[Jinchuriki Tournament] Nathan. vs Jokey

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Battle Rules:
-Rei's R&R
-Killing and Stealing: Allowed
-CJs: Not Allowed
-KGs: Not Allowed
-Specials (I.E Rain, Smoke, Sound): Not Allowed
-Hiden and custom bio abilities: Not Allowed
-Range: Mid range (10 meters away)
-Terrain: Plain grassy terrain
-Each fight needs to finish in 7 days, upon which they'll be closed and graded by the judges
-Arguments are to be done exclusively through VM (not PM or MSN). Moderators opinions can not be asked. If a member needs to ask for a judges input, he/she must do so through VM with reasoning of the issue
-If a participant doesn't reply for more than 4 complete days, his opponent wins the match by default

I'll be using ; Heaven in sig.
- ReXii allowed me to change bios due to my other bio being dropped, and cause of how long this tourney has been going for. @_@
- Hope you're okay with it, Jamel.

- Good luck, and let's have some fun!

Post your bio, and I will make my move after that!

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Walking up to the plain field, Castiel noticed a man already present at the field, Castiel stops about 10 meters away from the man.
"Hello. My name is Castiel, I haven't had the pleasure of meeting you before, what is your name?"
Castiel didn't wait for a response rather he gathered up his earth chakra in his stomach and released from his mouth a earth like substance that forms itself into a large slab of earth that races towards the man, the slab is large enough to block the man's and Castiel visions of one another, as the slab is proceeding towards the man. Castiel stomps on the ground creating a tunnel between himself and the man, while also releasing his fire chakra into the tunnel via his mouth doing that causing the fire to pick up rocks and other earthen like objects, melting said objects turning it into a sort of molten rock. The now molten rock races through the tunnel that is connected to the man, erupting and burning him alive. Assuming the molten rock went through, the slab of rock would either hit and do blunt damage to the man, or join in with the molten rock.
"Shame, if you do make it out of this. Please do tell me your name."

(Doton: Iwarin Heiban) - Earth Release: Rock Scale Slab
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will knead their earth chakra into their stomach and then release from their mouth earthly material that then forms into a large slab of rock, that can travel with incredible force. On impact with the ground the slab forces the earth to splinter and jab anyone caught in the vicinity.

(Katon: Keshi Makuga Hara) - Fire Release: Exploding Flame Crater
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user first stomps on the ground, using his fire chakra and making an underground tunnel from between themselves and the opponent. They then breathe out fire into the tunnel, causing the fire carry rock and other debris with it as it travels, melting them. With a single hand seal, the molten rock debris will erupt from the ground underneath the opponent, engulfing them and burning them alive.
 

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Walking up to the plain field, Castiel noticed a man already present at the field, Castiel stops about 10 meters away from the man.
"Hello. My name is Castiel, I haven't had the pleasure of meeting you before, what is your name?"
Castiel didn't wait for a response rather he gathered up his earth chakra in his stomach and released from his mouth a earth like substance that forms itself into a large slab of earth that races towards the man, the slab is large enough to block the man's and Castiel visions of one another, as the slab is proceeding towards the man. Castiel stomps on the ground creating a tunnel between himself and the man, while also releasing his fire chakra into the tunnel via his mouth doing that causing the fire to pick up rocks and other earthen like objects, melting said objects turning it into a sort of molten rock. The now molten rock races through the tunnel that is connected to the man, erupting and burning him alive. Assuming the molten rock went through, the slab of rock would either hit and do blunt damage to the man, or join in with the molten rock.
"Shame, if you do make it out of this. Please do tell me your name."

(Doton: Iwarin Heiban) - Earth Release: Rock Scale Slab
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will knead their earth chakra into their stomach and then release from their mouth earthly material that then forms into a large slab of rock, that can travel with incredible force. On impact with the ground the slab forces the earth to splinter and jab anyone caught in the vicinity.

(Katon: Keshi Makuga Hara) - Fire Release: Exploding Flame Crater
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user first stomps on the ground, using his fire chakra and making an underground tunnel from between themselves and the opponent. They then breathe out fire into the tunnel, causing the fire carry rock and other debris with it as it travels, melting them. With a single hand seal, the molten rock debris will erupt from the ground underneath the opponent, engulfing them and burning them alive.
''...''. Urek remained silent. He had successfully defeated his previous opponent and knew how gruesome this tournament could be, or become. Instead of killing his opponent instantaneously like he did to the previous one, he rather wanted to enjoy himself just for once. He observed his opponent from head to toe, and noticed a slight disturbance nearby his mouth. He waited and did eventually see a slab of earth getting forced outta his mouth as the name ''Castiel'' kept spinning into his head. Since there was quite some distance between them, he sent a large amount of earth chakra from underneath the man within a blink of an eye. Pure because of the fact that his technique does not need a handseal whatsoever, this would rather happen quickly. As the slab erupts outta his mouth Urek causing you to lose balance thanks to the tremor being created as Urek remembered exactly what your position was and dealt with the rock as it had already passed the short ranged edge which meant that he had a little to no time to react so with a swift motion; he punched against the rock slab as lightning gathered around his fist generating a sphere of pure lightning around it unleashing the lightning in the form of a localized electrical explosion as the earthen slab shatters, and thanks to the impact of the explosion; this rock slab shall eventually shatter which means that by the sheer pressure of the explosion, thousand rock pieces shall continue heading towards you as you try to regain balance over your body, leaving you stumbling on your place as you will have to face the rubble.

(Doton: Yochi no Douyou) - Earth Release: World Shaking
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will concentrate and release their chakra into the ground to create a small tremer that can result in making the enemies lose their footing and fall to ground or miss the aim of a given technique.

(Raiton: Sandā Sāburu) - Lightning Style: Thunder Saber
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user gathers lightning chakra around his fist, generating a sphere of pure lightning around it. The user can then punch a target, unleashing the lightning in the form of a localized electrical explosion.

As the slab erupts a little by little, I began sending earth chakra through the ground and once it's heading towards me, I create the tremor as you lose balance, and I deal with the rock slab.
 
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As Castiel lost his footing due to the earth shaking for a short moment, he has to quickly regain his balance which he does so, by placing one hand on the ground and pushing off it, thus regaining balance once again. As he looks upon, it has come to his attention that his rock slab has been countered, and now bits of the slab is coming back towards him. So he needs think of some sort of counter. Which he his come up with he releases a large surge of wind that catches the small slabs in said wind, pushing them away from Castiel, Castiel releases the gust of wind in such of a way that both the wind and rocks just cancel one another out.
"It is rude not to introduce yourself, you know!"
Castiel then begins his next attack by lifting up his hands in the air releasing a surge of lighting directly towards the man standing 10 meters away from him.

(Fūton: Boufuu oonami no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Gale Surge Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will create a large surge of wind that is capable of pushing a target back and dealing some small cuts to them. The wind technique is also strong enough to push back a large summoning creature.

(Raiton: Hiraishin) – Lightning Release: Lightning Rod
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user raises their hands to the air, charging lightning. He will then unleash the lightning energy at the enemy target in the form of a lightning bolt.
 

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As Castiel lost his footing due to the earth shaking for a short moment, he has to quickly regain his balance which he does so, by placing one hand on the ground and pushing off it, thus regaining balance once again. As he looks upon, it has come to his attention that his rock slab has been countered, and now bits of the slab is coming back towards him. So he needs think of some sort of counter. Which he his come up with he releases a large surge of wind that catches the small slabs in said wind, pushing them away from Castiel, Castiel releases the gust of wind in such of a way that both the wind and rocks just cancel one another out.
"It is rude not to introduce yourself, you know!"
Castiel then begins his next attack by lifting up his hands in the air releasing a surge of lighting directly towards the man standing 10 meters away from him.

(Fūton: Boufuu oonami no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Gale Surge Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will create a large surge of wind that is capable of pushing a target back and dealing some small cuts to them. The wind technique is also strong enough to push back a large summoning creature.

(Raiton: Hiraishin) – Lightning Release: Lightning Rod
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user raises their hands to the air, charging lightning. He will then unleash the lightning energy at the enemy target in the form of a lightning bolt.
Ho... how? By... just, pushing... off? T_T
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Urek suddenly came up with a great idea and shouted his name quite loudly; ''UREK, UREK MAZINO FROM THE GYOJIN CLAN''. This shout would let Castiel know that Urek is quite the noisy one as he kept his tone raised ''Quite the lively mind you got there, nice technique's!''. Everything went according to plan as he observed how the man released a surge of wind as his snap-back was about to fly off his head pure because of the strong gust which made him figure out that the man was using wind to counter these earth pieces as he also noticed the earth shake. ''Wind...'' But, within' this split of second, when he both felt the whirlwind and noticed the earth vibrating made him perform the ram handseal and quickly lowered his arms as of he had not move a muscle. As he made the handseal, he now had a clear view of his opponent which was about to raise his hand but would get interrupted by the ground which he is standing on to get sucked inwards when exactly afterwards; Urek would have put him in a genjutsu. Urek in this case took the advantage of the fact that the both where standing on a grassy field, which means that underneath the grass would be a mix of both sand and mud and when humans dig in either a sandpit, on a beach or in a forest to either dig something up, or dig something within'; the deeper you go, the colder the sand/mud get's hence letting you think that it's water, because it obviously is cold. So, with this illusion Urek would make the man think that he is getting sucked into a created whirlpool whom materialized from underneath him simply messing with your view while in reality, you are getting sucked into a ant-lion. Your usual reaction would be to use wind, to force yourself out of the ''whirlpool'' but in reality you would have to use lightning to get you out of what's about to go happen next; as Urek had thought this through and with the usage of two handseals, he creates an opening within the sky, which drips down onto you as you try to figure a way out of the ant-lion or... let's say a whirlpool.

(Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Antlion Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user performs the Ram hand seal and causes causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the centre, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated. The range of the pit is determined by how much chakra is put into the technique.

( Magen: Kokoni Arazu no Jutsu ) - Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 10 (+5 if you use it double)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user casts an illusion over an area that allows him to manipulate the way an area looks to fool an opponent. He can only change the way the terrain looks, and not any other feature.

(Doton: Nentsuchi Otoshi) – Earth Release: Sticky Earth Drop
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user does 2 handseals (Ram → Snake) and creates an opening within the sky, which drips down onto the opponent a large amount of sticky mud (in all similar to that of Swamp of the Underworld Technique), covering them. The mud is very heavy and thick as well as adhesive, making it impossible to move if caught and easily crushing an enemy underneath. It’s normally followed up by Lightning release: sixteen pillar bind to create a giant oven around the opponent and then using Fire release: Firing biscuit technique to ignite the oven, hardening the mud and immobilizing the enemy target.
 
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"Urek, what an odd name."
As Castiel raised up his hand, suddenly he gets interrupted noticing the earth around him changing into a sucking like thing. Trying to get rid of Castiel as this was happening the earth changes into a sort of sand, like a sandpit so before he got into any more trouble with this odd technique he quickly performs one seal and releases a large amount of water from his mouth, he does it in a way that he tilts his head downwards releasing the water in the form of pillar, lifting him up, damping the earth like thing. Water spills over and hits Urek's ankles.
"Hmm, that was interesting. Sandpit."
A shadow is cast above Castiel which made Castiel curious so he looked up seeing a large amount of earh falling down upon him; so Castiel gathers up his lighting chakra and releases it above him in the shape of a dome, but only half of said dome. Releasing it and protecting him, completely destroying the earth that randomly appeared out of the sky. Using the newly created water source, Castiel sends his chakra into it just out in front from him, while performing the required handseals, doing that he uses shape manipulation on the water to create a large beast made out of complete water. Castiel doesn't commend it to do anything just yet, it is just merely to protect himself right now.

(Suiton: Dai Bakusui Shōha) - Water Release: Great Exploding Water Colliding Wave
Rank: A
Type: Offensive,Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: This technique is a stronger version of exploding water colliding wave technique. The user will first perform the ram hand seal and then spits out a large amount of water that covers an entire area, with massive waves that can crush the opponent. The user then forms the water into a giant orb, instead of releasing like weaker version of the technique.

(Raiton: Reijingu Sandā) - Lightning Style: Raging Thunder
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user creates a half shaped dome of lightning that can be pushed forward in a similar way to a "wave of lightning" attack. It has both paralyzing and shocking properties as well as physical momentum.

(Suiton: Mizu Shishi) - Water Release: Water Beast
Rank: A
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user after performing the Dog → Horse → Monkey → Ram and by manipulating a pre-existing water source and transforms it into a giant wolf-like beast. The beast can launch powerful streams of water from its mouth equivilant to B rank, or sweep the area with its claws to let a powerful torrent of water to wash away the enemies.
Note: The Water Beast remains active for three turns
 

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"Urek, what an odd name."
As Castiel raised up his hand, suddenly he gets interrupted noticing the earth around him changing into a sucking like thing. Trying to get rid of Castiel as this was happening the earth changes into a sort of sand, like a sandpit so before he got into any more trouble with this odd technique he quickly performs one seal and releases a large amount of water from his mouth, he does it in a way that he tilts his head downwards releasing the water in the form of pillar, lifting him up, damping the earth like thing. Water spills over and hits Urek's ankles.
"Hmm, that was interesting. Sandpit."
A shadow is cast above Castiel which made Castiel curious so he looked up seeing a large amount of earh falling down upon him; so Castiel gathers up his lighting chakra and releases it above him in the shape of a dome, but only half of said dome. Releasing it and protecting him, completely destroying the earth that randomly appeared out of the sky. Using the newly created water source, Castiel sends his chakra into it just out in front from him, while performing the required handseals, doing that he uses shape manipulation on the water to create a large beast made out of complete water. Castiel doesn't commend it to do anything just yet, it is just merely to protect himself right now.

(Suiton: Dai Bakusui Shōha) - Water Release: Great Exploding Water Colliding Wave
Rank: A
Type: Offensive,Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: This technique is a stronger version of exploding water colliding wave technique. The user will first perform the ram hand seal and then spits out a large amount of water that covers an entire area, with massive waves that can crush the opponent. The user then forms the water into a giant orb, instead of releasing like weaker version of the technique.

(Raiton: Reijingu Sandā) - Lightning Style: Raging Thunder
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user creates a half shaped dome of lightning that can be pushed forward in a similar way to a "wave of lightning" attack. It has both paralyzing and shocking properties as well as physical momentum.

(Suiton: Mizu Shishi) - Water Release: Water Beast
Rank: A
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user after performing the Dog → Horse → Monkey → Ram and by manipulating a pre-existing water source and transforms it into a giant wolf-like beast. The beast can launch powerful streams of water from its mouth equivilant to B rank, or sweep the area with its claws to let a powerful torrent of water to wash away the enemies.
Note: The Water Beast remains active for three turns
I changed the ant-lion in a water whirlpool, not a sandpit hence yelling that I'm from the Gyojin and I stated it quite clearly. But it's ok :p
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''Ah, you have forced yourself in your own death pit. It's been a nice battle, Castiel'' Urek, whom noticed his opponent creating the ram handseal as his mouth began to swell as if his mouth was filled with something made him grin. The moment the very first water waves erupt from his mouth, that would be the exact moment when the dropping lid get's created made him create three very fast handseals meaning that he was not concentrated on the dropping lid nor ant-lion anymore, but fully on his next technique, and since he was already throwing a bombardment of mutiple earthen technique's, he did not hesitate and waved three quick handseals and stomped both his hands onto the ground as he watched Castiel pushing himself closer and closer towards the dropping lid and that was the exact moment when Urek creates two enormous rock formations that close in on the opponent from two opposing sides with tremendous force which means from the right, and the left on the edges of the ant-lion. As these enormous rocks came closer and closer with the second, Castiel would have started dealing with the earth whom got destroyed further and further as Urek felt the cold but yet delicate water. So, now that Castiel had water from underneath him, earth crumbling thanks to the lightning from above him (wouldn't harm you of course, would be something like dust) and last but not least, two enormous rocks from each opposing sides made him wonder what his opponent would use next. ''Wind... wouldn't be enough... Water... hell no... Fire? Like, melting the enormous rocks? Heh, Impossible. Lightning? Of course.''. So, now that Urek had his complete plan worked out and since he already had both his hand positioned on the ground, he simply let a waterfall fall right onto you as I have summoned it right above you, ten meters that is.

''I hope you could get out of this. Would be nice, have much more in petto for ya dude... wait, can he even hear me?''

(Doton: Yama Eikyō) - Earth Release: Mountain Smash
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra cost: 70
Damage points: 140
Description: The user will do 3 handseals (Tiger → Ram → Rat) and slam his hands on the ground which creates two enormous rock formations that close in on the opponent from two opposing sides with tremendous force, smashing everything caught in between. Both of these formations are capable of dwarfing even the Demonic Statue of the Outer Path in size. This is one the most strongest Earth based techniques, standing as a testament to both this ability's destructive potential and its difficulty. However, because of its size and power, it can only be used a limited amount of times, requires much chakra and can only be used at least mid range from the user.
Note: Can only be used twice

(Suiton: Haran Banshō) - Water Release: Stormy Blockade
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will slam their hands against then ground allowing him/her to summon a massive amount of water from the sky, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in an instant.
Note: The water needs to be summoned at least 10 meters above the opponent to have any real effect.
 

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As the water is being release from Castiel's mouth, two shadow appear on both his right and left sides. He moves his eyes to the right and then the left to see these massive slabs of rock heading towards him, so he halts the water from his mouth, and he times this just at the right time just right before the slabs of rock hit Castiel, he transforms himself into water allowing him to avoid the massive rock slabs, while in this form he moves himself back behind the slabs, reforming himself. Castiel managed to escape the rocks just in the nick of time. As he is reforming himself leaving a huge amount of rocks in the position that Castiel was just in, he is now completely reformed.
"That was close, you are a worthy opponent."
Castiel now being infront of the rock slabs he performs the ram seal and releases five massive tornadoes in front of him, he sends them towards the man, three of them hit the slabs of earth, catching the dust from the left over lid and the remaining two from the sides pick up some of the water that was previously expelled from his mouth just before, making the tornadoes into both a earth/wind combo (3 of them) and water/wind combo (2 of them), they race towards the man. Castiel will be impressed if the man manages to counter them.
"Let's go!"

(Suiton: Mizu Kawarimi) - Water Style: Water Replacement
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user can freely transform his body into liquid. This form allows him to avoid taking direct damage from many physical attacks but can not attack while in this form.

(Futon: Tatsumaki Heki) - Wind Release: Tornado Wall
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user does the Ram hand seal and generates a large wall of 5 Tall tornadoes in front of him that are sent towards the opponent. A flying summoning with a wind affinity can create this technique by simply flapping their wings to generate the wind for the technique.

Dodging the slabs, and that going though; I assume you don't continue you with the water technique.
 

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So after reading this fight two things really come to mind here.
1) Nathan, you were extremely passive in this fight. You actually had a whole move where you did nothing but defend from Jokey's attack. Past the first move I saw no attempt at all to actually hurt your opponent all you did was ride through the battle and go through the motions. If you want to win in tournaments like this you cant just sit there and allow your opponent to smack you, you have to actually attempt to kill them. But you made no mistakes as far as I can see.

2) Jokey, you were obviously in control of this fight from the very moment that Nathan used his b rank wind technique to simply cancel the residual rocks that were flying towards him. You dominated the fight true, but you made a fatal mistake in the very beginning. Nathans earth slab has to go first since its the first move of the battle. So the timeframe would be Earth Slab> Earth shaking> Lightning to break the slab. This counter simply doesnt fit in the timeframe, and thus you'd be hit by the earth slab. What you could have done is use the earth shaking to make nathan miss the mark on his earth slab technique.

So now there's a tough decision to be made. Due to breaking timeframe being a fatal mistake, leaving you dead most likely, I have to award the fight to Nathan. Jokey, had you not made this one mistake you would have won this battle rather convincingly.

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