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She spreads her feet slightly apart, and holds her right hand in front of her. Her left hand is closer to her stomach, and lower than her right. She takes a look at the clone as it approaches her, taking note of its tenketsus. She charges at the clone as she places her pointer and middle finger together. As she approaches her enemy she raises her hands up in front of her. She stops in front of her target, and quickly brings her right hand in contact with the enemy's left shoulder. Followed by that was her left hand heading toward the enemy's right wrist. She quickly then jumps back and charges at him again. This time her right hand was trying to jab his left elbow, followed by her left hand trying to hit his right shoulder. She circles around the enemy to get behind him, in the process her left wrist was aiming for the left wrist. She jumps back and crouches to the ground, just to push off the ground toward the target's ankles. Her left hand aiming for the left ankle, her right hand aiming for the other. She then places her feet to the ground to circle to the right around the enemy, placing her left hand out to jab the enemy's right elbow.
Now that she was in front of the enemy she charges at him again. She jabs her right hand into the enemy's chest, then ducks to send her left hand heading towards the enemy's right knee. She quickly sends her right hand to the target's left knee then jumps back. She charges at the enemy again, this time striking four areas between the enemy's shoulders and elbows with her hands. She backs up again, then charges to aim at a spot between the elbows and the wrist on both of the target's arms. To finish up her task, her left hand heads up toward the enemy's forehead, while her right hand aims at the heart.


I apologize for the late response, I was focusing on school for a little bit. How was that?
 

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its nice but i noticed something.

You don't have to jump back and charge at your opponent everytime. What if you are doing a 361 strikes, then i wonder how many times you will jump back.

You see, the strikes are fast and done consecutively without giving the enemy a breathing space. With this the enemy won't be able to counter inbetween you jabs.
Once you take a rest and charge back at the opponent, he counters and you are not able to complete your attack.

now retry.
 

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Okay.

She spreads her feet slightly apart again, and holds her right hand in front of her. Her left hand is closer to her stomach, making sure it's lower than her right. She intensely focuses on the clone, finding twenty of it's tenketsus. She charges at the clone, placing her hands in front of her. She halts when she is directly in front of the target, and quickly strikes the enemy's left shoulder with her right hand. Her left hand instnatly followed it aiming toward the enemy's right wrist. Her right hand quickly aimed for his left elbow, followed by her left hand trying to hit his right shoulder.Her right hand then quickly went after the tenketsu in his left wrist. Her left hand then went after the enemy's right elbow, as her right hand follows to jab the chest. She quickly crounches on her knees so her left hand can strike the right ankle, and her right strikes the other. As she gets back up her right hand hits the left knee, her left hand aiming for the other. Her hands go to strike again, this time aiming for the four areas between the enemy's shoulders and elbows. Immediately afterwards she jabs at the area between the elbows and the wrist on both of the target's arms. Her left hand immediately aimed for the foreheard, while her right hand aims at the heart.
 

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you did quite well. Note however if i'm given a chance to hit just 20 of the tenketsus, i'll go for the delicate areas first.. hinhin*evil grin*


*I stand facing you and suddenly reduces my height as i go on a low stance with my left side facing you then you see me spin while a dome of spining chakra surrounds me. Your mouth opens wide in aww of what just happened*

"Don't worry padewan, you are going to do the same and we will move to the next stage when you pass"

(Hakkeshou Kaiten) - 8 Trigrams Heavenly Spin/Rotation
Rank: D
Type: Defence
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A(+20 if used to block an
attack) Description:The user pushes chakra out of all
there tenketsu and spin creating a dome shield
that can fend off most attacks.

Now I want you to focus some chakra on all your tenketsus, then push them out a little so that you are coated with blunt chakra then as you are being coated, you should immediately spin very fast so that the now chakra expunging from you will form a spining sphere of chakra around you.

Then tell me what you can do with the technique and its pro and cons.
 
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She focuses her chakra throughout her body to all the tenketsus in her body. She makes sure that she doesn't use too much chakra as she focuses it to her tenketsus. After focusing her chakra to her tenketsus, she slightly pushes the chakra from her tenketsus. She immediately turned her feet and balance herself as she spun around so the chakra could form a sphere of chakra.

If I remember correctly, the pros is that this jutsu can help block various techniques, and deflect people away. For the cons, I'm guessing is that leaves our blind spot open? That's the only thing I'm not sure of.

Sorry for the late reply again... I should be able to reply more often now.
 

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Okay but you should also know that you can still see with your byakugan while spining and for your doubt, while spining, it won't be easy also for an attacker to aim at your blind spot except someone like that spider-guy(remind me his name).

New development
Now, here's the deal. I'll post a set of jyuken
techniques while giving you basic ideas on them then I want you to tell me
* How you'll perform them(be elaborate
explaining what hand you use and which part
you hit in details)
* When and what situation you are likely to utilize them
* What you think of it. Have you a better way of using it creatively?
* Its pros and cons

okay the next two

(Tenketsu Shouda) - Chakra Point Pound
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user hits the tenketsu of the heart with gentle fist causing damage to their
heart.
This is D-rank but can be fatal when you time
your move perfectly. This is a simple move which I believe Neji used on Hinata.

(Hyuuga Ryuu Taijutsu) - Hyuuga Style Taijutsu
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: A mini barrage of gentle fist that equal 16 strikes.
Simply making 16 subtle palm strike while
hitting 16 tenketsus. When I say hitting the
tenketsu, its not your palm thats hitting it but
the sharp chakra from your palm/finger tips
(mostly middle and index), your palm/fingers is
only making contact with the
 

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For Tenketsu Shouda, I believe no hand signs are needed to perform it. As long as you have your Byakugan activated you should be able to use it. To use it, you would have to get close to the enemy from the front (I'm not sure if hitting the heart from the back would work or not). For this technique the point of it is to hit the tenketsu of the heart.
As for the situation where we would use it, I would think we would use it when we're close to running out of the chakra, because I believe whenever Neji used it on Hinata she started to fall into cardiac arrest. If it is successful on the enemy when we're low on chakra than it would benefit us since the enemy probably would not be able to fight back. I can't think of a way to use it in a creative way at the moment.
I would say its pro would be that the enemy possibly couldn't counter back if the move manages to put them into cardiac arrest. A con would be that as we're doing the technique, if the enemy were to dodge it than they might have an opening to attack.

For Hyuuga Ryuu Taijutsu, I think no hand signs are needed. Both hands would be required to use it, since the user would rotate hands as the chakra tips struck the tenketsus. I would think a situation where we would use this is whenever there's a group of enemies, since it's a barrage of gentle fist. It would be more effective than just using their gentle fist fighting style. A creative way to use it is that it can probably be used on something other than ninja. Since it's the chakra tips that actually touches the opponent, it could probably be used on insects (like that one technique Hinata used). A pro is that it can close the tenketsus that it strikes, and I would believe a con would be if the enemy injured your fingers then you may not be able to use the technique.
 

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For Tenketsu Shouda, I believe no hand signs are needed to perform it. As long as you have your Byakugan activated you should be able to use it. To use it, you would have to get close to the enemy from the front (I'm not sure if hitting the heart from the back would work or not). For this technique the point of it is to hit the tenketsu of the heart.
As for the situation where we would use it, I would think we would use it when we're close to running out of the chakra, because I believe whenever Neji used it on Hinata she started to fall into cardiac arrest. If it is successful on the enemy when we're low on chakra than it would benefit us since the enemy probably would not be able to fight back. I can't think of a way to use it in a creative way at the moment.
I would say its pro would be that the enemy possibly couldn't counter back if the move manages to put them into cardiac arrest. A con would be that as we're doing the technique, if the enemy were to dodge it than they might have an opening to attack.

For Hyuuga Ryuu Taijutsu, I think no hand signs are needed. Both hands would be required to use it, since the user would rotate hands as the chakra tips struck the tenketsus. I would think a situation where we would use this is whenever there's a group of enemies, since it's a barrage of gentle fist. It would be more effective than just using their gentle fist fighting style. A creative way to use it is that it can probably be used on something other than ninja. Since it's the chakra tips that actually touches the opponent, it could probably be used on insects (like that one technique Hinata used). A pro is that it can close the tenketsus that it strikes, and I would believe a con would be if the enemy injured your fingers then you may not be able to use the technique.
Great! i like the way you think and create.

As for your question, Logically yea, you can hit the heart from the back since you are inserting pin-point chakra, you can actually hit the heart from either the front or back.

Good one for the taijutsu....

Any question or something you need to know more before we proceed?
 

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No questions so far. I'm ready to proceed to the next part of the training.
Okay Next

Nel unwraps 5 red scrolls..

(Hakkeshou Kuuten) - 8 Trigrams Heavenly Sky
Rank: C
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A rotation were the user makes his/her chakra into razor sharp lines and spins
to attack and defend all in one move.
A larger rotation compared to the one we did before but now you also fine tune your chakra so it has sharp edgy lines around the sphere to deal ghastly damage to your opponent.

(Hakke Kuushou) - 8 Trigrams Air Palm
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Close-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30(+5 if they hit an object)
Description: The user pushes chakra out of there palm that blows away there opponent.
you simply charge chakra to any of your hand then while its stretched forwards, you will release it at once. Good to blow away things


(Shugo Hakke Rokujuuyonshou) - Protective 8
Trigrams 64 Strikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack/defense
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A defense that can block off attacks and an attack that closes 64 tenketsu
and limits chakra flow for one turn after the
opponent is hit by it
This is a seires of palm strikes where you will block 64 tenketsus so you chose wisely. Note: you won't give the opponent a breathing space once you begin the strike so the jabs runs concurrently at a very fast pace, though the first strike would disturb the opponent's chakra that he won't be able to react until you are finished closing 64 tenketsus. Opponent can't mold chakra at all for one turn, why?


(Byakugan Sanashige) – Byakugan three Kicks
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user kicks the opponent once on their knee, and then kicks them twice on
their face in rapid succession, sending them
spiraling upwards.
how will you creatively do this on a clone of mine? Also use the template.


(Byākugan Sandageki) – Byakugan Three
Strikes
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user grabs the opponents extended arm, flipping them around and then
strikes them thrice on the back, sending them
flying.
Neji used this on Naruto. First you find a way to grab the opponents arm then you flip/toss him to a direction making sure his back is facing you then jab him three times on his back.
 

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Okay Next

Nel unwraps 5 red scrolls..

(Hakkeshou Kuuten) - 8 Trigrams Heavenly Sky
Rank: C
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A rotation were the user makes his/her chakra into razor sharp lines and spins
to attack and defend all in one move.
A larger rotation compared to the one we did before but now you also fine tune your chakra so it has sharp edgy lines around the sphere to deal ghastly damage to your opponent.

(Hakke Kuushou) - 8 Trigrams Air Palm
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Close-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30(+5 if they hit an object)
Description: The user pushes chakra out of there palm that blows away there opponent.
you simply charge chakra to any of your hand then while its stretched forwards, you will release it at once. Good to blow away things


(Shugo Hakke Rokujuuyonshou) - Protective 8
Trigrams 64 Strikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack/defense
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: A defense that can block off attacks and an attack that closes 64 tenketsu
and limits chakra flow for one turn after the
opponent is hit by it
This is a seires of palm strikes where you will block 64 tenketsus so you chose wisely. Note: you won't give the opponent a breathing space once you begin the strike so the jabs runs concurrently at a very fast pace, though the first strike would disturb the opponent's chakra that he won't be able to react until you are finished closing 64 tenketsus. Opponent can't mold chakra at all for one turn, why?


(Byakugan Sanashige) – Byakugan three Kicks
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user kicks the opponent once on their knee, and then kicks them twice on
their face in rapid succession, sending them
spiraling upwards.
how will you creatively do this on a clone of mine? Also use the template.


(Byākugan Sandageki) – Byakugan Three
Strikes
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user grabs the opponents extended arm, flipping them around and then
strikes them thrice on the back, sending them
flying.
Neji used this on Naruto. First you find a way to grab the opponents arm then you flip/toss him to a direction making sure his back is facing you then jab him three times on his back.
I apologize if this seems like a stupid question, but you did want me to do what I did with the previous jutsus, right?
 

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(Hakkeshou Kuuten) - 8 Trigrams Heavenly Sky, as you mentioned is a larger rotation. Both hands is used to perform this jutsu. We would likely use this technique when the opponent is using a close range attack, that way when we use this technique not only would we be blocking the incoming attack the opponent would also get hurt. A creative way to use it, if possible, is probably to if something falls and you don't have enough time to move out of the way? A pro would be that like rotation your blind spot would be covered, and you can do some damage to the opponent. I'm not sure if there are any cons to this technique, and if there are I can't imagine one right now.

(Hakke Kuushou) - 8 Trigrams Air Palm could be used with either the left or right hand. I would imagine it all depends on which of user's hands is stronger. As mentioned in the title we use our palm to strike at the enemy, most likely around the chest, to push them back. We would most likely use it when we want to keep an enemy at a distance. I think the technique could be useful, and a way to use it is if it is meant to blow away things, if you use it towards the ground you might be able to jump further up in the air? A pro is that you can blow away your enemy and try to keep them at a distance, a con would be is that you would have to get close to your opponent to keep them at a distant.

(Shugo Hakke Rokujuuyonshou) - Protective 8 Trigrams 64 Strikes is a technique where we use both hands. We get to pick 64 tenketsus to block the chakra points of the opponent. We would use it in a serious fight, when we want to guarantee that our opponent will go a short amount of time without chakra. As for a way to use it creatively we could probably use it to knock someone out of genjutsu instead of just hitting them once. They can handle that extra pain. A pro is that we can block people's chakra, and depending on the tenketsus we hit we can cause serious damage. A con is that in the moment we use it we may not hit the tenketsus we wanted because we can't get the opponent a moment to attack. The opponent can't use chakra for a turn because of the fact part of this tenketsus are closed, so no chakra can go through them.

(Byakugan Sanashige) – Byakugan three Kicks is a jutsu we send the enemy spiraling upwards. I can't seem to come up with a creative way to use it on a clone, since the user kicks the knee once and then the face twice. With this jutsu we obviously use our feet, and not our hands. We would use this technique in a case where we would want the opponent in the air wanting to get an easy attack in while they're in midair. As I said earlier, I can't seem to find a creative way of using it, unless you try doing it on the back of the knee and then kick the back of their head? A pro is that you'll get the enemy in the year, a con is that while kicking the enemy if they try to throw a kunai or shuriken the user may not be able to react right away.

(Byākugan Sandageki) – Byakugan Three Strikes is a technique where we use both of our hands, and we jab the enemy in the back a few times. We would use this in a situation where we want to get more attacks in. I can't think of a creative way to use it now, but I think there would be a creative way to use it. A pro is that you can send the enemy flying, gaining distance. A con is that there might be a chance the enemy can flip the user.
 

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Superb!



While you finish training for the day, you head home. Its almost night and the light is becoming dimmer as your shadow gains weight. Unknown to you, some ninjas are hating and jealous of your new found power and they seek to eliminate you before you complete your training.

Scenerio 1: As you pass through a place with several mesh of trees which they hid, they toss a kunai to your feet to signal the bullseye and a sign for other to commence attack, then this is followed by hundreds of kunai being hurled at you, not at once but concurrently.
Your byakugan is not activated as you head home so you won't notice anything before the first kunai.
You can't use rotation.
Use what you have learnt so far in jyuken to defend yourself from the mayhem of kunais.

Scenerio 2: Instead of hurling kunai at you, they jump out and surround you, 4 of them! Disable of all them with jyuken and freeform without using rotation and 64 strikes.
You can use taijutsu if you have it.

Scenerio 3: while you make your way through the woods, you are secretely put in a genjutsu where your sense of direction is taken away. You byakugan is not activated and as you move through the forest thinking you are going home, you are unknowingly to you moving towards a cliff which bottom is full of hot lava. You will fall into the creamy magma and melt away. Find a way to bring yourself out of the situation, ofcos you need your byakugan but you should find a way to activate it creatively without God-modding.^^

Scenerio 4: My clone awaits you with all those invaders out in the blue, then she wants to fight you too, seems she is in a state of madness. Attack me with just 3 moves comprising of 2 jyuken moves and one any other move you think you can combine with it.


Lets see how you fair!
 
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