Kaito's Chronnicles

[~Missy~]

well..it's good ^^

i can't wait 2 read the next part ^^ so hope u complete it

 

[Zenryoku]

thanks ^^ well we shall have to see i need to draw up the script and the first main page

and get some coursework out of the way

 

[Hazure]

well i must say that it is sorta a cliche that the female companian falls for the main
why don't you swap them around? he falls for her and she doesn't see it until l8r or somewthing. either way it sounds kwl