[Jokey Sempai Spot] Oasis Nara vs -Cobalt-

[-Cobalt-]

Rei's R&R
Mid Range
No Killing or Stealing
No CE/CJ
Only basic 5 and nin/gen/tai/ken (waiting for Jokey's confirmation whether we can use our KG)
Plain open field with water source mid range of us to my left

We will do 5 moves each me having the first move after you post your bio. I will be using Yamato of course (in sig, needs update). If Jokey informs me of any changes I will edit this post according to him (rule changes).

Good luck to the both of us and let the better one win ^^.​

 

[Bruce Banner]

Yes Good luck for both of us, Final results of this fight will not effect our friendship right?

Shikaku Nara bio, shadow on sig.
Please make your first move Cobalt.

 

[-Cobalt-]

Yes Good luck for both of us, Final results of this fight will not effect our friendship right?

Shikaku Nara bio, shadow on sig.
Please make your first move Cobalt.

Of course they won't, no worries ^^.

If you happen to have an issue with my moves here is my MSN so you can contact me ^^.

[email protected]

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-I focus my water chakra beneath you creating a gushing flow of water which forms into an orb of water entrapping you inside of the orb, not allowing you to move properly and suffocating you over time. Due to Suiton being one of my affinities this techniques happens very quickly.-

(Suiton: Funshutsu Mizu Kinko) - Water Release: Gushing Water Imprisonment
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates a flow of gushing water under the opponent which traps them in a sphere of water. The user can perform an attack while the opponent is trapped. This jutsu is similar to Water Prison Technique, though the user doesn't need to keep his arm in the sphere of water.
Note: Technique creates its own water source

-As you are trapped in the orb I clap my hands together and send a wave of electricity from my palms towards you and the orb. As you are trapped inside the orb of water the power of the lightning technique would be amplified zapping you inside the water causing severe damage. Due to this being a fast technique it happens only a couple of seconds after my water technique thus I would be using them in quick succession.-

(Raiton: Kangekiha) – Lightning Release: Wave of Inspiration
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 25
Damage point: 30 (normally) 50 (when used in conjunction with water technique)
Description: After using a Water Style technique, the user releases a wave of electricity that can electrocute any water within range, electrocuting and knocking back an opponent in contact with the water. When used without a water technique, its power is moderate. The technique can be used extremely quickly, so that it finishes almost in conjunction with the previous jutsu.

-As if this wasn't enough I channel my chakra into the ground around you and cause 5 spikes of earth to pop out of the ground impaling you as you are trapped in the water still under the effect of my lightning technique.-

(Doton: Ganchūsō) - Earth Release: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique lets the user create a few rock pillars that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The rock pillars will even pass through obstacles to reach their target.

 

[Bruce Banner]

Of course they won't, no worries ^^.

If you happen to have an issue with my moves here is my MSN so you can contact me ^^.

[email protected]

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-I focus my water chakra beneath you creating a gushing flow of water which forms into an orb of water entrapping you inside of the orb, not allowing you to move properly and suffocating you over time. Due to Suiton being one of my affinities this techniques happens very quickly.-

(Suiton: Funshutsu Mizu Kinko) - Water Release: Gushing Water Imprisonment
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates a flow of gushing water under the opponent which traps them in a sphere of water. The user can perform an attack while the opponent is trapped. This jutsu is similar to Water Prison Technique, though the user doesn't need to keep his arm in the sphere of water.
Note: Technique creates its own water source

-As you are trapped in the orb I clap my hands together and send a wave of electricity from my palms towards you and the orb. As you are trapped inside the orb of water the power of the lightning technique would be amplified zapping you inside the water causing severe damage. Due to this being a fast technique it happens only a couple of seconds after my water technique thus I would be using them in quick succession.-

(Raiton: Kangekiha) – Lightning Release: Wave of Inspiration
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 25
Damage point: 30 (normally) 50 (when used in conjunction with water technique)
Description: After using a Water Style technique, the user releases a wave of electricity that can electrocute any water within range, electrocuting and knocking back an opponent in contact with the water. When used without a water technique, its power is moderate. The technique can be used extremely quickly, so that it finishes almost in conjunction with the previous jutsu.

-As if this wasn't enough I channel my chakra into the ground around you and cause 5 spikes of earth to pop out of the ground impaling you as you are trapped in the water still under the effect of my lightning technique.-

(Doton: Ganchūsō) - Earth Release: Stone Spikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique lets the user create a few rock pillars that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The rock pillars will even pass through obstacles to reach their target.

It is a honor to me to face you Yamato-San, don't halt your power on me
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I'm feeling a gushing flow of water beneath me start to appear, I know something bad wet going to happen so i quickly create a small pillar beneath my feet to propel me backward diagonally 45 degrees to long range, so your water won't harm me.
Note : your last 2 jutsu also at mid range so they won't harm me either​

(Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Release Technique

Spoiler

Rank: D
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Descripton: Creates small pillars of earth, small tools, and small shields of earth

A moment after i propelling my self backward and before landed to the ground, also your water loose it target, i quickly open up a portal above your head and quickly drop an Earthen Lid upon you which will smash and crush you​

(Doton: Otoshibuta) – Earth Release: Dropping Lid

Spoiler

Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user creates a giant, boar-shaped, earthen lid high in the air that falls on the target, trapping them underneath.

As i'm propelling my self backward only 45degress so my landing time would done quickly, and when i landed on the ground i created 2 shadow clone which standing in front of me, Hulk right side and Dave left side.​

(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique

Spoiler

Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.

 

[-Cobalt-]

It is a honor to me to face you Yamato-San, don't halt your power on me
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I'm feeling a gushing flow of water beneath me start to appear, I know something bad wet going to happen so i quickly create a small pillar beneath my feet to propel me backward diagonally 45 degrees to long range, so your water won't harm me.
Note : your last 2 jutsu also at mid range so they won't harm me either​

(Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Release Technique

Spoiler

Rank: D
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Descripton: Creates small pillars of earth, small tools, and small shields of earth

A moment after i propelling my self backward and before landed to the ground, also your water loose it target, i quickly open up a portal above your head and quickly drop an Earthen Lid upon you which will smash and crush you​

(Doton: Otoshibuta) – Earth Release: Dropping Lid

Spoiler

Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user creates a giant, boar-shaped, earthen lid high in the air that falls on the target, trapping them underneath.

As i'm propelling my self backward only 45degress so my landing time would done quickly, and when i landed on the ground i created 2 shadow clone which standing in front of me, Hulk right side and Dave left side.​

(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique

Spoiler

Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.

I'll attempt to hold back Shikaku-san but I cannot promise you anything.

-As you transport yourself to long range and open the portal above my head, I notice the shadow above me so I raise my hands above my head focusing Rai chakra into my palms. The moment I touch the lid a powerful stream of lightning is emitted from my hands eradicating the part of the lid directly above me and then the rest. This should leave me unharmed.-

(Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 (+5 if used in conjunction with a water jutsu)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.

-By the time I do this you would probably have landed already and created your clones so I quickly focus my chakra beneath you causing three huge pillars/spikes of earth to erupt behind you, to your left (my right) and in front of you. I create the spikes at a low angle so taking in account their size they would impale you almost instantly as they pop out.-

(Doton: Kujo Joushou Iwa Chuuseki) - Earth Release: Destructive Rising Rock Pillars
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: This jutsu causes gigantic pillars of rock to forcefully emerge from the ground. This is a even greater scaled Earth Release: Rising Spikes and is large enough to impale a summoning technique.

-In quick succession to the first technique I perform a single hand seal and cause a water dragon to fly out of the water source to my left (your right) and fly towards you and your clones which would be struggling with the pillars/spikes. It would hit your right side where the water source is located at (your right) thus all your escape ways would be blocked.-

(Suiton: Suiryuudan no Jutsu) - Water Style: Water Dragon Bullet Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After performing a long series of hand seals Ox → Monkey → Hare → Rat → Boar → Bird → Ox → Horse → Bird → Rat → Tiger → Dog → Tiger → Snake → Ox → Ram → Snake → Boar → Ram → Rat → Yang Water → Monkey → Bird → Dragon → Bird → Ox → Horse → Ram → Tiger → Snake → Rat → Monkey → Hare → Boar → Dragon → Ram → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Bird → Yang Water → Rat → Boar → Bird the user then shapes a large amount of water into a giant, powerful dragon, which hits the opponent with formidable might, dealing physical damage. The ideal place to use it is near a body of water, but if the user's skill allows it, it is possible to use it even in a place where there is none. The amount of water used will be in proportion with the user's skill. Tobirama was able to use this technique with a single hand seal showing testiment to his skill in water ninjutsu.
Note: Requires a water source to use.

 

[Bruce Banner]

I'll attempt to hold back Shikaku-san but I cannot promise you anything.

-As you transport yourself to long range and open the portal above my head, I notice the shadow above me so I raise my hands above my head focusing Rai chakra into my palms. The moment I touch the lid a powerful stream of lightning is emitted from my hands eradicating the part of the lid directly above me and then the rest. This should leave me unharmed.-

(Raiton: Jibashi) - Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30 (+5 if used in conjunction with a water jutsu)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to create a wave of electricity from the user's hands. This jutsu can vary in power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water jutsu.

-By the time I do this you would probably have landed already and created your clones so I quickly focus my chakra beneath you causing three huge pillars/spikes of earth to erupt behind you, to your left (my right) and in front of you. I create the spikes at a low angle so taking in account their size they would impale you almost instantly as they pop out.-

(Doton: Kujo Joushou Iwa Chuuseki) - Earth Release: Destructive Rising Rock Pillars
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: This jutsu causes gigantic pillars of rock to forcefully emerge from the ground. This is a even greater scaled Earth Release: Rising Spikes and is large enough to impale a summoning technique.

-In quick succession to the first technique I perform a single hand seal and cause a water dragon to fly out of the water source to my left (your right) and fly towards you and your clones which would be struggling with the pillars/spikes. It would hit your right side where the water source is located at (your right) thus all your escape ways would be blocked.-

(Suiton: Suiryuudan no Jutsu) - Water Style: Water Dragon Bullet Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After performing a long series of hand seals Ox → Monkey → Hare → Rat → Boar → Bird → Ox → Horse → Bird → Rat → Tiger → Dog → Tiger → Snake → Ox → Ram → Snake → Boar → Ram → Rat → Yang Water → Monkey → Bird → Dragon → Bird → Ox → Horse → Ram → Tiger → Snake → Rat → Monkey → Hare → Boar → Dragon → Ram → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Bird → Yang Water → Rat → Boar → Bird the user then shapes a large amount of water into a giant, powerful dragon, which hits the opponent with formidable might, dealing physical damage. The ideal place to use it is near a body of water, but if the user's skill allows it, it is possible to use it even in a place where there is none. The amount of water used will be in proportion with the user's skill. Tobirama was able to use this technique with a single hand seal showing testiment to his skill in water ninjutsu.
Note: Requires a water source to use.

As my Lid got destroyed, we heard a crack from the ground in front of me (as you state just aiming me) so I notice that an earthen jutsu will attack us, then with no hand seal I active non focus electricity from all over my body which spread out into your air which destroy the pillars when they start to forming and reach me and also I spread it through the ground which cancel your earth chakra so the earth spikes will never harm us.​

(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current

Spoiler

Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.

Then hulk which standing in my right see a dragon water forming from the water source nearby and fly toward him, so he quickly perform a single hand seal to rise up a giant plateau beneath us and levitate the 3 of us up ward so your dragon water would’ve just hit the plateau base and cause only a little shake ​

(Doton: Doryū Jōheki) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Rampart

Spoiler

Rank: B
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: By performing the Tiger hand seal the user then makes a gigantic rampart rise up beneath the user's feet, by shaping the ground and increasing the amount of earth with chakra. Depending on what the user imagines, the shape of the rampart can be anything from level ground to a steep, needle-like mountain. If the user increases the volume of earth too much, he can be forced to keep his chakra consumption down. The user can combine this jutsu with Water Style: Waterfall Basin Technique to create a waterfall.

When the plateau risen up, I grab Dave’s right hand and send it up ward to sky high 45 degrees when dave reach Mid range above you diagonally he then delivered a giant hurricane fist toward you, while I simultaneously grab 4 explosive kunais from my pouch and throw it between you and dave then detonate it to explode causing a huge fire in the air between you and dave and also where the hurricane fist takes the fire and make it a wind fire combo toward you which will crash upon you causing a huge explosion.​

(Fūton: Senpūken) - Wind Style: Hurricane Fist
Rank: B

Spoiler

Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: The user delievers a punch that releases a giant, adaptable whirlwind.

Dave then landed on your right side (my left side) in mid range while his eyes watch you closely​

 

[-Cobalt-]

As my Lid got destroyed, we heard a crack from the ground in front of me (as you state just aiming me) so I notice that an earthen jutsu will attack us, then with no hand seal I active non focus electricity from all over my body which spread out into your air which destroy the pillars when they start to forming and reach me and also I spread it through the ground which cancel your earth chakra so the earth spikes will never harm us.​

(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current

Spoiler

Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.

Then hulk which standing in my right see a dragon water forming from the water source nearby and fly toward him, so he quickly perform a single hand seal to rise up a giant plateau beneath us and levitate the 3 of us up ward so your dragon water would’ve just hit the plateau base and cause only a little shake ​

(Doton: Doryū Jōheki) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Rampart

Spoiler

Rank: B
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: By performing the Tiger hand seal the user then makes a gigantic rampart rise up beneath the user's feet, by shaping the ground and increasing the amount of earth with chakra. Depending on what the user imagines, the shape of the rampart can be anything from level ground to a steep, needle-like mountain. If the user increases the volume of earth too much, he can be forced to keep his chakra consumption down. The user can combine this jutsu with Water Style: Waterfall Basin Technique to create a waterfall.

When the plateau risen up, I grab Dave’s right hand and send it up ward to sky high 45 degrees when dave reach Mid range above you diagonally he then delivered a giant hurricane fist toward you, while I simultaneously grab 4 explosive kunais from my pouch and throw it between you and dave then detonate it to explode causing a huge fire in the air between you and dave and also where the hurricane fist takes the fire and make it a wind fire combo toward you which will crash upon you causing a huge explosion.​

(Fūton: Senpūken) - Wind Style: Hurricane Fist
Rank: B

Spoiler

Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: The user delievers a punch that releases a giant, adaptable whirlwind.

Dave then landed on your right side (my left side) in mid range while his eyes watch you closely​

There are a few issues in your move but I will continue nonetheless. I'm enjoying the battle with you ^^.

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-As you raise your rampart and my dragon crushes into the rampart the water loses it's form I use my chakra to make it raise up from your right side in the form of a huge wave that is powerful enough to push away a tailed beast. The wave would deal blunt damage to you breaking several bones, poof your clones and push you off the rampart on your left side. This would force you to defend and stop the rest of your move. I start sprinting towards you channeling chakra to my feet in order to reach you faster and get to mid range.-

(Suiton: Kyojin Nami Shougeki) – Water Release: Giant Wave Crash
Rank: A
Type: Offensive , Deffence
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user gathers a large amount of water that can then be used to crash into the opponent. It is strong enough to push back Killer bee in Eight tales form.
Note: Requires a water source

-As I enter mid range I continue running in an arc towards you I focus my chakra into your body cutting the nerves and bonds between your muscles and brain thus leaving your whole body paralyzed. If you used lightning to free yourself from the effects of this technique you would be shocked thus hurting yourself even more and worsening your condition.-

(Kanashibari no Jutsu) - Temporary Body Paralysis Technique
Rank: D
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:15
Damge Points:N/A
Description: Kanashibari no Jutsu is an advanced Ninjutsu technique used to temporarily bind an individual or animal. With the person frozen in place, the ninja can either take the opportunity to attack or to retreat.


-The water would push your paralyzed body to the opposite side of the rampart throwing you off the edge and damaging you even further by breaking more bones in your body rendering it useless. I make it even worse and channel my chakra into the ground beneath you creating an antlion that sucks you into the ground suffocating you beneath the surface. This added to the water that fell from the rampart should increase the speed of the antlions suction taking you in even faster than usually.-

(Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Antlion Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user performs the Ram hand seal and causes causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the centre, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated. The range of the pit is determined by how much chakra is put into the technique.

My apologies Shikaku-san but I cannot afford to lose this battle.

 

[Bruce Banner]

There are a few issues in your move but I will continue nonetheless. I'm enjoying the battle with you ^^.

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-As you raise your rampart and my dragon crushes into the rampart the water loses it's form I use my chakra to make it raise up from your right side in the form of a huge wave that is powerful enough to push away a tailed beast. The wave would deal blunt damage to you breaking several bones, poof your clones and push you off the rampart on your left side. This would force you to defend and stop the rest of your move. I start sprinting towards you channeling chakra to my feet in order to reach you faster and get to mid range.-

(Suiton: Kyojin Nami Shougeki) – Water Release: Giant Wave Crash
Rank: A
Type: Offensive , Deffence
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user gathers a large amount of water that can then be used to crash into the opponent. It is strong enough to push back Killer bee in Eight tales form.
Note: Requires a water source

-As I enter mid range I continue running in an arc towards you I focus my chakra into your body cutting the nerves and bonds between your muscles and brain thus leaving your whole body paralyzed. If you used lightning to free yourself from the effects of this technique you would be shocked thus hurting yourself even more and worsening your condition.-

(Kanashibari no Jutsu) - Temporary Body Paralysis Technique
Rank: D
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:15
Damge Points:N/A
Description: Kanashibari no Jutsu is an advanced Ninjutsu technique used to temporarily bind an individual or animal. With the person frozen in place, the ninja can either take the opportunity to attack or to retreat.


-The water would push your paralyzed body to the opposite side of the rampart throwing you off the edge and damaging you even further by breaking more bones in your body rendering it useless. I make it even worse and channel my chakra into the ground beneath you creating an antlion that sucks you into the ground suffocating you beneath the surface. This added to the water that fell from the rampart should increase the speed of the antlions suction taking you in even faster than usually.-

(Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Antlion Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user performs the Ram hand seal and causes causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the centre, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated. The range of the pit is determined by how much chakra is put into the technique.

My apologies Shikaku-san but I cannot afford to lose this battle.

You forgot that Hulk still in my right side and dealing with your water all along, so he notice that a water wave going to crash upon us, Hulk quickly create a humongous stone golem monster from below the rampart and halt the water wave smash, while simultaneously so Dave and Shikaku still continue performing their move by sending you a fire hurricane fist.​

(Doton: Dai iwa Kyojin no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Great Stone Golem Technique

Spoiler

Rank: S
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long (Made short range of the user with a long range reach)
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user creates a even larger and stronger version of Earth Release: Stone Golem Technique.

You are a fine Shinobi and a great opponent, but i'm also have to win this fight till the last drop of my blood xd

 

[Pervyy]

Jamal, i was asked to look at this, but i can clearly see atleast 5 mistakes so far. I'll point them out if you wish, if not i'll leave these two to continue.

 

[Jokey]

Jamal, i was asked to look at this, but i can clearly see atleast 5 mistakes so far. I'll point them out if you wish, if not i'll leave these two to continue.

Thanks Dan, If you get the time, please explain their mistakes for me.

I currently am reading the fight and I will give my opinion when I'm finished reading.

 

[Pervyy]

Sorry in advance Oasis but it's your moves that i think are wrong.

1st move - You tried to escape gushing water inprisonment with earth pillars. This is wrong for a few reasons i believe:
1. If you've played the game you'd see the water forms almost instantly
2. If you used the pillar to escape it would have to be before the water starts which would break the time frame
3. D rank breaking out of B rank doesn't work IMO

Also you said the lid crushes him, but it's a hollow lid if you look cafefully.

2nd move - You used Nagashi before the pillars form. The ground doesn't shake then they shoot up, they just shoot up. And by that time they are hitting you and your clones, so you either broke the timeframe or all your clones should have died here i believe.

I also don't think the rampart is fast enough for stop the water dragon, just my opinion too.

From these two moves you just seemed to have made several mistakes in my opinion which wouldn't make your last move valid.

 

[Bruce Banner]

Sorry in advance Oasis but it's your moves that i think are wrong.

1st move - You tried to escape gushing water inprisonment with earth pillars. This is wrong for a few reasons i believe:
1. If you've played the game you'd see the water forms almost instantly
2. If you used the pillar to escape it would have to be before the water starts which would break the time frame
3. D rank breaking out of B rank doesn't work IMO

Also you said the lid crushes him, but it's a hollow lid if you look cafefully.

2nd move - You used Nagashi before the pillars form. The ground doesn't shake then they shoot up, they just shoot up. And by that time they are hitting you and your clones, so you either broke the timeframe or all your clones should have died here i believe.

I also don't think the rampart is fast enough for stop the water dragon, just my opinion too.

From these two moves you just seemed to have made several mistakes in my opinion which wouldn't make your last move valid.

Thank you for your opinion Dan, I want to counter this opinion but I’m afraid would end up arguing.

So I will leave this to Jokey’s judgment.