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Ryuu arrived quietly at the training grounds where he would train in the art of his clan. He made sure he had his little notebook and a pen for communication purposes.
 

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Priest entered and spot the student from afar. He called out for him and ask him to aTtack him. Priest would be testing the student for a change and the student need not hold back even though he can't activate the byakugan yet.
 

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It seemed someone had arrived, and he asked Ryuu to attack him. He guessed he was the teacher. But what a funny request. He had never been asked to attack someone before at the beginning of training just like that. It was interesting, though Ryuu's face didn't show it. As usual, he wore his bored expression. He studied the guy, who seemed to be in his forties, and had blonde hair. The scar on his face and his tallness did intimidate Ryuu a little, given he was just a kid.

Oh well, Ryuu was kind of excited at attacking someone, but he didn't want to kill his teacher or harm him, for how else would he learn then? Thus, he opted for a funnier attack which would merely shock the green eyed man.

Gathering chakra in his hands, Ryuu slammed them into the ground, causing the ground beneath Priest to lower at a high speed until he was about ten metres down. Ryuu then gathered more chakra, before slamming his hands into the ground again. This time, a massive amount of water came falling from the sky above Priest, drenching him. Well, this would be a bit of a wet start to training.

Ryuu looked on with a bored expression, although he was actually laughing inside.

(Doton: Chidōkaku) - Earth Release: Moving Earth Core
Rank: A
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user slams his hands on the ground and lowers or raises the ground in the surrounding area at high speeds, allowing them to create giant holes in the ground or avoid attacks. The size of the affected area as well as the depths that it is lowered to is up to the user and rasing earth can be done up to 20 meters tall creating a small cliff or they can create trenches that can be as deep as 20 meters. Other than being moved below ground relative to the surrounding surface the terrain is not altered, plant life and people retaining their same positions.
(Suiton: Haran Banshō) - Water Release: Stormy Blockade
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will slam their hands against then ground allowing him/her to summon a massive amount of water from the sky, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in an instant.
Note: The water needs to be summoned at least 10 meters above the opponent to have any real effect.
 

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As the ground lowers Priest laughs and awaits what could happen next. Upon seeing the water falling towards him, he would mold the water into snake, make it convey him out of the hole until they're out and on solid ground.

You've got quite the trick and some offensive power, but is that all you've got?
 

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Oh, well it seemed that his attack had not had any effect on the man. But then again, he had not intended to inflict any damage on him. After hearing what Priest said, Ryuu stared back with a blank expression, all the while deciding that he would attack for real this time after all. Looking back at the pit behind his teacher, Tiashe formulated a plan which he thought might work. But then again, he had no doubts that the man would be able to defend against it.

Performing the hand seal and molding his chakra to match that of earth, Ryuu slammed his hands onto the ground, allowing the chakra to travel to the ground underneath and around the man. He manipulated the ground here to become chunks of rubble which would damage a person. However, he expected that Priest would jump up to avoid the technique, allowing him to follow through with his next attack.

(Doton: Tsuchi Douyou no Hira) – Earth Release: Earth Shaking Palm
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After performing snake hand seal the user slams their hand on the ground. The result is that the ground becomes heavily turned up with chunks of rubble popping out of the ground. This technique is used as a means to distract opponents to either create an escape or follow through with a surprise attack although it can also do some damage or be udes to destroy enemy earth techniques of equal rank and below.
Gathering a large amount of chakra in his right arm, Ryuu let it out from his hand as a large claw made from wind. Attached to his hand, Ryuu moved this large claw with tremendous force till it slammed into Priest. Grabbing the man with the claw, Ryuu threw him into the pit which was behind him (Priest).

(Fūton: Jūha Reppū Shō) - Wind Style: Beast Tearing Gale Palm
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: This technique is somewhat of an enhanced version of the Beast Tearing Palm. It used chakra to infused with and condense a mass amount of wind to form a massive demonic-like claw extending from the user's dominant hand to strike and grab a target, as well as deflect any weapon or attack. In addition to making it a deadly short to mid-range weapon, the extending claw also carries tremendous force that can devastate anything in its path without affecting the user, making it useful for dislodging solid and heavy objects.
As his teacher would fall, Ryuu performed the required hand seals whilst molding earth chakra in his right hand. Slamming it onto the ground, he released the chakra so that it traveled to the pit. He manipulated the earth around the hole that his teacher had fallen in to start collapsing on itself with jagged rock jutting out of it.

(Doton: Retsudo Tenshō) - Earth Release: Tearing Earth Turning Palm
Rank: B-Rank
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After performing the required hand seals Boar → Ox → placing hand on the ground, the user causes the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them in a mayhem of jagged rocks. This technique is capable of causing quite a bit of damage to a large area. This technique is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave.
Would Priest fall into this and be harmed, or would Ryuu be able to have a teacher left alive to teach him the art of his clan?
 

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As the ground begin to vibrate, Priest releases his lightning chakra into the ground to stop whatever earth jutsu is coming up. He would disappear and appear behind his student, whispering something in his ears. You did good.

Priest motions his student to sit for a while.

Now tell me all you know about the Hyuga clan and their power.
 

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Tch, his nicely planned attack had been stopped just like that. Ryuu was surprised to find that Priest had disappeared and had all of a sudden just reappeared by his side. Listening to his words, he felt a chill run down his spine, realizing how strong the man was. He did not let any of the shock show on his face though. He was at least glad that he was praised for his attack, and that he had someone to teach him.

Sitting down, Ryuu looked to Priest, before looking at the ground. How was he going to explain this? His lack of speech. Taking his notebook out of his pocket, Ryuu wrote in big letters which covered two adjacent pages.

I don't speak, for reasons I prefer not to say... As such, I will be using this notebook to communicate with you.

Once he had let his teacher know, Ryuu rested the notebook on one of his legs and started to write in it.

As a member of the clan, I do know a fair bit about the clan. I'll start off with the general knowledge of the clan. The Hyūga clan is one of the most powerful that exist in our village, mainly because of the doujutsu they possess; the Byakugan. The clan itself is divided into two; the Main Family and the Branch Family. The latter exists to serve the former, and a seal is placed upon their foreheads when they reach a certain age. This is to have control over them. I myself am a member of the Branch Family, but due to the unstable condition of the heir to the Main Branch, I am still free.

Now, the Byakugan is a very powerful eye which allows the user to see almost 360 degrees around themselves. There is a blind spot at a certain spot behind the neck though. It can allow them to see up to far distances, and even through solid objects. It can also see the chakra circulatory system of a person, which helps in battle.

Since Hyūga clan members can see the chakra circulatory system, they are able to use the Gentle Fist style to hit precisely where they are meant to hit in order to injure or kill the opponent. The Gentle Fist style, which is what I wish to learn, gives ninja excellent control over chakra, and even allows us to emit chakra through every chakra pore in the body.


Having written what he knew, Ryuu got up and handed Priest his little notebook so that he could read it.
 

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Sorry for the delay. School work.



Priest collects the notebook, reads it and nod.

You did well and quite you are on point. So before we start with the jyuken, You'll be needing you byakugan eh? So let's start by activating your byakugan.

Now begin to gather you chakra towards your eyes and see if you are able cause the byakugan to surface.
 

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Retrieving his notebook, Ryuu walked back to where he was before. He gathered some chakra and channeled it to his eyes, trying to awaken the Byakugan. It took a while, but eventually, his pupils became more distinct, and the veins around the temple bulged out.

Amazed at what he could now see, Ryuu moved his head around slowly, absorbing everything in. Holding up his hands, he saw the chakra flowing through them. He looked over to Priest as well, who provided him with a full body chakra system to look at.
 

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Looking at the clones that his teacher had made, Ryuu looked at them all, trying to figure out where the real one was. However, they all looked the same to him. Shaking his head, he indicated to Priest that he had no idea which the real one was.
 

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Sorry for the later reply.



Correct.

Priest moves over to the student.

Well the byakugan allows you to view the entire chakra nodes. How many do we have in total?

It also allows for one to see the internals of another. Mention 3 delicate internals that you see that when hit or injured, can be lethal.

One is able to see all around you, view chakra with keen detail, zoom one's vision and even see through any matter. That is why you are able to see my entrails in the first place.
 

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As Priest asked how many chakra nodes there were in the body, Ryuu looked closely at his teacher's body, counting every chakra node. After he did that, he drew with his fingers in the air, the number 361. That was how many he had counted.

To answer the next question, Ryuu looked closely at his teacher again, and deciding what he thought would be delicate organs, Ryuu put a hand over his chest, indicating his heart. That was one. He then placed his hand lower down to indicate his liver. The final one he touched were both his lungs. The whole time he was doing this, Ryuu had zoomed into the body to get a closer look at the workings of the chakra system. He then zoomed back out to look at his surroundings normally again.
 

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Priest nods again at the brilliant answer from his student. This time, he'll ask the student to sit in a meditative position and begin to mold his chakra, channelling it all over his body and outwards on the surface of his skin. Then he'll begin to spin while making the chakra focused around him into a sphere, aided by the spinning motion.

Priest would make 100 clones while student performs what he instructed.
 

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Gathering chakra all around his body, Ryuu channeled it to all the chakra pores on his body. Then, spinning his body, he released all this chakra out from the chakra holes. Since he was spinning, the chakra took on the shape of a sphere around Ryuu.
 

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Good. What you have just done is know as the least version of Kaiten. An absolute defense but the power of this is only able to fend off weapons and D-rank and beloww jutsu. For the next one I want you to choose one of my clone, locate the tenketsu on his heart, while you focus and release chakra into your index and middle finger, shaping it into a needle that protrudes outwards, then you hit the tenketsu of the heart.

Priest commands a clone to move close to the student and motions him to start.

What are the possible effect of what you have just done?
 

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Ryuu nodded at Priest's explanation, before listening to further instructions. As a clone stepped forward, Ryuu looked at it with his Byakugan and noted the tenketsu on it's heart. Channeling his chakra into the middle and index fingers of his right hand, the boy rushed forward and in one swift move, he jabbed his needle like fingers onto the tenketsu of the clone's heart, causing it to disappear. As that happened, he stood back up straight again to his normal posture and took out his notebook to write the answer to his teacher's question.

Well, I'm guessing that if the tenketsu of the heart is hit, then chakra flow will not reach the heart and result in the person's death?

Ryuu walked over to Priest to allow him to read what he wrote.
 

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Correct, chakra would fail to flow to the heart's chakra node cause irregularities but not enough to cause the heart. The damage to the heart comes from the force from the hit which may cause tissue surrounding the heart to rupture.

Priest would tell the student to perform the same one more time but this time around, he would be focusing more chakra and would hit 8 tenketsus from the clone's body. After this he would do a bigger version of the Kaiten, focus more chakra and spinning to make an even bigger rotating sphere to fend off 3 of his clones. Priest commands 3 clones to attack after 8 tenketsus of the first clone is been hit.
 

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Focusing his gaze on a clone nearby, Ryuu Moved closer to it and channeled chakra into his fingers. After doing so, he hit eight tenketsu on the clone's body in various places at the upper part, using the middle and index fingers of both hands. This of course caused the clone to disappear.

Ryuu then noticed three clones rushing towards him. Focusing chakra to all the chakra nodes in his body, Ryuu started to rotate his body, whilst at the same time releasing the chakra from chakra holes all around his body. This created a dome of chakra which protected him from the clones who disappeared upon contact with his chakra.
 

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Priest shakes his head in acknowledgement.

I want you now to locate 16 tenketsus, then move to 64 then 128 and finally close the entire 361 tenketsus. It would take sometime to get it at a go but practice on these clones.

Priest provides clones that would be enough for the student to practice on.
 
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