DISADVANTAGES
Because it explodes on contact, if the oponent uses a doton technique whilst the fireball is still short range with the user, the fireball shal explode harming the user as well
The fireball moves slowly

COMBOS
Can be used to push back the opponent to a place where explode tags had already been placed thus causing both the fireball and the tags to explode
Can be used along with Wind Bullet Technique

COUNTERS
Multiple Suiton techniques can be used. Hiding in the Rock can be used to evade the technique

QUESTIONS
If the fireball explodes on contact, how come it is able to push back the opponent without exploding?
 

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For your question. Follow this link ----> and go to minute 1:26
That should answer it for you.
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I expect much better replies from now on.
( Katon: Goenka ) - Fire Release: Great Flame Flower
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user jumps in the air and shoots three giant bullets of fire that come down like giant meteors, then erupt into a geyser of flame.

Okay jumping in the air, the user will send three giant bullets of fire that rain down upon the opponent. Their size is the same as the Uchia fireball they are known to use. When they come on contact with the ground they erupt like geysers super heating and burning the area as well as the opponent. They can be aimed anywhere and are projectile based attacks. They go long range, also though it sends you must jump in the air pretty much whenever you are mid-air you can use it, with no drawbacks.
 

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ADVANTAGES
1. Due to them being more in number, they would be more difficult to dodge
2. The single fire bullet if hit with a Suiton projectile would create mist thus making it difficult for the enemy to dodge the other bullets
3. They can be used tp ignite explosive tags and can be used to stop Wind projectiles
4. A Steel release technique may be used beforehand and this when this technique is used, the steel would melt due to the extreme heat harming the opponent
5. The heat produced by the technique can be used to heat water sources
6. Can be used to target large summons since the fireballs are quite large and strong and large summons are usually slow
7. Most Suiton techniques would only be strong enough to stop a single fireball leaving the other two to still move towards and harm the opponent
8. The user may first use Greater Earth Golem and then this. The opponent would then either have to either defend against the golem or the fireballs

DISADVANTAGES
1. The need to jump into the air
2. Due to the three fireballs being large in size, they would fall down rather slowly (They are not solids so their speed shall not increase whilst falling)
3. Once the user jumps, he is quiet vulnerable to techniques like "Swamp of the Underworld" or "Dropping Lid"

COMBOS
It can be used along with Raiton: False Darkness

COUNTERS
Hidinglike a Mole can be used to evade the technique
 
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That is not what I was looking for. Adding more points is not what I want. Here is the basic I look for when filling the template out.

In the advantage and disadvantage, I expect 1-3 sentence in each point
For combos and counters I expect 2-5 sentences each point
No more or less. No re-do it properly.
 

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STRONG POINTS
1. Most Suiton techniques would only be strong enough to stop a single fireball leaving the other two to still move towards and harm the opponent
2. The heat produced by the fireballs can heat up water sources and make them evaporate
3. The fireballs due to their size can obscure the opponents view of the user unless the opponent posesses a Doujutsu

WEAK POINTS
1. Once the opponent jumps into the air, he becomes quite vulnerable to techniques like Swamp of the Underworld or Dropping Lid
2. Can't be used as a surprise attack due the fireballs being quite large and the need to jump into the air
3. The fireballs due to their large size shall be slow thus allowing the opponent to quickly come up with a counter

COMBINATION STRATEGIES
It can be used along with Lightning Release: False Darkness. This will make it difficult for the opponent to defend against both the spear of lightning as well as the fireball and since the fireballs and lightning spears are intangible, the combo is even better. To give the combo an additional boost, this combo can be used best if the user possesses a Doujutsu

COUNTERS
The technique Earth Release: Hiding like a Mole can be used to evade the fireballs making them more or less useless due to them colliding with the earth and merely burning the earth a bit. In case, the user is on a water source, he can use Suiton techniques to defend against the fireballs for example techniques like Water Release: 5 Shark Frenzy
 
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( Katon: Haisekisho ) - Fire Release: Ash Pile Burning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user spews superheated ash from their mouth after performing four handseals. The ash is hot enough to cause third-degree burns on the victim. Because it's composed entirely of ash, it stays in the air around the victim like a cloud. If the user clicks his teeth, the stagnant ash will ignite, creating a violent explosion.

A favorite and a great one to use. A user will send very thick and hot ash from their mouths to the opponent, the ash alone can cause serious burns. While the user is still sending the ash it right when it gets in the same area of the opponent you will click your teeth igniting the ash causing a sever explosion. It needs 4 hand seals and the ash moves rather slow. Explain this one with detail.
 

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STRONG POINTS
1. The cloud of ash can be used to obscure the opponents view. In fact, the opponent might even have difficulty in realizing whether the technique is a Smoke Release or Fire Release technique? Nevertheless, no one would want his/herself to be engulfed into a cloud of ash
2. The technique, due to its ability to produce a lot of heat and give third degree burns can be used to heat up water source as well as injure aquatic summons
3. The ash is probably fatal to inhale and even if the opponent is short or mid range from the cloud of ash, the molecules of the ash would still obably enter the opponents body due to diffusion

WEAK POINTS
1. The need to perform 4 handseals is considered too much and whilst Sharingan users will be able to figure out the technique's element and quickly use a Suiton technique, non-doujutsu users will simply use any offensive technique to quickly strike the user
2. The cloud of ash due to being quiet dense would be slow similarly to the previous technique, allowing the opponent to quickly come up with a counter
3. N/A

COMBOS
1. The user can use this technique in conjuction with Doton techniques, and create multiple holes underground filled with this explosive ash. The user can then use this similarly to mines
2. The user can first release the cloud of ash, and then quickly release the explosive tags; granting the explosion an additional boost

COUNTERS
Earth Release: Greater Earth Golem can be used as a way to stop both the explosive ash as well as resist the explosion. A pretty good way to counter this technique is by using using an A rank Futon technique and pusbing the explosive ash towards the user himself. This would make the user think twice before making the ash explode
 

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( Katon: Goryuka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user fires several large dragon-shaped fireballs at their opponent after performing one handseal. It is able to alter localized weather conditions to the point of making thunder clouds when shot into the air, enabling the user to perform Kirin.

Okay with no hand seals the user will send several large dragon shaped fireballs towards the opponent, they are of intense heat and burn on contact. It travels in all ranges and you can send more then one ball. Its fast to perform and simple. This technique is most famous for setting up Kirin.
 
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