Katekyo Hitman Reborn!| The Seven Guardians arc| Chapter#3 "The new approach."

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Katekyo Hitman Reborn!| The Seven Guardians arc| Chapter#3 "The new approach."

Hey guys!, hope your enjoying the arc so far!
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A mysterious aura appears, what can it be? A new approaching threat? Who are the people in that unknown mansion? New problems stir in!

Hibari notices the sense, suddenly a man appears in front of him, he has short brown hair, with black eyes he wears a black coat with a grey t-shirt inside he also wears black jeans with black shoes.

Hibari notices the man and looks at him

Hibari: Who are you?

?: No one really.

Hibari asks the person again the person sighs and gives his answer

?: *sigh*

?: Volare, the Primo Eagle Guardian.

Hibari: Primo? first generation?

Volare: Correct.

Hibari: Now explain to me why you are here.

Volare: No particular reason.

Hibari: Then leave.

Volare: No.

Hibari: ...

Hibari: Leave.

Volare: CAN'T YOU SEE IM YOUR ENEMY!?

The man scratches his head

Volare: Sorry, I sometimes seem to get impatient.

Volare: Anyways, lets get to the real reason why I'm here, shall we?

The man pulls out a axe that has a eagle shape.

Hibari gets his tonfas and stands in a battle position

Hibari: an axe? I won't allow such things on school grounds.

Volare: Maybe just this once?

Hibari smiles as he's getting prepared for battle

Hibari: Hmph, can't be helped.

----Meanwhile----

Gokudera walks in the streets of Namimori, the streets are peaceful and the sky is blue and crisp as always.

Gokudera: Wow, it sure is a beautiful day!

Suddenly a man appears infront of him out of nowhere, he has black spiky hair with brown eyes and wears a orange t-shirt with orange jeans and black shoes

Gokudera: Who are you!?

?: Call me, Sciopero the primo Tiger Guardian!, Nice to meet you!

Gokudera blinks his eyes in confusion

Gokudera: Primo? Tiger?

Sciopero: Correcto!

Gokudera: Given the fact you're here in front of me means you're not hear to get friendly with me.

Sciopero: Correcto!

Sciopero puts on two claw fangs on his hands and gets in a battle position

Gokudera: Claw fangs? Not bad.

Gokudera pulls out his dynamite and goes in his battle position

----Meanwhile----

Yamamoto has his Shigure Kintoki on his back and walks outside, he suddenly notices a man with dark green spiky hair and anger-like eyes that are colored brown and with some fangs from his teeth, he wears a dark green coat with a yellow t-shirt with a snake on it.

?: YOUUUU!!!!!!!!

Yamamoto: Hi there!, who might you be?

Yamamoto puts on his regular smile

?: DON'T GET FRIENDLY WITH ME!!!, I'M HERE TO DEFEAT YOU!!!!!

Yamamoto begins to have a serious tone

Yamamoto: Yeah, and that's why I'm asking. Who are you?

?: Call me, Zanne..the primo Snake guardian!

Yamamoto: Primo? Snake guardian?

Yamamoto: So you're first generation?

Zanne: Correct!

Zanne pulls out two snake like swords

Yamamoto: Sword's eh?, well this'll be fun!

Yamamoto pulls out his Shigure Kintoki from his bag

----Meanwhile----

At Tsuna's house, Reborn comes out with some interesting news

Reborn: Tsuna!

Tsuna: Reborn!?

Reborn: That sense you were having earlier...

Reborn: It was the Scala Famiglia!

Tsuna: Scala? Famiglia!?

Reborn: Yes, they have the Seven Guardians of the Dragon

Reborn: Some of them already attacked your friends..

Tsuna: !?

Reborn: Tsuna, As you're tutor this is an order i'm giving you

Reborn's face becomes serious

Reborn: Prepare..for war..


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Re: Katekyo Hitman Reborn!| The Seven Guardians arc| Chapter#3 "The new approach."

8/10 This was pretty good. I see you went ahead with the dragon guardians.
 

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Re: Katekyo Hitman Reborn!| The Seven Guardians arc| Chapter#3 "The new approach."

Love it! >:D Nice Dragon guardians, XD I can already guess the hardships in the upcoming fights. Especially the snake swords, they'll be something like Zabimaru in Bleach, twisting and hitting even when blocked. The start of each battle felt sorta awkward in a way which they all just said, "OKAY!" to the battle basically right away. But I guess I'm probably wrong since I don't see how you could make it longer except unneeded dialogue. XD So NICE! >:D Now to pull out the few grammar mistake you made. XD :Volare: CAN'T YOU SEE IM YOUR ENEMY!? (Should be I'm)
:The man pulls out a axe that has a eagle shape. ("an" for each of the "a"'s )
Again, sorry that's all I can pull out of fan-fics, since I'm seriously inexperienced and don't know any better. XD But I'm good at picking out some few grammar mistakes. >:D Also, some lines could've been worded better, but I love where these chapters are going, I think each of the next chapters should be devoted to one battle each, since it would get confusing with more than one in each chapter, but then again, do what you want. lol. If I was going to rate it, which I guess I am, I'd give it 9/10 >:D Only because some lines could've been worded better, and maybe elongated convo's but epic nonetheless! >:D
 

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Re: Katekyo Hitman Reborn!| The Seven Guardians arc| Chapter#3 "The new approach."

Hibari should have knocked some heads :)
 
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