[Other] Justice's Urn

[Cyanide Addiction]

Some say we're getting soft and lame
Murder used to mean a life in return
You did more than lose your name
You joined the victim in the urn

Justice is harder to come by
Evil forces and gangs live in the day
Only by their own do they die
Now how's that for justice today?

Some call this talk crazy
And bring up racism and poorly trained cops
Well we call this law enforcement lazy
But when it's your family, time just stops

You're so worried about their race or name
It doesn't matter to us who killed'em
Punish them dirty cops the same
Hang'em high and send'em to the place that chills'em

Then burn'em with the rest in turn
The truly deserving will burn in hell
We'll just throw out their ash's urn
Justice will be their funeral bell​

 

[Slowpoke]

Nice poem. You need to teach me.

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[Slowpoke]

Nice poem. You need to teach me.

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[Cyanide Addiction]

Nice poem. You need to teach me.

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First of all, you need only post once. (I'm kidding, I know it was probably on accident.)
Secondly... It's not really something that can be taught. Sure you can be taught to rhyme, but you have to make it flow on your own. You also have to have something you feel passionately about, to write about.