KABUTO vs UCHIHA BROS (rewritten!)

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it was good read... although some points were stretching, you should make it a bit more concise,,, nevertheless it was a nice post...
 

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Oh this IS literally a Kabuto who can barely stand at this point. He's gone all-out on power overestimating his own powers, I mean he's been cut in half, battered, set on fire, exhausted ALL his chakra...he used his last attack on trying to undo the jutsu in time which left him open.

I'm glad you enjoyed it!
and I actually see that as an interesting but really sick ending to Kabuto's character- being LITERALLY consumed by Orochimaru. IMO that's MUCH darker than killing him.
I do see your point..It actually reminds me of The Lion King; Scar being defeated and consumed by the Hynea's that once served him at the end...

And yeah. I was thinking that was going to happen the entire time, and by the end of a long, ten plus chapter battle with Orochimaru, Kabuto would finally be restored and have had some change in views after his idol chose to devour him and use his body like that. I just hope we can see Kabuto somehow escaping Infinite Tsukuyomi :/
 
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This is better nice thread. The original one was basically all talking. Izanami and Izanagi are gods like the names of Itachi's aces so it's like a theme for him but I do agree some techniques came out from nowhere.
 

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Itachi could of soloed Kabuto. Too bad Kabuto had ET active.
 

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This is better nice thread. The original one was basically all talking. Izanami and Izanagi are gods like the names of Itachi's aces so it's like a theme for him but I do agree some techniques came out from nowhere.

Izanami, Izanagi, Susano'o, Amaterasu, Tsukuyomi, Yata, Sakegari: all pieces of Japanese religion/stories that Itachi possesses.
 

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Izanami, Izanagi, Susano'o, Amaterasu, Tsukuyomi, Yata, Sakegari: all pieces of Japanese religion/stories that Itachi possesses.

Yes but they're all used wrongly, other than Susano sealing away Orochi (the one time they got it right) the mythology is pretty much all wrong- they're just grand names and weak references.

Either way other than Tsukiyomi I actually hate all of those moves xD
 

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I don't get your point? :')

I'm not insulting Itachi? If anything Itachi wins in a way more badass way in this version. It's just izanami as a jutsu I don't like.

Okay, sorry but as I mentioned before, I haven't read your post, so I thought you were a Itachi hater or sth.
 
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badass prediction! (prediction? loool it already happened)

I like the ending and im glad the nerd died, he's cool but damn after all the bad stuff he did I think its the ending he deserved. He desecrated corpses and so the dead came and got revenge and made him one of them. I think there's something poetic in that. I got confused with the Manda II bit though isnt manda the size of a country!? HOW IS IT FIGHTING

Or is that 8 headed snake thing from the Chikara arc?

anyway good work!
 

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I love certain parts of it, like Kabuto summoning the Uchiha clan.
But I did not like the ending. Too dark for someone who didn't deserve any of this u_u

You think? This Kabuto went absolutely f*cking berserk by the way, Itachi got screwed over by the system and so did Kabuto. I think Kabuto's way more deserving of it considering he's defiled the dead and instigated a war. The guy shows signs he's gone too far by using psychological warfare (which is in character) and kills himself pretty much through his self-confidence- which is in character too

I just don't like what Kishi did to him considering he's apparently now in a cocoon without having done anything...
 

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maybe izanami was introduced because that's the way sasuke will break IT, when itachi gave sasuke amaterasu in the left eye he may given izanami for the right one?
 

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maybe izanami was introduced because that's the way sasuke will break IT, when itachi gave sasuke amaterasu in the left eye he may given izanami for the right one?

Possible but I severely doubt it. I don't think we're seeing it again.
 

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badass prediction! (prediction? loool it already happened)

I like the ending and im glad the nerd died, he's cool but damn after all the bad stuff he did I think its the ending he deserved. He desecrated corpses and so the dead came and got revenge and made him one of them. I think there's something poetic in that. I got confused with the Manda II bit though isnt manda the size of a country!? HOW IS IT FIGHTING

Or is that 8 headed snake thing from the Chikara arc?

anyway good work!

I often get those snakes mixed up tbh. The 8 tailed serpent was size of a skyscraper right? That's more suitable than AN ISLAND hahaha
 

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Very nice. Not much of a fan of how Kabuto got written out of the story nor am I a fan of the endless Uchiha-related deus-ex machinas.
 

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Conclusion: Itachi neg-diffs Kabuto in every possible scenario.
 

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Conclusion: Itachi neg-diffs Kabuto in every possible scenario.

Like the one I wrote? Where he's actually more of a badass than the original?

You should probably try read threads before you shitpost in em buddy.
 

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Yes, exactly. That's why I said;

Just doesn't really go with the thread really. Take your fanboying elsewhere, this tussle got settled years ago before you joined kiddo haha :')
 

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Loved it, excellent job. Some of the dialogue was a little strange, but you put a lot of effort into working out Kabuto's abilities and voice.
 
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